Essay Tips for Commonwealth Shared Scholarship (Part 1)

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  • Опубликовано: 18 сен 2024

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  • @thespectacular9826
    @thespectacular9826 3 года назад +37

    Forget sentiment, this is the best exposition on how to write essays for Scholarships? Straight to the business, no dancing about from pillar to post and very business like, direct, simple and very clear with details. Well done bro. I will stay on this channel from now on and recommend it.

    • @EASYCARETV
      @EASYCARETV Год назад +1

      Please boss victor I want to ha e private talk with you. Can I chat or call you. I would like to have your contact

    • @EASYCARETV
      @EASYCARETV Год назад

      Please my boss,

  • @estherwilliams4914
    @estherwilliams4914 2 года назад +4

    No one should tell me Victor isn't talented! Iam overwhelmed, excited and elated. Thank you for all you do . This is great.

  • @fusecomputers7891
    @fusecomputers7891 2 года назад +10

    You are the best. My fear has diffused into the air. I can confidently sit down and write the essay. This video is highly invaluable.

  • @chimmalambo5023
    @chimmalambo5023 2 года назад +6

    The first few mins into this video helped me draft my response for another scholarship application that im currently working on...many thanks once again Victor

  • @dorcasonakofa5863
    @dorcasonakofa5863 9 месяцев назад +2

    Thanks for the insight @Victor Agboga. I have been having issues on how to apply to multiple universities at the same time. Just few minutes into this video the answer became clear. Thanks again.
    I will ask further questions when the need arises.

  • @ibrahimmuhammadgadafi8097
    @ibrahimmuhammadgadafi8097 Год назад

    The Very Number One (1) Factor Limiting Our Progress In Life Is "Lack Of Access To Information". Honestly, This Is By Far The Best Information I Have Gotten This Year. May This Be The Path To The Blessing I Have Been Searching For... Thank You Very Much Sir. 😇🙏🏾

  • @victoriaanayo5010
    @victoriaanayo5010 3 дня назад

    This is the best video I have watched on essays, you did a great job

  • @adhemarmangenda9750
    @adhemarmangenda9750 2 дня назад

    The explanations you gave are really amazing. Thanks for the gems you dropped in this video, Sir. God bless you

  • @nnennajoseph2282
    @nnennajoseph2282 3 года назад +35

    Am I the only one terribly overwhelmed by all of these? I'm at the first page and I cant breathe

    • @tijaniahmed5462
      @tijaniahmed5462 3 года назад +1

      Same here. So overwhelming

    • @beckyange4685
      @beckyange4685 3 года назад +3

      I actually cried yesterday

    • @tijaniahmed5462
      @tijaniahmed5462 3 года назад +2

      @@beckyange4685 I'm just submitting for submitting sake. I've given up

    • @merilyndaphiri4213
      @merilyndaphiri4213 3 года назад +4

      It's a lot of essays. But we can do it!

    • @billzkhan100
      @billzkhan100 3 года назад +2

      I haven't even started yet and I am still over whelmed..!!!

  • @용감한-v7k
    @용감한-v7k Год назад

    Thank you. Let me work my faith and leave this comment here to thank you for my successful selection next year🙏

  • @spazwik
    @spazwik 3 года назад +1

    Thank you for this, we are patiently waiting for Part 2.

  • @oluwatosinazeez654
    @oluwatosinazeez654 3 года назад

    God bless u for taking out time to do this despite ur busy schedule. Thank you so much

  • @oscarekwueme9546
    @oscarekwueme9546 Год назад

    Always a hit back to back!!!

  • @mushijja
    @mushijja Год назад +1

    Thank You Victor, this is profoundly helpful.

  • @alvaniyumame7852
    @alvaniyumame7852 3 года назад +1

    Thanks, sir. All the best in your Ph.D. journey.

  • @oluwapelumiolowookere9430
    @oluwapelumiolowookere9430 3 года назад +2

    Thank you so much for your time. This is so timely and useful. I will want to make some clarifications
    1. Where outlines are requested, are we to mention/outline in bullet points.?
    2. In the development impact statement 3, is it best to write it in outline or rather an essay format?
    Thank you once again. Wishing you the best in your exams.

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад +4

      Write all in full sentences instead of bullet points.

    • @oluwapelumiolowookere9430
      @oluwapelumiolowookere9430 3 года назад

      @@VictorAgboga Okay. Thank you for your response.

    • @gabrieliyeh6215
      @gabrieliyeh6215 2 года назад

      @@VictorAgboga sir please how would I apply with a foreign degree as a Nigerian for the award?

  • @georginakuseere3092
    @georginakuseere3092 2 года назад

    God bless you, am just enjoying your handiwork here in Ghana and I hope to apply and be chosen next year..Gina from Ghana

  • @user-lf7hv7eo8x
    @user-lf7hv7eo8x 19 дней назад

    Excellent guidance. Pls when will applications be open this year?

  • @lawurospeaks
    @lawurospeaks 3 года назад +1

    Been waiting for this. Thanks Victor👍👍 you are a blessing.

  • @NnekaNneka-kk5qv
    @NnekaNneka-kk5qv 9 месяцев назад

    Thank you very much Mr Victor, for this insightful video.
    Please I have three questions.
    1. About the CSC theme, do we link it with a particular SDG goal, while answering the first impact development essay.
    2. How do we source for data and statistics to back up the essays.
    3. On the application Portal, it provided for us to choice just one CSC theme and university. I really don't understand, you advice we apply to many universities. Does it mean we will submit multiple applications to the Commonwealth.
    Thanks

  • @blessedfarmer2583
    @blessedfarmer2583 3 года назад

    Very infomative.
    All the best in the exams.

  • @jehanzebbabar
    @jehanzebbabar Год назад

    Sir after seeing your video , i will use your advice and guide for my application

  • @swiitpeace
    @swiitpeace 2 года назад

    Thanks a lot for this... A new subscriber and I must say this is detailed. Will get to work asap.

  • @ahndya.5007
    @ahndya.5007 Год назад +1

    Super helpful, thank you!

  • @Peterja91
    @Peterja91 10 месяцев назад

    Thank you so much Sir. Victor.
    This is absolutely helpful ❤

  • @drbmtalk2419
    @drbmtalk2419 3 года назад

    Well done Victor, it’s very insightful

  • @kennethonye1654
    @kennethonye1654 3 года назад

    Thanks, Victor... This was very helpful!

  • @chiazonwokolo8225
    @chiazonwokolo8225 3 года назад

    God bless you sir, and best of luck

  • @SHIVAMKUMAR-jo2iq
    @SHIVAMKUMAR-jo2iq 3 года назад

    Best describe brother....love from India👍

  • @mitchellerispah6192
    @mitchellerispah6192 3 года назад

    Thank you so much for this!! It's very helpful.

  • @gregoryjohnmark877
    @gregoryjohnmark877 3 года назад

    Thanks Victor. This is very insightful

  • @onyishipeace7171
    @onyishipeace7171 Год назад

    This is super helpful. Thank you sir

  • @christianaekele145
    @christianaekele145 2 года назад

    Thank you so much Mr. Victor.
    I couldn't locate where the sites for the courses are, so I can skim through their different proposed skills to acquire

  • @ajahjamael2452
    @ajahjamael2452 3 года назад

    Thanks. This is very, very helpful.

  • @UMARUMAR-bl9bc
    @UMARUMAR-bl9bc 2 года назад

    Thanks Sir Victor ! Your bank of knowledge will never go dry… please I have a question - can one make different applications with the same essay????

  • @curtiskobiiseyramnyamasekpor
    @curtiskobiiseyramnyamasekpor 3 года назад

    Thank you Victor. You are so kind

  • @Helen_Umeobieri
    @Helen_Umeobieri 3 года назад

    You are the best!
    Thank you

  • @miracleokoro9686
    @miracleokoro9686 3 года назад

    Right on time. Thank you

  • @uzoma5440
    @uzoma5440 2 года назад

    I saw your videos I must say u really did a good job breaking it down the way u. It helped me in the development of all my essays. That being said, i want to ask if reusing or paraphrasing my chevening essays for some of my commonwealth Essays would be considered as plagiarism by both scholarship bodies since am writing on the same issue. Thanks

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  2 года назад

      Why not rephrase to avoid any issue?

  • @naturalrelaxationsounds6045
    @naturalrelaxationsounds6045 2 года назад

    QUESTION:
    Thanks so much sir. You are hero indeed. In the developmental impact essay, after I must have talked about the global and national trend, what if I do not have a personal experience or encounter with such occurrences or problems, how do I still play out safely sir? Thanks sir.

  • @vicversa4868
    @vicversa4868 3 года назад

    Great Man.

  • @joy_017
    @joy_017 2 года назад +1

    Please I can't seem to see where to start the scholarship application online....I'm from Nigeria.???

  • @timilemmy5900
    @timilemmy5900 Год назад +1

    Hi, Thanks for this video. It's really helpful. They asked for 10 publications, and that is a big challenge as I don't have up to that. What's your advice

  • @temitopejegede790
    @temitopejegede790 2 года назад

    Please for question 4, please do we state the exact "number" we expect to be impacted or do we just state that " the impact is to be measured by the number of ........."?

  • @delalidzandu4695
    @delalidzandu4695 2 года назад +1

    Pls with the number of words given, will it allow us write all this?

  • @toluwalopeewaoluwaadebayo8462
    @toluwalopeewaoluwaadebayo8462 3 года назад +1

    The more university you apply to..you’d have to pay for the school application fees as well.... Am I right ?
    Or does the scholarship offer application fees waiver as well

    • @marvofuasia
      @marvofuasia 2 года назад

      For this particular scholarship you don't need to pay for application fee

  • @hopeshete
    @hopeshete 11 месяцев назад

    My references personal and professional only have personal email addresses but their letters are on their institutions letterhead will that affect the letters' credibility because of the personal email addresses?

  • @TeamUpcyclers1
    @TeamUpcyclers1 Год назад

    This is quite unique. I think short term is 1 to 5 years?

  • @Iammahi786
    @Iammahi786 3 года назад

    Well done Victor, it’s very insightful can help complete this I need some help

  • @mhk9359
    @mhk9359 Год назад

    Can i write that, after returning my country, i will publish journal articles and books in that particular discipline of study??

  • @viqueturTV
    @viqueturTV 3 года назад

    Please, I'm new to applying for scholarships and I love what you did here.
    Please, how do I apply to the schools?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад +1

      Go to the website of the eligible university/department, read the application requirements and documents. Most of those requirements are already covered in separate videos on this channel.

    • @viqueturTV
      @viqueturTV 3 года назад

      @@VictorAgboga I checked the website of Oxford Brooke college and didn't find a tab for application.

  • @successwithmatthew4273
    @successwithmatthew4273 3 года назад +2

    Please VIctor, please can you talk about the Cranfield University development essay. It's required to summit application.

    • @IlesanmiAdewale
      @IlesanmiAdewale 3 года назад

      Your first four commonwealth essay answers can be modified to suit Cranfield University development essay. I hope this help

    • @hubaibkhan7658
      @hubaibkhan7658 3 года назад

      Matthew what are you applying for in Cranfield university?

    • @okehiefavour511
      @okehiefavour511 2 года назад

      @@hubaibkhan7658 please I want to apply for Business analytics, I did Accounting in my back..
      Is it possible and how do I go about it

  • @Brisibe.Prudent
    @Brisibe.Prudent 2 года назад

    Hello.
    Thanks so much for the information.
    My problem is with the Prizes Columb. I don't have any Academic distinctions and Prizes, how do I go about it?

  • @ejicyrilarinze7511
    @ejicyrilarinze7511 6 месяцев назад

    Greetings sir. Thank you for you very helpfull content.
    I want know if after being nominated by a university for the commonwealth share scholarship what next to do. Also, are any chances of not getting the award after nomination??

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  6 месяцев назад

      You'll be contacted by Commonwealth in the coming months for references and other things. Congratulations

  • @arohizuchukwu1307
    @arohizuchukwu1307 2 года назад

    Hello Vik, please, is conducting election a voluntary experience?

  • @serachrispusmutavanya2147
    @serachrispusmutavanya2147 3 года назад

    Hi Victor.
    Thank you for this,let me ask, should I have received an offer letter before applying for this scholarship?

  • @leonardchibuike2816
    @leonardchibuike2816 5 месяцев назад

    Do I need a new set of recommendations for a second application?

  • @s_stories
    @s_stories 3 года назад

    thank you so much for this

  • @romadeogungbemi2962
    @romadeogungbemi2962 2 года назад

    CSC holders are supposed to return immediately after the programme? What about the two years work visa for students after school?

  • @annieuche2380
    @annieuche2380 2 года назад

    Can I use the same essay content to apply for 2 or 3 Commonwealth MSc shared scholarship for different universities? Put differently, making 3 applications in the Commonwealth portal to study Biology in 3 different universities, can I make use of the same content.

  • @BenKit-q2v
    @BenKit-q2v 9 месяцев назад

    Hello thanks for the video but I just finished secondary school and I haven't seen a bachelor's degree on their website so please do inform me if I have missed it

  • @tolu_oye
    @tolu_oye 2 года назад

    Thank you sir

  • @mc-pi6sw
    @mc-pi6sw 3 года назад

    Hi Victor, I had a small question. Given the current Covid 19 circumstances is it possible to defer a commonwealth shared scholarship? Under which circumstances is it feasible?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад

      Only someone on the scholarship board will be able to answer that. Kindly contact them.

  • @oluwafemiojo9458
    @oluwafemiojo9458 3 года назад

    Thank you

  • @bashirhassan7156
    @bashirhassan7156 2 года назад

    Do you have a transcript of your video on Commonwealth scholarship essays?

  • @samueltetteh2586
    @samueltetteh2586 3 года назад

    God bless you

  • @raisengupta2183
    @raisengupta2183 3 года назад

    Hello! Do we have to limit the CSC theme to the one that our course is listed under or can we link it to others?

  • @folahanmibademosi7238
    @folahanmibademosi7238 3 года назад

    Thanks alot

  • @ummeammara3451
    @ummeammara3451 2 года назад

    Is it necessary that the development impact statement be aligned with all the preferred courses we aim to write at scholarship application?
    what if one can't find similar courses at various universities?

  • @blessedabrahams498
    @blessedabrahams498 3 года назад +1

    Hi, Mr. Victor God bless you for the wonderful works you do through this medium.
    Please I just need a little clarification.
    You know applicants are the ones to upload their transcript on the online application. But my school does not issue official transcripts to students except they will have to send the official ones directly to whichever people that need them and in this case, my school does not have access to my online application.
    What do I do because I only have the student's unofficial copy?
    Will the student copy be honored by the Commonwealth office?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад +1

      Use the unofficial one for now, and when selected or invited for an interview, apply for the official one.

    • @blessedabrahams498
      @blessedabrahams498 3 года назад

      @@VictorAgboga Thank you very much, Sir.

  • @sajadhussain6897
    @sajadhussain6897 2 года назад

    Thank you agboga for sharing

  • @justinajoshua-eke6732
    @justinajoshua-eke6732 3 года назад

    Thanks a lot Victor. This is very helpful.

  • @olapejudaniyan7359
    @olapejudaniyan7359 3 года назад

    Thanks so much victor for this video, it gave me insight into writing my development statement

  • @preciousdamilolaopawoye7404
    @preciousdamilolaopawoye7404 2 года назад

    Good afternoon, please I can't find the link to the SDG page. Kindly add it here. Thanks

  • @successwithmatthew4273
    @successwithmatthew4273 3 года назад +1

    CSSS Development statement

  • @prabodhipreethika4045
    @prabodhipreethika4045 2 года назад

    Thank you for your valuable guidance and I really appreciate your hard work. I got 4 conditional offers from 4 UK universities. So I intend to apply for 4 scholarship applications. I want to whether is it okay to accept all these offers before submitting my scholarship application. But every university gives only 14 days to decline our offer. In such a situation, can I know your opinion regarding this matter?

  • @kenethkaunda2766
    @kenethkaunda2766 3 года назад +1

    Victor some day when I get one of these scholarships on your channel, it will all be your hard work man. I’ll personally deliver a very huge goat 🐐 to you wherever you are😅

  • @francisacquaah11
    @francisacquaah11 Год назад

    Hello sir please in regards to choosing the school and courses, can I choose same school and same course three times or can I choose same school but different courses or can I choose different schools but same courses?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  Год назад

      Why choose the same course 3 times? 😅
      Why not same or related courses at different universities?

    • @francisacquaah11
      @francisacquaah11 Год назад

      @@VictorAgboga hahahaa.
      I seem not to find a similar course with better course overview to the one I want. Either I choose different universities but same program or different universities and digress from my main course

  • @malehachowdhury5614
    @malehachowdhury5614 3 года назад

    Hello Victor, I had a small query, in the referee section I gave two professional referee but I am kind of confused with the personal referee. I have two university alumni who I worked and did classes with. Can I add any one of them as personal referee?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад +1

      What of lecturers from your previous university? If they aren't available, go with what you have. 👍

    • @mc-pi6sw
      @mc-pi6sw 3 года назад

      @@VictorAgboga thank you so much!

  • @ubongbassey2308
    @ubongbassey2308 Год назад

    Do your selected courses have to be related?

  • @Brisibe.Prudent
    @Brisibe.Prudent 2 года назад

    The site is open now and I am applying. I need answers urgently sir

  • @gabrieliyeh6215
    @gabrieliyeh6215 2 года назад

    Sir please how would a Nigerian who has a foreign degree apply for this? Any guidelines?

  • @maker-droid1363
    @maker-droid1363 Год назад

    I can't sleep again oh, all my notes have something about development impact on them 😂😂😂

  • @alinafengindonyasulu999
    @alinafengindonyasulu999 3 года назад

    Victor my account is failing to log in..what must I do

  • @thevoiceke2577
    @thevoiceke2577 2 года назад

    question...can you apply without the university letter offers?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  2 года назад +1

      Yea

    • @skymax9992
      @skymax9992 2 года назад

      @@VictorAgboga I had the same question too, but if yes, what do you upload on the university offer letter portal?

  • @Alpha_Evo
    @Alpha_Evo Год назад

    Pls I need urgent response
    It is a must to apply to sch through the link provided at Commonwealth website.......i make applications but not through the link provided the sch have offered me admission and I am concern if them will consider me for the scholarship.

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  Год назад

      A rather confusing question... Simply apply on the scholarship portal, and then for one of the eligible courses on the university portal regardless of which link you use. 😅

  • @billzkhan100
    @billzkhan100 3 года назад

    Brother please change your speaker.. Your voice keeps getting disturb..

  • @nwandookolo3963
    @nwandookolo3963 2 года назад

    Thanks for the video. Please for someone who is applying in about 3 schools with courses that are slightly related for instance, food science course, sustainable agriculture and food security, food and development, when writing the scholarship essays , how will you write the essay questions that look like they are asking you what you intend to achieve at the end of your program knowing that you have applied for 4 courses

  • @gear6gear650
    @gear6gear650 3 года назад

    Hello victor.
    Will be very much grateful if you could help me in drafting development impact part-I for climate change, I'm applying for a tropical forestry degree course.
    I have been trying to draft since the past week but I'm really having some difficulty in composing the essay. Will be very grateful if you could help me out. I have received and offer from the university through your suggestions and I really need this Scholarship to take up the course.

  • @attiyaammar4411
    @attiyaammar4411 2 года назад

    where will money laundering fall?

  • @maker-droid1363
    @maker-droid1363 Год назад

    Please Mr Victor, can I talk to you please, I need someone to read through for me, extra mentorship.

  • @wilhelminaaweke2582
    @wilhelminaaweke2582 Год назад

    Why are they asking for 10 publication of journal with title please.... Because I'm a graduate from the University and don't have any publications

  • @mercyakowe653
    @mercyakowe653 3 года назад

    Dear sir! I'ld love to reach out to you please.

  • @alvaniyumame7852
    @alvaniyumame7852 3 года назад

    Thanks for the video.
    I want to ask, will you apply for scholarship and still apply to schools to get an offer. That is , two separate applications?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад

      Yes. This scholarship is closed for 2021 though.

    • @alvaniyumame7852
      @alvaniyumame7852 3 года назад

      Yes, am aware. Preparing for the next cycle of applications.

  • @joelaweyam
    @joelaweyam 3 года назад

    Must I be nominated by an institution before I apply?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад

      No, but careful read the application instructions of the participating universities.

  • @chidinmanwogbo9594
    @chidinmanwogbo9594 3 года назад

    Thank you Victor for these tips. Please reply my mail. God bless you

  • @alexmuteti3226
    @alexmuteti3226 2 года назад

    wow victor ,indeed you commensurate your name. i needed details on dates and essay tips and i am satisfied now .Bravoooo kindly provide us with your email so that we may communicate one on one .thank you