I kind of tried out something new with this one (By incorporating Circus Baby’s whole thing) How did I do? :D (Edit: I found a small mistake and wanted to apologize for it. At 1:05:58 , I accidentally repeated a paragraph that was already spoken a few lines ago. Sorry about that, I didn’t catch it before posting it, so it’s kind of too late. Whoops.) Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true (Updated with today’s chapter!) Link to next episode: ruclips.net/video/vGd-MJY7Fi8/видео.html Link to previous episode: ruclips.net/video/9OBO1pZKQCs/видео.html Link to full playlist: ruclips.net/p/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD
1:08:56 "Dont you know? You never split the party. Clerics in the back, keep those fighters hale and hearty! Wizards in the middle, so he can shed the light, and you never let that damn thief outta sight!"
You had strep throat during this recording? Your dedication to this series is amazing. Please get some rest! It doesn't matter to me how late the episodes are. Just keep yourself in good health!
Your dedication to this is absolutely awe inspiring. I'm just thinking at this point, how much better would the FNAF:SB game have been if we had this gauntlet plot to run through? The way it's going, it's seeming akin to Dark Souls level difficulty. I'm just rambling now, so keep up the awesome work and I hope you get well soon. Make sure you rest up and get plenty of fluids. We don't mind waiting as long as we need to. ( I speak mainly for myself since I had the patience to wait for Glitchtale to update during animation periods.)
VANESSA! Oh my god! You made the character of Vanessa incredibly jarring. She absolutely holds the silent, invisible spotlight. Pouncing onto her prey like a rabid wolf. Tearing through them emotionally before striking them to the floor. Something that highly surpasses the old character by a mile. I am loving this so far! ❤
Y'know, with Vanessa's conversation with Freddy, it really seems like she may be projecting her own family drama onto the animatronics. Maybe not so much with Roxy or Chica, but for example with Monty, she could be drawing some of her anger from what her brother Jeremy did to them. Also with Freddy, the things she was saying just felt a bit too personal to have been made up just to throw him off, especially the way she labels Freddy as the others' "father".
Cwingy Constwuctive Cwitique! (CCC) I love listening to the rewrite and i have no current complaints content wise, and the volume ranges have been a recurring problem throughout the episodes. My ears would be bleeding one moment and straining the next, I admire your creativity with the atmosphere you present so, SO much and I am trying not to hate myself *too* much for protesting against it. Save my helpless ears the trouble if you can, I will continue to support you and this lovely series regardless. THANK YOU KIWIIII
Right, calling it now. Baby is gonna make an appearance....ik it sounds crazy, but I have a sneaking suspicion. wait.....a thought just came....are the animationics possessed?- Wait, no. That can't be since Kiwi said herself that freddy isn't possessed. dang it! now I wanna know how the animatronics get their self awareness. I'M SORRY! WHY ARE THE FT WATCHING THEM!? Waitwaitwait- Daughter!? Vanny, don't even start poking fun at the Glamrock's family problems when your's isn't any better you poor excuse for a Petter Rabbit! The urge to stuff Vanny into a spring lock suit and setting off said spring lock suit is becoming more and more apparent to me. WHAT IS THE AWAKENING!??!
GOODNESS. First of all, your description of China’s eating disorder was just so sad and so good. It hurts; with the way she talks about it, and the way her desire warps her reasoning to justify it. Plus, I really like how her shame and terror just made it worse, which seems pretty accurate to real life. So often, trying to shame someone into stopping that sort of behavior just causes them to seek comfort by continuing it. The fact that Chica looks at it like an addiction just shows how dehumanized these animatronics have been. She’s been desired with the ability to feel HUNGER, and yet she thinks she’s wrong for not wanting to always suffer with that, just because it won’t kill her. This mentality that she dosen’t deserve to feel alright, that it’s selfish of her to need something like that, breaks my heart. It is so heartbreaking that she was designed with this hunger, and yet is forced to eat trash! That’s just cruel, my lord. And the way she’s being manipulated into feeling GUILTY about wanting a basic need fulfilled hurts. If she weren’t being shamed and forced to eat garbage, she probably wouldn’t be so overwhelmingly desperate for food. And just…here comes Vanny, harassing animatronics using their deepest insecurities. Bringing Chica’s eating disorder to the surface, using it as a weapon against Freddy. It’s just…so messed up how she weaponizes weaknesses, how she puts a PRICETAG on these issues. Saying that Monty has a ‘better’ problem because it isn’t expressive, it’s absolutely brutal. It’s pretty hypocritical of Vanny to be upset at them for not ‘getting over’ their issues when she seems to be regularly erasing their memories! Not that they’re in an environment that facilitates healing, but they sure aren’t going to get better if you keep making them forget everything. But still, that does explain her hostility towards them a bit. Seeing someone make the same mistakes over and over would be frustrating. I wonder how many times they’ve searched for a missing child, how many times Vanny watched Freddy split the team, and how many times she’s used the bots’ insecurities to take them down. Maybe she’s so effective at it now because she’s had dozens of chances to perfect her tactics. Goodness. Also, Vanny criticizing Freddy for being a bad father, because his family was suffering under his nose? Sounds like projection to me. Final note, I really like your inclusion of the Circus Baby family! I think the concept of sapient and non-sapient bots is really interesting, so I’m happy for any scene that highlights that.
i'm just imagening malhare in vanessa's mind making her say these horrible things and also great job i just started listening yesterday and i am so invested
Ok the subjects seem like they are the main cast Freddy Bonnie DJ MUUUUSSSIICCC MMAAAANNN! Chica and Roxy as well as Monty so I guess they were able to do it again when replacing Bonnie.
Ok, this is a TINY thing, but it is worth pointing out: Ringleader is for a crime gang. RingMASTER is the leader of a circus. Overall still great work though!
YESSSSSSS IM SO EXCITED WOOOOOOOOOO IT’S FINALLY OUT LET’S GOOOOOO Edit: I just finished watching. I don’t know what I expected but it wasn’t this! In a good way, of course. How will Gregory take this?
I was so mad at Vannie that I made a full "how it should have ended": A voice came from nowhere. "Why do you hide inside your walls... When there is music in my halls?" Chica heard Vanessa jump back. "Wh- what was that?" Suddenly and unprompted, the Stage came back to life. But something seemed... off about it. "You're not my father" Baby. It was Circus Baby. She was talking. "You're a poor excuse for a wannabe. You will never be my father." "Did you think that two dead kids and a bunny costume could change that, Miller?" Now it was Funtime Foxy. "You will never be William. No amount of kills or dismembered animatronics will let you." Suddenly, Funtime Freddy lunged forward, off the stage. Chica wasn't sure how, but she took the help. "Greetings. From the one he should not have killed." (I know bringing in Elizabeth, Bellora, and Cassidy goes completely against the whole point of the rewrite, but I still thought this was cool and wanted to share it)
Gregory is with Moon, we get to see him in the next chapter. Don’t worry, I haven’t forgotten about him. This small section of the rewrite is dedicated to the animatronics, but we go back to Gregory pretty soon :)
14:05....freddy.....my love.... no XD fanning out and seporating is the worst option you could of ever thought of XD naaaahhhhh!! freddy i love you my love BUT NO!!
Vanessa is projecting so hevily on Freddy XD she is projecting haaaard! ALSO leave my beautiful pumpkin boy alone please ;~; Stop hurtingh him STOP IT YOUR HURTING ME!!
I kind of tried out something new with this one (By incorporating Circus Baby’s whole thing)
How did I do? :D
(Edit: I found a small mistake and wanted to apologize for it. At 1:05:58 , I accidentally repeated a paragraph that was already spoken a few lines ago. Sorry about that, I didn’t catch it before posting it, so it’s kind of too late. Whoops.)
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Canon chica: LET'S EAT!
Kiwi's Chica: LET'S give an incredibly accurate depiction of an EATing disorder!
Joking aside, another incredible episode!
She was kinda like this in the actual security breach. Though we didn't get to hang out in her head and hear her thoughts in that like we do here
1:08:56 "Dont you know? You never split the party. Clerics in the back, keep those fighters hale and hearty! Wizards in the middle, so he can shed the light, and you never let that damn thief outta sight!"
You had strep throat during this recording? Your dedication to this series is amazing. Please get some rest! It doesn't matter to me how late the episodes are. Just keep yourself in good health!
This was the first one that nearly got me to cry-
Applause for Kiwi.
Your dedication to this is absolutely awe inspiring. I'm just thinking at this point, how much better would the FNAF:SB game have been if we had this gauntlet plot to run through? The way it's going, it's seeming akin to Dark Souls level difficulty. I'm just rambling now, so keep up the awesome work and I hope you get well soon. Make sure you rest up and get plenty of fluids. We don't mind waiting as long as we need to. ( I speak mainly for myself since I had the patience to wait for Glitchtale to update during animation periods.)
VANESSA! Oh my god! You made the character of Vanessa incredibly jarring. She absolutely holds the silent, invisible spotlight. Pouncing onto her prey like a rabid wolf. Tearing through them emotionally before striking them to the floor. Something that highly surpasses the old character by a mile. I am loving this so far! ❤
Y'know, with Vanessa's conversation with Freddy, it really seems like she may be projecting her own family drama onto the animatronics.
Maybe not so much with Roxy or Chica, but for example with Monty, she could be drawing some of her anger from what her brother Jeremy did to them.
Also with Freddy, the things she was saying just felt a bit too personal to have been made up just to throw him off, especially the way she labels Freddy as the others' "father".
Vanny stop projecting your issues on the animatronics! Go to a therapist you privileged bitch!
Cwingy Constwuctive Cwitique! (CCC)
I love listening to the rewrite and i have no current complaints content wise, and the volume ranges have been a recurring problem throughout the episodes. My ears would be bleeding one moment and straining the next, I admire your creativity with the atmosphere you present so, SO much and I am trying not to hate myself *too* much for protesting against it. Save my helpless ears the trouble if you can, I will continue to support you and this lovely series regardless.
THANK YOU KIWIIII
Sorry about that, I’ll try to do better in future episodes :)
Right, calling it now. Baby is gonna make an appearance....ik it sounds crazy, but I have a sneaking suspicion.
wait.....a thought just came....are the animationics possessed?- Wait, no. That can't be since Kiwi said herself that freddy isn't possessed. dang it! now I wanna know how the animatronics get their self awareness.
I'M SORRY! WHY ARE THE FT WATCHING THEM!?
Waitwaitwait- Daughter!?
Vanny, don't even start poking fun at the Glamrock's family problems when your's isn't any better you poor excuse for a Petter Rabbit!
The urge to stuff Vanny into a spring lock suit and setting off said spring lock suit is becoming more and more apparent to me.
WHAT IS THE AWAKENING!??!
GOODNESS. First of all, your description of China’s eating disorder was just so sad and so good. It hurts; with the way she talks about it, and the way her desire warps her reasoning to justify it. Plus, I really like how her shame and terror just made it worse, which seems pretty accurate to real life. So often, trying to shame someone into stopping that sort of behavior just causes them to seek comfort by continuing it.
The fact that Chica looks at it like an addiction just shows how dehumanized these animatronics have been. She’s been desired with the ability to feel HUNGER, and yet she thinks she’s wrong for not wanting to always suffer with that, just because it won’t kill her. This mentality that she dosen’t deserve to feel alright, that it’s selfish of her to need something like that, breaks my heart.
It is so heartbreaking that she was designed with this hunger, and yet is forced to eat trash! That’s just cruel, my lord. And the way she’s being manipulated into feeling GUILTY about wanting a basic need fulfilled hurts. If she weren’t being shamed and forced to eat garbage, she probably wouldn’t be so overwhelmingly desperate for food.
And just…here comes Vanny, harassing animatronics using their deepest insecurities. Bringing Chica’s eating disorder to the surface, using it as a weapon against Freddy. It’s just…so messed up how she weaponizes weaknesses, how she puts a PRICETAG on these issues. Saying that Monty has a ‘better’ problem because it isn’t expressive, it’s absolutely brutal.
It’s pretty hypocritical of Vanny to be upset at them for not ‘getting over’ their issues when she seems to be regularly erasing their memories! Not that they’re in an environment that facilitates healing, but they sure aren’t going to get better if you keep making them forget everything.
But still, that does explain her hostility towards them a bit. Seeing someone make the same mistakes over and over would be frustrating. I wonder how many times they’ve searched for a missing child, how many times Vanny watched Freddy split the team, and how many times she’s used the bots’ insecurities to take them down. Maybe she’s so effective at it now because she’s had dozens of chances to perfect her tactics. Goodness.
Also, Vanny criticizing Freddy for being a bad father, because his family was suffering under his nose? Sounds like projection to me.
Final note, I really like your inclusion of the Circus Baby family! I think the concept of sapient and non-sapient bots is really interesting, so I’m happy for any scene that highlights that.
I'm weeping for my bestie Chica this was a ROUGH one.
But in a good way.
"Or some kind of secret twin?" Nice nod to the idiotic Fire Escape ending 😊
i'm just imagening malhare in vanessa's mind making her say these horrible things and also great job i just started listening yesterday and i am so invested
I feel so bad for chica and freddy :( I hope they’re gonna be okay. Great chapter tho! I loved everything about it‼️‼️
Ok the subjects seem like they are the main cast Freddy Bonnie DJ MUUUUSSSIICCC MMAAAANNN! Chica and Roxy as well as Monty so I guess they were able to do it again when replacing Bonnie.
I wonder... If Roxy is trans and used to be Foxy, will there be something with her getting dysphoria from Funtime Foxy? It's worth thinking about...
>”How stupider can you get?”
The irony hurts
I was watching an analog horror series with my gf but screw that I'm forcing her to watch this instead
Good choice
Ok so Elizabeth Afton doesn’t seem like she still possesses Baby.
Ok, this is a TINY thing, but it is worth pointing out: Ringleader is for a crime gang. RingMASTER is the leader of a circus.
Overall still great work though!
I thought it was a reference Fnaf Sister Location. She acted way more like a crime lord then a Ringmaster. Just saying 🤷🏽♀️
@@trixsanimations5109 Fair enough
I listened to this chapter while eating 💀
Making that same mistake right now 😭💀
I’m making coffee rn….. 😅😅😅😅😅 I think it’s okay?😅😅😅😅
Great part, it was worth the wait
HOW DID I NOT FIND THIS UNTIL NOW I NEED TO WATCH THIS
Well worth the wait. I almost cried!
YESSSSSSS IM SO EXCITED WOOOOOOOOOO IT’S FINALLY OUT LET’S GOOOOOO
Edit: I just finished watching. I don’t know what I expected but it wasn’t this! In a good way, of course. How will Gregory take this?
Chica, go to therapy.
(This goes for the rest of you too!)
(Yes, even you Kiwi. No ok person could write this.)
YAY!
YESSSSSS
I was so mad at Vannie that I made a full "how it should have ended":
A voice came from nowhere. "Why do you hide inside your walls... When there is music in my halls?"
Chica heard Vanessa jump back. "Wh- what was that?"
Suddenly and unprompted, the Stage came back to life. But something seemed... off about it.
"You're not my father" Baby. It was Circus Baby. She was talking. "You're a poor excuse for a wannabe. You will never be my father."
"Did you think that two dead kids and a bunny costume could change that, Miller?" Now it was Funtime Foxy. "You will never be William. No amount of kills or dismembered animatronics will let you."
Suddenly, Funtime Freddy lunged forward, off the stage. Chica wasn't sure how, but she took the help. "Greetings. From the one he should not have killed."
(I know bringing in Elizabeth, Bellora, and Cassidy goes completely against the whole point of the rewrite, but I still thought this was cool and wanted to share it)
Also I forgot where Gregory is can you remind me of where he is?
I think he’s still in the main area. Or the place with the stage. Are those the same places? But he’s there with Moon
Gregory is with Moon, we get to see him in the next chapter. Don’t worry, I haven’t forgotten about him. This small section of the rewrite is dedicated to the animatronics, but we go back to Gregory pretty soon :)
W
First 30 seconds I can't hear the sound---
Can now, just had to come back
14:05....freddy.....my love.... no XD fanning out and seporating is the worst option you could of ever thought of XD naaaahhhhh!! freddy i love you my love BUT NO!!
Vanessa is projecting so hevily on Freddy XD she is projecting haaaard!
ALSO leave my beautiful pumpkin boy alone please ;~; Stop hurtingh him
STOP IT YOUR HURTING ME!!
OH NO the faimly imegry i'm crying i wanna sob and cry nOOOOOOOO!!
Completely unrelated but in this rewrite was there ever a Foxy?
(Sorry not on a device where I can edit comments, but I have not fully finished the episode yet so sorry if there is an answer later in the episode)
Nope, Roxy is just trans :)
Also do the Funtimes look like they do in SL
Yes, I kept them the same :)