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Great editing but so much happens in so little time its sometimes confusing and i can't tell whats happening e.g. like sometimes i can't tell who's you or your acting voice
turtleneck needs to focus less on trying to make his voice deep and worry more about his enunciation. at some points he sounds like he's doing a really bad Markiplier impression. When he laughs and speaks with a smile, you can hear the actual voice. which is much nicer.
Oda is probably the hardest working mangaka of all time. The man used to destroy himself for one piece, and even if his schedule is much more reasonable now he is still very overworked for someone at his age. The man is a machine, and I love his work do much, I just hope that it doesn't lead him to ne the next Kento Miura. Thank you Oda
Don’t worry to give the world the greatest piece of fiction known to man it takes sacrifices beyond measure that’s why I’m eternally thankful to oda and his die hard attitude.
Bruh you say someone his age but he's only in his 40s (I agree he's overworked and an angel tho). I feel people view him as much older because of how long one piece has been going, but he started when he asonly 17
Kinda motivational knowing the author had to work his ASS off to get to where he is now. Most people would've given up and even he was so close to giving up.
@@tikikeram850 no, it's made by the lights always being on and food always being in the fridge. You don't see homeless guys writing the world's most popular manga for 25 years straight.
Man props to Oda for writing the character Oda so well. I loved every obstacle that came in his way only for him to persevere forward and keep moving. 10/10 Oda is the best character in one piece
come on its older than a big amount of this planet's population, 42% of the human race is under 25 years of age according to world bank in 2017 (which is outdates but i couldnt find a newer source)
This is motivating AF, especially when you think everything in your life might be crashing down then you hear what Oda went through. It really helps put your life in perspective. Thanks for sharing this awesome story HitRegBroke.
**Aside**: There's a LOT of Oda's life I had to cut out in order to make this video palatable. Well actually in all of the videos I had to cut out a bit but for Oda there was a LOT. Everything from how he had this weird prophetic fate moment when talking to a shopkeeper in his hometown to him donating over 500k yen to his hometown after it got hit by an earthquake, to him being friends with Kishimoto and having inspired the person who wrote MHA , how he hated Gosho Aoyama and Detective Conan and how one of his friends got arrested for.... unpalatable things. I was thinking about someday livestreaming the rest of the story that I wasn't able to tell here. If you want that let me know! If not, thanks for watching the video, appreciate you
I had this moment too in editing and I was really tempted to let the intro play out a bit more because the lyrics to the One Piece intro also pretty much say don't given up on your dreams LOL but copyright concerns. Thanks for watching man! I appreciate you
I wish you would linger on the impactful moments more. Like the moment where Oda's editor inspires him to give manga another try. The breakneck pace of your videos are a lot of fun to consume, please keep up the amazing work.
overlapping voiceovers i think are fine, i assume it's a conscious editing choice on your part but please make the background music quieter, i have adhd and it really messes my focus when your voice and the music competes for the same spot, i think everyone who also have adhd will really appreciate it if you do anyway, you did a great job on the analysis and presentation! looking foward to the next video
I realized after the entire thing exported that the music was too loud.... LOL I will definitely work on it! Audio design is one of my weakest points and comments like yours help me know that, so thank you!
Amazing video from an underrated channel, didn't expect this much quality, though the audio overlaps a bit too much at certain points, but aside from that you've got the skill of a million sub channel.
And today in 2022, Oda is the greatest mangaka to ever exist ( imo ) i had some tears in my eyes listening to your video. man i just love oda so much xD
This like brought me to tears because, i literally grew up with One Piece. I remember watching it as long as I remember myself - it raised me, and made me the person I am today. I was surprised to find out they didn't like his characters when to me, they always felt like real people. I actually believed that One Piece is real and that I can be a part of that world. One Piece is something truly special to me, so I'm glad Oda didn't give up
It’s a good video not gonna lie, but the areas where you overlayed in a lot of diff clips and sounds was pretty overwhelming and kinda got in the way of enjoying the video for me. The content itself was good though.
Yeah I won’t lie those parts were terminally annoying and I almost clicked off the video but then I saw your sub count and realized you’re new. Understandable you’re figuring things out still, keep it up
Dude amazing video bro, never knew oda had to do so much to even get a shot at successing. It makes me a little comforted knowing that failure is normal, even for legendary people like them
2 Things that made a bad impression about the video for me; The first one is, the ending was really bad. I was expecting to reach today but we stopped at 2009, got a conversation and the video just finished_ I was confused and I am still confused. I expected a better end to a well researched and edited video like this. The video was going really well except the second problem but if the ending is bad it ruins the whole thing. The second one is, the lack of the feeling of accomplishment. The first parts were perfect and I mean PERFECT. But when Oda serialized One Piece, I expected a high point there. It would have been awesome if there was a celebration there. And the video could have finished there with the celebration. It seems like you wanted the video to have a hopeless mood all the way through but I think having a celebration at the end would have completed the story of the video because of Oda winning against all the hardships on his way. I don't think the video is bad, it is a well documented informational video but these 2 flaws just made the overall video worse than it could have been.
I love this kind of feedback! I definitely agree, I think I underplayed some of the achievements too much. In first stages I actually did have him releasing One Piece be a high point, but I was afraid that if that happened there'd be no more reason for the viewers to watch. Story structure and pacing is something I'm always working on and I appreciate the criticisms!
grate video it's a little rough around the edges but still nice. The audio layering was a bit much and i really don't like how the audio fades out when you quote people.
As a mangaka working on some one shots and hoping to create my shonen one day, this video is amazing, it simultaneously brings me great joy and awe, but also sobers me tf up for the nightmare ahead of me
the editing for the sound in this video was kinda all over the place. A lot of the recordings for people talking and audio clips from animes overlapped with each other. I don't know if its intentional or not (if it is intentional don't mind this comment), but if it isnt im just letting you know that as a viewer it was kinda hard to understand whats happening. But anyway, its always nice to see content on GOda. Keep up the good work!
Of course, I appreciate the feedback! I've gotten a lot of comments on the audio design in this video and I'm taking notes, so thank you for the comment
Imagine people complaining about an artists works but not have any art experience to back the complaint. That's like people complaining about YT videos that are good enough to be viewable... but people who are talentless are worth more than the people who work hard...
I like the tone of this video a lot more compared to the bleach one. The bleach one felt jumbled and over the top with way too many memes strewn across every moment.
Just got this on my recommended and I liked the style but would really suggest working on the audio mixing. There are times when there are like 4 different things playing at the same time and it's kind of chaotic
dude I love your videos ! your editing style is amazing and fun to watch I'm just happy to be a subscriber before the channel blow up because it will ! tip: lower the music when you speak or there is a quote sometimes I can't hear what's being said
Thank you for the compliments and the feedback! I realized after the video exported the music was too loud LOL... working at 4 am isn't all good I guess
Inspirational stuff. I wish I had the spirit to work hard on things I like...I know I can work hard but my self discipline is terrible for anything I want to do that doesn't have an external deadline or anxiety attached to it...
Just found your videos, and I got to say, you have a lot of potential! My key criticism would be you should tone down the chaos. For example, that who sponsored segment made my head hurt with all of the unnecessary static-y noises and voices playing WHILE you were talking. I think it'd help out your videos a lot just toning it down. I would also suggest putting a little more indication for the climax of the videos. They seem to abruptly end. Good work regardless!
While this vid had everything I wanted and more information wise, the pacing really got in the way of the otherwise topnotch presentation and some other comments seem to be echoing this as well. Not enough for it to sour the effort but I am definitely looking forward to more breathing room in your next video, and maybe some of the paragraphs being left up longer. Also, what was the 20 mil mistake? Working on the movie? I don't remember it being addressed in the vid
Thanks for the feedback man! Pacing is still a major issue for me and even though I slowed it down more than I was comfortable with it's definitely still something I need to work on. The $20B mistake is just the irony between the fact that he started dreaming to become a mangaka to "never have to work" LOL little did he know
@@HitRegBroke Ohhh, that's great hahaha. Also, what was the moment with the ship keep you were talking about in another comment? I googled it but I couldn't find anything
Hey HitReg, this was phenomenal. Thanks so much for making this bro, as a writer myself who is struggling at the moment, I really needed to see this. Keep making these. These mini documentaries really do make a difference.
I want to make a suggestion and possibly add captions pls? Like Mama Max’s vids. It’s ok if not but sometimes when u talk and overlay with another voice when recreating oda’s words, it gets really confusing since it’s hard to distinguish the words ur saying and the other voice because it mixes a lot. Also I don’t mind the music choices they’re really good but if u add anime scenes as memes pls lower the sound effects from the anime like that one scene in 4:33 where the sound effects from the anime were too loud Sorry if I sound too mean but I genuinely enjoyed ur video and I want to watch more of it because I never stayed this long for an essay video especially since I’m not even an English native speaker to understand most essay type videos, but urs make it so understandable if that makes sense. I love how u recreate Oda and his editor’s arguments because it made me understand and empathise more. Ur editing also helps me to visualise and understand more because I’m bad at listening if that makes sense too
Of course! I love feedback like this, and I've gotten a few comments from non-native english speakers about this. I'll definitely look into making it more accessible to foreign audiences!
@@HitRegBroke thank u sm! I don’t often see content creators willing to accept criticism but I love that u do since u hav so much potential to make it big. I will be keeping track of ur next vids keep up the good work bro
Every time I think about quitting, I watch this video. To think the man I admire so much almost gave up. I can’t let the stresses of life overwhelm me. Otherwise I’ll never find the treasure Im looking for.
I dunno. What benefits Oda is that he loves his work. Do you feel the same way about your work? If not, then quit and find something else you enjoy doing.
Hi, I really liked your video but I think if you used different titels and made longer supper indebt video's about these kind of things I would love to watch them even more, great work tho love what you've made :)
There's a lot going on in this video, people talking over each other and music in the background with a lot of visuals. Not sure whats happening or what to focus on
Man, all this time I thought Oda was just some genius, from all the videos I've seen of the actual genius that Oda was (and still is) but turns out he was just like the rest of us.
Thanks for the feedback man! My audio is something I definitely need to work on and comments like yours help me know exactly what to improve on, so thank you
I've gotten a lot of comments about the audio and I'm really grateful! It's something that's definitely not working and these comments help me not that it's not - I'll definitely fix it in the next!
@@HitRegBroke Oh no prob man. It was a good vid for sure regardless. I like the idea of what you were trying to do, but it happened just a bit too quickly to register.
This format has a lot of potential, and I really enjoyed this vid, but I do have a couple criticisms: - This should be longer. The 10 minute mark is nice and all, but for subjects like this, I think more depth is better than a shorter run time - there was huge jump there from when the manga was made to the ending, which just talks about the movie. As I said, this could have been a lot more comprehensive of a retrospective. It just feels like a huge chunk of time is cut out. - the audio overlaps need to be fixed, and the music was bit loud at points, to where I couldn’t hear the audio - it went by a bit too fast. I wish some stuff lingered on screen longer so I could read it all, but it would often go to fast for me to see the bonus information. I get that the idea is that people will pause it to read it while not interrupting the flow, but I still think it could be slowed down a little bit And again, thanks for such a great video.
Pretty good video, but didn't like the voice overs that much. I mean I prefer subs over dubs any day just to hear the authentic voices. Would've been awesome if you had added at least one clip of Oda's interview with his own voice. Voice overs are cool, but giving voice overs to every single dialogue sucks. Hope you improve more with your next video.
I liled this video, but the music and ambience drowns out the voice so much that it's really hard to discern what you're saying at some points. Please make that quieter so that it's easier to hear what you're saying.
Most people here: "How motivating" Me: "How depressing" (I mean for real though I don't mind people seeing it as motivation as long as it doesn't become some weird western delusion of "if you just try hard enough" or "if you just put in the work" because reality is that you hear about this story because it ended well yet if he had died you wouldn't have heard about it. "Never give up" might feel cool and motivational but in reality that's a bad a philosophy that would cause massive amounts of suicide, now I am not saying you should give up easily but I am saying you shouldn't kill yourself because you are enslaved to this "dream" but couldn't reach it, there has to be room for accepting your own failure, I can guarantee you there were other people who worked just as hard as Oda did but couldn't reach it, in the end circumstances and luck have a far bigger influence then effort.)
Definitely bro! I'm still working on my storytelling and the ending is a part I haven't really even looked at LOL but feedback like yours help me know what to work on, so thank you
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The voice acting makes the video better!
no problem
Great editing but so much happens in so little time its sometimes confusing and i can't tell whats happening e.g. like sometimes i can't tell who's you or your acting voice
Just make ur video pacing a bit slower
turtleneck needs to focus less on trying to make his voice deep and worry more about his enunciation. at some points he sounds like he's doing a really bad Markiplier impression. When he laughs and speaks with a smile, you can hear the actual voice. which is much nicer.
Oda is probably the hardest working mangaka of all time. The man used to destroy himself for one piece, and even if his schedule is much more reasonable now he is still very overworked for someone at his age. The man is a machine, and I love his work do much, I just hope that it doesn't lead him to ne the next Kento Miura. Thank you Oda
The day that he finishes One Piece though will be the day where he doesn't have to work a day in his life
He could already stop working but chooses not to
Don’t worry to give the world the greatest piece of fiction known to man it takes sacrifices beyond measure that’s why I’m eternally thankful to oda and his die hard attitude.
Takao Saito wrote Golgo 13 for 50 straight years without hiatus....
Bruh you say someone his age but he's only in his 40s (I agree he's overworked and an angel tho). I feel people view him as much older because of how long one piece has been going, but he started when he asonly 17
Kinda motivational knowing the author had to work his ASS off to get to where he is now.
Most people would've given up and even he was so close to giving up.
He still does.
He only sleeps 5 hours a day.
@@Cipher_Paul after such success, it is much easier and motivational to continue imo.
After all, you don't need to worry about money anymore
@@Slydime917 nah. But the story is not made by money.
@@tikikeram850 no, it's made by the lights always being on and food always being in the fridge. You don't see homeless guys writing the world's most popular manga for 25 years straight.
@@Cipher_Paul its even worse, its 3 hours
Man props to Oda for writing the character Oda so well. I loved every obstacle that came in his way only for him to persevere forward and keep moving. 10/10 Oda is the best character in one piece
I agree, underrated character
one piece is older than a big amount of the channels subscribers
come on its older than a big amount of this planet's population, 42% of the human race is under 25 years of age according to world bank in 2017 (which is outdates but i couldnt find a newer source)
It’s older than me by a year
Channels? RUclips didn't even exist.
@@Cola-42 he’s saying that the show is older than most of the subscribers if this channel
It's older than me by 20 years
this man had his own character development arc
This is motivating AF, especially when you think everything in your life might be crashing down then you hear what Oda went through. It really helps put your life in perspective. Thanks for sharing this awesome story HitRegBroke.
**Aside**: There's a LOT of Oda's life I had to cut out in order to make this video palatable. Well actually in all of the videos I had to cut out a bit but for Oda there was a LOT. Everything from how he had this weird prophetic fate moment when talking to a shopkeeper in his hometown to him donating over 500k yen to his hometown after it got hit by an earthquake, to him being friends with Kishimoto and having inspired the person who wrote MHA , how he hated Gosho Aoyama and Detective Conan and how one of his friends got arrested for.... unpalatable things.
I was thinking about someday livestreaming the rest of the story that I wasn't able to tell here. If you want that let me know! If not, thanks for watching the video, appreciate you
I mean ofc
Hell yeah I wanna see the rest
bro left out the parts that interested me most
Dude pls
Yes please I’d love that
Ahh now this explains the whole concept of One Piece being to never give up on your dreams
I had this moment too in editing and I was really tempted to let the intro play out a bit more because the lyrics to the One Piece intro also pretty much say don't given up on your dreams LOL but copyright concerns. Thanks for watching man! I appreciate you
@@HitRegBroke Ahh yeah it would've been perfect if it wasn't for copyright 😭 And ayye np! I see One Piece and I click lol
I wish you would linger on the impactful moments more. Like the moment where Oda's editor inspires him to give manga another try. The breakneck pace of your videos are a lot of fun to consume, please keep up the amazing work.
Pacing is definitely something I need to work on more LOL Thank you for the feedback!
overlapping voiceovers i think are fine, i assume it's a conscious editing choice on your part
but please make the background music quieter, i have adhd and it really messes my focus when your voice and the music competes for the same spot, i think everyone who also have adhd will really appreciate it if you do
anyway, you did a great job on the analysis and presentation! looking foward to the next video
I realized after the entire thing exported that the music was too loud.... LOL I will definitely work on it! Audio design is one of my weakest points and comments like yours help me know that, so thank you!
Amazing video from an underrated channel, didn't expect this much quality, though the audio overlaps a bit too much at certain points, but aside from that you've got the skill of a million sub channel.
I thought the overlapping audio was his style lol
this felt like a biography from some tv channel not a youtube channel
you are too underrated man
Appreciate the love bro
"a show about pirates" *procedes to display a show about vikings*
LOL my fault bro
@@HitRegBroke the show was the direct inspiration for elbaf tho
I mean vikings are literally pirates right
@@RMadaraPlay pretty much, the word viking is just a word to describe Scandinavian pirates/traders
Viking is the Norse word for Pirate lmao
Daaaang dude, already got a sponsor! Still love your work and keep growing and changing for the better!
We're climbin! LOL I was super pysched about it too
And today in 2022, Oda is the greatest mangaka to ever exist ( imo ) i had some tears in my eyes listening to your video. man i just love oda so much xD
I appreciate the comment! If it made you feel something then I did my job :)
This like brought me to tears because,
i literally grew up with One Piece. I remember watching it as long as I remember myself - it raised me, and made me the person I am today.
I was surprised to find out they didn't like his characters when to me, they always felt like real people. I actually believed that One Piece is real and that I can be a part of that world.
One Piece is something truly special to me, so I'm glad Oda didn't give up
I'm so glad to hear that! One of the goals I had for this channel was to inspire people and I'm super happy it's done that for you!
the one piece! the one piece is-
Loved this, thanks for making it
Oda’s work is incredibly inspiring
Oda really is the definition of “hard work pays off”
Rock Lee and him would be buds 🤝🏿
It’s a good video not gonna lie, but the areas where you overlayed in a lot of diff clips and sounds was pretty overwhelming and kinda got in the way of enjoying the video for me. The content itself was good though.
Yeah I won’t lie those parts were terminally annoying and I almost clicked off the video but then I saw your sub count and realized you’re new. Understandable you’re figuring things out still, keep it up
The Voiceover for Oda was kinda heavy handed. He really likes that vocal fry. I'm sooooo dark and broooooding
One Piece strong world still remain to this day as myfavorite One Piece Film. Oda is really inspiring.
Dude amazing video bro, never knew oda had to do so much to even get a shot at successing. It makes me a little comforted knowing that failure is normal, even for legendary people like them
2 Things that made a bad impression about the video for me;
The first one is, the ending was really bad. I was expecting to reach today but we stopped at 2009, got a conversation and the video just finished_ I was confused and I am still confused. I expected a better end to a well researched and edited video like this. The video was going really well except the second problem but if the ending is bad it ruins the whole thing.
The second one is, the lack of the feeling of accomplishment. The first parts were perfect and I mean PERFECT. But when Oda serialized One Piece, I expected a high point there. It would have been awesome if there was a celebration there. And the video could have finished there with the celebration. It seems like you wanted the video to have a hopeless mood all the way through but I think having a celebration at the end would have completed the story of the video because of Oda winning against all the hardships on his way.
I don't think the video is bad, it is a well documented informational video but these 2 flaws just made the overall video worse than it could have been.
I love this kind of feedback! I definitely agree, I think I underplayed some of the achievements too much. In first stages I actually did have him releasing One Piece be a high point, but I was afraid that if that happened there'd be no more reason for the viewers to watch. Story structure and pacing is something I'm always working on and I appreciate the criticisms!
@@HitRegBroke i agree with the hopeless mood thing this had me feeling sad
Those are not really flaws in my eyes
grate video it's a little rough around the edges but still nice. The audio layering was a bit much and i really don't like how the audio fades out when you quote people.
As a mangaka working on some one shots and hoping to create my shonen one day, this video is amazing, it simultaneously brings me great joy and awe, but also sobers me tf up for the nightmare ahead of me
aw that's good to hear
the audio overlaps a bit too much at certain points, i'm having difficulty understanding what it says
Just watched One piece film Red in the theaters just an hour ago, this makes it 10x more special.
One Piece truly became that life changer for Oda. It also kinda feels like Luffy is just a self projection of his young self happy and free.
"I never seen someone work as hard as you who has nothing to offer"
Damn that probably hit hard
the editing for the sound in this video was kinda all over the place. A lot of the recordings for people talking and audio clips from animes overlapped with each other. I don't know if its intentional or not (if it is intentional don't mind this comment), but if it isnt im just letting you know that as a viewer it was kinda hard to understand whats happening. But anyway, its always nice to see content on GOda. Keep up the good work!
Of course, I appreciate the feedback! I've gotten a lot of comments on the audio design in this video and I'm taking notes, so thank you for the comment
Imagine people complaining about an artists works but not have any art experience to back the complaint. That's like people complaining about YT videos that are good enough to be viewable... but people who are talentless are worth more than the people who work hard...
I like the tone of this video a lot more compared to the bleach one. The bleach one felt jumbled and over the top with way too many memes strewn across every moment.
Thanks dude! I think I'm slowly figuring out where I want the channel's video styles to go
@@HitRegBroke no problem both videos are really good and I like your editing style but I definitely prefer the mood of this one more
I loved this video good job, teared up a bit mid way through
Asada's such a G from all the video's I've watch from you, it's cool to see that it's such a close-knit industry ^^ Cheers to the next one
Cheers to YOU
When the title is clickbait but you still get a great video
In another note, I'm glad Captain Tsubasa inspired football in Japan. I bet on them to beat Germany and am many monies richer
Just got this on my recommended and I liked the style but would really suggest working on the audio mixing. There are times when there are like 4 different things playing at the same time and it's kind of chaotic
Of course! I've gotten a lot of feedback on the audio and I appreciate the criticism
dude I love your videos !
your editing style is amazing and fun to watch
I'm just happy to be a subscriber before the channel blow up because it will !
tip: lower the music when you speak or there is a quote sometimes I can't hear what's being said
Thank you for the compliments and the feedback! I realized after the video exported the music was too loud LOL... working at 4 am isn't all good I guess
Inspirational stuff. I wish I had the spirit to work hard on things I like...I know I can work hard but my self discipline is terrible for anything I want to do that doesn't have an external deadline or anxiety attached to it...
That's something a lot of people face, so you're not alone!
This Video is Amazing The editing it Really Great Like Watching A Movie!💯👍
Glad you liked it :)
@@HitRegBroke 👍 I’ll subscribe now
Just found your videos, and I got to say, you have a lot of potential! My key criticism would be you should tone down the chaos. For example, that who sponsored segment made my head hurt with all of the unnecessary static-y noises and voices playing WHILE you were talking. I think it'd help out your videos a lot just toning it down.
I would also suggest putting a little more indication for the climax of the videos. They seem to abruptly end. Good work regardless!
While this vid had everything I wanted and more information wise, the pacing really got in the way of the otherwise topnotch presentation and some other comments seem to be echoing this as well. Not enough for it to sour the effort but I am definitely looking forward to more breathing room in your next video, and maybe some of the paragraphs being left up longer. Also, what was the 20 mil mistake? Working on the movie? I don't remember it being addressed in the vid
Thanks for the feedback man! Pacing is still a major issue for me and even though I slowed it down more than I was comfortable with it's definitely still something I need to work on.
The $20B mistake is just the irony between the fact that he started dreaming to become a mangaka to "never have to work" LOL little did he know
@@HitRegBroke Ohhh, that's great hahaha. Also, what was the moment with the ship keep you were talking about in another comment? I googled it but I couldn't find anything
Hey HitReg, this was phenomenal.
Thanks so much for making this bro, as a writer myself who is struggling at the moment, I really needed to see this.
Keep making these. These mini documentaries really do make a difference.
I want to make a suggestion and possibly add captions pls? Like Mama Max’s vids. It’s ok if not but sometimes when u talk and overlay with another voice when recreating oda’s words, it gets really confusing since it’s hard to distinguish the words ur saying and the other voice because it mixes a lot. Also I don’t mind the music choices they’re really good but if u add anime scenes as memes pls lower the sound effects from the anime like that one scene in 4:33 where the sound effects from the anime were too loud
Sorry if I sound too mean but I genuinely enjoyed ur video and I want to watch more of it because I never stayed this long for an essay video especially since I’m not even an English native speaker to understand most essay type videos, but urs make it so understandable if that makes sense. I love how u recreate Oda and his editor’s arguments because it made me understand and empathise more. Ur editing also helps me to visualise and understand more because I’m bad at listening if that makes sense too
Of course! I love feedback like this, and I've gotten a few comments from non-native english speakers about this. I'll definitely look into making it more accessible to foreign audiences!
@@HitRegBroke thank u sm! I don’t often see content creators willing to accept criticism but I love that u do since u hav so much potential to make it big. I will be keeping track of ur next vids keep up the good work bro
Can't believe your low sub count! So much love and sweat in this!
Appreciate you bro!
The sound effects in this video are a pain in the ass, they go over your voice
Every time I think about quitting, I watch this video. To think the man I admire so much almost gave up. I can’t let the stresses of life overwhelm me. Otherwise I’ll never find the treasure Im looking for.
That's so good to hear! That's what these videos were exactly meant to do, so I'm glad you got something out of it!
I dunno. What benefits Oda is that he loves his work. Do you feel the same way about your work? If not, then quit and find something else you enjoy doing.
Hi, I really liked your video but I think if you used different titels and made longer supper indebt video's about these kind of things I would love to watch them even more, great work tho love what you've made :)
Thanks for the feedback man! Appreciate it
There's a lot going on in this video, people talking over each other and music in the background with a lot of visuals. Not sure whats happening or what to focus on
Thanks for the feedback dude! Too much happening at once is definitely something I need to work on LOL
looks like oda fixed all his bland characters, basically all one piece had is character development, gotta say sanjis development is great
Oda as a child: ego 100 +2 awards
Oda now: ego 10 and one piece has more sales than the bible
@yb biggest d rider one piece got like 5.2bilion j think but i could be mistaken
@yb biggest d rider yup nvm i was mistaken mb
Man, all this time I thought Oda was just some genius, from all the videos I've seen of the actual genius that Oda was (and still is) but turns out he was just like the rest of us.
Right now I'm working on a manga called unity and this manga will one day surpass One piece and I won't give up till it happens 👍😁
Quite a lot of ambition I can only hope for the best as a fellow aspiring artist myself
That's the motivation we like to see, go get em :)
@@neinja66469 same
Wait, what was the mistake?
It's also really distracting when there are 2 or more voices/audio clips playing over one another
I love your editing
My goodness this was well made, like seriously this video was amazing!
Appreciate it
Your audio is so low compared to the rest of the noisy videos, kinda stressful focusing only on your voice. Informative video
Thanks for the feedback man! My audio is something I definitely need to work on and comments like yours help me know exactly what to improve on, so thank you
loved the video but why is the audio from the quotes constantly overlapping with your narration? Really confusing.
I've gotten a lot of comments about the audio and I'm really grateful! It's something that's definitely not working and these comments help me not that it's not - I'll definitely fix it in the next!
The audio editing in this video sounds like I have another video playing in the background
Great video again. Do you plan on doing an Araki video at some point?
Definitely! I'm planning on getting all the big guys in here sooner or later
Please work on your Audio it just brings everything else down
Thanks for the feedback! I definitely recognize that my audio work is pretty weak, and I'm continuing to work on it!
Bro becoming one of my favorite youtubers
appreciate the love
Ngl, the multiple voices constantly overlapping was distracting AF
Feedback noted dude! Appreciate it
@@HitRegBroke Oh no prob man. It was a good vid for sure regardless. I like the idea of what you were trying to do, but it happened just a bit too quickly to register.
The edited came out good, it feels very anxious and fast and cut off
Nice video, but could you separate the audio more in the future? It sounds a little messy and it breaks up the otherwise nice flow of the video.
Definitely dude! My audio design is something I definitely need to work on and comments like yours help me know what I need to work on, so thank you
This format has a lot of potential, and I really enjoyed this vid, but I do have a couple criticisms:
- This should be longer. The 10 minute mark is nice and all, but for subjects like this, I think more depth is better than a shorter run time
- there was huge jump there from when the manga was made to the ending, which just talks about the movie. As I said, this could have been a lot more comprehensive of a retrospective. It just feels like a huge chunk of time is cut out.
- the audio overlaps need to be fixed, and the music was bit loud at points, to where I couldn’t hear the audio
- it went by a bit too fast. I wish some stuff lingered on screen longer so I could read it all, but it would often go to fast for me to see the bonus information. I get that the idea is that people will pause it to read it while not interrupting the flow, but I still think it could be slowed down a little bit
And again, thanks for such a great video.
Insane to see how this story came to be.
Very nice video. :)
Thank you
No way Oda was gonna make One peice called "Romance Dawn"!!
Love the Nichijou clips
3:04 Still waiting on that Japan trip 😉
Turn down the background shit
My day gets 10x better when you upload
My day get 10x better when you comment
quality of every video is so high its either new standart of begginer youtubers or you've been a youtuber before
I have not been a youtuber before so thank you for the compliment :)
Pretty good video, but didn't like the voice overs that much. I mean I prefer subs over dubs any day just to hear the authentic voices. Would've been awesome if you had added at least one clip of Oda's interview with his own voice. Voice overs are cool, but giving voice overs to every single dialogue sucks. Hope you improve more with your next video.
Oda has shown that, given some time, support, and motivation he can produce literal history making art
So uh, what happened to the 20 Trillion dollars oda supposedly lost?
Man, what a good video. Good job, you're definitely getting a sub from me !
Appreciate you
Ok weird problem I noticed in the video is that there were 2 different voices talking and it keeps changing to fast
Though I must say that editing its quite unique
bro keep making these excellently edited videos. you are very cool
YOU are very cool for watching them :)
I was surprised you only got your first sponsor now! You make great videos, keep going.
That was the biggest plot twist of all time, I didn't know hes the guy who wrote one piece
The editing and story telling of this video was fucking phenomenal and quite unique. Wow. 👍🏽
Wow, a manga could be written about the manga writer of the most famous manga
So much unnecesary stuff happening at the same time in the video is giving me a headache
Dude pls relax
Holy shit this is such high quality stuff
So long story short one piece nearly never existed
so... where's the 20 billion dollar mistake?
The irony between Oda first wanting to become a mangaka to "not work" and then ending up having a $20 billion series and a shit ton of work
To not kill himself with habits he more often does weekly breaks I think
Thanks for the video it was great! You should become a videogaka
That'd be interesting LOL. Sounds like an alternate name for animators ngl
I liled this video, but the music and ambience drowns out the voice so much that it's really hard to discern what you're saying at some points. Please make that quieter so that it's easier to hear what you're saying.
I totally agree! I noticed the music was too loud a bit too late and the entire video was exported LOL but I appreciate the feedback
bro no offense but, theres too many people talking at the same time
Most people here: "How motivating"
Me: "How depressing"
(I mean for real though I don't mind people seeing it as motivation as long as it doesn't become some weird western delusion of "if you just try hard enough" or "if you just put in the work" because reality is that you hear about this story because it ended well yet if he had died you wouldn't have heard about it. "Never give up" might feel cool and motivational but in reality that's a bad a philosophy that would cause massive amounts of suicide, now I am not saying you should give up easily but I am saying you shouldn't kill yourself because you are enslaved to this "dream" but couldn't reach it, there has to be room for accepting your own failure, I can guarantee you there were other people who worked just as hard as Oda did but couldn't reach it, in the end circumstances and luck have a far bigger influence then effort.)
Would love if you do one on togashi
Noted!
It's really hard to listen to your layered audio.
This is so inspiring my god
Well, good job since I never heard these stories of Oda before. And hope this comment help out with the algorithm.
Thanks man !
great video but man that ending needs a bit more i think lol
Definitely bro! I'm still working on my storytelling and the ending is a part I haven't really even looked at LOL but feedback like yours help me know what to work on, so thank you
You guys have gotta work on audio. It’s like listening to two videos at once
Can you cover hirohiko araki or kouta hirano for your next videos
Of course! I got a whole list of suggestions I'll work through, and Mr. Jojo is definitely gonna come soon :)