Rose Etude No. 2 - Attempt #2

This is the second attempt at playing the Rose Etude #2.
For the next attempt, I should...
1- Do not do weird thing on the two last note of m29
2- Make my staccato shorter
What I tried to solve from the last attempt :
1- Make my staccato shorter
2- Support more in the high-pitched range
3- Maybe go faster as I listened to others who played it very fast
Composer: Rose, Cyrille
Piece Style: Romantic