Feedback on this YTP Pros: Decently done editing (a little hard to hear some of the sentence mixing at times, but mostly good) Got a few laughs out of me (about 1:50-1:53 was my favorite) Cons: Over usage of "edgy" humor Moments that last a little too long (The laughing slowed down and reversed meme) The entire triggered meme, just a whole Thank you for the feedback on my video, (at least the actually constructive part) please believe that this is not me being "salty" I am legitimately going to take your feedback into consideration, and I hope you take mine as well.
Thanks on the pros... However I have a trademark of using gross humour in all my videos, as I personally find it funny. Comedy starts with the comedian. The Ricky Gervais laughing meme is a kinda inside joke from my last video so maybe you need to be an active subscriber to get that. I can see you must really not like the "triggered" meme. Who knows I might make a clean comedy sketch in the future, plus I have had thoughts of doing a YTPMV too. However I do have a few "edgy" ideas I would like to follow through in the next month or 2. Feedback appreciated.
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1 loser got aborted by Miss Goodall.
OH MY FUCKING GOD MISS GOODALL LOOKS LIKE GORING FROM DOWNFALL I CANNOT STOP LAUGHING!!!! LMAO
funny elliot goes to school joke
Dat be Mr Higglesworth yo.
Feedback on this YTP
Pros:
Decently done editing (a little hard to hear some of the sentence mixing at times, but mostly good)
Got a few laughs out of me (about 1:50-1:53 was my favorite)
Cons:
Over usage of "edgy" humor
Moments that last a little too long (The laughing slowed down and reversed meme)
The entire triggered meme, just a whole
Thank you for the feedback on my video, (at least the actually constructive part) please believe that this is not me being "salty" I am legitimately going to take your feedback into consideration, and I hope you take mine as well.
Thanks on the pros...
However I have a trademark of using gross humour in all my videos, as I personally find it funny. Comedy starts with the comedian. The Ricky Gervais laughing meme is a kinda inside joke from my last video so maybe you need to be an active subscriber to get that. I can see you must really not like the "triggered" meme. Who knows I might make a clean comedy sketch in the future, plus I have had thoughts of doing a YTPMV too. However I do have a few "edgy" ideas I would like to follow through in the next month or 2.
Feedback appreciated.
0:46 HOW IS THERE THAT MUCH PEE IN HIS BODY? Also, it seems like he's in pain when he pees.
The pain be from the STDs yo :S
@@69420Productions oh God! That's even worse! LMAO...