Excellent delivery and confidence for it only being your second time doing stand up. The transition from Costanza to teeth was really smooth. Keep at it man.
I agree! You've got great confidence and pushed through! tough crowd imo. If I could offer my 2 cents: keep refining your personal style of delivery building a rapport! Fame will come!
Nice job for a first attempt. Work toward stronger punchlines, changing tone with your deliveries to give the joke some more oomph. Transitions could be better, and it's often funny when you can somehow loop something that seems unrelated around to the original topic. Honestly, though, I love Seinfeld and other 90s topics, and was drawn in by George Costanza, but you're catering to a pretty niche audience on that at this point. Keep it up, try to learn something new from every Performance. You'll do well, and get more and more laughs as time goes on.
Bros just getting started man, come on now :/ more like it's terrible you took the time to comment this. Bet you've never spoke publicly to strangers, let alone do comedy in today's world.
Excellent delivery and confidence for it only being your second time doing stand up. The transition from Costanza to teeth was really smooth. Keep at it man.
Thank you very much!!
Broooo. Congratulations. Wow 🔥🔥🔥
Pretty good.
You look like a natural up there, keep it up bro🔥
I really appreciate that, will do!
I agree! You've got great confidence and pushed through! tough crowd imo. If I could offer my 2 cents: keep refining your personal style of delivery building a rapport! Fame will come!
@@cranberrysprite3704 thanks for the constructive criticism! Just looking to improve at this stage.
Singular: woman (woomin).
Plural: women (wimmin).
Am I wrong?
Nice job for a first attempt. Work toward stronger punchlines, changing tone with your deliveries to give the joke some more oomph. Transitions could be better, and it's often funny when you can somehow loop something that seems unrelated around to the original topic.
Honestly, though, I love Seinfeld and other 90s topics, and was drawn in by George Costanza, but you're catering to a pretty niche audience on that at this point.
Keep it up, try to learn something new from every Performance. You'll do well, and get more and more laughs as time goes on.
I appreciate the tips!
no but seriously
terrible
Bros just getting started man, come on now :/ more like it's terrible you took the time to comment this. Bet you've never spoke publicly to strangers, let alone do comedy in today's world.