Everyone Abandoned This Helpless Alien Child, Except The Humans! | Best HFY Stories

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Комментарии • 109

  • @LearningThings
    @LearningThings 10 месяцев назад +26

    Stories at human beings at our best. We need more of these.

    • @shaddi666
      @shaddi666 10 месяцев назад +1

      We need more human beings like that period.

  • @stewartcaldwell5299
    @stewartcaldwell5299 10 месяцев назад +14

    I like humans being the good guys for a change.

  • @pcalix17
    @pcalix17 10 месяцев назад +9

    Humanity is indeed first. First to care when all else leave the weak and the wounded behind. First to risk everything, losing hundreds of thousands in the process, to do the right thing. We need this humanity.

  • @royscott9162
    @royscott9162 10 месяцев назад +45

    Hawkins gets round these stories!
    He’s an IT guy, starship captain, medic, soldier, Ambassador….😂😂

    • @ricardocarmona5210
      @ricardocarmona5210 10 месяцев назад +3

      Yup!!! 🤠👍

    • @porpus99
      @porpus99 10 месяцев назад +6

      Little known fact, that Hawkins was the first on screen kill by a Predator. Guy really gets around.

    • @JB-yb4wn
      @JB-yb4wn 10 месяцев назад +3

      Maybe its his well connected family?😁

  • @jeremykeasbey4145
    @jeremykeasbey4145 10 месяцев назад +9

    Never abandon an alien baby; they might be a saiyan

  • @kamoonrathewolfgod9189
    @kamoonrathewolfgod9189 10 месяцев назад +1

    The picture of the child looks exactly like Yoda but the story reminded me of Captain James T. Kirk of the USS Enterprise. Of course he never died. He and most of his crew was always safe no matter what. Great story all the same.

  • @grantgunz
    @grantgunz 10 месяцев назад +10

    4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!

  • @dusanradin5868
    @dusanradin5868 10 месяцев назад +6

    Basically,he got 86'-ed.

  • @ocnier
    @ocnier 10 месяцев назад +4

    Enemy mine retelling for a new generation, well done!

  • @malahammer
    @malahammer 10 месяцев назад +8

    Loving all this stories. Many thanks again 88

  • @janhegarty5268
    @janhegarty5268 5 месяцев назад

    More stories like these please

  • @rjmcphee66
    @rjmcphee66 10 месяцев назад +2

    I loved this story. There were plot holes. But the story was very good.

  • @BillDunwell
    @BillDunwell 10 месяцев назад +5

    An excellent story! We need more like this.

  • @flashcraft
    @flashcraft 10 месяцев назад +15

    "SUBSCRIBE OR I TAKE YOUR DOG." Hilarious!

  • @richardflick8021
    @richardflick8021 10 месяцев назад +3

    🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤I have found your stories filled with suspense, action, and a real hope of what humanity really is, or should be!
    Number 888

  • @phillipnorton2929
    @phillipnorton2929 10 месяцев назад +3

    I really liked this story. Thank you

  • @ottovonbismarck6310
    @ottovonbismarck6310 10 месяцев назад +5

    Yoda's little brother 🤣

  • @nonoyorbusness
    @nonoyorbusness 10 месяцев назад +3

    The AI has the memory of a goldfish!

    • @open_my_eyes3311
      @open_my_eyes3311 10 месяцев назад

      Yeah, that's one way to recognize an AI is behind a story.
      I learned watching CodeMiko's streams, she interacts with several, gives them an avatar each, also lets them talk to each other. It's very informative. And often hilarious but not necessarily in the way one would expect initially.
      AI's need constant attention and correction, or they would forget what they just said, or draw human hands with a morphology not compatible with that of a human.

  • @janamathis4729
    @janamathis4729 10 месяцев назад +1

    Truly enjoed this. Thank you.

  • @darksider111
    @darksider111 10 месяцев назад +1

    great story

  • @greyman1k
    @greyman1k 10 месяцев назад +7

    Proper story with a solid moral. May we all be ruled by our better angels.

  • @devlinpereira4750
    @devlinpereira4750 9 месяцев назад

    Hilarious story,good for

  • @anonygent
    @anonygent 10 месяцев назад +15

    Inconsistent. The parents flew away, abandoning the child in the beginning, but then there's a crashed ship later? Doesn't make sense.

    • @lyrigageforge3259
      @lyrigageforge3259 10 месяцев назад +2

      Has got to be an AI story or some poor author who hasn't edited at all to clear up the mess of trying different solutions. More likely the former. Idk how people can even enjoy that - or then they just aren't really paying attention.

    • @open_my_eyes3311
      @open_my_eyes3311 10 месяцев назад

      Defiitely an AI. Also, this story seems to have 2 different endings. One happy at around 16:20, and another tragic at the end of the video.
      I know ppl who uses AI in their work, but take time and time again to correct until the final product is ready to be shown to the world and, maybe one day, beyond.
      Do not trust the current so-called AI's to make perfect products by themselves. I'm talking to you, 6-fingered hands!!

  • @zolisassi2861
    @zolisassi2861 10 месяцев назад +29

    if its truly written by you please, give your stories proper intros and worldbuilding, it doesnt have to be too much, just a few mins will do. Also please describe what the aliens look like, in most cases you just say scales and sharp teeth, that doesn't say much.

    • @dertasdert2419
      @dertasdert2419 10 месяцев назад +11

      ita an ai writing the story then publisher has ai narrate it th4en has ai caption it its all 100% ai only a human publishing the video and even that may be suspect

    • @baldbastardo
      @baldbastardo 10 месяцев назад

      ​@@dertasdert2419I doubt it's AI written, just an enhanced text to speech program. Apparently there's a whole genre dedicated to this type of stuff with many different contributors. So the world building has already been loosely established. It's a different sort of pulp fiction..

    • @robertpopa2628
      @robertpopa2628 10 месяцев назад +3

      Most of the hfy stories are ai, maybe all of them.
      The bones are decent in most cases, but need a human to check inconsistancies, overused tropes, and other issues.

    • @melodymacken9788
      @melodymacken9788 10 месяцев назад +2

      Maybe this style doesn't work for you. There's a ton of other stuff out there on YT.

    • @robertpopa2628
      @robertpopa2628 10 месяцев назад +2

      @@melodymacken9788 it's ai.
      Granted, at some point we won't be able to tell, and most do have decent bones, but you can generate hundreds of ai stories a day, and flood the streams, which is what hyf is doing.

  • @emom358
    @emom358 10 месяцев назад +1

    Story was ok, could use some editing, and spelling of captions was just bad.

  • @MrTiberus1701
    @MrTiberus1701 10 месяцев назад +7

    Grogu??!!

  • @steventurner8428
    @steventurner8428 10 месяцев назад +3

    I am just wondering how the aliens know what the black death is and how its going to infect them across space into their ships. I assume you know it was spread by fleas and they wont survive in space..

  • @miimonkey6699
    @miimonkey6699 10 месяцев назад +6

    They forced the guy with the bad leg AWAY from their own shuttle? They hadn’t left the landing sight yet when they were attacked. It was only after that they followed the kids footprints TO the crashed shuttle? And they then say “no bodies maybe he survived the crash?” Uhh sir? You followed the kids footprints here? But anyway, story wasn’t bad besides that.

  • @klintbartle54
    @klintbartle54 10 месяцев назад +1

    88. Love these short storys. THANK YOU ❤ THEM

  • @MarkSmith-zg5hq
    @MarkSmith-zg5hq 10 месяцев назад +4

    why or how did the shuttle land in the bioluminescent forest again this time with the kid AFTER they fled the planet in the Valiant!

    • @open_my_eyes3311
      @open_my_eyes3311 10 месяцев назад +1

      And that, my friend, is the right question

  • @scottphillips2870
    @scottphillips2870 10 месяцев назад +6

    Are these AI written? Cause this one makes no sense.

    • @open_my_eyes3311
      @open_my_eyes3311 10 месяцев назад

      Agreed. Sounds great until one pays attention to the words and the faulty logic and the double-ending situation that no one bothered to correct :(

  • @tiararowburn4507
    @tiararowburn4507 10 месяцев назад +1

    First the child was thrown out of a ship and abandoned by his parents then he was exiled after his father was executed?!? seriously you need to make up your mind on the plot!!!

    • @open_my_eyes3311
      @open_my_eyes3311 10 месяцев назад

      The AI did what it could. The human should have not trust it to make sense by itself. AI's need supervision and correction. This story has those script fails (like the unexplained double ending) because of the human component not paying enough attention :(

  • @bobcampbell2486
    @bobcampbell2486 10 месяцев назад

    88 good story, I'm glad I found this site. I do love space story's and this made my day. Bob's wife.

  • @KandyKane999
    @KandyKane999 10 месяцев назад

    There are enough plot holes in this story it could do double duty as a colander...

  • @michellehall3133
    @michellehall3133 10 месяцев назад +4

    88. Loved the story. Thanks

  • @lifelongconservative3338
    @lifelongconservative3338 10 месяцев назад

    88 Well Done.....Well Done. Great Story. I just subscribed to your channel.

  • @oldman9642
    @oldman9642 10 месяцев назад +2

    You need the text on the screen to keep pace with the spoken word!!

    • @open_my_eyes3311
      @open_my_eyes3311 10 месяцев назад

      And to be able to keep pace with the text on the screen, it would be advisable to make it synch to the audio and not run ahead of the voice again and again.
      The story has the promise to be a good one. The AI did what it could. The human component failed the AI, though.

  • @bigunone
    @bigunone 10 месяцев назад +4

    Who sent the radio message?
    In the tradition of the valiant Cpt Kirk he leads the away team; not going to happen the Capt. is responsible for the ship period. Marines are who leave the ship
    Hmm they don't even bind Hawkins wounds?

  • @LoganJohnson-lm2bh
    @LoganJohnson-lm2bh 10 месяцев назад +1

    Subscribe or you'll take my Dog ? I think not .in human years he is 88

  • @edspencer7121
    @edspencer7121 10 месяцев назад +2

    Poor R2D2

  • @reesofraft4166
    @reesofraft4166 10 месяцев назад +7

    if you have AI read something and display the text - at least write it in a good english.

    • @malahammer
      @malahammer 10 месяцев назад +1

      How is your second language? 100% perfect I suppose.....better than YOUR English??

    • @reesofraft4166
      @reesofraft4166 10 месяцев назад

      @@malahammer english is my third language, but there are some very bad mistakes that most first graders can point out. I"m not saying the story is bad. just the ai writing on screen.

    • @Wise4HarvestTime
      @Wise4HarvestTime 10 месяцев назад +2

      I think AI wrote this and AI read it. It's a long string of cliches. Nothing special

  • @fredmaxwell9619
    @fredmaxwell9619 10 месяцев назад +5

    I really get tired of the miss spelling/changed spelling of names. (Xantar-Xanthor changed spelling I guess, so annoying)) (Xyloth-islet WTF). I enjoy the stories but this changed spelling happens continuously in the stories.

    • @Jagabot_Esq.
      @Jagabot_Esq. 10 месяцев назад +1

      AI isn't that smart ...yet. Give it another ten years before it takes over the world, right now it's learning how to spell and speak.

    • @brucewelty7684
      @brucewelty7684 10 месяцев назад +2

      the whole discontinuity is disturbing. A little brat in a forest full of carnivores? and it survives??

  • @anonygent
    @anonygent 10 месяцев назад +4

    Should have worked on the AI pic a little more... the story is set in a forest, but the picture is of a desert.

  • @garymathena2125
    @garymathena2125 10 месяцев назад +2

    Its Yoda!!!

  • @allenhamilton6688
    @allenhamilton6688 10 месяцев назад

    That story really didn't make much sense. Why didn't Zagon just destroy the Earth ship. He'd have the perfect excuse for doing so.

  • @mikemoscato2995
    @mikemoscato2995 10 месяцев назад +3

    Halkins,rodreguwz,stay frosty?stealing the characters and language from the movie ailens are we?😅

  • @Spirit612
    @Spirit612 10 месяцев назад +1

    Loved this story! 88

  • @Steve-yk5jx
    @Steve-yk5jx 10 месяцев назад +1

    but why 2 endings to the same story

  • @notcherbane3218
    @notcherbane3218 10 месяцев назад +2

    Okay the premise of this is kind of dumb human saving an alien child nothing wrong with that but it sounds like he's just outside of a city of his own species and while I don't know if it's a city or a large village you would figure out if possibly a hundred or a thousand of his own kind that one of them would come to get the kid why would you send a SOS about one of your own kids near your own town or village that part really wasn't clear, this would have made a lot more sense if say an abandoned space station partially damaged or a derelict shipped damage with the parents killed or a crashed spaceship on an abandoned planet with limited life support something similar that would make a lot more sense this scenario is really bizarre but I do enjoy the premise.

  • @JonBeowulf
    @JonBeowulf 10 месяцев назад +1

    Author needs to focus on the point of the story. Random encounters with random creatures followed by an anti-climactic showdown followed by overly dramatic rescue (with the enemy watching) creates a meandering and annoying tale.

  • @damnhandy
    @damnhandy 10 месяцев назад +2

    Eighty-eight!

  • @open_my_eyes3311
    @open_my_eyes3311 10 месяцев назад +1

    Apologies. I feel I would be failing this channel if I don't point out the elephant in the room. We like the stories in this channel but this one is an uncomplete product. We are failing the channel if we don't point out a few things to help keep the good quality of future stories.
    I don't mean to give advice when it's not needed. I've liked previous stories, but the lack of care shown for this one during it's making, with all the contradictions and even an unexplained double-ending situation saddens me.
    Like, why bother telling us that the shuttle reunited with the ship in orbit and headed home with the protagonist alive and well??
    And then continue narrating seamlessly that the shuttle, for some unknown reason, is back downside, landing on the same spot of the alien planet, thus endangering the child without explanation??
    Why tell us the hero of the story manages to escape with the child to space?? And then magically reappear on the alien planet's surface only to die??
    I'm not against the strategy of showing several possible endings. If that was the intention here, I'm not saying anything new or extraordinary: it should be hinted the reason behind the logic of ending the story using multiple endings.
    Like, maybe he was dreaming one of the 2 endings present here? Pretty basic stuff.
    But there's no hint or explanation offered.
    Makes me wonder if there is even a human supervising the AI/ AIs anymore.
    Please don´t let the quality decay like this. For the sake of the channel and it's subscribers, it's better to not publish a story that is not ready yet.
    Thank you for getting to the end of my longer-than planned comment

  • @Wise4HarvestTime
    @Wise4HarvestTime 10 месяцев назад +3

    I suspect this long string of cliches was written and read by AI. Nothing special

  • @jeffclark2869
    @jeffclark2869 10 месяцев назад +2

    07 Captain James Thompson

  • @PabloCruise9398
    @PabloCruise9398 10 месяцев назад +2

    No need for the huge captions.😊

  • @autopartsmonkey7992
    @autopartsmonkey7992 10 месяцев назад +3

    i gotta admit,,,this one is pretty crap...worst one yet...sorry.

  • @thomasmccabe-lw9hg
    @thomasmccabe-lw9hg 10 месяцев назад +1

    88, good story.

  • @Reshtarc
    @Reshtarc 10 месяцев назад +2

    Eighty eight.

  • @brucewelty7684
    @brucewelty7684 10 месяцев назад +2

    disjointed SHEET

  • @stateofthearts
    @stateofthearts 10 месяцев назад +2

    88, Looking for more!

  • @michaelagin7076
    @michaelagin7076 10 месяцев назад +3

    Poorly down story

  • @truebluepatriot2739
    @truebluepatriot2739 10 месяцев назад +3

    💙🇺🇲 "88"...🤪

  • @DawnAdams-d5i
    @DawnAdams-d5i 10 месяцев назад +1

    impractical drivel

  • @Jagabot_Esq.
    @Jagabot_Esq. 10 месяцев назад +1

    AI written garbage.

  • @samueljones6021
    @samueljones6021 10 месяцев назад

    Thank You 🙏🙏
    88

  • @sanseiru
    @sanseiru 10 месяцев назад +1

    88. Quite ennoyable. Thanks