Trespassers - Short Horror Film 2019

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  • Опубликовано: 15 сен 2024
  • Ben and Lucy are siblings who are travelling interstate to visit their parents. When their car breaks down on a desolate rural road, they are forced to seek help at a nearby farming estate. Cut off from the outside world, they soon make a terrible discovery...
    - Official Selection: Northern Frights Festival (2019)
    - Official Selection: Nepa Horror Film Festival (2019)
    - Official Selection: Salem Horror Fest (2019)
    - Official Selection: Bleedingham Horror Film Festival (2019)
    - Official Selection: The American Horrors Film Festival (2019)
    - Official Selection: Oregon Scream Week Horror Festival (2019)
    - Official Selection: Sydney Lift-Off Film Festival (2019)
    - Official Selection: Byron Bay International Film Festival (2019)
    - Finalist - Best Cinematography: AFIN International Film Festival (2019)
    - Finalist - Best Editing: AFIN International Film Festival (2019)
    - Semi Finalist - Best Director: AFIN International Film Festival (2019)
    - Semi Finalist - Best Short Film: AFIN International Film Festival (2019)
    - Semi Finalist - Best Actress: AFIN International Film Festival (2019)

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  • @DuckpondProductions
    @DuckpondProductions  Год назад +34

    Hey all! If you haven’t already, please check out the trailer for our film THE MATRIARCH, starring the man himself, Andy Sparnon (no shovel in this one though). Would love to hear your thoughts!
    ruclips.net/video/g0rD7S0BvZQ/видео.html

    • @pauljones8279
      @pauljones8279 Год назад +4

      Make this into a full movie

    • @bellliberty7914
      @bellliberty7914 Год назад +1

      Please make Trespassers into a full movie

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  Год назад +4

      @@bellliberty7914 script is written, we just need the money!!

    • @MKMJ-ef9fs
      @MKMJ-ef9fs Год назад

      ةب

    • @sirapos6550
      @sirapos6550 11 месяцев назад +1

      Is Andy Sparnon the killer ? He's convincing !

  • @keithjones7037
    @keithjones7037 3 года назад +417

    Let me just say that as a brother (younger or older), if a stranger invites your sister into their home in this situation, you need to go in there with her to make sure nothing happens to her.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад +31

      Completely agree!

    • @aadhi7903
      @aadhi7903 2 года назад +3

      🥰👍💯

    • @habashaman212
      @habashaman212 Год назад

      Indeed, what this guy did is just exercise his beta-mentality. How do you let your own sister enter a stranger's house in middle of nowhere?!

    • @nimkygondal5490
      @nimkygondal5490 Год назад +36

      Yea.... boy showed utterly carelessness.
      And on the other hand girl should come out straight rather than nossy around 🥺

    • @astridlove2327
      @astridlove2327 Год назад +8

      Well he wasn’t even able to defend himself ultimately, so not sure it would of made much of a difference in this case 🤷🏻‍♀️

  • @queent1261
    @queent1261 4 года назад +387

    The scariest thing about this film is the truth behind it. There are so many women and children sold and trafficked all over the world and this film makes us aware of just how real it is. Very well done!!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +17

      It's a very relevant, scary and unfortunate truth. Thank you for watching our film!

    • @Sanjaysanjay-ul5ym
      @Sanjaysanjay-ul5ym 4 года назад +16

      The guy was so stupid..he should have ran instead of picking fight with that pshyco guy..if he would have left the place he could have saved everyone including his sis..but he didn't think before picking fight n was killed by pshyco man..

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +9

      @@Sanjaysanjay-ul5ym that was a flight or fight response and his instinct was to fight (He's quite a big guy so I don't think that's hard to grasp). His worst desicion was earlier in the movie

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +4

      @@colkurtz4102 she's referring to sex trafficking not abduction

    • @henrytjernlund
      @henrytjernlund 4 года назад +4

      Most human trafficking involves labor under duress. Especially the sweat shops in the fashion clothing industry. Sex slave trafficking isn't as common, but it's what everyone makes their film about. Even one of my own scripts has it as a story element. Though mostly I write science fiction which would take bigger budgets than most indie filmmakers have.

  • @lamario295
    @lamario295 4 года назад +410

    I would NEVER just let my sister go into the stranger's house alone

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +16

      Horror movie 101 haha

    • @writer46m72
      @writer46m72 4 года назад +38

      Me neither. And I wouldn't have walked far away from the house either. Nor would I (if I was Lucy) walk down the basement.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +12

      @@writer46m72 I wouldn't kill John Wick's dog, but if that guy didn't there wouldn't be a movie 😅 I get what you guys are saying, it's not a great character move. The idea was to have Ben as kind of a crappy, irresponsible big brother. He has a small arc where he tries to redeem himself, but the film is a little too short to drive the point home. Sorry if it took away from the movie, thanks for watching regardless!

    • @jahton1239
      @jahton1239 4 года назад +1

      That was my 1st thought.

    • @riddleme3240
      @riddleme3240 4 года назад +16

      I know right? Especially if that stranger looks like a porn actor

  • @jonathan45278
    @jonathan45278 11 месяцев назад +9

    I remember a foreigner once said how lucky I was to live in South Australia as I could go camping without fear of predators. I reminded him that the biggest thing to fear was my fellow man.

  • @pallavisinghjauhal9247
    @pallavisinghjauhal9247 4 года назад +145

    Just don't trespass...keep away from strange places,where there is no reception...just run....never forget curiosity can kill you...
    Worth watching...

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +5

      Good advice, thanks for watching!

    • @bethjohnson8353
      @bethjohnson8353 4 года назад +4

      What a cowardly advice

    • @pallavisinghjauhal9247
      @pallavisinghjauhal9247 4 года назад +2

      @@bethjohnson8353 it's better to run rather than to stay and die...

    • @rayne3132
      @rayne3132 Год назад +1

      Curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back… that’s the full saying

    • @lardo1978
      @lardo1978 Год назад

      No

  • @judyeverist646
    @judyeverist646 4 года назад +94

    Why do they always go to the basement!
    No good ever comes from it!

    • @nelliesilvers1210
      @nelliesilvers1210 4 года назад +2

      But she had to investigate the strange noise... definitely not a good move😕

    • @KimberlyLetsGo
      @KimberlyLetsGo 4 года назад +1

      Curiosity and the cat and all. Yea.

  • @marahc.1755
    @marahc.1755 4 года назад +208

    Horror movies taught me to mind my own business.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +12

      Also check your fluids before you drive ;)

    • @nanabdo812
      @nanabdo812 4 года назад

      Hey It's

    • @Luke17441
      @Luke17441 4 года назад

      Me too!

    • @rayanlakhani3066
      @rayanlakhani3066 4 года назад

      About the Contributors Mr. John Jeffrey Auer IV is a PhD candidate and public historian at the University of Nevada, Reno. He is also co-founder of the Nevada LGBT Archives. Ms. Tracy Baim is an author and the Publisher and Executive Editor of the Windy City Times, Chicago, Illinois. Dr. Katie Batza is an Assistant Professor of Women, Gender, and Sexuality Studies at the University of Kansas, Lawrence, Kansas. Dr. Drew Bourn is an Instructor in History for the Continuing Studies Program at Stanford University and Historical Curator at the Stanford Medical History Center, Palo Alto, California. Dr. Tara Burk is a part-time Lecturer at Rutgers University, New Brunswick, New Jersey. Dr. Julio Capó, Jr. is an Assistant Professor in the Department of History and the Commonwealth Honors College at the University of Massachusetts, Amherst. Ms. Caridad de la Vega is a Historian at the National Historic Landmarks Program, National Park Service, Washington, DC. Dr. Gail Dubrow is a Professor of Architecture, Landscape Architecture, Public Affairs & Planning, and History at the University of Minnesota. Dr. Steve Estes is a Professor of History at Sonoma State University, Rohnert Park, California. Dr. Susan Vermentinos is a public history consultant in Bloomington, Indiana. Dr. Jen Jack Gieseking is an Assistant Professor of Public Humanities in the American Studies Program at Trinity College, Hartford, Connecticut. Dr. Deena J. González an Associate Provost for Faculty Affairs and Professor in the Department of Chicanao Studies, Loyola Marymount University, Los Angeles, California. Ms. Donna J. Graves is a Public Historian and Cultural Planner in California. Dr. Christina B. Hanhardt is an Associate Professor in the Department of American Studies at the University of Maryland, College Park. Mr. Jeffrey Harris is an independent historian and historic preservation consultant in Hampton, Virginia. Ms. Jessica Herczeg-Konecny is the Digital Asset Manager at the Detroit Institute of Arts, Michigan. Dr. Ellie D. Hernandez is an Associate Professor of Chicanao Studies at the University of California Santa Barbara. Dr. Loraine Hutchins co-founded Bitnet USA the national bisexual network, and served on its first board of directors. She is an adjunct professor at Montgomery College in Maryland where she teaches interdisciplinary sexuality and gender studies. Dr. David K. Johnson is an Associate Professor in the Department of History, University of South Florida, Tampa. Mr. Gerard Koskovich is a historian, curator, rare book dealer, and founding member of the GLBT Historical Society in San Francisco, California. Mr. Mark Meinke is a community preservationist and historian in the Washington, DC area. He is co-founder and an executive board member of the Rainbow Heritage Network Dr. Leisa Meyer is a Professor, American Studies and History at the College of William and Mary, Williamsburg, Virginia. Dr. Will Roscoe is an independent historian and Development Associate at Open house, a social service agency for LGBT seniors in San Francisco, California. Dr. Leila J. Rupp is a Distinguished Professor, Department of Feminist Studies and Interim Dean of the Division of Social Sciences at the University of California Santa Barbara. Dr. Katherine Schweighofer is a Visiting Assistant Professor in the Department of Women’s Gender, & Sexuality Studies and the Department of American Studies, Dickinson College, Carlisle, Pennsylvania. Mr. Jay Shockley is an architectural/cultural historian and historic preservationist in New York City. Dr. Helis Sikk is a Visiting Assistant Professor in the Gender, Sexuality, and Women’s Studies Program at the College of William and Mary, Williamsburg, Virginia. Ms. Megan E. Springate is a historical archaeologist and PhD candidate at the University of Maryland, College Park as well as the Prime Consultant to the LGBTQ Heritage Initiative. Dr. Marc Stein is a Professor of History at San Francisco State University, California. Dr. Susan Stryker is an Associate Professor, Gender and Women’s Studies at the University of Arizona, Tucson. Dr. Amy Sueyoshi is an Associate Dean, College of Ethnic Studies; Professor of Race and Resistance Studies; and Professor of Sexuality Studies at San Francisco State University, California. Ms. Shayne E. Watson is an architectural historian in Mill Valley, California. INTRODUCTION
      The chapters in the Introduction section give context to the rest of the theme study. This is the context for the contexts, as it were. This section gives background on the LGBTQ Heritage Initiative and provides a broad social history of LGBTQ in America. The ideas in this introductory section will resonate throughout the rest of the theme study. W WHY LGBTQ HISTORIC SITES MATTER Mark Meinke
      Start here. We exist. We, lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, queer people (LGBTQ), all the subdivisions of the sexual and gender minority community, exist in America. The places we remember and hold dear, those places that have become part of our identity, also exist. Still. Many of them.
      In the 1960s no lesbian, gay man, bisexual, transgender person, or queer gave a thought to their sites and actions being historic. They were struggling for their basic rights, explicitly denied them by their government and the larger society around them. As Dr. Franklin E. Kameny, often called the father of LGBTQ civil rights, asserted with some asperity in his 1960 petition for a writ of certiorari to the Supreme Court “Probably [homosexuals] most dominant characteristic is their utter heterogeneity. Despite [the] common popular stereotype of a homosexual which would have him discernible at once by appearance, mannerisms and other
      Mark Meinke characteristics, these people run the gamut of physical type, of intellectual ability and inclination and of emotional make-up (Figure 1). In making his case for tolerance and an end to restrictions on homosexuals’ rights, Kameny was in this instance most focused on discrimination in employment, though in addressing his own particular case, he noted that those rights were the equal of every American’s rights and should not be legally, logically, constitutionally, or on any other basis diminished (Figure 2). The depth of Kameny’s asperity was plumbed in his outraged summary of the government’s case for oppressing homosexuals’ employment in a resonant indictment of federal oppression:
      Respondents’ [US Civil Service Commission, Army Mapping Service, the US Army] case is rotten to the core. Respondents’ case had been shown to fail factually and to be defective procedurally; the regulations upon which they base their case have been shown to be legally faulty, invalid, and unconstitutional; their policies have been shown to be improperly discriminatory, Franklin Edward Kameny v. Wilber M. Brucker, Secretary of the Army et al., Petition for a Writ of Certiorari, no. 676, US Supreme Court, 1960, 36. Kameny’s writ was intended to win him a Supreme Court review of his appeal against dismissal from the Army Mapping Service on grounds of homosexuality in 1957. It did not. However, in articulating his arguments against US government repression of homosexuals and its ban on employment of homosexuals, Kameny set forth clearly many of the arguments and goals that would characterize his activism over the next fifty-one years. The Dr. Franklin E. Kameny Residence is located in the northwestern quadrant of Washington, DC. It was listed on the NRHP on November 2, 2011. Figure 1: Dr. Franklin E. Kameny’s 1960 petition for a writ of certiorari to overturn his exclusion from federal employment on the basis of homosexuality. Publication of the United States Supreme Court, 1960.

    • @spoonfulsofjam6647
      @spoonfulsofjam6647 4 года назад

      😅😅😅😅🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 too true! And be nice, respectful, out of the way, and don't try telling anybody. Just run lol

  • @niabernier1041
    @niabernier1041 4 года назад +126

    The psycho's acting is really good ! He should be cast in movies.

  • @CoastfishTV
    @CoastfishTV 4 года назад +75

    Very grateful to be hand picked to play the role of disturbed killer 'Jack', in 'Trespassers'.
    Congratulations to all involved in the making of this film and hitting that 50K milestone.
    Until we meet again. Andy Sparnon

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +3

      So grateful to have had you fill the role. One of those very magical filming moments when things just clicked!

    • @Peacemaker4554
      @Peacemaker4554 2 года назад +2

      Wow! That was you? What did you think of playing that role?

    • @Girlsauce333
      @Girlsauce333 Год назад +1

      I want to be in a horror film! It's my dream! 🙏💗

    • @kevingiles623
      @kevingiles623 Год назад +1

      Played it very convincingly

    • @karend169
      @karend169 Год назад +3

      I hated your character, so you played him very well.

  • @mi2ube
    @mi2ube 4 года назад +145

    I’m getting Wrong Turn, Texas Chainsaw Massacre, and Jeepers Creepers vibes. LOVE IT!!!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +6

      My horror movie staples growing up 😅 really glad you enjoyed the film and it's nice to hear my homages are paying off!

    • @sulenespandiel6973
      @sulenespandiel6973 4 года назад +1

      True lol. Hectic

    • @jassaini4u
      @jassaini4u 4 года назад +5

      And hills have eyes vibes as well !!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +4

      @@jassaini4u definitely some Hills Have Eyes in there. There's even a line of dialogue that's a nod to that film if you watch closely ;)

    • @sookie_lou7925
      @sookie_lou7925 4 года назад +1

      I got that vibe only because the house is set up like the TCM house, in the middle of bum fuck Egypt haha. But other than that I dont really feel any other connection besides murder??? Also is it just me or did that girl not look concerned at all that she was being held captive in a stable in her underwear? Like I just didnt feel it with this one haha
      Too much has been done before. Still a great short though

  • @JerCessSquad
    @JerCessSquad 4 года назад +23

    would NEVER just let my sister go into the stranger's house alone see ya

  • @heryratno6169
    @heryratno6169 Год назад +13

    Hi! I'm from Indonesia. It's a very good short film containing dark truth about human trafficking. Points to learn from it; they shouldn't have left the main road to get reception or get help. However things are different had they got lost in asian countries like Indonesia. They could just leave the main road, look for the nearest village and ask for help to any villagers they met. It would be completely a safe practice. The only challenge is the communication though I'm sure gestures and body language would solve the problem.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  Год назад +2

      Big thank you from the cast and crew! Glad you enjoyed the film and took a few things from it :)

    • @sdfdk3457
      @sdfdk3457 9 месяцев назад +2

      This is just a movie, not all western strangers are dangerous. And human trafficking is often in asian countries too.

  • @lizgonzalez7652
    @lizgonzalez7652 4 года назад +51

    Awesome short! I love horror movies and that shovel scene was brutal, definitely needs to be a feature film! Great job guys!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +4

      Thank you so much Liz, can't wait to show you more!!

    • @KarmicSalt
      @KarmicSalt Год назад

      it has been, many times...too many plot holes

    • @Control-Alt-Delete619
      @Control-Alt-Delete619 9 месяцев назад +1

      You're into this kind of kinky stuff???❓❓❓

  • @hottrucker123
    @hottrucker123 4 года назад +14

    HOLY SHIT!!! This needs to be a entire full blown movie. Talk about a rollercoaster ride. Had me on the edge the entire time .

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Thank you so much, really glad you enjoyed it! A future is in the works if we can get the funding!

  • @jrh5067
    @jrh5067 3 года назад +5

    Real life can be stranger than fiction.
    To think, awful things like this happen and people do DO this sort of thing.
    I WISH THE WORLD COULD BE A BETTER PLACE.

  • @asvk5479
    @asvk5479 3 года назад +1

    Das ist wirklich einmal ein Kurzfilm, der einen Preis verdient. Nicht die üblichen Szenen, die nur erschrecken, sondern einmal etwas, das unter die Haut geht und von Anfang an eine Gänsehaut erzeugt. Die Schauspieler sind einfach wunderbar. Und was ich gaz toll finde: endlich einmal ein Bösewicht, der sein Messer abwischt! Der Verzicht auf spritzendes Blut, sichtbare Gewalt und die üblichen, schon so oft gesehenen so genannten Gruseleffekte, macht den Film sehr authenisch und deshalb so beängstigend. Eine wirklich phantastische Produktion. Vielen Dank dafür und bitte noch mehr davon!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад

      Beeindruckend! Vielen Dank für eine so positive, gut durchdachte Bewertung! Wir freuen uns, dass Ihnen der Film gefallen hat und hoffen, dass Ihnen unsere Nachfolgefilme gefallen. Wir versuchen derzeit, dies in eine Feature-Länge umzuwandeln. Bitte schauen Sie sich diesen Bereich weiterhin an!

  • @faridehnaghsh
    @faridehnaghsh 4 года назад +53

    Great job, this can be a whole 2 hours movie, keeps you on your toes.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thank you so much for the kind words! We're hoping to develop it into a full length film but we still need a little exposure! Hope we can count on you to share it and spread the word

    • @paulopaulojohn3341
      @paulopaulojohn3341 4 года назад

      Safi nimeipenda

    • @aprildyingamongremindedros6522
      @aprildyingamongremindedros6522 4 года назад

      Nuremberghuebuwerhyrhueerbhurwjurrbullleshurjienvbrgyrnrrurel

  • @brentage5000
    @brentage5000 3 года назад +9

    Moral of the story: if you don't want trespassers (not that they were, at least in the traditional sense), then make sure your no trespassing signs are clearly posted and not laying in the fricking grass where they can't be seen.

  • @ceciliaramos2280
    @ceciliaramos2280 4 года назад +66

    Heard a noise let me go see what it is in this strange house. Dummy.

  • @desiguy55
    @desiguy55 4 года назад +7

    people in horror movies, " i hear creepy noises in creepy house with a creepy owner, , lets investigate"
    Me, "get the hell out of here as fast as you can".

  • @raiskhaaa4882
    @raiskhaaa4882 4 года назад +23

    Please be safe... Moral of the story is just for the sake of some adventure don't put ur life in danger...

  • @porczgabi2263
    @porczgabi2263 Год назад +22

    A very well filmed, suspenseful short horror flick. Unfortunately, there are sick bastards in the world who would thrive at committing crimes like this.
    Looking forward to viewing more short horror flicks by your company.
    Well done!!

  • @writer46m72
    @writer46m72 4 года назад +8

    always hoping someone like this brother would become the hero and end up saving the day, but these are short horror films, and the endings are always even darker than the hostel movies.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Sorry to disappoint. He gave it all he had though, I promise 😅

    • @writer46m72
      @writer46m72 4 года назад

      @@DuckpondProductions oh I know. Like I said, most short horror movies are like that. Not like, as another example, house of wax, where the douche brother ends up being a hero. But in this one, the brother died trying to be the hero.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@writer46m72 thank you, that's exactly what we were going for with the redeeming arc :) he's a little irresponsible to begin with but he goes down swinging!

  • @Dramadonia
    @Dramadonia 3 года назад +11

    That's a dose of reality for you folks. I love how a knight didn't ride in on his horse to save them and grant many the mushy feel good ending they often see because in reality it rarely happens in such cases.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад

      Completely agree. I don't think an ending like that would have been suited for a film like this 😥

  • @sonilemoonga391
    @sonilemoonga391 4 года назад +55

    How can one move soo comfortably in a strangers house? Oh my word!!

    • @MarquishaFreeman6043
      @MarquishaFreeman6043 4 года назад

      Good Question

    • @bethjohnson8353
      @bethjohnson8353 4 года назад

      Idiot snooping around someone’s house in an isolated area , deserves your fatr

    • @natasharooinasie5725
      @natasharooinasie5725 4 года назад +1

      White people for you. First of all blacks wouldn't even bother for none of that.

  • @VoyagerEntertainment2022
    @VoyagerEntertainment2022 4 года назад +26

    This was awesome!! Wow! Well done! Ive seen Australian feature films with not even half the quality of this and I can assure you they spent way more. Wow! I'm gonna watch this again!!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Wow - thank you for the kind words, really appreciate the support! This was most definitely shot on a shoestring budget, so feedback like this let's us know we're on the right track! Hoping to develop it into a feature if we ever get a real production budget to work with, so definitely watch this space for more action!

  • @leilamohammed1759
    @leilamohammed1759 4 года назад +27

    I literally jumped when that guy appeared at the door 😫😫

  • @septemberquest6393
    @septemberquest6393 4 года назад +27

    This short has more intensity in less than 12 minutes ,than I've seen in 2 hour average horror films...not bad... potential no doubt for sequel!!!cool..👍👍👍

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +3

      Thank you so much, love seeing comments like this, it's so motivational! Please be sure to subscribe, we're hoping to develop it into a feature at a later date!

    • @manjunathabh555
      @manjunathabh555 4 года назад +2

      @@DuckpondProductions ಒಳ್ಳೇಯ ಸಿನಿಮಾ

  • @dorothywhalen2983
    @dorothywhalen2983 4 года назад +13

    That was really well done!!! The brother needed to fight dirty, that would have been his only shot. At about 9 minutes in I checked the time remaining because I didn't want it to end!!!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thank you so much Dorothy, really appreciate the kind words. And totally agree, some hay in the eyes would have done wonders 😅

  • @contentedblack8198
    @contentedblack8198 3 года назад +20

    Story, casting and background music; well aligned and well done!! Indeed a pleasure watch! Kudos to the team!!

  • @lutu1321
    @lutu1321 4 года назад +30

    I guess that the directors, writers and producers looked at eachother and said "screw happy endings."

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +9

      The producer writer and director was all the same person, so there wasn't much rebuttal 😅 hope you enjoyed the film.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @Jack Frost very true unfortunately.

  • @sergiusomesan7120
    @sergiusomesan7120 Год назад +15

    Please put subtitles so that we can translate them into other languages. Great movie, great idea and great execution. Thank you!

  • @thenebraskan6977
    @thenebraskan6977 Год назад +3

    Awesome story. Sad truth this happens in real life. Amazing actors.

  • @blackpearl9605
    @blackpearl9605 4 года назад +6

    WOW, I must appreciate the quality of this short movie, it's simply beyond super (knowing that the budget must not be that big) without any doubt it is a short movie of Hollywood quality.
    The end made me sad, m even more sad knowing that this is actually happening in our world, and that's the reason I find it really scary.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thank you for the lovely comment! it's a scary world we live in for sure 😣

  • @annieyu72
    @annieyu72 4 года назад +10

    Girl: "You're just gonna die sooner"
    Boy: "Good, I hate long waits"

  • @JoyaLewisTheMusician
    @JoyaLewisTheMusician 9 месяцев назад +1

    Big brother of the year over here - SEEING how that creep looked at his sister and STILL DIDN’T go in there with her?

  • @DuckpondProductions
    @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +142

    Hey everyone, thank you for checking out our film! We fully intend to make this into a feature film if we can raise enough money. In the mean time please support our channel by liking, commenting, sharing and subscribing. New horror short coming soon, teaser trailer below:
    ruclips.net/video/ygC4Bxup32U/видео.html

    • @jellydamasing1059
      @jellydamasing1059 4 года назад +2

      Pls download full movie of this horror...

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +6

      @@jellydamasing1059 We want to make a full movie, but it's gonna cost more money then we have. You can help us by helping our channel grow :)

    • @deddehy.kortimai3322
      @deddehy.kortimai3322 4 года назад +2

      The movie is great love it

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      @@deddehy.kortimai3322 thanks Deddeh! Hope to show you more down the line. Be sure to check out the teaser for our next one, "Kinks" :)

    • @r.b.d.3068
      @r.b.d.3068 4 года назад +1

      nah don't do that

  • @tonizollo7519
    @tonizollo7519 4 года назад +16

    Good suspense and soundtrack. Still gritting my teeth from the shovel scene. Nice production.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      Thanks so much Toni, really glad you enjoyed the ride! Appreciate the support!

    • @lardo1978
      @lardo1978 Год назад

      Orribile

  • @sheilabonilla1546
    @sheilabonilla1546 4 года назад +41

    Their mama never told them that never go inside a stranger house?! ... and all for a pis

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +6

      I mean, they did need a phone as well, they didn't have much choice haha. But yes, mistakes were made 😅

    • @sarahfelicien2866
      @sarahfelicien2866 4 года назад +5

      She could of pee outside

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +4

      @@sarahfelicien2866 she needed a phone and shelter more then the pee. The pee was a bonus. "It's forty degrees outside, we don't know where the next town is AND I need to pee."

  • @JC-uj3zj
    @JC-uj3zj 4 года назад +16

    Damn i hate when the bad guy wins. We need happy endings again my horror fan status is starting to be too depressing like the state of the world. Great film though, on all facets of production. Make a full length of this feature where the guy gets his real good. i'll gladly watch.Thanks!!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thanks J C, that's the plan if we can ever get the funding! Feel free to share it around if you wanna help, the more eyes the better!

    • @Donnierajproductions
      @Donnierajproductions 4 года назад +1

      Can't believe talent like you not getting fundings

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@Donnierajproductions aw thank you! Hopefully one day if we all put our heads down!

    • @concepcionmedaurbina6989
      @concepcionmedaurbina6989 4 года назад

      Nombre de la película en español

    • @cotterpolt5309
      @cotterpolt5309 4 года назад

      @@concepcionmedaurbina6989 Intrusos

  • @Single.White.Female
    @Single.White.Female 9 месяцев назад

    Trespassing...they walked right into the spider's web. Man, that shovel scene was brutal!

  • @maxinekingsley2539
    @maxinekingsley2539 4 года назад +16

    This should have been a full length movie! Love it!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

  • @commandericeman8588
    @commandericeman8588 4 года назад +58

    Once again we see two people violate the top two commandments of an emergency situation.
    1) Always armed (firearm(s), edged weapon or bludgeoning type, chemical agent, high explosives....ect) Always carry a primary weapon and then a backup or secondary.
    2) No one goes anywhere alone. Your teammate is always within eyesight AND earshot.
    3) Whenever approaching an unfamiliar structure or area (especially one that might become hostile) always conduct reconnaissance and a perimeter sweep.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +3

      Pretty good advice haha! thanks for watching!

    • @ClandestineSnowman
      @ClandestineSnowman 4 года назад +2

      oh shut up

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      @@ClandestineSnowman 😅😅

    • @beowulfvladmax7710
      @beowulfvladmax7710 4 года назад

      Excellent advice. As an ex-cop and former corrections officer I've always read every situation, every room really, that I enter. I'm always armed and I train pain compliance moves regularly. I'm in shape and workout daily. I never overreach. My skills, caution and strength have served me very well in occasionally tight situations. Walking virtually naked into such a situation I would never do.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@beowulfvladmax7710 are you armed in the shower? 🤔

  • @Sam-ep5qu
    @Sam-ep5qu 4 года назад +50

    I won't go into strangers house.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Honestly good advice haha

    • @gordanazakula4927
      @gordanazakula4927 4 года назад

      @@DuckpondProductions I was once in danger, and went into a strangers house; they allowed me to ring my horrified mother, and brought me home. They were born-again Christians. NEVER AGAIN, I was terrified, this could have happened to me!!! True life horror is worse than supernatural horror!!!

    • @originalkingalpha5116
      @originalkingalpha5116 Год назад +1

      Not even if they had fresh oven baked cookies and apple cider? 🍪☕😂

  • @HolywellFilms
    @HolywellFilms 3 года назад +41

    Love this. This is far better than the crap we see on tv these days. Well done everyone. Excellent job all round. 👌

  • @Jamesfocolarini
    @Jamesfocolarini 4 года назад +9

    for a short film, it's good and relevant...kept me on the edge of my seat (whew!)...kudos to the makers and actors of this film! hope you can make it into an entire feature film :)

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Thanks so much James, we hope we can too! Appreciate the support!

  • @deeannmoore6463
    @deeannmoore6463 4 года назад +6

    Oh my Jesus! LMAO. When that guy showed up at the door I jumped so bad i dropped my phone on my face!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      Hahaha. Glad it worked it's magic ;)

    • @deeannmoore6463
      @deeannmoore6463 4 года назад

      @@DuckpondProductions Totally! Now I DO love a real good "jumpscare". I subscribed so I will be watching for any of your future work!!! Lovin it!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      @@deeannmoore6463 thank you so much, we appreciate the support! We just finished filming a new short last month so keep an eye out for more 🤗

    • @raymondbelgera7807
      @raymondbelgera7807 4 года назад

      haha.it hurt?

  • @philosopher1912
    @philosopher1912 4 года назад +66

    Damn was this an amazing short! You can see that this has taken you guy's a lot of time and care! The opening shot was pretty amazing!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +5

      Thanks so much for checking it out, really appreciate the support! Feel free to sub for some juicy new content, we start shooting again in January ;)

  • @problematic_canik
    @problematic_canik 4 года назад +12

    Top quality acting from everyone! Loved it

  • @jeffreyzain
    @jeffreyzain 4 года назад +5

    ■Gorgeous colour grade
    ■Unsettling shovel scene à la Tarantino
    BRAVO!
    -22 FEB 2020

  • @michellewhoknows
    @michellewhoknows Год назад +2

    Of all the horror stories I’ve watched, I don’t ever remember seeing that shovel scene-didn’t see that coming !!

  • @jowalker5152
    @jowalker5152 4 года назад +10

    Excellent, fairly racks up the tension!
    Well made and well acted!

  • @jrh5067
    @jrh5067 3 года назад +4

    I'm forever searching 'short australian films' and 'australian comedy horrors'
    They seem to be so good at these types of movies.
    I'd like to see more ozzy comedy horrors, they're fantastic.
    Great stuff guys, keep it up and more please.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад

      I'm glad you found this one, thanks so much for checking it out!

  • @anneshadasgupta1594
    @anneshadasgupta1594 3 года назад +4

    So neatly done. Short horror films give the best screams.

  • @thedys70
    @thedys70 4 года назад +6

    Okay, so this has potential. Perhaps I would have opened with Ben and Lucy driving, chatting, the car's temp gauge flagging, and standard cliche shot of radiator steaming, then pulling over.
    Now this of course adds absolutely nothing to the story, other than to pad the running time out, and perhaps develop more anxious dialogue between our two protagonists,
    as we haven't been given enough time to bond with them, and wish them no harm, even though we know things aren't going to end well for this pair.
    Obviously the Wolf Creek comparisons are inevitable: travelers, wrong place at wrong time inadvertently walk into the lair of a sociopath [I like that term, it hasn't got old yet!].
    Not all horror films have happy endings either; Wolf Creek certainly didn't, Pet Semetary [1989] was horendous, and this one gives us no sense of closure either.
    So if everybody is happy to have that stigma linger and come to terms with it, then good. Best of luck sourcing the finance for the project, as I'm sure it is a very stressful process.
    And do we want to know if that kangaroo/wallaby carcass was real? The flies thought so anyhoo, cheers!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +4

      Thanks so much for watching. We actually plan on developing this concept into feature length film one day, and some of your ideas definitely have merit. We want more sibling banter - but it's not for filler; moreso that they're well rounded characters and not just meat for the murder machine. And then of course lots more suspense and action. But we need money to pull it off so please keep following, sharing and supporting us in any way you can, every little bit helps!

    • @thedys70
      @thedys70 4 года назад +2

      @@DuckpondProductions Cheers! Keep up the good work Duckponders!

  • @sharadsurve
    @sharadsurve 4 года назад +3

    It's not a horror, it's suspense and thriller.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      I think we'll have to agree to disagree. There's suspense and thriller elements for sure (just like there is with lots of horror classics), but there's certainly a lot of horror tropes and techniques too. Thank you for watching!

  • @NalaRichenbach
    @NalaRichenbach 10 месяцев назад

    This film serves a very good lesson....Get triple A and stay off private property. Just because someone allows you to use their bathroom...does not mean you are to go nosing through their house. This is why people end up in terrible predicaments. Stay off property that does not belong to you. Also, if your car breaks down...it's your problem....no one else's. I would have kept walking down that road.

  • @sampadebroy3657
    @sampadebroy3657 4 года назад +5

    Wow... Someone doesn't believe in happy endings.... Hahaha...I thought the brother would save the girls.
    P.S- Thanks for making the unexpected so intense and beautiful.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      This was such a nice comment to read, thank you so much for the kind words!

  • @randomgames5393
    @randomgames5393 4 года назад +26

    What makes this scarier is that this is based on real life 😔

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Unfortunately yes 😣

    • @suzannedaniel2057
      @suzannedaniel2057 4 года назад +1

      @@DuckpondProductions Please say that they caught the guy and the women were found.

  • @davidbreckenridge3125
    @davidbreckenridge3125 4 года назад +15

    Great job Jayden and the rest of your Crew !

  • @steventan2763
    @steventan2763 3 года назад +2

    i like their acting most especially Ben's...you can see all sorts of emotions just looking at his eyes.... superb! good job!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад

      Thanks so much Steven, really glad you enjoyed the film and the acting! Would love to hear your thoughts on our follow up film Kinks if you've got 17 minutes to spare 🤗
      ruclips.net/video/XW07qZdVeXc/видео.html

    • @steventan2763
      @steventan2763 3 года назад

      @@DuckpondProductions sure, bring it on...i'd love to check it out....been looking for movies to watch since i'm working from home since this pandemic.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад

      @@steventan2763 Perfect! You can find it at ruclips.net/video/XW07qZdVeXc/видео.html - please let me know what you think it the comments section - tell me which one you liked more :D

    • @lardo1978
      @lardo1978 Год назад

      @@DuckpondProductions troppo violento non va bene

  • @AssadAMalik
    @AssadAMalik 4 года назад +4

    Horror is another element but these locations freshen up my mind as well as soul❤️

  • @amystewart4865
    @amystewart4865 Год назад +1

    I become a gr8 fan of short horror movies. So straight point and I don't need sit behind pillow for 90 mins. Lol 😂
    How brutal was that.

  • @LostInSpace175
    @LostInSpace175 8 месяцев назад +4

    This was really good acting! Loved it!!!

  • @stevesampson9693
    @stevesampson9693 4 года назад +2

    Dude with the shaved head was creepy and intimidating ! Perfect for that role ! Cool flick 😎👍👍

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Thank you so much!

    • @stevesampson9693
      @stevesampson9693 4 года назад

      @@DuckpondProductions youre welcome😎👍👍 now please make one that features a redhead & guitars 😆😆😁🙏🙏

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@stevesampson9693 Our next film has a killer red head actress, you might want to check out the teaser on our channel ;) Dunno about the guitars, but expect a lot of eighties synth pop haha

    • @stevesampson9693
      @stevesampson9693 4 года назад

      @@DuckpondProductions ok i checked it out. And WOW! She is stunning ! Redheads are the most beautiful women on the planet ! So, I'll overlook the "no guitars", this time ....😆😆😆 i will be waiting for the notification 😁👍👍

  • @aratrikd136
    @aratrikd136 4 года назад +10

    I knew Johnny Sins was Multi Talented.

  • @eileenchang2096
    @eileenchang2096 10 месяцев назад +1

    Why would someone explore a stranger’s house basement like that?! Are there so many people so uninhibited and lack of boundaries?!

  • @gothicarthouse
    @gothicarthouse 4 года назад +26

    such a nice looking film - love the colour grade. wish we could shoot a film in australia!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thank you so much for the kind words! Glad you enjoyed the film. Please feel free to share it around, it strengthens our chances of turning it into a feature!

  • @krazykris4785
    @krazykris4785 4 года назад +4

    Great to see an Aussie horror film..very much enjoyed

  • @peterharris4386
    @peterharris4386 4 года назад +25

    Nice production.
    It created the desired effect... very creepy and sinister.
    My only criticism is the end credits, they're not readable.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thanks Peter, really appreciate the view and the feedback! Will definitely take it on board for future productions, all these notes help us get where we want to be!

  • @loneshewolf6015
    @loneshewolf6015 4 года назад +2

    Curiosity is dangerous.... That's why I don't try to be curious.... Especially about strangers

  • @paulchristman2456
    @paulchristman2456 4 года назад +3

    Excellent. I wish that American filmmakers could grasp the concept of suggestion and showing just enough, with reference to the murder of the young man. The captive female victims seemed almost complacent and resigned to their situation, which adds to the perversity of the story.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      This was such a nice comment to read Paul, thank you so much for watching and supporting us!

  • @edvogt4039
    @edvogt4039 4 года назад +2

    I liked the shot of the brother’s shoes hitting the ground on the other side of the gate. I knew it was game on.

  • @raymondrose6596
    @raymondrose6596 4 года назад +10

    I thought it had a good build up to the climax. Great filming and acting.

  • @llamapajamas19
    @llamapajamas19 4 года назад +4

    I really liked this! The crazy guy was really good and I liked the siblings as well, however the acting of the woman in the cell could’ve been a bit better imo. The story was great and I was definitely on edge the whole time!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Thank you so much for the positive feedback, so glad you enjoyed it!

  • @shaheedacrombie5550
    @shaheedacrombie5550 4 года назад +3

    The brother and sister relationship very relatable.. I think its a good short film.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Thank you so much, we tried to make that as convincing as we could! Appreciate the kind feedback!

    • @shaheedacrombie5550
      @shaheedacrombie5550 4 года назад

      I didn't finish the movie though.. just watched 1st few mins.. like the idea of the ouback in the background. And the accent. But when they got to the house and he let his sister in I switched off who does tht.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@shaheedacrombie5550 I've discussed this a bit, it's easily the main criticism of the film. The idea was to have Ben as an irresponsible big brother type with a small redeeming moment at the end. With the time constraints it didn't play out how we intended, sorry it took you out of it. I think your missing out on the high point of the movie turning it off, but it is what it is. Thanks anyway.

    • @shaheedacrombie5550
      @shaheedacrombie5550 4 года назад

      @@DuckpondProductions il finish it dear. And il update my response..

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@shaheedacrombie5550 Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!

  • @tinahachey454
    @tinahachey454 4 года назад +3

    I believe this is going on now so many people going missing never to be found I really liked this one thank you for the upload 👍

  • @charissadelens7314
    @charissadelens7314 3 года назад +10

    Great short film.
    The scary/sad part is that this is awfully realistic because this does happen a lot.
    Great acting and plot though :)

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад +1

      Thanks for checking out our other work Clarrissa, glad you liked this one aswell!

  • @cathiedosba1672
    @cathiedosba1672 3 года назад +11

    Loved this short, punchy horror film. Too many points to comment on but just got to mention my favs - camera work... suspense was great... loved the death scene... editing brought it all together beautifully! All the best with raising funds to make it feature length. Awesome, Jayden Crieghten!!!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  3 года назад +1

      Thank you so much for the kind words, we really appreciate your support! We're moving into pre production for the feature now, but in the mean time we're very close to dropping some new content. Hope you'll check it out when it comes and let me know your thoughts 🤗

  • @tammyshtc26
    @tammyshtc26 4 года назад +15

    Well that creeped me out !! ... good job - very suspenseful !

  • @Diamondstarr35
    @Diamondstarr35 4 года назад +3

    If she would’ve just went back outside with her brother after using the bathroom, her fate probably would’ve been better 😔

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      Unfortunately she has a good heart and was taken advantage of for it. It happens 😣

  • @Yourplussizebae
    @Yourplussizebae 4 года назад +4

    Omg ,
    This is insane !!
    It's amazing !!
    What a good job for ur team ! ♥️

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      Thank you so much, really glad you enjoyed the film! Please subscribe for more cool content, another horror short is well on its way!

  • @tatjanacikac
    @tatjanacikac 8 месяцев назад

    When I was younger, I was naive like that girl. Only dear God saved me from evil people.

  • @marceline6078
    @marceline6078 4 года назад +5

    Aweosme that you guys really reply to the comments. Just subscribed, this short movie keept me on the edge. Keep on the great work 👍💪

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thanks so much Diana! We love reading your thoughts and replying to our supporters! Thank you for the sub 🤗

  • @williamsikora704
    @williamsikora704 4 года назад +1

    As if I needed another reason to never visit Australia. Snakes,Spiders,Kola bears and now this guy!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Hahaha he's about as deadly as an Eastern Brown snake. The country has some other nice things going for it though I swear 😅 Thanks for watching!

    • @williamsikora704
      @williamsikora704 4 года назад

      Duckpond Productions I watch a ton of poor quality horror shorts; this wasn’t one of those! The shovel part was so perfect and so real

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@williamsikora704 thank you so much! We had a tiny budget for this so it means a lot that it's become a stand out. And I'm so glad the shovel scene was so memorable 😅 we have a new film coming out soon called Kinks (teaser on our channel) that you might like, but we'll be trying to develop Trespassers into a feature in the not to distant future so stay tuned!

    • @williamsikora704
      @williamsikora704 4 года назад

      You set your own bar high. Can’t wait for the new stuff 👍

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      @@williamsikora704 thanks William!

  • @thebigfrasini8403
    @thebigfrasini8403 4 года назад +30

    "I don't know, just let me check the log book"

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +5

      Underrated line in my opinion haha! Thank you for watching!

  • @jasonpauljones7295
    @jasonpauljones7295 4 года назад +2

    I really like the house! When she came out of the bathroom, which is simple but effective, the hall was awesome with the curtains, really nice and old fashioned, I could easily live there, and what about the view from up there, and the huge balcony

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +2

      Thank you, we really lucked out with the locations, some nice people out there! It's actually filmed in a couple of houses 🤫

  • @amazingastro918
    @amazingastro918 4 года назад +3

    You got my support. I'm a big fan of horror movies and this one is awesome. Hopefully, ya'll will make enough money to it full length.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      Thank you so much, we need all the support we can get! Really glad you enjoyed the film!

  • @user-it1jn7fz8b
    @user-it1jn7fz8b 10 месяцев назад +1

    I'm pausing to get on the bus. I'm So far scared... I will finish watching this tonight. A Truck just now drove to the intersection and I jumped.

  • @kjmemoire7089
    @kjmemoire7089 4 года назад +7

    Moral of the story: curiosity kills a cat

  • @lestercimicata352
    @lestercimicata352 4 года назад +2

    HOT DAMN! Well done, kids! Really great work!

  • @DavidJReidOFFICIAL
    @DavidJReidOFFICIAL 3 года назад +3

    Love this film. Looking forward to seeing your career pan out.... Legend

  • @Naphinel
    @Naphinel 10 месяцев назад

    He just leaves his sister ALONE with a stranger? Wow. Super protectiv guy. :(

  • @CheckYourHealthUS
    @CheckYourHealthUS 4 года назад +25

    Girl is stunningly beautiful in a very innocent way.

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад +1

      Thank you, that's exactly what we were going for 😅

    • @tuffnuggets2852
      @tuffnuggets2852 3 года назад +1

      Im not comfortable with the way you worded this 😂

    • @GradKat
      @GradKat 3 года назад +3

      She gave a great performance and was perfect in this role.

  • @EefsBeatz
    @EefsBeatz 4 года назад +2

    Excellent film. Got a jump or two. Keep up the great work!

  • @mommajrodz6306
    @mommajrodz6306 4 года назад +3

    Amazing short! I didn’t want this to end!
    I like that the “bad guy” was handsome, he didn’t (at first) give off the stereotypical toothless creeper vibe...Well done!!

    • @DuckpondProductions
      @DuckpondProductions  4 года назад

      Thank you so much! We intend to develop this into a feature film, so be sure to subscribe if you wanna see how that goes :) really glad you liked our bad guy, we've got some big things planned for him!

  • @klausy92
    @klausy92 4 года назад +6

    Amazing Work! Onwards and Upwards from here.

  • @jakeburright
    @jakeburright 4 года назад +4

    The shovel kill was GREAT

  • @jolenaagapisou3803
    @jolenaagapisou3803 4 года назад +2

    I’ve seen ppl on videos go into strangers homes or abandoned ones also, NO WAY, use common sense, the moral of this, pretty good short story!!