vetrimaran sir u r legend. What I get by observing the difference between the comments given by others and vetrimaran sir is “ other judges also didn’t get the actual meaning of the movie but they are reluctant to express”
அருமையான ஒரு குறும்படம் வெற்றிமாறன் சார் குறை சொல்வதற்கு ஆராய்ச்சி பண்றீங்களா இது எந்தவிதத்தில் நியாயமாக இருக்கிறது அந்த இளம் கலைஞருக்கு மதிப்பு கொடுத்து எங்கிரேஜ் பண்ணுங்கள் அதுதான் நீங்களும் ஒரு நல்ல கலைஞர் என்பதை வெளிப்படுத்தும்.
Athai kurai entru kura mudiyathu nanba mistakes irtha sutti katanum apa tha next time avaru complete ah Oru story soluvapapula antha mistakes varathu avaru climax pathi matum tha pesu varu of course climax clarity ah Ila atha unmai
குறும்படம் காட்டிய விதம் அருமை... ஆனா இறுதில வந்த கதவு மூடும் காட்சி மற்றும் அவன் பயப்படுவது போன்றவை திகில் படம் மாதிரி இருந்ததே தவிர அவனோட குற்ற உணர்வை பிரதிபலிப்பதாக இல்லை... கொஞ்சம் வேறு மாதிரி காட்டி இருந்த இன்னும் நன்றாக இருந்திருக்கும்... You have a bright future bro... All the best...
கதை நன்றாக இருந்தது... குடும்பத்தோடு (குழந்தைகளோடு) பார்க்கும் கலைஞர் டிவியில் காட்டிய இச்சிறு கதையில் காமம் தோன்றியே??? தமிழர்கள் நாம் விழிப்புடன் இருக்க வேண்டும்..... இதுவே கலாச்சார சீரழிவின் ஆரம்பம்....
சாதாரண ஒரு அரசு ஊழியர் ஆவதற்கு பல தகுதிகள் அரசு விதிகள் உள்ளன. ஆனால் ஒரு மாநிலத்தின் தலைமை அமைச்சர் என்னைன்ன தகுதி இருக்க வேண்டும் என்று அவ்வளவாக விதி இல்லை. கேட்டா மக்கள் பிரதிநிதி என்று பீத்திக் கொள்வது. மக்கள் வரி பணத்தில் சம்பளம் மற்றும் சலுகைகள் பெற்று கொண்டு மக்களுக்கு சேவை செய்வதும் கிடையாது. செய்வதெல்லாம் மக்கள் விரோதம்.
My thought to same as vetri sir... This screen play is good but when a group of people watch this film means each one will understand different meaning, so the content is good but express differently
Ponnungala dress kalatu short flim edukurie naye ,ne oru ambala thana oty thuni ilama jati ilama short flim podu da naye.poramboku.ipadiya da ponnungala kavala paduthuveenga.vun aka Amma thangachiya vachu ipadi short flim edu da
Well made..i don't know if I had read this story I might not have had this effect..but the story was well made that I could feel the depth. climax konjam mathirukalam.avan mela Pala poorankal povathu pola eduthirukalam.summa comedya eduthu thapipavarkal mathila ithu vithiyasamana muyarchi.
This is a very well made short film but I have lot of doubts about it. 1. 03:11 The painter's suggestion shot shows that he is drawing her from the back but the final painting was from front in 05:50, why is that? I am asking this not to point out continuity mistake but the point of the story is that guy's fetish to specific part of the body right? 2. 07:50 When a guy throws the papers all over, it will not be so perfectly aligned and not all drawings will fall facing the camera, some will be flipped, not that I am complaining but could be more careful with the props. Now coming to the writing aspect of it. As per my understanding, the story is about a young painter who have a back fetish since his teen and he was traumatized by the death of one for whom he had feelings for, since his guilt or trauma or whatever the feelings(which is not clear in the short film) he has, he started letting it out or channeled through some drawings in his house. Once he sees a girl naked again in the painting class, he burst out and runs away and breaks down. Now, I thought the major problem in the story is, director didn't show what the character is going through inside, I am not talking about character acting wierd or breaking down in the end, what was his exact emotional problem? The girl he saw naked is dead? fine.. how is it affecting is current life? how he was struggling apart from painting session? the painting in his room is only his own therapy but what was he as a human before all that? A scene that shows that would have made a lot of sense to the story.. The story is like, has an emotional problem and he breaks down when he faces crisis of it and that's it. The character don't have a proper ending here. The punchline of story is, he felt like 1000 bodies crawled over him, right? What does that exactly means in the story? you can't convey that just by moving one body over him, it was kind of blunt ending. You could've chosen a different path in showing it, like a montage of chaos in his mind or something like that.. I know it's very complicated story and we cannot expect short story writers to follow acts and structures all the time, there are many rebels out there :D, you should be careful while adapting it. You have done your best but breaking the story down and adding more structure from your end and thinking it more visually would have made this short film the best in the wild card section.. Still it is better than most in this round but could've been the best one with little more effort. All the best in your future projects.
I think i can answer your first point with my perception. The painter is been grown up seeing a lady's bath from the backside angle, but when he saw the girls front side look - he couldnt tolerate (with that insects roaming around). which gives him a kind off "CANT LOOK THE FRONT SIDE OF A NAKED GIRL". The director tries to convey the flashback only when the painter changes the position from looking front. Also, to your question - the painter never painted the girl in front (model), he painted the lady with whom he had that lust! This is my perception. Beautifully taken - All the best for the future entire team :)
@@KayKay-zg3kc No, I am not talking about continuity here. My question is, the guy grew up painting Backside of the girl as shown in his personal paintings, why did he chose to paint frontside here considering he felt comfortable painting backside and also if he had imagined the dead girl's face standing Backside then why was it the model's face with dead girl's hair and mole and not dead girl's face itself? What was the exact point of that final painting? What section of the painting made stirr his emotions?
@@thendralthennarasu2604 Thanks a lot bro.. Not trying to be humble but I am just giving feedback and suggestions on what I saw, I wouldn't say it great vision, it is only when I create something great myself.. But thanks a lot for your appreciation :)
@@yeshwanthashok8032 - Thats the main point of the film... The painter havent seen the naked body of the lady whom he admired from backside. Though, he couldnt look the girl from the front side and came back - he gets his flash back and painted this girl (with what he see in front of him). The mole just denotes the intent of this paint is the girl in flashback but the painted face is the girl in front of him. hope you get it now?
@@வீரவன்னியர்-ங9ல Ponnunga body vachu ivunga panra atoolyam irukkae. Ketta rebel nu solrathu. I don't know why are these people encouraged. Always trying to give a sexual feeling to the viewers.
vetrimaran sir u r legend. What I get by observing the difference between the comments given by others and vetrimaran sir is “ other judges also didn’t get the actual meaning of the movie but they are reluctant to express”
Vetrimaran Anna vera level..
Kulikkumbodhu vadivel joke nyabagam varudhu 😂
Mm me too
Mm ama
@@viji1923 supava
Same 😁
அருமையான ஒரு குறும்படம் வெற்றிமாறன் சார் குறை சொல்வதற்கு ஆராய்ச்சி பண்றீங்களா இது எந்தவிதத்தில் நியாயமாக இருக்கிறது அந்த இளம் கலைஞருக்கு மதிப்பு கொடுத்து எங்கிரேஜ் பண்ணுங்கள் அதுதான் நீங்களும் ஒரு நல்ல கலைஞர் என்பதை வெளிப்படுத்தும்.
Athai kurai entru kura mudiyathu nanba mistakes irtha sutti katanum apa tha next time avaru complete ah Oru story soluvapapula antha mistakes varathu avaru climax pathi matum tha pesu varu of course climax clarity ah Ila atha unmai
Nana adhu kurai sollavilla namba .vetri sir avarukku teach panndaru .idhudhan oru sirandha kalaingan
குறை சொல்வதே சரியான ஊக்குவித்தல்... அதை புரிந்தவர் உயர்வார்....
அருமை நண்பரே 🙏🙏🙏
🎉❤️ 🎉
குறும்படம் காட்டிய விதம் அருமை... ஆனா இறுதில வந்த கதவு மூடும் காட்சி மற்றும் அவன் பயப்படுவது போன்றவை திகில் படம் மாதிரி இருந்ததே தவிர அவனோட குற்ற உணர்வை பிரதிபலிப்பதாக இல்லை... கொஞ்சம் வேறு மாதிரி காட்டி இருந்த இன்னும் நன்றாக இருந்திருக்கும்... You have a bright future bro... All the best...
Ennakku puriyavey illa
Enakku purilaye
Super purinjavan pistha
Super
Sema padam congrats #director sir❤️
Vetrimaran sir parvai sinthanai muzhuvadhum vityasammaga ullathu
M.Arjunan M.Arjunan .
Realistic movie.... Superb director
We are semmalar Annam Fan's 😎😎
Wow Vetri... You changed the directors story altogther by your comments. Yes good attempt :-)
கதை நன்றாக இருந்தது... குடும்பத்தோடு (குழந்தைகளோடு) பார்க்கும் கலைஞர் டிவியில் காட்டிய இச்சிறு கதையில் காமம் தோன்றியே???
தமிழர்கள் நாம் விழிப்புடன் இருக்க வேண்டும்.....
இதுவே கலாச்சார சீரழிவின் ஆரம்பம்....
சாதாரண ஒரு அரசு ஊழியர் ஆவதற்கு பல தகுதிகள் அரசு விதிகள் உள்ளன.
ஆனால் ஒரு மாநிலத்தின் தலைமை அமைச்சர் என்னைன்ன தகுதி இருக்க வேண்டும் என்று அவ்வளவாக விதி இல்லை.
கேட்டா மக்கள் பிரதிநிதி என்று பீத்திக் கொள்வது.
மக்கள் வரி பணத்தில் சம்பளம் மற்றும் சலுகைகள் பெற்று கொண்டு மக்களுக்கு சேவை செய்வதும் கிடையாது.
செய்வதெல்லாம் மக்கள் விரோதம்.
Super ipo unmaileay thevaiyana padam pa...
Film semma
Very good film
Onnum pureyala purinchavanga sollunga
Good
My thought to same as vetri sir... This screen play is good but when a group of people watch this film means each one will understand different meaning, so the content is good but express differently
instablaster
Music sama..👍😎😎🤝👌👌👏👏
Superb
super pa
Utal semma flim
கலைக்கு லாயக்கி இல்லாதவன் எப்படி ஓவியனாக முடியும்?
அநேகமாக அவன் கடைசியா காலேஜ் போனது அந்த நாள் ஆக தான் இருக்கும்.
Climax onu purila
Congrats
Vetrimaran comment is correct
Vetrimaran sir well said.
Crt vetri maran sir..enakum safe feeling tha..end onum understand agala.. otherwise good attempt
Good massage
Anthony Raj good message massage illa
Nowadays tamil movies violence sex vulgarites. Good luck for ur children parents
Brillliant!❤
Entha samugagukku nalla karuthu ..
நீண்டகாலமாக கண்ணால் பார்க்கப்பட்ட மனதில் பதிந்திருக்கிறது கருத்தானது மிகவும் துல்லியமாக அமைக்கப்பட்டுள்ளது
Did the boy kill the lady?🙄..Purila
Vetrimaaran sir correct judgement
Yes
Climax puriyala 😅😅
his teen age lust kills himself ever.
Hii
Semmalar ur rocking as usual. I'm so proud of you again and again. Keep it up buddy. Ur simply amazing :)
I didn't understand the climax of this film
Ponnungala dress kalatu short flim edukurie naye ,ne oru ambala thana oty thuni ilama jati ilama short flim podu da naye.poramboku.ipadiya da ponnungala kavala paduthuveenga.vun aka Amma thangachiya vachu ipadi short flim edu da
Va podaran unna😊
If the climax was well defined, we will not get this effect, it is always good have a open climax, it make the film to grow in our mind
I just passed at 1:48 i dont want to continue... Sry if any positive message behind this..
Ena sollavaranga enaku onumeh purila yarana therinja sollunga
Neenga girl ahaa
Intha pakkam
Cheran sir eppo varuvaar
sema bro all the best
Smng different
kadaisiya konjam puriyala 😒😒
Well made..i don't know if I had read this story I might not have had this effect..but the story was well made that I could feel the depth. climax konjam mathirukalam.avan mela Pala poorankal povathu pola eduthirukalam.summa comedya eduthu thapipavarkal mathila ithu vithiyasamana muyarchi.
U said correct
masaterpice
This is a very well made short film but I have lot of doubts about it.
1. 03:11 The painter's suggestion shot shows that he is drawing her from the back but the final painting was from front in 05:50, why is that? I am asking this not to point out continuity mistake but the point of the story is that guy's fetish to specific part of the body right?
2. 07:50 When a guy throws the papers all over, it will not be so perfectly aligned and not all drawings will fall facing the camera, some will be flipped, not that I am complaining but could be more careful with the props.
Now coming to the writing aspect of it.
As per my understanding, the story is about a young painter who have a back fetish since his teen and he was traumatized by the death of one for whom he had feelings for, since his guilt or trauma or whatever the feelings(which is not clear in the short film) he has, he started letting it out or channeled through some drawings in his house. Once he sees a girl naked again in the painting class, he burst out and runs away and breaks down.
Now,
I thought the major problem in the story is, director didn't show what the character is going through inside, I am not talking about character acting wierd or breaking down in the end, what was his exact emotional problem? The girl he saw naked is dead? fine.. how is it affecting is current life? how he was struggling apart from painting session? the painting in his room is only his own therapy but what was he as a human before all that? A scene that shows that would have made a lot of sense to the story..
The story is like, has an emotional problem and he breaks down when he faces crisis of it and that's it. The character don't have a proper ending here.
The punchline of story is, he felt like 1000 bodies crawled over him, right? What does that exactly means in the story? you can't convey that just by moving one body over him, it was kind of blunt ending. You could've chosen a different path in showing it, like a montage of chaos in his mind or something like that..
I know it's very complicated story and we cannot expect short story writers to follow acts and structures all the time, there are many rebels out there :D, you should be careful while adapting it. You have done your best but breaking the story down and adding more structure from your end and thinking it more visually would have made this short film the best in the wild card section.. Still it is better than most in this round but could've been the best one with little more effort.
All the best in your future projects.
Yeshwanth Ashok nice comment I've following ur comment in last couple of round and that great vision also keep it up 👌
I think i can answer your first point with my perception. The painter is been grown up seeing a lady's bath from the backside angle, but when he saw the girls front side look - he couldnt tolerate (with that insects roaming around). which gives him a kind off "CANT LOOK THE FRONT SIDE OF A NAKED GIRL". The director tries to convey the flashback only when the painter changes the position from looking front. Also, to your question - the painter never painted the girl in front (model), he painted the lady with whom he had that lust! This is my perception. Beautifully taken - All the best for the future entire team :)
@@KayKay-zg3kc No, I am not talking about continuity here. My question is, the guy grew up painting Backside of the girl as shown in his personal paintings, why did he chose to paint frontside here considering he felt comfortable painting backside and also if he had imagined the dead girl's face standing Backside then why was it the model's face with dead girl's hair and mole and not dead girl's face itself? What was the exact point of that final painting? What section of the painting made stirr his emotions?
@@thendralthennarasu2604 Thanks a lot bro.. Not trying to be humble but I am just giving feedback and suggestions on what I saw, I wouldn't say it great vision, it is only when I create something great myself.. But thanks a lot for your appreciation :)
@@yeshwanthashok8032 - Thats the main point of the film... The painter havent seen the naked body of the lady whom he admired from backside. Though, he couldnt look the girl from the front side and came back - he gets his flash back and painted this girl (with what he see in front of him). The mole just denotes the intent of this paint is the girl in flashback but the painted face is the girl in front of him. hope you get it now?
Inga yarukkumey Tamil thereyatha? Tamil ah type panuna thana unga karuthu yelaraum poi serum
Nice movie
I not understand
🤔🤔🤔🤔
Vetri maran na nenachatha apadiye solraru
Can anyone suggest me tha short story name
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Nice
Dai enna da solla varenga onnum puriyala
ஆகஆக
Antha paiyan than avala kola panana
Climax purila
Climex poraliya
Puriyala
Enakku purila movie...
Eppadi setha
Sir .. Avru mobile no.. Ketaikkuma sir..
Idu enna maeiru padam
கம்பு கிளம்புவிட்டது. இப்ப என்ன பண்ணலம்?
Poi seeman videos paarunga. Ithu pondra ennangal varathu.
Strength Honour அது எனக்கும் தெரியும். அதோடிய முகம் பார்த்த யாருக்கு தான் கம்பு கிளம்பும்?
@@வீரவன்னியர்-ங9ல Ponnunga body vachu ivunga panra atoolyam irukkae. Ketta rebel nu solrathu. I don't know why are these people encouraged. Always trying to give a sexual feeling to the viewers.
Naa ungala thappa sollala. Neenga ippa enna pannalaam nu kaeteengala athaan appadi sonnen.
Strength Honour அதான பார்த்தேன். சும்ம இருக்குறவர்கள் சும்ம சும்ம ஒரு காணொளி போட்டு காமத்தை ஏத்தி விடுவர்கள். கம்பு கிளம்பாமல் பின்ன எது கிளம்பும்?
Nice
Nice
Nice