How to Write Flashbacks in Screenplays - Script Format

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  • @nahuelmorinigomas9531
    @nahuelmorinigomas9531 3 года назад +3

    I love when at the end of the flashback the character is shown directly in the eyes, and they give us a different idea of him, just like Gru's example, but more dramatic. One that I love is the case of Jon Snow.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад +1

      That's a great observation, it's a very common and effective way to end a flashback. As you say, the purpose is exactly to stay for a moment and look at the character's close up. Thanks for the comment! Have a great writing day!

  • @sharmahz
    @sharmahz 4 года назад +9

    It's great explanation: simple, sober and impactful

  • @claytonsmith5673
    @claytonsmith5673 4 года назад +9

    Hey Buddy, I like your presentation. Thank you for posting I hope one day you'll have 10's of 1000's of subscribers.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад +1

      Clayton, that's a really nice comment!! I'm working to create more videos about the format. What's an aspect of screenwriting format you'd like to learn more about?

  • @Figment21
    @Figment21 5 месяцев назад

    Thank you. Flashbacks from New Girl are also great examples

  • @andyperkins6863
    @andyperkins6863 4 года назад +3

    The flashbacks in Oldboy are great 💪

  • @깡-v3d
    @깡-v3d 4 года назад +1

    Hi, I'am currently working on a storyboard for animated series, and this is super helpful!! I just subscribed your channel for more lecture. Thank you! :)

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад +2

      Natalie Lee Natalie, thanks for the nice comment. I love animation, so you can expect more specific content for animation in the future. I think that you, as a storyboard artist, have a great potential as a storyteller. You can start writing your own scripts and quickly visualize them in storyboard or animatic form. I’m currently writing on three animated feature films and it’s so great to see the storyboards and animatic and make adjustments to the script. Please feel free to get in touch and share your work.

    • @깡-v3d
      @깡-v3d 4 года назад

      @@writeforanimation Wow that sounds awesome! I'll be looking forward to more content. I would share my work when it takes shape. Thanks for the nice comment too!

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      ​@@깡-v3d Thank you, Natalie. If you're interested, you can also join the community at writesomethinggreat.com

  • @winsomeduncan7587
    @winsomeduncan7587 17 дней назад +1

    you are very good

  • @WBEXT
    @WBEXT Год назад +1

    How can we write Future in script? Like someone is thinking about his/her life to achieve something in dream and back to present when dream is over.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  Год назад +1

      Hi, great question! You can format it the same way you format flashbacks but indicating IMAGINATION / DREAM / FLASH-FORWARD instead. If it's just a glance into the future, you can indicate BACK TO SCENE in a single line once that quick moment ends. The most important thing is to keep the formatting clear and simple for the reader.

  • @vishnus4421
    @vishnus4421 3 года назад

    I love it.
    Please tell us how to write montages...

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад +1

      Thank you! We're already working on it. ;) Please consider subscribing and turning on notification to learn when it comes out.

  • @burhanuddindariwala4149
    @burhanuddindariwala4149 4 года назад +1

    Thank you sir

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      You're very welcome. Please let me know if you have any question about the format or screenwriting in general. I'd love to get in touch and help you.

  • @dragonchr15
    @dragonchr15 3 года назад +1

    How to write a great flashback?
    Vince Gilligan: hold my beer

  • @brendametube
    @brendametube Год назад

    AAAAAHHHHH!!!
    I just wrote a flashback WITHIN a flashback!!! 😂😂😂
    Let us all in unison say…
    “ IMPENDING DOOM!”
    😅😅😅😅😅😅😳

  • @VisualArtistmedia
    @VisualArtistmedia 3 года назад

    Thank you 😊

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate it!

  • @kimjaspers3827
    @kimjaspers3827 4 года назад

    Thanks so much!

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад +1

      You're welcome! Thanks for your comment, please let me know if you have any questions.

  • @innocentotiende161
    @innocentotiende161 Год назад +1

    Lupin

  • @TheMatFratRealityTV
    @TheMatFratRealityTV 4 года назад

    Very helpful. Would like to know how to format text messages between characters.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      Thank you, I'm working on a new video on just that. In the meantime, I'll answer your question here later today or tomorrow.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      To format IM like text messages, chats, tweets you have different options. Pick the one that you prefer and be consistent throughout your screenplay.
      If it's a brief shot showing the device or space in which the message appear, you can treat it the same way you'd treat a character reading a note. You describe it in the action block and a shot line to indicate that the camera is focusing on the device:
      Matt picks up his iPhone.
      ON MATT'S PHONE
      A text notification reads: "Where are you?"
      As long as it's clear, you can omit the shot line and keep everything in the action block:
      Matt picks up his iPhone. On its display a text notification reads: "Where are you?"
      With the increase use of IM devices, it's more common than ever to have on screen graphics elements representing the text. (You can find examples of this in Jon Favreau's "CHEF", NETFLIX series "LOCKE & KEY" and many more)
      In that case, you describe what you see on the screen and write the content of each message as a shot line
      Here's an example from "CHEF"
      He attempts to compose a tweet. It appears on screen as a Chyron as he types:
      TWITTER
      It is with great sadness that I announce that I have left....
      He then DELETES the post before ever hitting send.
      It can even be as simple as
      A CHYRON appears next to the phone as he types:
      Twitter: It is with great sadness that I announce that I have left....
      Please let me know if this is helpful while I prepare the full video. If you want, we can go over your specific script and find the best way to write it.

  • @wendyjaehnig4439
    @wendyjaehnig4439 2 года назад

    Thank you for this. Your videos an the info of it really help with stories. Especially since it simple and with good examples and not too much like in books. Do you habe some on comedy films? Like how to make comic of funny moments, remarks, lines, etc?

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад

      Thank you, Wendy. I love all of your comments, please keep them coming. Would you like to see a video about comedy in animation? Btw, we have an upcoming video created from an interview with Domee Shi, director of TURNING RED, it doesn't focus specifically on comedy. But the film is definitely rich with hilarious moments.

    • @wendyjaehnig4439
      @wendyjaehnig4439 2 года назад

      @@writeforanimation Yes amd yes!! When do yoi think we will have one on Encanto?
      Btw i got interested in the film lessons thing when our values class teacher got us books about morals in movies. Like toy story 3 of friendship telling aboit the 3 types of it on the film:
      Trash: the ones you dont need and abandon.
      Attic: the ones you dont need or use but cant let them go
      Donation: the ones you let go

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад

      ​@@wendyjaehnig4439 Hopefully we'll release at least one video about ENCANTO next month or early August. I'll share the unedited interview with my Patron community that you can join here: www.patreon.com/pietroschito It's so cool that you got interested in the film lessons from lessons about morals. Narrative themes and morals go hand in hand. If you loved Toy Story 3 (which is fantastic!) I suggest you watch this video from screenwriter Michael Arndt ruclips.net/video/FBcwt3QlY_8/видео.html It's one of the best lessons on screenwriting I've ever watched. You're in for a treat :D

  • @Livinglife4thebetter
    @Livinglife4thebetter Год назад

    There is a television show that uses flashbacks all the time, I think they are good for some movies/ television shows and some people just don't like them but I think my screenplay needs one. I do not know another way to explain why my character has social anxiety than to tell it in a flashback.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  Год назад +1

      Hello Mandy! Thanks a lot for sharing, and you're right. There is nothing wrong with using a flashback. If you believe it's the best way to show that your character has social anxiety, then go for it!

  • @terrencehardge4121
    @terrencehardge4121 2 года назад

    Great video. Is the screenwriting format guide still available? The link is obsolete.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад

      Thanks for the comment and for letting me know about the link. While I fix the link, please reach out on social media or email and I’ll personally send you the guide.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад

      UPDATE: the link has been fixed. Please let me know if you have questions for anything that's not covered in the PDF and I'll do my best to answer. Thanks!

  • @HarveyBacktheBeatles
    @HarveyBacktheBeatles 4 года назад

    How does one go about writing flashbacks within flashbacks and change of narrating perspectives like in the movies Holes or Flags of Our Fathers where it had a few layers?

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      Hey, that's a great question! When it comes to screenplay format, you're fine as long as it's clear and simple. You have different options, it depends on how many times you're doing this. If it's a sequence you can use a slug line that says "BEGIN FLASHBACK SEQUENCE" and then trying to categorize the scenes according to its timeframe. F.i. JOHN'S CHILDHOOD. If it's not a sequence, you might simply add a line in the description after the scene header to clarify. Remember that the audience will SEE the scene, so if you describe a younger character or the surroundings show that we're in the past, it's okay to just describe the scene as we see it. I'd be more than happy to help you find a great option for your specific case. Also I have access to both scripts in PDF (Holes and Flags of Our Fathers), so that you can see how they did it.

  • @MarcusMonkey
    @MarcusMonkey 3 года назад

    Can you have a flash back within a flash back or is this a big no no??

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад

      Technically you can, but it’s not common. the only situations that come to mind where that might be a good idea are for a comedic where multiple flashbacks are part of a joke, or this backstory or prologue sequences that could jump around in time. - do you have a specific example or situation in mind?

    • @MarcusMonkey
      @MarcusMonkey 3 года назад

      @@writeforanimation it a a point in time where the the main hero is telling the story of how he found out who set him up. Sue the flash back is catching the person then that person then telling him what happened. So it’s flash back in a flash back. But each flash back both have there own story points. The flash back is how he killed the guy and the flash with in a flash back is why he killed the guy lol.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад +1

      Yes, detective stories can have moments like that. Just make sure it’s clear, play with interesting visual transitions. Also, as a more general note, make sure that the scene doesn’t only satisfy intellectually, but also emotionally. Format-wise there is no need to indicate a double flash back, you just open with FLASHBACK BEGINS and close with FLASHBACK ENDS

    • @MarcusMonkey
      @MarcusMonkey 3 года назад

      @@writeforanimation legend. I’m subbing you amazing 🙏🏼

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад

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  • @laurenmontenegro9203
    @laurenmontenegro9203 2 года назад

    If my character is narrating his own story, can he only tell it in the present tense? he can't narrate it as part of the past but without it sounding like a memory, that is, without having a flashback??? I don't know if I explain myself.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад

      Hi Lauren, I assume you are thinking about a Voice Over. In that case you can chose to have the dialogue be in the present or the past. If it’s without having a flashback, consider the importance of what we see. It can be a voice over other scenes happening in the present, or we could see him speaking, we can cut to different characters in other scenes that are related to what he’s saying. - please let me know if this was helpful or if you have more questions. I’m here to help

  • @mgaudence2614
    @mgaudence2614 4 года назад +1

    Hello, I am writer, and I like to write. I need to know how I can involve naration In my script and how good i can involve my flashback.thank you for your good lessons

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      Hi there, narration in a script is usually handled with a Voice Over, this can be from the voice of a character in your script commenting in present or past time, most of the time is the voice of the protagonist. You can also chose to have an external narrator that introduces the story. Both voice over narration and flashbacks are usually a tool for exposition, which can get boring very quick. Asking yourself if there are other ways to express what you need is a useful exercise. Please let me know if this helps, and you can always email me if you have more questions. Have a great writing day!

    • @mgaudence2614
      @mgaudence2614 4 года назад

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    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад +1

      @@mgaudence2614 Sure, please visit writesomethinggreat.com and full the email form at the top of the page where it says "Join The Write Something Great Community", you'll receive a confirmation mail from my personal email address and we can continue our conversation there. Keep in mind I receive a lot of email and it could take a while for me to get back to you, but I always answer. :)

    • @mgaudence2614
      @mgaudence2614 4 года назад

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  • @geronimoespeche2891
    @geronimoespeche2891 4 года назад

    how would you call something like a sudden short memory of what happened a few moments ago? Still flashback? Even if its part of the story that the character gets sudden flashes of memory? (huh... flashes.... i guess i just answered myself didn't i?)

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад +1

      :D you're right. Those are quick flashbacks. Like when Dory suddenly remembers all her journey with Marlyn in "Finding Nemo". In those cases you can use a QUICK FLASHBACK (All caps) and describe the flashback. Let me know if that's helpful or if you need help with a specific page of your script.

    • @geronimoespeche2891
      @geronimoespeche2891 4 года назад

      @@writeforanimation thats super helpful. Thank you so much!

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      Gerónimo Espeche you’re welcome!

  • @bolly-hollywood2306
    @bolly-hollywood2306 2 года назад

    How to write flashback sequences with narration

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад

      Great question (and I love your username). The answer is fairly simple, you add the narration as a dialogue with the indication of voice-over next to the name of who is speaking. If who is speaking is a narrator and not a specific character you can write NARRATOR as the name. It would look like this.
      --
      INT. HOUSE - DAY
      A vintage red phone RINGS on the kitchen counter of an empty room.
      NARRATOR (V.O.)
      And that was that would have changed my life...
      --
      Please let me know if this is helpful or if you have more questions, I'm here to help!

  • @tomhague1
    @tomhague1 2 года назад

    2.06 what about if you need to go back in time by two months?

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад +1

      Hey Tom. Great question! After the flashback headline described around 2:06 in the video, you can decide to add a text that appears on the screen. To indicate that you write all caps in a single line the word "SUPERSCRIPT:" followed the text you want to appear on the screen. In this case, it could be.
      INT. HOUSE - DAY [FLASHBACK]
      SUPERSCRIPT: "Two months earlier."
      After this, you can add your action line to describe the scene as usual.
      Please let me know if this was helpful or if you have more questions. I'm here to help!

    • @tomhague1
      @tomhague1 2 года назад

      @@writeforanimation sorry what is a superscript?

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  2 года назад +1

      @@tomhague1 Superscript is the indication that a text will appear on the screen. Usually, it's used to indicate the time and/or place of the event. It's typically on top of an establishing shot, but it can also go over a black screen, a person talking, or wherever you need it.
      Here are some examples:
      SUPERSCRIPT: "The White House"
      SUPERSCRIPT: "1985"
      SUPERSCRIPT: "One year later..."
      SUPERSCRIPT: "Tom Hauge - Screenwriter"

    • @tomhague1
      @tomhague1 2 года назад

      @@writeforanimation thank you very much for explaining everything, makes sense now!

  • @strikerguimaraes
    @strikerguimaraes 3 года назад

    Do we apply the same thing for dreams? Thank you so much for the video!

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад +3

      That's correct Vitor. In some cases you might want to surprise the reader/audience and reveal it was a dream later. In that case you want to make sure it's clear. After starting a new scene after the dream scene, you could add a single line explaining that it was a dream. "KAREN WAKES UP, IT WAS JUST A DREAM". Let me know if you have more questions of if you'd like to look together at a specific case and I'd be happy to guide you through its formatting.

    • @strikerguimaraes
      @strikerguimaraes 3 года назад

      @@writeforanimation oh thanks! So in the surprising scenario, the "KAREN AWAKES " should be a transition on Celtx?

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад +2

      @@strikerguimaraes No, not a transition but an action line under a new scene. It's not necessary to have all caps, but it might help if you want to highlight the surprise.

    • @strikerguimaraes
      @strikerguimaraes 3 года назад +1

      @@writeforanimation oh thanks mate! You got a course of formatting?

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад +1

      @@strikerguimaraes Not yet, I'm currently working on a course on how to form the habits you need to become a professional screenwriter, from how to schedule and protect your writing time, to defeating writer's block and how to stop procrastinating. I also offer a free consultation to my Patrons, even for the lowest tier. If you're interested, we can use it to go over your formatting questions.

  • @hanashalaby494
    @hanashalaby494 3 года назад

    Hey!
    So I have a question...
    Can I write a flashback in a flashback?!
    Like... My character is telling their back story in a flashback and in the events, they ask a person about something, so this person tells them what happened before in a flashback...
    Can that be????

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад

      Hey Hana, when it comes to screenplay format, you're fine as long as it's clear and simple. You have different options, it depends on how many times you're doing this. If it's a sequence you can use a slug line that says "BEGIN FLASHBACK SEQUENCE" and then trying to categorize the scenes according to their timeframe. F.i. JOHN'S CHILDHOOD. If it's not a sequence, you might simply add a line in the description after the scene header to clarify. Remember that the audience will SEE the scene, so if you describe a younger character or the surroundings show that we're in the past, it's okay to just describe the scene as we see it. Please let me know if this solves your situation, if not, I'll follow up.

    • @hanashalaby494
      @hanashalaby494 3 года назад

      @@writeforanimation
      Alright so simply my story is that a father tells his daughter about his back story. When he starts I write: FLASHBACK BEGINS, so if he is now telling his story and he asked someone saying: "What made you look like that?"
      This person would tell him what happened in their past too, so I would write "THIS PERSON'S FLASHBACK BEGINS", and so on right?
      Btw, it's not a sequence like that.

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад

      @@hanashalaby494 Yes, that should work. Once you're done I can take a quick look at your format and tell you if there's anything off. Please reach out on social media or via email.

    • @hanashalaby494
      @hanashalaby494 3 года назад

      @@writeforanimation Thanks a lot!!

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад

      @@hanashalaby494 You're welcome! Feel free to reach out anytime.

  • @deepakkumar-qp5lz
    @deepakkumar-qp5lz 4 года назад

    Tamil film vadachennai rajan flashback scenes are awesome

  • @geraldmtesigwa6864
    @geraldmtesigwa6864 3 года назад

    How to write a series of flashbacks.. I mean When a character recalls different memories in different places at the same time. ?

    • @writeforanimation
      @writeforanimation  3 года назад

      Hey Gerald, that's a great question. I would use a shot line, which is an all caps line that simply states SERIES OF FLASHBACKS, if it's very long, you could consider have another shot line at the end stating "SERIES OF FLASHBACKS ENDS" or "BACK TO PRESENT TIME" after the series of flashbacks. Please let me know if that's clear enough or if you have more questions. Have a great writing day!

    • @geraldmtesigwa6864
      @geraldmtesigwa6864 3 года назад

      Thank you

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    @mikecinema7443 2 года назад

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      @writeforanimation  4 года назад

      Nice, keep it up! How's your screenwriting journey been so far?