Hi, idk if you need any feedback but I just wanted to make small remarks how you could improve yourself in the future.... 1) 1:20 you prepared listener for the drop and instead you just dropped the ball there... while it could work in some circumstances (like playing/joking with listener) here it was unintentional and seemed like a 'lazy'/inexperienced choice. 2) 3:05 vocal chops that came in at that point are in the different key... I know what it's like to work on a section for a long time and you can become tone-deaf.... so I suggest to take some time off to re-evaluate your track after having some rest. 3) Mixing is very rough..... because all samples that you used were not 'glued' together.... one way to approach more cohesive mix is to slap reverb bus on group of tracks and have some compression on the master mix. 4) Percussion is really weak for this type of music.... you need to implement side chain compression or if you already have it, compress your kick/snare way more or bring them in by leveling it higher... 5) Track structure is....a bit boring... there is no development....you repeat the same melody over and over again... but without adding new noticeable for listener details to the track. There are many ways to fix this by using double time at some portions of sections or changing key or at least create some sort of bridge where listener can take away his/her attention from the main theme. anyway wish you good luck and don't give up! Everyone can critic but only few create, so don't take this comment to heart continue working on your craft!
Number 3 and 4 I'll definitely look into. I agree with the percussion not being the best but learning more techniques on layering. As for the buses and gluing the mix together, I'm legit gonna look into that today. Ty for the feedback 🐻💖
@@KodiaxeMusic I understand that, that's why don't go too hard on yourself, I described general guideline what could be possibilities to improve... try to ask yourself more often, why something is done... rather then how it's done....because doing things is actually easy to google... but focus on what you really want in the track could be overwhelming since most artists (including me) could get carried away by 'awesome new plugin' or details.... rather then general picture/idea of the track. Speaking of audio fundamentals, I can't recommend enough youtube channel called wickiemedia .... he helped me a lot back in the day to understand how something is done (if you are more worried about that part atm) Check out wickiemedia if you haven't yet.... you will learn fast from him. Good luck!
Hi, idk if you need any feedback but I just wanted to make small remarks how you could improve yourself in the future....
1) 1:20 you prepared listener for the drop and instead you just dropped the ball there... while it could work in some circumstances (like playing/joking with listener) here it was unintentional and seemed like a 'lazy'/inexperienced choice.
2) 3:05 vocal chops that came in at that point are in the different key... I know what it's like to work on a section for a long time and you can become tone-deaf.... so I suggest to take some time off to re-evaluate your track after having some rest.
3) Mixing is very rough..... because all samples that you used were not 'glued' together.... one way to approach more cohesive mix is to slap reverb bus on group of tracks and have some compression on the master mix.
4) Percussion is really weak for this type of music.... you need to implement side chain compression or if you already have it, compress your kick/snare way more or bring them in by leveling it higher...
5) Track structure is....a bit boring... there is no development....you repeat the same melody over and over again... but without adding new noticeable for listener details to the track. There are many ways to fix this by using double time at some portions of sections or changing key or at least create some sort of bridge where listener can take away his/her attention from the main theme.
anyway wish you good luck and don't give up! Everyone can critic but only few create, so don't take this comment to heart continue working on your craft!
Number 3 and 4 I'll definitely look into. I agree with the percussion not being the best but learning more techniques on layering. As for the buses and gluing the mix together, I'm legit gonna look into that today. Ty for the feedback 🐻💖
Also I'm inexperienced lol. I've been only doing this for almost 2 years.
Before I was a nursing student lmao.
@@KodiaxeMusic I understand that, that's why don't go too hard on yourself, I described general guideline what could be possibilities to improve... try to ask yourself more often, why something is done... rather then how it's done....because doing things is actually easy to google... but focus on what you really want in the track could be overwhelming since most artists (including me) could get carried away by 'awesome new plugin' or details.... rather then general picture/idea of the track. Speaking of audio fundamentals, I can't recommend enough youtube channel called wickiemedia .... he helped me a lot back in the day to understand how something is done (if you are more worried about that part atm) Check out wickiemedia if you haven't yet.... you will learn fast from him. Good luck!