I have no words great enough to explain my happiness within. I'm so proud of what we have put together. To the cast, crew, family, friends, likes, shares, and messages, you all play a part in encouraging me to do what I love. There is absolutely no way I could have created this nightmare by myself. I love you all. Let me know what you think! 🎃🔪
I had to pause and comment-So far so good!! I’m impressed already! I noticed immediately at 2:12 that the music reminded me of Beetlejuice (one of my all-time favs). So, unless it’s complete coincidence, I suspect that you are a fan as well, considering the black/white plaid shirt that the father is wearing😊
I am really impressed with this. I habe watched so many short horror films one after another and i can honestly say, this is one of the scariest ones I have seen! Seeing just small glimpes of the 'ghost' standing still and always watching in the background was very effective in being scary. GREAT JOB!!!
It's pretty unique to create a horror film which also inspires empathy to the point that you feel like crying for the main character. That father's anguish is gonna stay with me a while...
Wow.....this was freaking creepy. The beginning when every clip showed her corpse hiding in the house. The house itself was fucking creepy too. No way would I be there ALONE! Great job!!!
damn this was excellent! not overly scary to drown out the plot. but just the perfect amount of suspense and enough character development for you to feel so much sympathy for the guy in such a short time span. 10/10. i really love these shorter horror films. it causes your imagination to run rampant on what happens after it ends.
Losing a child is something I pray I never have to go through. I think this film does a good job of showing the chaos of emotions a father might go through.
The storyline kinda gives me "Pet Sematary" vibes lol. It was well made, creepy, just a little unfinished maybe... Did she have the intention to do something bad to her dad? I think so.
I would much rather sit at home and watch these well done, fun, homemade short horror films for 2 hours as opposed to spending money at the theater to sit through a shitty, mainstream C.G.I. filled crapfest. Bravo guys, and thank you.
Quarantined here in Thailand. Curfew 10pm- 4am. Don't have to be inside but I love to find any excuse to binge watch these short horror films. Great one. Really good
He's grieving badly and seems to be suffering from it through depression. I don't think he's gonna give a shit how the house looks🙄. I've got OCD but understood the unkempt house 🤷🏻♀️
Some visuals and particularly the BG music ( A very strong part ) give scary horror effect .Otherwise it's a sad and heartbreaking story. In a fifty years old Bollywood movie, mother dies giving birth to a daughter. Father could never forgive the daughter for it, he loved his wife so much. Story reminded me of that movie. Titled " Anupama " - a girl with whom no one can be compared. Hearty congratulations for a nice movie, I will be looking forward to watching the third part. All the best!
@@JeffPayne I think I must have skimmed over something important cuz I didn't get it. Maybe I need to rewatch and see if my tiny brain can comprehend what is really going on. All I got was this guy's daughter(?) died and he wants to see her again and she appears in some scary form. I'll watch again and try to pay better attention.
@@JeffPayne Rewatched. No idea WHY she came back. All I can get is that she was doing something.... her dad didn't approve of b4 she died. Her mom had an "accident" and that's all I know. I get the creepy shots. They were creepy with her just standing in various locations but I don't get the story, the motivation for why she comes back for her dad in a "i'm going to kill you" manner. ? Maybe I'm not supposed to get it but I like to know something at least as opposed to next to nothing. Maybe I'm not smart enough to put the pieces together. Oh well... I tried!
The dad got the mom killed being a drunk...possibly a car wreck. The daughter went into a severe depression and turned to something evil. She makes her body a vessel for this dark thing to come back and terroize the dad.
@@JeffPayne "The dad got the mom killed being a drunk...possibly a car wreck. " Well, I relistened to the letter and I guess I just didn't listen HARD enough. hehhe he does mention an accident and that he agreed it was his fault so yeah, I can see that. So, I can see how she would have a grudge against him. But then how did SHE die? I guess I need to be spoonfed! hehehe
This is very good! You know how ghosts should be like. It was touching as well with the scenes in the kitchen that was a mess if you just get over your fear. I know the feeling, and the actor missing the daughter. The acting was great. If anything, the makeup reminded me of what I saw working the haunted house. Good memories. But the ghost has a nice voice lol.
Honored to be a part of this project! Very proud of what you've accomplished here! It looks great! I think DeNiro would have done a better job as "Father" but, you do the best with what you've got! :)
Great Job John YOU held the screen DeNiro is overrated : ) Don't tell him I said that he might send Tommy D. Anywho give yourself some credit become a Diva now
You should be very proud it's an amazing movie loved it if u could make it into a full movie didn't want it to end.. Thank u again for sharing this loved it 👍👍👍👍👏👏👌🌸
Omg, she is so creepy!! I nearly had a heart attack when the man was peering into the little room and she was standing behind him!! And the images of her standing around the house!! Very creepy indeed and i don't why i watched this late at night?
This popped up for me the other day and I got so excited I would finally be able to see part two such an amazing film! Very terrifying indeed! And now part 3 is on the way?! Will we learn what happens to her victims? Why do their bodies vanish like the protagonist from the first part?
What was the matter? Hiw did she died and l think she angry with her father so she not returned for him she returned to take him with her And at the why did he was escaping from his daughter? That girl was so cute when she was small
Okay? Didn’t understand this one. Was the Dad an abuser? He seems sincere at the lost of his child. Or was the daughter evil before she died. That could explain her looks afterwards. Leave the viewers to think.
Felt boring from the beginning itself till 5minutes.... But The creator gave a massive effect after 5Min .... Nice Background music .. and an appreciatable one is good camera angles with believable ghost effect .... Super bro ... Congrats and continue forever and ur efforts won't be waste 👏👏👏
I have no words great enough to explain my happiness within. I'm so proud of what we have put together. To the cast, crew, family, friends, likes, shares, and messages, you all play a part in encouraging me to do what I love. There is absolutely no way I could have created this nightmare by myself. I love you all. Let me know what you think! 🎃🔪
Jeff Payne if I may I would love to do a reaction video to this
I had to pause and comment-So far so good!! I’m impressed already! I noticed immediately at 2:12 that the music reminded me of Beetlejuice (one of my all-time favs). So, unless it’s complete coincidence, I suspect that you are a fan as well, considering the black/white plaid shirt that the father is wearing😊
Part three is cooking.🎃
Love it .. I am deffo a new number 1 fan ... I love this kinda stuff 🖤🖤
Congratulations on a job well done!!
So soooooo good. Such a privilege to be a part of this!
Rachel Taylor Did he kill his daughter ?
You did an amazing job 💖
Incredible job Rachel! You gave me goosebumps with your crazy stare!😂😱
You were awesome!
Great Job, Rachel!
Did she not love her Dad? I love the atmosphere that is created in these shorts! Better than the big blockbusters!🌟🌟🌟
Thank you so much for watching.🙏🏻 Her dad was definitely a bad person.
So True!
I am really impressed with this. I habe watched so many short horror films one after another and i can honestly say, this is one of the scariest ones I have seen! Seeing just small glimpes of the 'ghost' standing still and always watching in the background was very effective in being scary. GREAT JOB!!!
Thank you for the kind words. We are very very close to launching part 3. 🙏🏻🎃
It's pretty unique to create a horror film which also inspires empathy to the point that you feel like crying for the main character. That father's anguish is gonna stay with me a while...
I appreciate you taking the time to watch. It really means a lot to me when people emotionally take something from my films.🙏🏻
Wow.....this was freaking creepy. The beginning when every clip showed her corpse hiding in the house. The house itself was fucking creepy too. No way would I be there ALONE! Great job!!!
Thank you for watching!!! 🎃🔪
Same here Angel heck no
damn this was excellent! not overly scary to drown out the plot. but just the perfect amount of suspense and enough character development for you to feel so much sympathy for the guy in such a short time span. 10/10. i really love these shorter horror films. it causes your imagination to run rampant on what happens after it ends.
Thank you so much man. I'm glad you got what I was going for. This really means a lot to me.
Oh, TRUST, you gonna see her one last time!
Losing a child is something I pray I never have to go through. I think this film does a good job of showing the chaos of emotions a father might go through.
I really appreciate you taking the time to watch.🙏🏻
The storyline kinda gives me "Pet Sematary" vibes lol. It was well made, creepy, just a little unfinished maybe... Did she have the intention to do something bad to her dad? I think so.
Thank you for the feedback. This is part two of a series. We are continuing the story and revealing more of the ghost in part three. 🎃
@@JeffPayne where can i find part one
It's on my RUclips. It's called "The Pale Faced Lady."
I would much rather sit at home and watch these well done, fun, homemade short horror films for 2 hours as opposed to spending money at the theater to sit through a shitty, mainstream C.G.I. filled crapfest. Bravo guys, and thank you.
This made me happy. Thank you so much for watching, and glad you enjoyed it.🎃🙏🏻
Quarantined here in Thailand. Curfew 10pm- 4am. Don't have to be inside but I love to find any excuse to binge watch these short horror films. Great one. Really good
Thank you for watching.🎃
@@JeffPayne thank you for uploading ❤️ from 🇹🇭
Such a rad crew. Well done everyone! Great piece of art here Jeff.
After his daughter's death he forget to clean a house 😠
Haha I'm pretty sure he didn't care about his home.
Lool
What a mess
He's grieving badly and seems to be suffering from it through depression. I don't think he's gonna give a shit how the house looks🙄. I've got OCD but understood the unkempt house 🤷🏻♀️
Some visuals and particularly the BG music ( A very strong part ) give scary horror effect .Otherwise it's a sad and heartbreaking story. In a fifty years old Bollywood movie, mother dies giving birth to a daughter. Father could never forgive the daughter for it, he loved his wife so much. Story reminded me of that movie. Titled " Anupama " - a girl with whom no one can be compared.
Hearty congratulations for a nice movie, I will be looking forward to watching the third part. All the best!
Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for your comment. I heard about this movie and now you confirmed. I don't watch heartbreaking movies.
The ghost is one of the scariest ones I have ever seen in a horror movie..
Thank you🙏🏻
Loved ones wouldn’t return to scare the bejesus out of us by looking hideous. That’s our own imagination at work.
You truly know how to terrify your viewers. Another awesome film. Continue making more horror because you're very talented 😉
I appreciate the kind words. Thank you so much for watching. Glad you enjoyed them. 🎃🤘🏻
One of the best shorts I've seen. Nice scenery, well acted characters with a definite chill factor!
You are awesome! I appreciate the kind words.🎃🙏🏻
What a beautiful lovely and sad story but kinda creepy at the same time.. nice job 👍
Thank you so much for watching. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 🎃
I love these types of horror films. To do anything to see someone from the dead one last time; that would be the last thing on my mind.
Thank you so much for watching.🎃🙏🏻
@@JeffPayne You're welcome.
The cinematography throughout this entire short was absolutely phenomenal. Bravo. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I really appreciate that.🙏🏻
I have no idea what I just watched!
Hope you enjoyed it. 🙏🏻🎃
@@JeffPayne I think I must have skimmed over something important cuz I didn't get it. Maybe I need to rewatch and see if my tiny brain can comprehend what is really going on. All I got was this guy's daughter(?) died and he wants to see her again and she appears in some scary form. I'll watch again and try to pay better attention.
@@JeffPayne Rewatched. No idea WHY she came back. All I can get is that she was doing something.... her dad didn't approve of b4 she died. Her mom had an "accident" and that's all I know. I get the creepy shots. They were creepy with her just standing in various locations but I don't get the story, the motivation for why she comes back for her dad in a "i'm going to kill you" manner. ? Maybe I'm not supposed to get it but I like to know something at least as opposed to next to nothing. Maybe I'm not smart enough to put the pieces together. Oh well... I tried!
The dad got the mom killed being a drunk...possibly a car wreck. The daughter went into a severe depression and turned to something evil. She makes her body a vessel for this dark thing to come back and terroize the dad.
@@JeffPayne "The dad got the mom killed being a drunk...possibly a car wreck. " Well, I relistened to the letter and I guess I just didn't listen HARD enough. hehhe he does mention an accident and that he agreed it was his fault so yeah, I can see that. So, I can see how she would have a grudge against him. But then how did SHE die? I guess I need to be spoonfed! hehehe
Ever had that feeling when you wanna get scared but nothing is scary anymore? This is one of those times. FOR I AM THE CHOSEN
Hope you enjoy.🙏🏻🎃
@@JeffPayne Chosen
I love the dialogue from the man writing his thoughts and emotions
Thank you. 🙏🏻 Glad you enjoyed it.🎃
This is very good! You know how ghosts should be like. It was touching as well with the scenes in the kitchen that was a mess if you just get over your fear. I know the feeling, and the actor missing the daughter. The acting was great. If anything, the makeup reminded me of what I saw working the haunted house. Good memories. But the ghost has a nice voice lol.
Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate you watching and commenting. 🙏🏻🎃
Really enjoyed this watch, great performances by all, nice sound mix.
John Altom’s grief scene got me I have to admit lol
Keep up the awesome work!
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.🙏🏻🎃🔪
Super !! Loved it !! Rachel was so f---ing Scary !!
Awesome!!! Glad you enjoyed it.🎃
Honored to be a part of this project! Very proud of what you've accomplished here! It looks great! I think DeNiro would have done a better job as "Father" but, you do the best with what you've got! :)
Great Job John YOU held the screen DeNiro is overrated : ) Don't tell him I said that he might send Tommy D. Anywho give yourself some credit become a Diva now
@@glennparker5516 Thanks! Maybe if I go diva I'll get more notoriety!
Great work. Well made film.
Thank you🙏🏻🎃
You should be very proud it's an amazing movie loved it if u could make it into a full movie didn't want it to end.. Thank u again for sharing this loved it 👍👍👍👍👏👏👌🌸
Thank you so much for watching and taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it. We are almost done filming part 3.🎃🙏🏻
Can't wait for part 3 the 👍👍👍
I'm not used to doors opening so fast in horror films. 😅
Haha...never noticed that. My actor went hard! 😂
@@JeffPayne oh hi! This film was really good 👉👈
@@JeffPayne this film was way too scary for meh ◉‿◉.anyway Imma person who gets scared easily umm⊙_ʖ⊙
When he looked in the crawl space and she was standing behind him I nearly fell off the bed. This creeped me out to the max!
Haha I'm glad I got you!!!🎃🤘🏻 Thank you for watching.
So scary movie! Good moral !! Marvellous one!! Short and sweet!! I like it !!thank you!!
Thank you for the kind words, and for watching. Glad you enjoyed it.🙏🏻🎃
You will always have my support and I will always watch your videos. Be safe
I'm so proud of you fantastic 🤩 your channel is so awesome because you made it awesome 😎 love mel
Great film good job 👍👍
Thank you🙏🏻
Wow, this setting was wicked creepy! *Shivers*
Thank you.🎃
Good cast... professionally done..enough scare without overdoing it..⭐⭐⭐⭐
Thank you.🙏🏻
Omg, she is so creepy!! I nearly had a heart attack when the man was peering into the little room and she was standing behind him!!
And the images of her standing around the house!! Very creepy indeed and i don't why i watched this late at night?
This was pretty darn good. I came from tiktok and now I'm a Subscriber to your RUclips channel. 👍👍👍
Sweet! I appreciate you watching! Glad you enjoyed it.✌🏻🎃
Very good film! Thanks Jeff!
You're welcome. I appreciate you watching.
Like if I should start doing reactions to short horror films
Let me know if you do. I'll check it. Thanks for watching man. 🎃
I know these are short horrors but they are so good I wish they could be longer!
Thank you.🙏🏻
Ahora entendí todo !!! Es muy muy buena Jeff , pero muy cruel !! Scary Horror 😟😧😥
Kick ass i will watch part 2 good picture work
Thank you🙏🏻🎃
I love it!!! Well done!
Thank you!!! 🎃🤘🏻 Glad you enjoyed it.
This movie is sad. What this movie is about is heartbroken.
Thank you for watching.🙏🏻
Wow..great..👍
Awesome!!!! Loved it!!
You're awesome!
Beautiful!
Thank you🎃🙏🏻
Ok. Now im gonna have nightmares..why did i watch the ending..
This popped up for me the other day and I got so excited I would finally be able to see part two such an amazing film! Very terrifying indeed! And now part 3 is on the way?! Will we learn what happens to her victims? Why do their bodies vanish like the protagonist from the first part?
You are an awesome person. You will definitely find out about what happens to her victims in part 3. The composer is making the music to it now.🎃✌🏻
Jeff Payne Literally can’t wait!
That was fun!
Thank you.
Hey guys, I want to watch full this movie. Can you tell me Where can I find the link, please?
The Pale Face Lady in part 2 and the director is working on part 3
I need the link of the song at 10:53. It's beautiful.
It was made for this short film. The composers name is Aimy Miller. She's in a band called Sadsun. Thank you for watching.🙏🏻🎃
So when is Chapter 2 coming on RUclips?
Chapter 3 is in post production right now. It is headed to my composer to score.🎃🤘🏻
What was the matter? Hiw did she died and l think she angry with her father so she not returned for him she returned to take him with her And at the why did he was escaping from his daughter? That girl was so cute when she was small
I saw the behind the scenes on ti tok
Haha nice! Glad you came over and watched it.🙏🏻🎃
When will.the 3rd part be out
Today was the first official day of filming. 🎥🤘🏻
@@JeffPaynecan you let me know when it's ready please 😊
Great job, Jeff! What's the name of the song in the end credits?
Thank you. It's a song written for the short film. 😎🙏🏻
Really creepy... I've enjoyed a lot.great job
Thank you.🙏🏻
Very Nice
Thank you🎃🙏🏻
Hey Jeff hows you .. is chapter 3 come out yet? I'm soooooo looking forward to watching it x
I'm color grading it while the composer is scoring the music.✌🏻😎
@@JeffPayne 🙂🙂🙂
how did you ever find that pklace to film this???? wow
It's actually a relatives house that's been abandoned for a while. We didn't have to do too much to make it look like that haha.
Woooow Dangerous song 😍
Thanks for watching.
Welp, she came back. She sure did.
Haha hope you enjoyed it. 🙏🏻
@@JeffPayne Very much, I enjoyed it.
nice one!
Thank you!🎃
Why was her daughter not the same for him when she returned back?
This is so creepy at the beginning lol great job
thank you.🎃🙏🏻
Yw😁
@@JeffPayne This is better than so many full length movies!
Very good
Okay? Didn’t understand this one. Was the Dad an abuser? He seems sincere at the lost of his child. Or was the daughter evil before she died. That could explain her looks afterwards. Leave the viewers to think.
Dad was a loser who tore the family apart. His daughter turned to a darkness to get back at him.
Just watched them both. Excellent! Can’t wait for Chapter 3?
Nice!! Thank you so much for watching! Chapter 3 is cooking haha!
So why was it a closed casket as the father said, if there was nothing wrong with her face?
She slices her face with a sickle. You can see it in the credits. 🎃
That,s y watch till the end
Thank you.🎃
@@JeffPayne any time jeff
Scary👻👻
Thank you so much for watching! Glad you liked it. 🎃🔪
Excellent.
Thank you Danny!
Who gives award for short films? 🤔and how all shortfilms can win award?
It was entered into a festival in los Angeles.🎃
Creepy and best.
Thank you.🎈🤘🏻
The first thing I look in RUclips is alter short story 😈
Alter have some really good videos. Thank you for taking the time to watch mine.🎃
lol same
This movie is sad . What it’s about .
I love the red dress.
Ending song name?
It was made for the short film, and has no name. 🎃
@@JeffPayne Awwe.. Loved the music
Aimy Miller is the composer. You can find her on Instagram @aimysold
@@JeffPayne Ok, thanks for the info.
Why she came back.? What is the reason for her suicide?
And what did he do to her
He got the mom killed being a drunk. That put the daughter in total sadness and hatred for her father.
HAHA!!
Thats not here
Felt boring from the beginning itself till 5minutes.... But The creator gave a massive effect after 5Min .... Nice Background music .. and an appreciatable one is good camera angles with believable ghost effect .... Super bro ... Congrats and continue forever and ur efforts won't be waste 👏👏👏
Thank you so much for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it. Stay awesome!🎃
Why did she kill herself? i didnt get that...
Loneliness and rage for her father.
Nice dress
Haha thanks. Amazon....50$ with some custom work.
sub your channel have you done live stream yet ?
Thank you! I haven't done any live streams yet.🎃
Sonuç
Hello ;v
Hello!🎃
@@JeffPayne I LOVE YOU 😘
Ate queria assistir mais inglês nao falo nem meu nome consigo falar direito pior inglês treva mesmo 😏😏🤔🤔
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Haha thanks for watching. Hope you enjoyed it. 😎🔪
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Oh heck no
Haha hope you enjoy.🙏🏻
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Hope you enjoyed it. 🎃
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Ola megusta la pelicula
Gracias por ver
Me gusta esa pelicula
Dude move out
Great job.
Thank you for checking both of them out!!! You rule.🎃
@@JeffPayne my respect from Greece.
It always amazes me how far our work can reach people. I hope you are having an awesome time in Greece!!!