Yeah, the ever present "your mother loves you", it turns my stomach up! Betraying your spouse includes your children, which I find even more despicable. Can't you at least spare us that crap, please!
Amen he's dad was there for him growing up supported her through college and she pulls this crap about needing a man on her level. Your level is the street. You should get yourself a good lawyer and sue for alimony after all you were for the most part the stay at home parent who gave up their career to care for the kid and house
I enjoyed this story. Mainly because I can enjoy a story for it's own merits . If you are going to pick it apart, why not just move on to the next one?
48 min into this story & Inga still cannot say Please when she asks for something . I was a driver for a General in the Air Force for 18 months , He always said PLEASE !
All these stories are absolutely pathetic, the English and grammar are absolutely disjointed and all over the place and does not connect from one situation to another. If you cant write it properly in English don't even try. I gave up after 15 minutes thats how pathetic and frustrating it was
While the story has potential, it is so disjointed and badly narrated that it is hard to follow. There are pieces missing and too much is left to the reader to imagine. The ending is terrible and not an ending, but another question. If this is the BEST of the stories then the channel is not worth following.
Would take at least 20 plus years to obtain the rank of Sgt Major in the arny
Yeah, the ever present "your mother loves you", it turns my stomach up! Betraying your spouse includes your children, which I find even more despicable. Can't you at least spare us that crap, please!
Amen he's dad was there for him growing up supported her through college and she pulls this crap about needing a man on her level. Your level is the street. You should get yourself a good lawyer and sue for alimony after all you were for the most part the stay at home parent who gave up their career to care for the kid and house
It's not a movie : you need to be more detailled at the end... For me it's not finished...
Disjointed story
Some of the writers of this fictional stores are not very talented
I enjoyed this story. Mainly because I can enjoy a story for it's own merits . If you are going to pick it apart, why not just move on to the next one?
48 min into this story & Inga still cannot say Please when she asks for something . I was a driver for a General in the Air Force for 18 months , He always said PLEASE !
Dull story with a very choppy read.
Still defending the ex over his own son who is defending him ? What is wrong with this weak man ?
The slow pace is so annoying
Increase the speed to 1.25
Edward finally manned up and made the right stand
I have never been so confused on a one way road then trying to follow this story
Sgt Major, E9, is the top rank for enlisted soldiers a rare , but highly respected non-com.
well that was an hour of my life I just kissed goodbye for no fucking reason
This AI voice is terrible. Why would you choose this? It is very annoying.
It feels quite unfinished!
The pace of the storyline and the twist at the end was good but it ended poorly....as in no ending.
Update please
Stolen/duplicated lake cottage fight scene.
The ending is strange
talked more about trees than what happened
I'm getting so I check the comments first so I don't waste time on crap.
Why did he leave and not allow her to leave like she offered ? Simpator
All these stories are absolutely pathetic, the English and grammar are absolutely disjointed and all over the place and does not connect from one situation to another. If you cant write it properly in English don't even try. I gave up after 15 minutes thats how pathetic and frustrating it was
pretty sure its written by an AI
the train sailed?
What a stupid story-no rhyme nor reason
Not bad, but it seems like there is no true ending. What exactly happened to Edward?
Boring and slow-paced story. Boring
Hus son calls him "daddy" possible explanation of why woman left him. Suoer simp fir sure.
Yeah and the story is total fiction as well.
While the story has potential, it is so disjointed and badly narrated that it is hard to follow.
There are pieces missing and too much is left to the reader to imagine.
The ending is terrible and not an ending, but another question.
If this is the BEST of the stories then the channel is not worth following.
Very disjointed story
Silly story, no point
Very disjointed, and hard follow
I rent
You really need a proofreader. You repeat paragraphs and butcher the English
The writer is bad
What a kak story, time wasted.
Boring as hell and very predictable