Once again a woman who cheated on her husband and did not foresee the consequences. Of course, the AP left her because she got pregnant and found interest in another married woman. The regret she felt afterwards was overwhelming knowing her ex would never take her back.
Sorry, I believe he should have gone scorched earth. Any man who willing marries a flirt is asking for it. His delay of the divorce was adding insult to his injury. I would have been pissed about the vasectomy and his wife's having a baby with the ball player. He should have sued the ball player for alienation of affection and sued the ball club. So he is stuck. No child and no hope of having a child. What that woman took from him has a value to high for monetary compensation. I would not have been civil with the woman. Taking the ability of a man to reproduce is beyond evil.
Teres a story in here somewhere, but its hidden in a jumble of mixed up randown words and scenes all over the place. 20minuute roungs for example. Richard replied Richard Richard Undressed? What? Its like this all the fucking way through. Surely OP you arnt that lazy or illiterate that you think this is good writing.
Story jumps around too much, half the time you have no idea what is going on.
Why is the mother pushing her three-year-old in a stroller?
Once again a woman who cheated on her husband and did not foresee the consequences. Of course, the AP left her because she got pregnant and found interest in another married woman. The regret she felt afterwards was overwhelming knowing her ex would never take her back.
The story wanders around too much, and you are left wondering half the time.
The story jumps around a lot, making it hard to follow what's happening half the time. Does anyone else feel the same?
So is it Tracy and Richard or Evan and Jenna? I’m so lost.
Thank you, thought I was the only one in this predicament.lol
I hope Evan did a paternity test.
Good story.
Sorry too many deets
For goodness sake what a rambling stupid story.
Bullshit story.
Not good messy story no direction
Sorry, I believe he should have gone scorched earth. Any man who willing marries a flirt is asking for it. His delay of the divorce was adding insult to his injury. I would have been pissed about the vasectomy and his wife's having a baby with the ball player. He should have sued the ball player for alienation of affection and sued the ball club. So he is stuck. No child and no hope of having a child. What that woman took from him has a value to high for monetary compensation. I would not have been civil with the woman. Taking the ability of a man to reproduce is beyond evil.
Teres a story in here somewhere, but its hidden in a jumble of mixed up randown words and scenes all over the place. 20minuute roungs for example. Richard replied Richard Richard Undressed? What? Its like this all the fucking way through. Surely OP you arnt that lazy or illiterate that you think this is good writing.
The story was a half-@ssed attempt at being okay.
CRAP!!!
not so good.