I think the government have to invest funding in public transportation system. Most of all, many people tend to take a public transportation to go somewhere. About 3 days ago, I had to go to the hospital to get a test. But, there were not enough public transportation near my home. so, I had to walk to the station. As a result, I couldn't arrive at the hospital in time. Therefore, I think the government have to invest funding in public transportation system.
선생님의 많은 영상들을 봤지만 제가 다니는 학교 언급된 게 신기하고 딱 100번째에 좋아요를 눌렀던 영상이라 이곳에 댓글 남깁니다! 보라색, 초록색 책 두 권과 선생님의 유튜브 강의로 공부해서 인생 첫 토스 시험에 Level 7 목표 레벨 받았어요ㅠㅠㅠ 이렇게 질높은 교재와 강의 제공해주셔서 너무 감사합니다. 잊지 않을게요!
Most of all, most university students can't pay their tuition fee. In the case of my best friend, he had to work everyday for tuition fee. he could not enjoy his university's life. Also he couldn't focus on his studying. If the government invest funding on university tuition fee, many students will be able to enjoy their university's life. also they don't have to waste their time.
I think the government needs to invest funding the most on University tuition fee. There are several reasons to support on my opinion Most of all, more students can concentrate on study. When i was a university student, I had a part time job at a small restaruant. However, I didn't have enough time to study english and also i couldn't do an internship program. As a result, I had a difficulty in getting a job after I graduated. Therefore, I think the government needs to invest funding the most on University tuition fee. 제이크 쌤 노랑이 책에 있는 "대학을 다니면서 알바하는것에 대한 단점 템플릿" 으로 만들어봤어요
안녕하세요. 제이크 강사님~ 이번에도 좋은 강의 감사드립니다. 얼마전 시험에서 레벨 6(150점)이 나왔습니다. 그에 대한 토익스피킹 접수 사이트의 피드백이 이렇습니다. 일반적으로, 의견을 표현하거나 복잡한 요구사항에 대해 응답해야 할 경우 관련성 있는 응답을 만들어 낼 수 있다. 그러나, 아래와 같은 이유로 의견에 대한 이유와 설명들이 듣는 사람에게 불명확한 경우가 종종 있다. • 말을 할 때 발음이 불명확하거나 억양이나 강세가 부적절하다. • 문법적인 실수가 있다. • 어휘 사용범위가 제한적이다. 대부분의 경우, 질문에 답하고 기본적인 정보를 제공할 수 있지만 때로 응답을 이해하거나 알아듣기 어렵다. 큰 소리로 문장을 읽을 때, 알아들을 수 있다. 발음 : 문장을 큰소리로 읽을 때，발음을 대체로 알아듣기 쉬우나 일부 오류가 있다. 억양 및 강세 : 문장을 큰 소리로 읽을 때，억양과 강세가 대체로 효과적이다. 크게 읽는 연습이 필요한건가요?
Because it can make people’s life more convenient. Also, it can improve an local economy. For example, I have been living in Seoul for 10 years. When I just moved to the city, we had a serious public transportation system problem. So, the city government had to do something to figure that out. Finally, they decided to invest public transportation system. After that, the local residents can go anywhere more easily. And now, It has become one of the cities famous for its good public transportation. If they didn't come up with that idea, we might not have this result today.
1.Most of all, more studenmt can study on a university. in the case of my best friend, he recieve high school grades in high school but, his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university but fortunately, he received full-the scholarship from government. as a result, he was able to graduate university and he is working at a famous company nowdays. 2. most of all more child need the care service in the case of my friend, he stay in the home when he was child, because his Parents worked. but fortunately he received school care service. so parent are less worride about their child. as a result, he enjoyed his school life.
All of these options are important. But Most of all, Students can concentrate on their studies. When I was a university student, I had 2 part-time job after class. because the tuition fee was very expensive. So, I was always tired. Also, I couldn't focus on my studies. As a result, I got a bad grade.
Most of all, Parents can concentrate on their work. When I was young, My mother quit the company after i was born. because she takes care of me. but nowadays, there are many child care facilities. so, they don't have to worry about the child. As a result, they can focus on their career.
선생님 강의영상으로 공부하는데 도움 많이 받고있습니다😊 대중교통시스템으로 템플릿2 사용해서 이유- Most of all, more people can use public transportation such as bus and subway. 배경- When I was a college student, I took the subway almost every day. 문제점- But there were many people who used the subway at the same time 결과- As a result, I often missed the subway. 이렇게 답변해도 가능할까요??
Most of all, we can arrive at work in time more easily. In my case, my city doesn't have enough public transport system. So, in rush hour, many people barely arrive at their workplace in time. As a result, people waste their energy too much to hurry everyday.
Most of all, this service make parents continue their work career. in the case of my mother, she was a office worker. but she stopped her work to take care of me. but fortunately, nowadays, there are many child care services and after school programs. as a result, parents can last their work these days.
I think the government needs to invest funding public transportation system Most of all, Many people always use public transportation In my case, i always used public transportation to go university But, The dispatch time was long and there were many people So, I had to use it standing in a crowded state Therefore, I hope the dispatch time is short in the morning
Most of all, Korean students think university tuition fee is very expensive. In the case of me, I don’t have enough money to pay university tuition fee. So, I have to get a part time job during the semester. Also, I study hard to get a scholarship. As a result, I’m having a hard time and feel stressful.
제이크 선생님 너무 감사합니다!!😄 제가 급히 딱 6이 필요했고 목표였는데 선생님 핵심정리와 실전문제영상들보고 5일만에 첫 시험 레벨6 받았어요ㅠㅠ 적절한 영상 길이와 깔끔한 재생목록 덕에 택했었는데 진짜 신의 한수였네요ㅜㅜ 너무 감사합니다 앞으로도 더더더 대성하실거예요ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 혹여 망설이시는 분들 제이크토스가 짱이에요.. 핵심만 쏙쏙입니다.. 참고로 전 엄청난 영고라 토익 점수 말하기도 민망한 점순데 토스 며칠만에 6 받은 겁니다..!
제이크쌤! 항상 감사하게 강의 잘 보구 있습니다~!!😊 질문이 있는데, 혹시 학생들이 공부에 집중하는데 도움을 준다. 이 문장을 It is helpful for students to concentrate on thier studies 이렇게 영작해도 될까요?? 답변해주시면 정말 감사하겠습니다ㅎㅎ
선생님! 저번주에 파트5는 무슨소리 하는지 이해도 못하고 파트6는 질문 해석이 안돼서 그냥 선생님 템플릿에다가 진짜 아무말 대잔치해버렸습니다! 아 진짜 완전 망했다 생각하고 시험장 나왔는데ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 오늘 140점이 나왔습니다! 높은 점수는 아니지만 진짜 영어 공부만 하면 몸이 꼬일정도로 영어 싫어하는데 만족스러운 점수입니다ㅠㅠ 정말 감사합니다! 유튜브 도움 많이 받았습니다!!
안녕하세요 제이크쌤, 사실 다른 유로 인강을 듣다가 자꾸 템플릿만 강조하는 공부법에 회의감을 느끼고 혼자 모의고사를 풀어봐도 제가 표현하고 싶은 말이 아니니까 외워지지도 않고 자연스럽게 나오지 않았습니다. 그래서 유튜브에 우연히 검색을 했는데, 쌤을 알게 됐습니다. 처음에는 쌤이 알려주시는 답변 구성이 이정도만 말해도 점수가 나오나..? 라는 의심을 했는데 아주 거만한 생각이었습니다 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 쌤이 풀어주는 모의고사를 보면서 표현들만 익히고 제가하고 싶은 말을 하는 공부위주로 일주일동안 하루 8시간씩 공부한 결과, 혼자 모의고사를 풀 때도 자신감이 늘었고 결과적으로, 영어 공부는 2년전 토익공부가 다였던 제가 단 일주일 동안 쌤유튜브를 보면서 130점을 달성했습니다.(별로 높지는 않지만.. 평소 제 실력에 이정도면 엄청난 거라고 생각합니다 ㅋㅋㅋ) 이런 양질의 자료들을 유튜브에 무료로 올려주셔서 정말 감사합니다. 여러분도 제이크샘만 믿고 일주일만 빡세게 해보세요 ㅋㅋ
think the government needs to invest the most in funding childcare services. This is because, according to an article, we have the lowest child rate in the world in South Korea. Therefore, we need a special strategy to increase the child population. So, the government needs to invest the most in childcare services
i agree~~ in the case of i worked part time job to save tuition fee there are two difficult problems. first, i cannot concentrate my major study, second, i should borrow the money at bank. also i have to pay the money during 6 month. as a result the goverment need to support univercity student.
I think the government needs to invest funding the most on university tuition fee most of all, more students can study at a univerity in the case of my best friends, he studied very well But he didn't have enough money. so he had to work instead of going to college but foutunately he received university tuition fee from government. as a result he graduated university.
안녕하세요~ Part6 템플릿 사용하다가 한계를 느껴서 쌤 영상보고 영작해서 시험 치루려는 한 대학생입니다. 영상들을 보니 주장-배경-논리-결과 식으로 구성하는게 좋은 것 같은데, 이 문제 같은 경우 저는 transportation system을 선택했습니다. 1. TS는 우리 생활에 꼭 필요하고 기본적이기 때문이다. 2. 많은 사람들이 마트 가는데 버스를 타고, 또 다른 사람들은 수업을 들으러 가는데 지하철을 탄다. 3. 이처럼 사람들이 많이 이용한다. 4. 미래에는 사람들이 더 많아질거라고 생각하기 때문에, TS의 범위가 더 커져야 한다. 이정도 수준으로 답변했는데, 괜찮을까요? 답변 해주시면 감사하겠습니다 :)
I think the government needs to invest funding child care the most, because of several reasons. First, (버퍼링 2초) nowadays in Korea, many people are reluctant to raise their babies. So, the number of babies (1초) is decreasing. (1초) However (2초) the government can invest child care survice(survices 로 했어야 하는데 s뺌) For example, the government can give child brith incentive. (1초) Then, (1초) our country can (1초) be more delevoped (1초) when children grow up. To sum up, I think the government needs to invest funding child care the most 56초.
university tuition fee most of all, universty students can concentrate on studing when i was a universty student, i had to work at a part time job becuse i didn't have enough money to pay universty tuition fee also i lost a lot of money on foods and Monthly rent as a result, i was not able to study hard, it was difficult for me to get a job child care service most of all, the birth rate of my country is very low many woman in my country don't get birth becuse there are a lot of reasons but especially there are not enough child care sevice also another country invest child care service so the birth rate is high for that reason we have to invest child care service for the future it's not a choice, it's a must
제이크 쌤! part5에서 약간 꼼수답변을 하나를 만들어서 사용하고 있는데, 이게 너무 어수선한 답변인가 싶어 좀 바꾸거나, 제거할 내용을 알려주시면 감사하겠습니다! 요청하다 / 조언들을 / 다른 지점에 / 비슷한 경험을 가진 / 그들의 의견을 듣기 위해 / 이 문제에 관한 -> 이 문제에 관해 그들의 의견을 듣기 위해 비슷한 경험을 가진 다른 지점(다른 부서 매니저들) 에게 조언을 구하다
30초 안에 작문하는게 약간 벅차면 진짜 간단하게만 만들어도 괜찮을까요? 대중교통 시스템에 투자 시에, 도시에 관광객을 더 끌어들일 수 있고, 전에 여행갔을 때 교통이 불편해서 내가 가고싶었던 관광지를 가지 못했다. 그래서 그 도시에 대해 좋은 인상을 갖지 못했다. 까지가 시간 내에 생각할 수 있는 스토리에요..ㅠㅠ
선생님! 저번주에 시험봤는데 레벨6 150점 맞았어요! 이전 시험들에서는 130,130,140 맞았었는데 점수가 올라서 뿌듯한 마음과 레벨7을 받지 못해서 조금 아쉬운 마음도 있네요 , 그치만 중간중간 실수가 조금 있었어서 레벨7은 힘들거 같다고 생각했는데 딱 예상대로 나온거 같아요 ㅋㅋ 150점을 받고, 어느 부분이 부족한지 알고나니 레벨7도 도전해볼만하단 생각이 들어요! 아마 선생님 강의를 접하지 못했더라면 저는 평생 레벨7는 도전도 못해볼 점수라고 생각했을거 같아요. 정말 좋은 강의 무료로 들을 수 있게 해주셔서 감사해요! 토스 시험 뿐만 아니라 실제 영어 스피킹에 있어서도 도움이 많이 됐습니다. 누군가 토익스피킹 강의를 추천해달라고하면 선생님 강의 강력추천할거에요!! 새해복 많이 받으세요!!!!
제이크 쌤! part5에서 마무리 중 말이 끝나기 전에 시간이 다 할 것 같으면 말을 빨리해서 끝마치는 게 좋나요? 아니면 그냥 같은 속도로 말하다 끊기는 게 낫나요? 계속 마무리 문장 , by doing so, we will 쯤에서 말이 끊겨서 좀만 말을 더 빨리 하면 좀 날림으로 able to solve this problem까지 거의 랩하듯이 해서요..ㅠㅜㅠㅜ
most of all, many people use a public transportation system. in my case, i took a bus and subway to go university two months ago. but in my town, there weren't enough bus stops and subway stations so, i was late for university as a result , i got a bad grade in class Therefore, I think the government have to invest funding on public transportation system. 너무 짧은가요? 문법은 맞나요...??
I think the government needs to invest funding Public transportation system most of all we can go to the office more conveniently In my case, i drive a car all most every day. because i don't have a public transportation near my house So, i waste time on the road a week ago, A new subway was opened as a result I can save money and time
I think the government needs to invest funding the most on child care service. Most of all, parents can have much time for their child. In the case of my uncle, his family doesn’t have enough money. So my uncle has to work on weekend. Also, he can’t play with his child because he is tired when come back to home. As a result, children have to stay alone after school.
Of course, all of these options are important. But most of all, more students can study at a university. In the case of my best friend, she had a financial problem. It was difficult to have a part time job on her situation, so she tried to give up university. Fortunately, she got a scholarship from the society. As a result, she could go to university as she had wanted for a long time.
등록금 Most of all, more students can concentrate on studying. When i was a university student, i worked for a part time job at a convenient store. So, i was always tired. As a result, my grades dropped badly.
선생님! 너무 감사하다고 말씀 전하고 싶어서 남겨요! ㅎㅎ 선생님 보라색으로 기본다지고 처음 토스시험 봤는데 목표가 155점 이상이라 130 레벨6나와서 좌절했어요ㅜ 그래서 노랑이 모의고사로 일주일간 열심히 연습했더니 두번째 시험 160 레벨7!!!!성공입니다 완전 감사드려요😊🙏🏻
most of all, students can focus on study in case of my best friend, he worked everyday for tuition fee so, he could not study as a result he got a bad grade
I think the goverment need to invest P t s. Most of all, people don't have to buy cars. In the case of big city, Most people use public transportation system. So, People can save the money. Also, we can go anywhere easily. As a result, Young adults want to live in big city. Most of all, people can save the money. In my case, I had to go to a hospital once a week because of my teeth. But, there are not public transportation to go there. So, I took a taxi and I spent a lot of money. As a result, I moved to another house.
선생님 강의들 너무 잘 보고 있습니다 ! 다름이 아니라 제가 적은 답변들이 이유가 되는지 한번 검토받고 싶은데요 답변 받아볼 수 있을까요? i think the government needs to invest funding the most on Public transportation system Of course, all of these options are important. but most of all, nowadays the business environment is really tough so many people have problems with money in the case of my city, they gave some money for me as trasportation fee, and it was really helpful Second it is also good for the environment. as many people use the trasportation, the enviroment will be better. for these reasons, i think the government needs to invest funding the most on public transportation system
most of all, it is helpful to commuter . most commuter waste their time on the road. in the case of my friend, he lives near the station. so he commute by subway. as a result, he dont waste his time on the road and arrive at company eariler than other coworkers. that is why i think so 이렇게 간결하게 말하려고 하는데 이렇게 말해도 되는지, 문법이 맞는지 모르겠어요 😭😭
Most of all, students can concentrate on their study. In my case, i couldn't get some support from my family. So, I had to work as a part timer on weekdays to pay tuition fee. So, I was tired always and there was not enough time to study. As a result, i was not able to get good grades. Most of all, it is possible to attract many people. About 5 years ago, i visited a small city. But it is difficult to take public transportation in the city. So i couldn't visit some famous restaurant that i wanted to go. As a result, i was not able to get good impression for this city. Most of all, children can stay at a safe place. When i was in childhood, my parents worked on weekdays. So i went a child care center after school. Also, they offered some food too. As a result, i was able to stay at the center safely.
제이크 파트 5 27회 입장 & 이유 University tuition fee 더 많은 학생들이 대학교에서 공부할 수 있다. -> More students can study at a university. 예시 배경 In the case of my best friend, he got a high grades in high school. 경과 but his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university tuition fee. Fortunately, he received a full-time scholarship from the government. 결과 as a result, he was able to graduate university, and he is working at a famous company. * 고수들의 TIP 셋 중 택일 유형에서 입장 문장을 만든 뒤 -> Of cours, all of these options are important. But most of all, - * 긍정적인 대중의견은 비지니스에 도움이 된다. -> Positive opinions are helpful for business. I think the government needs to invest funding the most on university tuition fee. Of cours, all of these options are important. But most of all, More students can study at a university. in the case of my best friend, he got a high grades in high school. but his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university tuition fee. Fortunately, he received a full-time scholarship from the government. as a result, he was able to graduate university, and he is working at a famous company. According to a recent news report, The majority of economy experts in korea said that They think the government needs to invest funding the most on university tuition fee. Therefore I think this way.
1.Most of all, more studenmt can study on a university. in the case of my best friend, he recieve high school grades in high school but, his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university but fortunately, he received full-the scholarship from government. as a result, he was able to graduate university and he is working at a famous company nowdays. 2. most of all more child need the care service in the case of my friend, he stay in the home when he was child, because his Parents worked. but fortunately he received school care service. so parent are less worride about their child. as a result, he enjoyed his school life.
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I think the government have to invest funding in public transportation system.
Most of all, many people tend to take a public transportation to go somewhere.
About 3 days ago, I had to go to the hospital to get a test. But, there were not enough public transportation near my home. so, I had to walk to the station.
As a result, I couldn't arrive at the hospital in time.
Therefore, I think the government have to invest funding in public transportation system.
선생님의 많은 영상들을 봤지만 제가 다니는 학교 언급된 게 신기하고 딱 100번째에 좋아요를 눌렀던 영상이라 이곳에 댓글 남깁니다! 보라색, 초록색 책 두 권과 선생님의 유튜브 강의로 공부해서 인생 첫 토스 시험에 Level 7 목표 레벨 받았어요ㅠㅠㅠ 이렇게 질높은 교재와 강의 제공해주셔서 너무 감사합니다. 잊지 않을게요!
으어 축하합니다 ^^
Most of all, most university students can't pay their tuition fee.
In the case of my best friend, he had to work everyday for tuition fee.
he could not enjoy his university's life.
Also he couldn't focus on his studying.
If the government invest funding on university tuition fee, many students will be able to enjoy their university's life. also they don't have to waste their time.
선생님 좋은강의 감사드립니다.
유튭 강의 집중해서 들으면서 4일동안 연습하고 6급 140점 받았습니다!
내용자체가 알차고 핵심만 짚어주셔서 도움 많이되었습니다!
으앗 축하합니다!!
I think the government needs to invest funding the most on University tuition fee.
There are several reasons to support on my opinion
Most of all, more students can concentrate on study.
When i was a university student, I had a part time job at a small restaruant.
However, I didn't have enough time to study english and also i couldn't do an internship program.
As a result, I had a difficulty in getting a job after I graduated.
Therefore, I think the government needs to invest funding the most on University tuition fee.
제이크 쌤 노랑이 책에 있는 "대학을 다니면서 알바하는것에 대한 단점 템플릿" 으로 만들어봤어요
이번에 충대 졸업했는데 충대 언급해주시니 뭔가 신기하네요...
그리고 제이크선생님덕분에 열심히 공부 할 수 있음에 정말 감사합니다. 열심히 해서 꼭 원하는 점수 얻겠습니다. 새해 복 많이 받으세요.
네! 감사합니다 ^^
안녕하세요. 제이크 강사님~ 이번에도 좋은 강의 감사드립니다. 얼마전 시험에서 레벨 6(150점)이 나왔습니다. 그에 대한 토익스피킹 접수 사이트의 피드백이 이렇습니다.
일반적으로, 의견을 표현하거나 복잡한 요구사항에 대해 응답해야 할 경우 관련성 있는 응답을 만들어 낼 수 있다. 그러나, 아래와 같은 이유로 의견에 대한 이유와 설명들이 듣는 사람에게 불명확한 경우가 종종 있다.
• 말을 할 때 발음이 불명확하거나 억양이나 강세가 부적절하다.
• 문법적인 실수가 있다.
• 어휘 사용범위가 제한적이다.
대부분의 경우, 질문에 답하고 기본적인 정보를 제공할 수 있지만 때로 응답을 이해하거나 알아듣기 어렵다.
큰 소리로 문장을 읽을 때, 알아들을 수 있다.
발음 : 문장을 큰소리로 읽을 때，발음을 대체로 알아듣기 쉬우나 일부 오류가 있다.
억양 및 강세 : 문장을 큰 소리로 읽을 때，억양과 강세가 대체로 효과적이다.
크게 읽는 연습이 필요한건가요?
토스 레벨마다 피드백은 정해져있어요! 저도 레벨6 때 같은 피드백을 받았습니다~
@@김영환-f7w 아~ 그런거군요. 개인별 차이가 있는줄알았습니다. 감사합니다~
네 맞아요 ㅎㅎ 매크로 답변입니다 ㅎㅎ
@@제이크토익스피킹 네네 강사님 댓글 감사합니다~~
Because it can make people’s life more convenient. Also, it can improve an local economy.
For example, I have been living in Seoul for 10 years.
When I just moved to the city, we had a serious public transportation system problem.
So, the city government had to do something to figure that out.
Finally, they decided to invest public transportation system.
After that, the local residents can go anywhere more easily.
And now, It has become one of the cities famous for its good public transportation.
If they didn't come up with that idea, we might not have this result today.
안녕하세요! 토익스피킹을 준비하게 되어 실전과 비슷하게 제공하는 모의고사를 찾다가 선생님 채널을 보게 되었습니다. 풀다가 이 문제 만나고 멘붕됐는데 이렇게 해설까지 제공해주시고ㅠㅠ 정말 감사합니다ㅠㅠㅠ 좋은 점수 받을 수 있도록 열심히 할게요ㅠㅠㅠ
1.Most of all, more studenmt can study on a university.
in the case of my best friend, he recieve high school grades in high school but, his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university
but fortunately, he received full-the scholarship from government.
as a result, he was able to graduate university and he is working at a famous company nowdays.
2. most of all more child need the care service
in the case of my friend, he stay in the home when he was child, because his Parents worked.
but fortunately he received school care service. so parent are less worride about their child.
as a result, he enjoyed his school life.
All of these options are important.
But Most of all, Students can concentrate on their studies.
When I was a university student, I had 2 part-time job after class.
because the tuition fee was very expensive.
So, I was always tired.
Also, I couldn't focus on my studies.
As a result, I got a bad grade.
Most of all, Parents can concentrate on their work.
When I was young, My mother quit the company after i was born.
because she takes care of me.
but nowadays, there are many child care facilities.
so, they don't have to worry about the child.
As a result, they can focus on their career.
선생님 강의영상으로 공부하는데 도움 많이 받고있습니다😊
대중교통시스템으로 템플릿2 사용해서
이유- Most of all, more people can use public transportation such as bus and subway.
배경- When I was a college student, I took the subway almost every day.
문제점- But there were many people who used the subway at the same time
결과- As a result, I often missed the subway.
이렇게 답변해도 가능할까요??
네 가능합니다 :D
Most of all, we can arrive at work in time more easily. In my case, my city doesn't have enough public transport system. So, in rush hour, many people barely arrive at their workplace in time. As a result, people waste their energy too much to hurry everyday.
Most of all, this service make parents continue their work career.
in the case of my mother, she was a office worker.
but she stopped her work to take care of me.
but fortunately, nowadays, there are many child care services and after school programs.
as a result, parents can last their work these days.
I think the government needs to invest funding public transportation system
Most of all, Many people always use public transportation
In my case, i always used public transportation to go university
But, The dispatch time was long and there were many people
So, I had to use it standing in a crowded state
Therefore, I hope the dispatch time is short in the morning
선생님 강의 정말 감사히들었습니다 ㅎㅎ 처음하는데 학원도안가냐는 친구들 말이 많았지만 묵묵히 자료외우고 노랑이 보랑이 책보고외우고 유튭강의랑 기출 열심히 풀었어요.
시험치고 나오면서 정말 하.. 망했다는 생각했기때문에 오늘 성적확인하고 자극받아서 더 열심히하자 했는데 '150'나왔습니다 ㅎㅎ 10점 레벨7이 아쉽지만 수욜날 친건 좀 더 만족스러웠으니 기대해보면서 감사글남깁니다.
유료강의 못들어 죄송하지만 ㅎㅎㅎ 친구들에도 많이 알려줄게요. 새해 복🧧 많이받으세요.
으앗 축하합니다 :D
Most of all, Korean students think university tuition fee is very expensive.
In the case of me, I don’t have enough money to pay university tuition fee.
So, I have to get a part time job during the semester.
Also, I study hard to get a scholarship.
As a result, I’m having a hard time and feel stressful.
제이크 선생님 너무 감사합니다!!😄 제가 급히 딱 6이 필요했고 목표였는데 선생님 핵심정리와 실전문제영상들보고 5일만에 첫 시험 레벨6 받았어요ㅠㅠ 적절한 영상 길이와 깔끔한 재생목록 덕에 택했었는데 진짜 신의 한수였네요ㅜㅜ 너무 감사합니다 앞으로도 더더더 대성하실거예요ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 혹여 망설이시는 분들 제이크토스가 짱이에요.. 핵심만 쏙쏙입니다.. 참고로 전 엄청난 영고라 토익 점수 말하기도 민망한 점순데 토스 며칠만에 6 받은 겁니다..!
축하드립니다! 수고하셨어요 ㅎㅎ
제이크쌤! 항상 감사하게 강의 잘 보구 있습니다~!!😊
질문이 있는데, 혹시 학생들이 공부에 집중하는데 도움을 준다. 이 문장을
It is helpful for students to concentrate on thier studies 이렇게 영작해도 될까요??
답변해주시면 정말 감사하겠습니다ㅎㅎ
네 맞습니다 😊😊
감사합니다!! 좋은 강의 듣고 보름만에 140점 레벨6나왓어요!!
딱 필요햇던 점수만큼 나와서 좋아요ㅎㅎ 감사합니다 선생님!
선생님! 저번주에 파트5는 무슨소리 하는지 이해도 못하고 파트6는 질문 해석이 안돼서
그냥 선생님 템플릿에다가 진짜 아무말 대잔치해버렸습니다! 아 진짜 완전 망했다 생각하고 시험장 나왔는데ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
오늘 140점이 나왔습니다!
높은 점수는 아니지만 진짜 영어 공부만 하면 몸이 꼬일정도로 영어 싫어하는데 만족스러운 점수입니다ㅠㅠ
정말 감사합니다! 유튜브 도움 많이 받았습니다!!
안녕하세요 제이크쌤, 사실 다른 유로 인강을 듣다가 자꾸 템플릿만 강조하는 공부법에 회의감을 느끼고 혼자 모의고사를 풀어봐도 제가 표현하고 싶은 말이 아니니까 외워지지도 않고 자연스럽게 나오지 않았습니다. 그래서 유튜브에 우연히 검색을 했는데, 쌤을 알게 됐습니다. 처음에는 쌤이 알려주시는 답변 구성이 이정도만 말해도 점수가 나오나..? 라는 의심을 했는데 아주 거만한 생각이었습니다 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 쌤이 풀어주는 모의고사를 보면서 표현들만 익히고 제가하고 싶은 말을 하는 공부위주로 일주일동안 하루 8시간씩 공부한 결과, 혼자 모의고사를 풀 때도 자신감이 늘었고 결과적으로, 영어 공부는 2년전 토익공부가 다였던 제가 단 일주일 동안 쌤유튜브를 보면서 130점을 달성했습니다.(별로 높지는 않지만.. 평소 제 실력에 이정도면 엄청난 거라고 생각합니다 ㅋㅋㅋ)
이런 양질의 자료들을 유튜브에 무료로 올려주셔서 정말 감사합니다. 여러분도 제이크샘만 믿고 일주일만 빡세게 해보세요 ㅋㅋ
으아 축하드립니다!!
제이크 선생님 유익한 자료들 올려주셔서 감사합니다! 덕분에 첫 시험에서 레벨 7을 받을 수 있었던 것 같아요. 시중에 책도 많고 공부 방법론도 많아서 처음에 어려웠는데, 선생님 강의로 방향을 잡을 수 있었던 것 같아요!
think the government needs to invest the most in funding childcare services. This is because, according to an article, we have the lowest child rate in the world in South Korea. Therefore, we need a special strategy to increase the child population. So, the government needs to invest the most in childcare services
i agree~~
in the case of i worked part time job to save tuition fee
there are two difficult problems.
first, i cannot concentrate my major study,
second, i should borrow the money at bank.
also i have to pay the money during 6 month.
as a result the goverment need to support univercity student.
I think the government needs to invest funding the most on university tuition fee
most of all, more students can study at a univerity
in the case of my best friends, he studied very well
But he didn't have enough money. so he had to work instead of going to college
but foutunately he received university tuition fee from government.
as a result he graduated university.
안녕하세요~ Part6 템플릿 사용하다가 한계를 느껴서 쌤 영상보고 영작해서 시험 치루려는 한 대학생입니다.
영상들을 보니 주장-배경-논리-결과 식으로 구성하는게 좋은 것 같은데, 이 문제 같은 경우 저는 transportation system을 선택했습니다.
1. TS는 우리 생활에 꼭 필요하고 기본적이기 때문이다.
2. 많은 사람들이 마트 가는데 버스를 타고, 또 다른 사람들은 수업을 들으러 가는데 지하철을 탄다.
3. 이처럼 사람들이 많이 이용한다.
4. 미래에는 사람들이 더 많아질거라고 생각하기 때문에, TS의 범위가 더 커져야 한다.
이정도 수준으로 답변했는데, 괜찮을까요? 답변 해주시면 감사하겠습니다 :)
네! 좋습니다 :D
선생님 덕분에 두번째 시험 레벨6 150점 받았어요!! 감사합니다!! 막상 레벨6 받으니까 또 레벨7을 받고싶어지네요 ㅋㅋ
첫 시험 160/level7받았어요 특히 파트5에 정말 많은 도움 받았습니당~ 제이크선생님 고맙습니다!
아앗 축하드립니다 :D
I think the government needs to invest funding child care the most, because of several reasons.
First, (버퍼링 2초) nowadays in Korea, many people are reluctant to raise their babies.
So, the number of babies (1초) is decreasing.
(1초) However (2초) the government can invest child care survice(survices 로 했어야 하는데 s뺌)
For example, the government can give child brith incentive.
(1초) Then, (1초) our country can (1초) be more delevoped (1초) when children grow up.
To sum up, I think the government needs to invest funding child care the most
56초.
university tuition fee
most of all, universty students can concentrate on studing
when i was a universty student, i had to work at a part time job
becuse i didn't have enough money to pay universty tuition fee
also i lost a lot of money on foods and Monthly rent
as a result, i was not able to study hard, it was difficult for me to get a job
child care service
most of all, the birth rate of my country is very low
many woman in my country don't get birth becuse
there are a lot of reasons but especially there are not enough child care sevice
also another country invest child care service so the birth rate is high
for that reason we have to invest child care service for the future
it's not a choice, it's a must
제이크 쌤!
part5에서 약간 꼼수답변을 하나를 만들어서 사용하고 있는데, 이게 너무 어수선한 답변인가 싶어 좀 바꾸거나, 제거할 내용을 알려주시면 감사하겠습니다!
요청하다 / 조언들을 / 다른 지점에 / 비슷한 경험을 가진 / 그들의 의견을 듣기 위해 / 이 문제에 관한
-> 이 문제에 관해 그들의 의견을 듣기 위해 비슷한 경험을 가진 다른 지점(다른 부서 매니저들) 에게 조언을 구하다
앗 저러면 점수가 많이 낮게 나올거에요..
@@제이크토익스피킹 너무 외운 티가 나서일 까요? 아니면 혼잡해서 일까요?
30초 안에 작문하는게 약간 벅차면 진짜 간단하게만 만들어도 괜찮을까요?
대중교통 시스템에 투자 시에, 도시에 관광객을 더 끌어들일 수 있고, 전에 여행갔을 때 교통이 불편해서 내가 가고싶었던 관광지를 가지 못했다. 그래서 그 도시에 대해 좋은 인상을 갖지 못했다. 까지가 시간 내에 생각할 수 있는 스토리에요..ㅠㅠ
네! 나쁘지 않아요 ㅎㅎ
선생님 제가 다른 영상인가에서 얼핏 들었던 것 같은데 파트 6 에서 자기 경험을 이야기하면 안된다고 하셨던.. 이유를 알 수 있을까요? 아니면 말씀하셨던 영상 알려주실 수 있을까요 보고오겠습니다..
그런 말씀하신적 없다면 꿈꾼거랑 헷갈렸나봐여 ..ㅠ
전 그런말한 기억이 없습니다 ㅠㅠ
@@제이크토익스피킹 죄송합니다 다른 영상 보고있는데 아마 처음 이유 말할 때 일인칭 말하지 말라고 하신거랑 헷갈린것 같습니다. 이유 문장만 일인칭 피하고 나머지 예시문장은 자기 예시들어도 되는걸로..!
선생님! 저번주에 시험봤는데 레벨6 150점 맞았어요! 이전 시험들에서는 130,130,140 맞았었는데 점수가 올라서 뿌듯한 마음과 레벨7을 받지 못해서 조금 아쉬운 마음도 있네요 , 그치만 중간중간 실수가 조금 있었어서 레벨7은 힘들거 같다고 생각했는데 딱 예상대로 나온거 같아요 ㅋㅋ
150점을 받고, 어느 부분이 부족한지 알고나니 레벨7도 도전해볼만하단 생각이 들어요! 아마 선생님 강의를 접하지 못했더라면 저는 평생 레벨7는 도전도 못해볼 점수라고 생각했을거 같아요.
정말 좋은 강의 무료로 들을 수 있게 해주셔서 감사해요! 토스 시험 뿐만 아니라 실제 영어 스피킹에 있어서도 도움이 많이 됐습니다.
누군가 토익스피킹 강의를 추천해달라고하면 선생님 강의 강력추천할거에요!! 새해복 많이 받으세요!!!!
고생 많으셨습니다 ^^
오픽을 하다 와서 그런지 저는 정말 특이하게 파트5가 좀 말이 나오는 느낌인데 파트4가 정말 어렵네요 ㅠㅠㅠ 어찌해야할지
제이크 쌤!
part5에서 마무리 중 말이 끝나기 전에 시간이 다 할 것 같으면 말을 빨리해서 끝마치는 게 좋나요? 아니면 그냥 같은 속도로 말하다 끊기는 게 낫나요? 계속 마무리 문장 , by doing so, we will 쯤에서 말이 끊겨서 좀만 말을 더 빨리 하면 좀 날림으로 able to solve this problem까지 거의 랩하듯이 해서요..ㅠㅜㅠㅜ
하나를 고르라면 전자입니다!
most of all, many people use a public transportation system.
in my case, i took a bus and subway to go university two months ago.
but in my town, there weren't enough bus stops and subway stations
so, i was late for university
as a result , i got a bad grade in class
Therefore, I think the government have to invest funding on public transportation system.
너무 짧은가요? 문법은 맞나요...??
아 제이크 선생님ㅠㅠㅠ 유투브 강의보고 일주일만에 첫시험에 150나왔어요 ㅠㅠ 정말 감사합니다
일주일에 150이면 조금만 더 해보세요 :D
선생님, 택일 문제에서 첫 문장을 i will choose A 식으로 시작하려하는데, 이렇게해도 감점될 부분은 없을까요?
정부의 투자에 대한 의견이라 어색합니다. 하란대로 합시다.
조금 편법이지만 시간 끌릴 바에는 그렇게라도 해주세요 ^^
이전 생방에서 130, 140 차이가 뭘까요 계속 130만 맞는다고 질문했었는데, 이번에 말씀해주신대로 발음하고 조금만 문법 신경썻더니 150 점수 받아서 매우 만족하고있습니다. 선생님것 파트5 파트6 완강 여러번 돌렸더니 매우 도움되었습니다. 정말 감사합니다!!
축하드려요! ㅎㅎ
I think the government needs to invest funding Public transportation system
most of all we can go to the office more conveniently
In my case, i drive a car all most every day.
because i don't have a public transportation near my house
So, i waste time on the road
a week ago, A new subway was opened
as a result I can save money and time
시험 하루 남았는데 지금 하고 있습니다. 선생님이 쓰신 책 사서 공부하고 있는데, 목표인 레벨6은 나올거라는 근자감이 생기네요.
저도 열심히 응원해 드리겠습니다! ㅎㅎ
쌤 파트3,파트6 중간에 시간부족해서 끊어지는 경우가 있는데,
이 경우에는 마무리를 바로 해야할까요 아님 끊어지더라도 계속 얘기해야할까용
후자가 그나마 더 나아요 ㅎㅎ
5일공브하고 레벨6받았습니다!!! 선생님 정말 감사드려요 2년뒤에 또뵙겠습니다...❤️
5일 공부하고 레벨 6이면 7도 어렵지 않을 것 같습니다! 고생하셨어요 ㅎㅎ
I think the government needs to invest funding the most on child care service.
Most of all, parents can have much time for their child.
In the case of my uncle, his family doesn’t have enough money.
So my uncle has to work on weekend.
Also, he can’t play with his child because he is tired when come back to home.
As a result, children have to stay alone after school.
파트6에서 마지막 마무리 문장 얘기하다가 끊기는거랑, 마무리 문장 얘기 안하고 시간 조금 남기는거랑 어떤게 나을까요?
고르라면 후자 입니다!
@@제이크토익스피킹 여기서 대학을 졸업하다 하실때 그냥 graduated university라고 하신거 같은데 university 앞에 전치사 안써도 되는건가요?
선생님 파트6할때 꼭 예시를 들어야되나요?
첫째, 둘째 이유 이런식으로하면 안되나요?
예시를 드는것이 더 쉬워서그런건가요
편한대로 하시면 됩니다 ㅎㅎ 정답은 없습니다~
파트 6 선생님 강의 다봤는데도 막상 문제나오면 준비시간 30초동안 첫이유 문장도 만들지 못합니다.. 할수록 포기하고싶어지는데 어떻게 해야될까요..
보라색 책 정독은 다 해보셨나요 혹시??
보라책은 보지못했습니다ㅠㅠ
@@최진혁-u7t 공부가 아직 많이 부족하신것 같습니다 ㅜㅜ 보라색 책의 내용정도는 꼭 다 학습해주세요~!
Of course, all of these options are important.
But most of all, more students can study at a university.
In the case of my best friend, she had a financial problem.
It was difficult to have a part time job on her situation, so she tried to give up university.
Fortunately, she got a scholarship from the society.
As a result, she could go to university as she had wanted for a long time.
제이크쌤 덕분에 레벨 7 맞았습니다~ 감사합니다~
축하드립니다!! :D
유튜브위주로 공부하셨나요?ㅠㅠ 강의먼저다듣고유튜브를 들어야할지 고민입니다
@@성이름-d3d 처음 토스 공부한 거라서 제이크 쌤 핵심정리 유튜브랑 보라색 책 같이 공부했고 그 뒤로는 파트별 문제랑 모의고사 풀어봤어요:)
@@배해림 아하! 감사합니다
등록금
Most of all, more students can concentrate on studying.
When i was a university student, i worked for a part time job at a convenient store.
So, i was always tired.
As a result, my grades dropped badly.
선생님! 너무 감사하다고 말씀 전하고 싶어서 남겨요! ㅎㅎ 선생님 보라색으로 기본다지고 처음 토스시험 봤는데 목표가 155점 이상이라 130 레벨6나와서 좌절했어요ㅜ 그래서 노랑이 모의고사로 일주일간 열심히 연습했더니 두번째 시험 160 레벨7!!!!성공입니다 완전 감사드려요😊🙏🏻
감사합니다 덕분에 첫시험 레벨6 맞았습니다!
이문제는 난이도가 어느정도인가요? 그리고 이유가꼭 2개 아니여도 레벨 7 나올 수 있나요? ㅠㅠ
네! 7 가능합니다 ㅎㅎ 난이도는 중간입니다!
제이크 쌤 덕분에 7나왔습니다! 다른데서는 이유 2가지 자꾸 말해야한다해서 스트레스받았는데 진짜 아니네요~!
most of all, students can focus on study
in case of my best friend, he worked everyday for tuition fee
so, he could not study
as a result he got a bad grade
쌤 책으로 일주일, 유튜브로 일주일 공부하고 150 나왔어요ㅠㅠ 스피킹 시험은 처음이라 감도 안잡히고 걱정이 많았는데 감사합니다!!!!!!!!!
I think the goverment need to invest P t s.
Most of all, people don't have to buy cars.
In the case of big city, Most people use public transportation system.
So, People can save the money.
Also, we can go anywhere easily.
As a result, Young adults want to live in big city.
Most of all, people can save the money.
In my case, I had to go to a hospital once a week because of my teeth.
But, there are not public transportation to go there.
So, I took a taxi and I spent a lot of money.
As a result, I moved to another house.
2주전 첫 토스 100점 맞았구요.
선생님 유튜브 영상 다 보고, 지난주 시험 140점 맞았어요. 감사합니다.
축하드립니다!!
아 "만점 받으려면 다시 태어나야한다"고 하시니 너무 슬프네요ㅜㅜ
ㅋㅋㅋㅋ.. 조크로 받아들여주시면 감사하겠습니다 :D
쌤 덕분에 3일 공부하고 본 첫 시험 레벨7 나왔어요ㅠㅠ 감사합니당
으앗 축하드립니다!!
선생님 강의들 너무 잘 보고 있습니다 ! 다름이 아니라 제가 적은 답변들이 이유가 되는지 한번 검토받고 싶은데요 답변 받아볼 수 있을까요?
i think the government needs to invest funding the most on Public transportation system
Of course, all of these options are important.
but most of all, nowadays the business environment is really tough so many people have problems with money
in the case of my city, they gave some money for me as trasportation fee, and it was really helpful
Second it is also good for the environment. as many people use the trasportation, the enviroment will be better.
for these reasons, i think the government needs to invest funding the most on public transportation system
네! 잘 만드셨습니다 :D
풀었던 문제 또 풀어보고 해도될까요??
네! 당연히 도움이 됩니다 :D
ㅠㅠㅠㅠ쌤 이번주 일요일 첫 시험이에요.... 금요일 라이브 들을게요.... 너무떨려요... 지금부터 모의고사만 계속 풀까요?
네! 문제풀이 많이 해보세요 ㅎㅎ
most of all, it is helpful to commuter .
most commuter waste their time on the road.
in the case of my friend, he lives near the station.
so he commute by subway.
as a result, he dont waste his time on the road and arrive at company eariler than other coworkers.
that is why i think so
이렇게 간결하게 말하려고 하는데 이렇게 말해도 되는지, 문법이 맞는지 모르겠어요 😭😭
하.. 오를줄 알앗는데 제자리점수네요 쌤 ㅠㅠ 놓치지 않을거에요 라이브방송
네! 조금만 힘내세요 :D
Most of all, students can concentrate on their study.
In my case, i couldn't get some support from my family.
So, I had to work as a part timer on weekdays to pay tuition fee.
So, I was tired always and there was not enough time to study.
As a result, i was not able to get good grades.
Most of all, it is possible to attract many people.
About 5 years ago, i visited a small city.
But it is difficult to take public transportation in the city.
So i couldn't visit some famous restaurant that i wanted to go.
As a result, i was not able to get good impression for this city.
Most of all, children can stay at a safe place.
When i was in childhood, my parents worked on weekdays.
So i went a child care center after school.
Also, they offered some food too.
As a result, i was able to stay at the center safely.
제이크 파트 5 27회
입장 & 이유
University tuition fee
더 많은 학생들이 대학교에서 공부할 수 있다.
-> More students can study at a university.
예시
배경
In the case of my best friend, he got a high grades in high school.
경과
but his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university tuition fee.
Fortunately, he received a full-time scholarship from the government.
결과
as a result, he was able to graduate university, and he is working at a famous company.
* 고수들의 TIP 셋 중 택일 유형에서 입장 문장을 만든 뒤
-> Of cours, all of these options are important. But most of all, -
* 긍정적인 대중의견은 비지니스에 도움이 된다. -> Positive opinions are helpful for business.
I think the government needs to invest funding the most on university tuition fee.
Of cours, all of these options are important. But most of all, More students can study at a university.
in the case of my best friend, he got a high grades in high school.
but his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university tuition fee.
Fortunately, he received a full-time scholarship from the government.
as a result, he was able to graduate university, and he is working at a famous company.
According to a recent news report, The majority of economy experts in korea said that They think the government needs to invest funding the most on university tuition fee.
Therefore I think this way.
1.Most of all, more studenmt can study on a university.
in the case of my best friend, he recieve high school grades in high school but, his family didn't have enough money to pay expensive university
but fortunately, he received full-the scholarship from government.
as a result, he was able to graduate university and he is working at a famous company nowdays.
2. most of all more child need the care service
in the case of my friend, he stay in the home when he was child, because his Parents worked.
but fortunately he received school care service. so parent are less worride about their child.
as a result, he enjoyed his school life.