I love the way you handled the reversed Ranger/Nerdly dynamics. Plus with him pretending to be mean with susie rather than berdly being smart with noelle. The dialogue is really well written
I love seeing how Ranger and Susie's backstory in this AU tied in to Lancer and Susie's backstory in the OG game (Both Ranger and Lancer wanted to show their universe's Susie how cool they were!) I wonder if Nerdly will try to charm Noelle with his "intelligence" and fail successfully that would be funny as all HELL
It’s amazing how likable you guys made your characters. Like, I would genuinely feel terrible petrifying Ranger on the Gravebuster Route, something a lot of people wouldn’t say about freezing Berdly in Snowgrave.
@@fernoagent8581 I absolutely would? I felt terrible about freezing Berdly but I did it, and I'd do the same here. Plus I don't like this guy nearly as much as Berdly, I prefer smug nerds over bullies.
не знаю почему, но я почему то уверены, что они найдут их в костюме горничной (типа, у королевы дворецкие, а у короля горничные) забудьте все что я сейчас сказали
The redesigns feel 50/50. Some are really good, like Ranger (I much prefer his "mini King" design over the older one) and Kueen, while others are much weaker (Nerdly) and Scampton (literally just old Scampton but with a barely noticeable different outfit.)
Lancer: so you are me as a lightner from another world? Ranger: yes!, and what about you darkner? (Lancer telling his backstory and how he met the lightners)
@@zhe6th215 I saying this because in this Au, The Soul (Us) is a Monster Soul with the extern part being Red and the Center being white, so my theory is that Asriel can talk and interact normally because he's not totally a vessel, he still have part of his soul, the white part.
I'm kinda excited and interested to see that now It's gonna feel more impactful cause Ranger is more like a kid who's just trying to fit in or be like their friend or something like that. Plus that'll kinda give Ranger what he wants by being "tough" to stand up to someone hurting his friend
you took away his fluff 😭😭 in all seriousness, while these sprites look a LOT cleaner, ranger having his hood influenced by qing was definitely my favorite part of his design. besides this, i do love the way swapped susie and ranger have the same relationship/ backstory between eachother that og susie and lancer had... peak fiction.
@@lasagna3289 i was talking about the older ranger- in the smart race replacement we got to see both him and qing, they both had 'tails' hanging off their hoods, kind of
This is a spectacular take on swaps, at first I didn't think that they were that good for eachother but after seeing stuff like this im convinced, great job!
Ranger sprites and past are very making sence. I was also thinking of that very same story about him, but this video is very complete! and Noelle does not make fun of Ranger like Susie in original deltarune does, which makes a lot of sense.
I am so happy to actually see these goobers in action. It seems like Ranger and Nerdly are going to have a little more of a dynamic than Berdly and Lancer, right?
I have been thinking so much about it and, maybe when i get the Chance to Make a fanmade about this au, im going to make my own Take to it, and make a very little Changes, (YOU ARE FILLED WITH THE POWER OF DECIDING😇 😈)
Well, more gameplay from DT is always welcome, my favorite part is Susie's sprite, it looks really cool... Although, to be honest, I'm not a big fan of Ranger's sprites, both the portrait (I prefer the previous one) and the Overworld sprite (I feel like it's missing something to hook me, maybe there is too much detail in such a small sprite.). I'm not a big fan of the music either, I don't feel it reaches the same level as the original theme. Anyway, these complaints are totally subjective, it's more my personal tastes than a real problem.
Just make a full game this point, i feel a good amount of the ch1 and ch2 story is so finished to the point where it is enough to base off of for a full fangame, plus most of this is original, but i also understand if the team doesn't want to.
There’s not a full fangame, but there is an Scampton fight from 2 years back that’s pretty outdated, and a Junkil fight coming up some time this year. I don’t think there’s plans for a full game though, especially since deltᴀrune itself isn’t a finished game yet.
Okay so y'all handled the swapping of the bff duos absurdly well holy shit Also uh, not sure if I'm remembering since it's been a while, but does this mean the puzzles are swapped as well? Suit puzzles and elevators in chapter 2, teacup rides in 1?
Oh. I never thought about the potential parallels between Susie trying to kill Lancer in chapter 1 and Noelle being forced to kill Berdly in chapter 2... I wonder what would Drive Noelle to such violence towards her friend...! Edit: Berdly, not Susie
![[DELTARUNE: Chapter Rewritten] BIG BANG](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/FsfTB1X-tes/mqdefault.jpg)
I like to imagine Asriel has a Ferb type of personality. Doesn't talk much, but when he does, it's always fire.
I didn't know that asriel could talk at asll even
Charkis: Hey Asriel,I know what we're gonna do today!
@HydrapleMortar64 he talked in the Prankster's Pursuit video
I love the way you handled the reversed Ranger/Nerdly dynamics. Plus with him pretending to be mean with susie rather than berdly being smart with noelle. The dialogue is really well written
Thank you !!! < script writer
@@rothenotmale4749 Ro the very Peak writer
one might say "well chapter rewritten"
@@rothenotmale4749 Thank you so much for your hard work, it's awesome watching the results of many people-like-you determination and talent
I love seeing how Ranger and Susie's backstory in this AU tied in to Lancer and Susie's backstory in the OG game (Both Ranger and Lancer wanted to show their universe's Susie how cool they were!)
I wonder if Nerdly will try to charm Noelle with his "intelligence" and fail successfully that would be funny as all HELL
Also Noelle in the corner be like: It should've been me
It’s amazing how likable you guys made your characters. Like, I would genuinely feel terrible petrifying Ranger on the Gravebuster Route, something a lot of people wouldn’t say about freezing Berdly in Snowgrave.
Don't let Sum see this
I still saw people feel bad for freezing berdly but yeah i get what you mean
You wouldnt petrify this goof ball
@@fernoagent8581 I absolutely would? I felt terrible about freezing Berdly but I did it, and I'd do the same here. Plus I don't like this guy nearly as much as Berdly, I prefer smug nerds over bullies.
You actually hate Berdly ? I like his Smart Gamer Persona . Plus he's a Funny Guy
@@fernoagent8581i would not freeze the smart teen to !
I bet on my soul that Charkis is wearing a Greenish-Blue suit with a red bowtie when the 4 find them
не знаю почему, но я почему то уверены, что они найдут их в костюме горничной
(типа, у королевы дворецкие, а у короля горничные)
забудьте все что я сейчас сказали
@Наглаяпчела D:
@Наглаяпчела D:
@Наглаяпчела D:
@Наглаяпчела :3
RANGER REDESIGN IS PEAK - Signed, NotRanger
RANGER IS PEAK - With awesomeness, Ranger
(I'm on the team guys this is canon)
@@SumWunWurs it's almost like ranger was pretending to be sum wun wurs than he really is...
The redesigns feel 50/50. Some are really good, like Ranger (I much prefer his "mini King" design over the older one) and Kueen, while others are much weaker (Nerdly) and Scampton (literally just old Scampton but with a barely noticeable different outfit.)
hey you're the guy who corrected me about that not being Lancer-
Seeing Nerdly interact with Ranger is something i didnt know i needed
It's OK Ranger I still love you
Lancer: so you are me as a lightner from another world?
Ranger: yes!, and what about you darkner?
(Lancer telling his backstory and how he met the lightners)
I like how Asriel talks unlike Kris but is still not talkative
Y'know, bro stills with a part of his original soul, so he's not totally a vessel/puppet.
@@P3dr0m4n03l i don't know much about this au, what's the deal with asriel's soul?
@@zhe6th215 I saying this because in this Au, The Soul (Us) is a Monster Soul with the extern part being Red and the Center being white, so my theory is that Asriel can talk and interact normally because he's not totally a vessel, he still have part of his soul, the white part.
Killing ranger in the Gravebuster route is going to hurt a lot since Ranger isn't annoying at all unlike a frozen chicken nugget
Berdly was never annoying
I'm kinda excited and interested to see that now
It's gonna feel more impactful cause Ranger is more like a kid who's just trying to fit in or be like their friend or something like that. Plus that'll kinda give Ranger what he wants by being "tough" to stand up to someone hurting his friend
It frooze me when i freezed the Nerdy Teenage Feather
One of the best (re)written dialogues i've seen of this AU
you took away his fluff 😭😭 in all seriousness, while these sprites look a LOT cleaner, ranger having his hood influenced by qing was definitely my favorite part of his design.
besides this, i do love the way swapped susie and ranger have the same relationship/ backstory between eachother that og susie and lancer had... peak fiction.
What do you mean about his hood being influenced by Qing? That's just what it looks like in the original game.
@@lasagna3289 i was talking about the older ranger- in the smart race replacement we got to see both him and qing, they both had 'tails' hanging off their hoods, kind of
This is a spectacular take on swaps, at first I didn't think that they were that good for eachother but after seeing stuff like this im convinced, great job!
3:00 Damm it yes
Oh hey, I was right. Petrification and freezing are indeed swapped
Ranger sprites and past are very making sence. I was also thinking of that very same story about him, but this video is very complete!
and Noelle does not make fun of Ranger like Susie in original deltarune does, which makes a lot of sense.
Susie and Ranger's story is so cute... That face tho...03:00
03:12 of course he does
Ranger but yes
@NotLancer2018I wouldn't have noticed the typo if it wasn't for your comment, thank you!!
wake up ranger fanclub, peak just dropped :fire:
Hello Jo.
Hello, Not Ranger.
this is absolute cinema
Peachboy is crazy 💀
Ariel Text Timestamps
0:26
2:48
Ranga & Ned3 in the same room, how poetic!
🗿
Ranger.
take two!
Hampter Mode
Bringle fan spotted
Here's a free Bringle can:
🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠🍠
@FNAFman1983 Brongle.
🟩
new rewritten just dropped 🔥🔥🔥🔥
2:59 Kino
I love Ranger's voice
That's a voice blip, not his actual voice but okay
@NotLancer2018 I... my bad, forgot to specify
@@floweytheflower5261 technically counts as a voice though
I am so happy to actually see these goobers in action. It seems like Ranger and Nerdly are going to have a little more of a dynamic than Berdly and Lancer, right?
they changed ranger from a racoon to a hamster
Ah, so that explains who did the scene when I asked at that one QnA...
I have been thinking so much about it and, maybe when i get the Chance to Make a fanmade about this au, im going to make my own Take to it, and make a very little Changes,
(YOU ARE FILLED WITH THE POWER OF DECIDING😇 😈)
This is like berdlys childhood but different
2:58 DAMN THAT FACE GOT REMADE SO MUCH BETTER NOW😂
maybe he is just squinting his eyes too much..
Even in the Rewritten world, Susie is still threatening.
AZZY TALKS
he talked in the Prankster's Pursuit video
Damn he didn't get kicked out of his house like I wanted now it's only a 9/10 au
It's for the better
This writting is Fire
Well, more gameplay from DT is always welcome, my favorite part is Susie's sprite, it looks really cool...
Although, to be honest, I'm not a big fan of Ranger's sprites, both the portrait (I prefer the previous one) and the Overworld sprite (I feel like it's missing something to hook me, maybe there is too much detail in such a small sprite.). I'm not a big fan of the music either, I don't feel it reaches the same level as the original theme.
Anyway, these complaints are totally subjective, it's more my personal tastes than a real problem.
that was such a nice scene guys good job 🔥
I love him I love him he's the best and he does not deserve to be killed but will be regardless
So cool.
"Ohhhh I see, I opposed people’s views" 🤫🤫🤫
N i c e . 👌
I can't wait to the game
A game is not being made.
Nooooooooooooooooo
hampter2
Just make a full game this point, i feel a good amount of the ch1 and ch2 story is so finished to the point where it is enough to base off of for a full fangame, plus most of this is original, but i also understand if the team doesn't want to.
It’s not able to be done just yet, we don’t know anything about future chapters and certain things just couldn’t work out
@NotLancer2018 makes sense, also i like how susie and ranger basically became best friends because of a ham sandwhich
Oh shit, Asriel talks. Always has the same expression though.
Asriella*
he talked in the Prankster's Pursuit video
Nah this is getting too zesty 2:31
I've been watching these videos and I'd like to know something, is this a fan game or something?
I would like to play it
Unfortunately these are singular coded cutscenes, although a Junkil Redux battle Fangame is coming out
There’s not a full fangame, but there is an Scampton fight from 2 years back that’s pretty outdated, and a Junkil fight coming up some time this year. I don’t think there’s plans for a full game though, especially since deltᴀrune itself isn’t a finished game yet.
Ok, since Lancer turned to stone, what does nerdly turn into
Ice and Stone swap, so Nerdly turns to an ice statue and in Gravebuster, Ranger gets turned to Stone
Be honest guys. What do you think about the Ranger redesign?
As the number one Ranger fan I love it
as the number 1000th ranger fan, I think its chapter midwritten /j
@@The9thagent you remind me of someone... A distant memory...
I don't like it so much
good
😮😮😮
Okay so y'all handled the swapping of the bff duos absurdly well holy shit
Also uh, not sure if I'm remembering since it's been a while, but does this mean the puzzles are swapped as well? Suit puzzles and elevators in chapter 2, teacup rides in 1?
I have no clue but chapter 2 is still cyber themed so it won't be the suits
Deltarune if it was good
Ranger is the best character btw
@NotLancer2018 fr
IS THIS A TV GIRL REFERENCE
DOES HE GET TO KEEP THE MOTORCYCLE?
yeah
А оно является заменой к чему?
Флешбеку бердли
@viput69 а что там делает нёрдли
Если нёрдли это замена лансеру
@@viput69 а ой
@@viput69 я забыл что Лансер был во 2 чаптере
Oh. I never thought about the potential parallels between Susie trying to kill Lancer in chapter 1 and Noelle being forced to kill Berdly in chapter 2...
I wonder what would Drive Noelle to such violence towards her friend...!
Edit: Berdly, not Susie
Noelle never kills susie?
The snow grave equivalent is susie killing lancer
It wouldn't be Noelle killing Susie though? It would be Susie killing Lancer.
@One_step_above_is_here Whoops, misspoke! I meany Berdly. Thanks for pointing that out
how there are one lancer like berdly and one lancer?
rander was redesigned
Berdly and Lancer are swapped. So Lancer is a lightner in this AU, and Berdly is a darkner.
So, ranger is not a racoon anymore?
Nah he Hampter
GOD ALMIGHTY, how much These people are gonna Take to Release it already!?, Can we at least See How the GRAVEBUSTER ARE GOING TO BE LIKE?
We must make a world before we petrify it
@ChapterRewritten Take your time, and also...(keep the project clean and unique), okay?, i Loved the Au so much
@@ChapterRewritten Don’t petrify ranger I’m begging you he doesn’t deserve it
@NotLancer2018 Deserving is not the reasoning. An obstacle must be overcame.
@NotLancer2018 what?, why are you Here agian
Why are all the character sprites in the elevator so ass? 😭 Other than that this is peak, but fire whoever did those, ffs.
o7
Yeah, can't believe they hired sum wun wurs that the other spriters, should've hired sum wun with more skill
Was about to throw verbal hands before I saw who you were
Ranger my beloved ♠️🫶 really nice redesign it’s definitely grown on me
Hampter