Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
This film was pulse pounding, seriously especially at the end when I had no Idea what was going to happen. It was freaking me out big time, but the ending was awesome, it couldn't have ended any better 👏🎬 They didn't even speak in this movie, and they didn't have to, it was perfect and a huge success. I would highly recommend it to anyone who hasn't seen it yet and I would definitely give it a 10/10 👌👍
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Horrifying. This plays on everyone’s fears: hit from behind, wakes up tied to a chair, gagged, tortured, dead body close by. There’s something for everyone. Nice camera angles. Good work.
Hi just finished the film, I understand that the main character is smart and calm but I just wish their was more scenes of him trying to calm down and dealing with his fear, with everything that had happened to him. Also, the ending in which he swung the bat should've had a better sound effect as it sounded like he hit the attacker very lightly. Overall 7/10! I enjoyed the film, great work!
That was really good. The dude sure is calm and collected. After getting knocked in the head with a hammer, getting a tooth pulled out, seeing someone else dead beside him that I assume was his mother or relative(?) and ultimately cracking that guys skull open…I definitely don’t know how I’d react. Great job to all involved!
im going to say well done .cat saves the day lol well done in all aspects .in the bat action it needed more emotion harder swings he lost a loved 1 and was tortured maybe scream of rage as he beat the killer to death
I imagine torture is one of the most difficult scenarios for an actor to play, and I love that we were left with no understanding of what his motivations were. The lack of dialogue was such a great choice, and the attention to detail in the sound design is fantastic. But after the final scene wrapped that other actor would be cleaning my carpets after dragging his muddy boots through my house. 😁 I'm off to watch the rest of your shorts now.
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
This was good but I have to admit at the end I thought for some reason he was beating the cat up with that baseball bat but I knew Lewis couldn't have been that evil but instead it was the perpetrator he was beating up I guess it's safe to say that poor Lewis sister is a gonna dead six feet under ashes to ashes dust to dust I know I'm bad but I'm just saying
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Haha agreed, we liked the idea that he was an ordinary guy that was in too deep. He was trying to be this scary intimidating cool killer when in reality he makes mistakes and is feeling the pressure of the whole situation. Thank you for watching appreciate your comment
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Yes, hit them again! Don’t bonk them then leave! Yay Dude! Yay Kitty! I know he grabbed the cat and left, straight to the cop shop, a sensible final guy!
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Thank you so much, means alot. We’ve had some great feedback recently. We currently have another horror in the works and do plan to release it soon. Seeing the support is really nice and makes us want to keep making more!
Jordan Fan， Prophet of Environment, 范楚漳。環境先知: Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Hard to call it a horror film. The acting's really underwhelming. There's no sense of fear or struggle. Especially at the end with the bat, those swings were so light. Just feels like the false reality isn't there, and that the character knows he's in a film. This can be in line with reality, but sometimes reality is more tense than it is scary. Story's not necessarily bad, but also nothing special. I think what could really help these films is a much better ambience, and well implemented film theories. A better soundboard would be neat too.
It wasn't awful awful. I liked it. Good points made. I'm sure its only coming from wanting them to develop in a positive way. To pile on, I feel like there were far too many insert shots. I feel it was a little bit of an unbalance in areas with the insert shots. But none the less I can see a lot of good talent in this project
Thank u, appreciate both comments and take on all points. We completely agree at some parts we rushed them and should of taken more care when handling certain aspects of the film. But we were also very limited by budget. I think story wise its tricky when making a film solely for RUclips, especially when we are trying to make them on quite a consistent basis. Thank u for watching the film though, hopefully we can take on board some of these points and improve on some of these issues. Any support is always really appreciated
@@ActNaturalFilms That's fair, mainly wanted to give some constructive criticism since it's hard to come by nowadays - even if I don't know much about film theory. Definitely keep up the good work though
@@ActNaturalFilms We all start somewhere and if this is close to the beginning of your film making journey? Then I believe you all are talented and will keep continuing to progress in a tremendous way. If you are on a low budget? Does that include the camera you used? What kind did you use and how much?
Best supporting actor goes to the cat. 🤖
I’m going to pass this comment on to Maggie the cat. She’ll be thrilled! Hopefully she remembers to mention us in her Oscar acceptance speech! ;)
@@ActNaturalFilms I'm glad he became the victor
so true
An absolutely purr-fect performance 😸😸😸
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Smooth , good tension .
He fed the cat so she helped. My respect for cats raised after watching the show thanku kitty for saving the guy😂
Teamwork 🤝
I was voting for the protagonist the whole time and ye Kitty! I FREAKING LOVE IT ALL!!!!🔥😎😱😽
Thank you, glad you enjoyed! More to come!!
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
This film was pulse pounding, seriously especially at the end when I had no Idea what was going to happen. It was freaking me out big time, but the ending was awesome, it couldn't have ended any better 👏🎬 They didn't even speak in this movie, and they didn't have to, it was perfect and a huge success. I would highly recommend it to anyone who hasn't seen it yet and I would definitely give it a 10/10 👌👍
Thank you so much for ur wonderful comment, glad you enjoyed!
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Horrifying. This plays on everyone’s fears: hit from behind, wakes up tied to a chair, gagged, tortured, dead body close by. There’s something for everyone. Nice camera angles. Good work.
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed!
Hi just finished the film, I understand that the main character is smart and calm but I just wish their was more scenes of him trying to calm down and dealing with his fear, with everything that had happened to him. Also, the ending in which he swung the bat should've had a better sound effect as it sounded like he hit the attacker very lightly. Overall 7/10! I enjoyed the film, great work!
I loved it! Glad the good guy won this time, and kitty helped!
Thank you for watching, glad you enjoyed!
That was really good. The dude sure is calm and collected. After getting knocked in the head with a hammer, getting a tooth pulled out, seeing someone else dead beside him that I assume was his mother or relative(?) and ultimately cracking that guys skull open…I definitely don’t know how I’d react. Great job to all involved!
Hes just built different 😎 thank you for the comment, we really appreciate the support
im going to say well done .cat saves the day lol well done in all aspects .in the bat action it needed more emotion harder swings he lost a loved 1 and was tortured maybe scream of rage as he beat the killer to death
Glad to finally see a good guy win in the end!
Enjoying this one with a bowl of chili beans nachos and Hot chocolate... Thanks
Hell of a combo! Thanks for watching ;)
Beautiful house 🏡
I imagine torture is one of the most difficult scenarios for an actor to play, and I love that we were left with no understanding of what his motivations were. The lack of dialogue was such a great choice, and the attention to detail in the sound design is fantastic. But after the final scene wrapped that other actor would be cleaning my carpets after dragging his muddy boots through my house. 😁 I'm off to watch the rest of your shorts now.
Legend! Thank you so much for the comment, really glad you enjoyed it. More shorts to come, thank you for your support
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Loved the ending, you go Maggie! Excellent film!
This was good but I have to admit at the end I thought for some reason he was beating the cat up with that baseball bat but I knew Lewis couldn't have been that evil but instead it was the perpetrator he was beating up I guess it's safe to say that poor Lewis sister is a gonna dead six feet under ashes to ashes dust to dust I know I'm bad but I'm just saying
4:55 "Don't Scream, She Did".😨😨
This was awesome black cats are lucky then
Seems like this one was! Thanks for watching :)
Great stuff, keep em coming
Thank you! More to come soon!
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Nice movie! 😍
Horeee,,,,,, penjahatnya modarrrr ☺️🤗
Love these n sharing them
Thank you so much for supporting the channel, glad your enjoying them! More to come
Made me jump!
Thanks for watching Mario! Glad you liked it :)
Great movie!
Thanks Joe! Glad you enjoyed it :)
❤great watch!
Well done! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🙌🏻🌹
Blessings to you and your viewers~💫☃️
🌛🌹🌜
Thank you! Much appreciated!
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Unbelievable work boys
Thank you mate, appreciate your support as always! More to come!
Best one yet, so well shot!
Thanks mate! Much appreciated :)
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Does no one EVER run for it?!!!
💚💙💜💛💖
It didn’t hit me till the very end that they were still at the same house.
That torturous killer needed better organization. The first part definitely had a soul-gripping scene.
Haha agreed, we liked the idea that he was an ordinary guy that was in too deep. He was trying to be this scary intimidating cool killer when in reality he makes mistakes and is feeling the pressure of the whole situation. Thank you for watching appreciate your comment
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Awesome job Kitty 🐈⬛ Cat!!!
😂
This was great!!!
Thank you!!!
Good Kitty! LOL ... Major Hostel vibes.
Awesome!!! It really got me. Really amazing work!!!
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed!
Very good, I liked it a lot. Nicely done all around.
Thanks! I Enjoyed It! 👏👍🏆
Glad to hear it! Thanks for watching!
@@ActNaturalFilms Your Welcome!
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Aw this film was great! And had to have been made by a cat lover! ❤
Hey nice work! Looks great
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Yes, hit them again! Don’t bonk them then leave! Yay Dude! Yay Kitty! I know he grabbed the cat and left, straight to the cop shop, a sensible final guy!
Loved this🤩🎉 Im your new Subscriber!!!
Awesome!
Fabulous as always! 😁😁
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
That story sounds creepy.🙂😲😞His poor sister.😞
cat, the saviour
Not the hero we deserved but the hero we needed
I could barely sleep after this film but still it is good
Happy ending ✌️
Its really scared my Great done
Good movie xx
well done!
Thank you!
The cat 👏
1:11 Check Maggie's Indoors & See Ya Tuesday.
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always threw every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Who say the black cat is a bad Luke ❤
Excellent work! The only thing, may be would be better to have him tied up 8:05 on his bare feet
Thank you! And yeah completely agree
6:51 'Wait Here... So Unprofessional'.
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
For once someone actually survives in one of these shorts!😄😅
The cat saved him!
@@ActNaturalFilms I know! Best ending ever!
@@ActNaturalFilms You should really make more like this it's awesome!
Thank you so much, means alot. We’ve had some great feedback recently. We currently have another horror in the works and do plan to release it soon. Seeing the support is really nice and makes us want to keep making more!
Jordan Fan，
Prophet of Environment,
范楚漳。環境先知:
Go so far. For now , we know the assailant was a dentist, heavy breather, excellent “writer” always fond of writing in capital letters, a litter bug who always thro every tools he will be using on the floor/ground first. Agree? Make sense?
Hard to call it a horror film. The acting's really underwhelming. There's no sense of fear or struggle. Especially at the end with the bat, those swings were so light. Just feels like the false reality isn't there, and that the character knows he's in a film. This can be in line with reality, but sometimes reality is more tense than it is scary. Story's not necessarily bad, but also nothing special. I think what could really help these films is a much better ambience, and well implemented film theories. A better soundboard would be neat too.
It wasn't awful awful. I liked it. Good points made. I'm sure its only coming from wanting them to develop in a positive way. To pile on, I feel like there were far too many insert shots. I feel it was a little bit of an unbalance in areas with the insert shots. But none the less I can see a lot of good talent in this project
Thank u, appreciate both comments and take on all points. We completely agree at some parts we rushed them and should of taken more care when handling certain aspects of the film. But we were also very limited by budget. I think story wise its tricky when making a film solely for RUclips, especially when we are trying to make them on quite a consistent basis. Thank u for watching the film though, hopefully we can take on board some of these points and improve on some of these issues. Any support is always really appreciated
@@ActNaturalFilms That's fair, mainly wanted to give some constructive criticism since it's hard to come by nowadays - even if I don't know much about film theory. Definitely keep up the good work though
@cassiusgolgotha2347 thank you, honestly most of ur points we agree on
@@ActNaturalFilms We all start somewhere and if this is close to the beginning of your film making journey? Then I believe you all are talented and will keep continuing to progress in a tremendous way. If you are on a low budget? Does that include the camera you used? What kind did you use and how much?
?
I lost interest in this film very quickly.
How was he in the armoire? It had shelves and was full. Other than that good film.