I loved how you explained how to make an essay. You have a wonderful gift of showing your audience how to do a great essay and draft. I currently attend a university, and I feel so fortunate to see your video. Thank you for making me feel so positive when I do my essays from now on!
This is the best I've seen so far. I didn't understand this for an assignment but watching this video has made me understand it far more than I expected. You're such a great teacher. Thanks so much for this. ❤❤❤
Very informative, teaches every aspect of essay writing. If you could make a pdf of the definitions of terms like hook, thesis statement, topic sentence as you spoke in the video. It would be a great help as well. Thank you.
this video gave me so much helpful information on how to write essay, now i understand that when we write essay we have to avoid repeating sentence, and repeating words or phrases too many times. I also learn how to make an essay outline, it's helpfully teach how we figure out points that we will write down. This video is so helpful.
This is a fantastic video! I taught writing for a number of years (and will be doing so this semester), and I explained this just as you are doing here. The difference with me is that I didn't put the outline and draft side-by-side. I love how you have done this, and I plan to link your video to my Canvas course. Indeed, fantastic. Thank you!!
I had to go back to your video, and I just noticed that you gave us the two PDFs😁 to use to make notes. Thank you so much! I did very well on my outline from your example. Thank you so very much!!! 😀😊
I did subscribe to your channel three years ago because your content helped me back then in my first year of college! I now got this video notification and remembered... Thank you so much professor, I will keep my subscription to this channel though my level in English is now advanced because I never forget how I improve over time!
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Really awesome,mis. The way you elaborated reminded me my own classes when I was a student. But a teacher now. Request you to share your essay writing works more on different topics in details Regards
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This is the best and most amazing video presentation of an essay I have ever seen in my life. Very helpful and step-by-step presentation. I would like to know if you have a video of the ged RLA argumentative essay. On how to evaluate conflicting claims and judge evidence. Because I'm struggling in this field. I passed All subjects. Math,Science and Social studies. But the RLA extended response. I failed 7 or 8 times I believe. Then I stopped taking the test. It's almost 2 & 1/2 years. I wish I can find video like this one. This video was awesome. Thanks God bless you.
Thank you so much for your comment. I don't have a video about the RLA extended response. I found these videos by the company that creates (and scores) the GED. These look really helpful: ged.com/about_test/test_subjects/language_arts/extended_response/ This document is also from the company that creates the GED - these pages are helpful: page 4 (RLA suggested structure), 7 (example prompt), 8 (example essay), and 9 (scoring for that essay). Here's the link: ged.com/wp-content/uploads/TfT-What-Students-Need-to-Know-GED-RLA-Extended-Response-Workbook-1.pdf Don't give up! You can definitely pass that test.
@EnglishUnits Hi, can you make past regents exam videos? It would be helpful for me, especially the essays. It would also benefit other students like me who are preparing for regents. Sorry to bother you but this is just a request. Can you make videos on text analysis and argumentative essays?
Can you please help us with the supporting details because the essays are meant to be like 500 words and more if you can and thank you it really helped me
For each body paragraph you labeled a “conclusion” is that the same thing as the reasoning? For example the CER claim evidence and reasoning. Thank you so much for your time
Hello, well, the essay in this video wasn't written to demonstrate the CER format. But I think I still understand what you are trying to ask! The conclusion isn't the same as reasoning. The conclusion comes after reasoning. The conclusion summarizes or paraphrases (or both) what you've explained in the claim, evidence, and reasoning.
It depends on your assignment. This video shows a basic essay. More advanced papers, such as research papers, that will be many pages would use a similar format but have additional requirements (like a cover page, citations, sources page, etc).
I am almost 50 year's old, trying to write an essay.Thank you for your helping people like me.
Can you do a sentences video on how to expand and support your ideas?
I loved how you explained how to make an essay. You have a wonderful gift of showing your audience how to do a great essay and draft. I currently attend a university, and I feel so fortunate to see your video. Thank you for making me feel so positive when I do my essays from now on!
This is the best I've seen so far. I didn't understand this for an assignment but watching this video has made me understand it far more than I expected.
You're such a great teacher.
Thanks so much for this.
❤❤❤
Very informative, teaches every aspect of essay writing. If you could make a pdf of the definitions of terms like hook, thesis statement, topic sentence as you spoke in the video. It would be a great help as well. Thank you.
this video gave me so much helpful information on how to write essay, now i understand that when we write essay we have to avoid repeating sentence, and repeating words or phrases too many times. I also learn how to make an essay outline, it's helpfully teach how we figure out points that we will write down. This video is so helpful.
Thank you. This is the best example I have found because it does not assume you know why. Thank you for going beyond just what do and how.
A good teacher explains complex question clearly in simple way. Thank you!
It really helped me since my teacher cant teach like you ❤
Thank for making this video! Now I understand what to do and can start my essay..
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This is a fantastic video! I taught writing for a number of years (and will be doing so this semester), and I explained this just as you are doing here. The difference with me is that I didn't put the outline and draft side-by-side. I love how you have done this, and I plan to link your video to my Canvas course. Indeed, fantastic. Thank you!!
Thank you so much for your comment. I hope you have a great semester!
I had to go back to your video, and I just noticed that you gave us the two PDFs😁 to use to make notes. Thank you so much! I did very well on my outline from your example. Thank you so very much!!! 😀😊
Thank you for uploading this helpful video. I just started an English comp class and am doing some research. This video is straight to the point.
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I did subscribe to your channel three years ago because your content helped me back then in my first year of college!
I now got this video notification and remembered... Thank you so much professor, I will keep my subscription to this channel though my level in English is now advanced because I never forget how I improve over time!
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Good after noon dear professor ! Super and super lesson . Frankly, good explanation , presentation, and understanding ... Welcome to Morocco if possible ... Thanks a lot ....
I appreciate this tutorial. Very clear and effective. Thank you! 💖
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Really awesome,mis.
The way you elaborated reminded me my own classes when I was a student.
But a teacher now.
Request you to share your essay writing works more on different topics in details
Regards
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Thank you for this video. Did not know where to start. Now I’m more confident.
Hi madam i am from srilanka
Your videos are really helps me To get idea about the essays
I am am an university student
So pls do more videos about english
And how to write a proper sentences pls medam
Thanks for making me understand better.
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This is the best and most amazing video presentation of an essay I have ever seen in my life. Very helpful and step-by-step presentation. I would like to know if you have a video of the ged RLA argumentative essay. On how to evaluate conflicting claims and judge evidence. Because I'm struggling in this field. I passed All subjects. Math,Science and Social studies. But the RLA extended response. I failed 7 or 8 times I believe. Then I stopped taking the test. It's almost 2 & 1/2 years. I wish I can find video like this one. This video was awesome. Thanks God bless you.
Thank you so much for your comment. I don't have a video about the RLA extended response. I found these videos by the company that creates (and scores) the GED. These look really helpful:
ged.com/about_test/test_subjects/language_arts/extended_response/
This document is also from the company that creates the GED - these pages are helpful: page 4 (RLA suggested structure), 7 (example prompt), 8 (example essay), and 9 (scoring for that essay). Here's the link:
ged.com/wp-content/uploads/TfT-What-Students-Need-to-Know-GED-RLA-Extended-Response-Workbook-1.pdf
Don't give up! You can definitely pass that test.
even i am a psy . but this video was the beast which i had ever seen .
thank you for making this simple and easy to learn I do not feel like pulling my hair out now lol
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@EnglishUnits Hi, can you make past regents exam videos? It would be helpful for me, especially the essays. It would also benefit other students like me who are preparing for regents. Sorry to bother you but this is just a request. Can you make videos on text analysis and argumentative essays?
Excellent tutorial. Thank you.
I really need
help with
English since
I’m retaking it this semester
so I hope this will help me
With this writing an essay is much easier 😌😌😌😌
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Thanks for your help🙂
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A new video!
Good explanation
Can you show us how to write an argumentative essay?
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Thanks for this teaching
Long life and prosperity
Could you tell four types of paragraphs and four types of essays?
Thank u sooo much
It was really helpful
What about the refuting paragraph??
Thank you ❤
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Can you please help us with the supporting details because the essays are meant to be like 500 words and more if you can and thank you it really helped me
This video gives a bit more information about supporting details:
ruclips.net/video/IYYGVoiiq_U/видео.html
If the a paragraph starts
with space, do we need to have an empty line or instead for the next paragraph?
Use the same format for all paragraphs in your essay. So, if the first one is indented (starts with a space), all paragraphs should be indented.
thanks.
Thank you for helping us 🫶🏻💖💖
Do you have a video that converts this draft into an actual essay?
thanks
Thank you very much....can I have the writing material to use them at the classroom
Hello, links to pdfs are in the description of this video. Students can use the pdfs with and after the video.
For each body paragraph you labeled a “conclusion” is that the same thing as the reasoning? For example the CER claim evidence and reasoning. Thank you so much for your time
Hello, well, the essay in this video wasn't written to demonstrate the CER format. But I think I still understand what you are trying to ask! The conclusion isn't the same as reasoning. The conclusion comes after reasoning. The conclusion summarizes or paraphrases (or both) what you've explained in the claim, evidence, and reasoning.
Hi it was interesting and deliberate
Thank you!!
Excellent ❤❤
Thanks sooo much
Should we write the hook with the same line or separate from starting an essay?
There is an example essay in this video that shows how the hook should look in the essay. It should be in the paragraph as the first sentence.
So, it only remains to put together the 5 paragraphs and that's it? Pls help
It depends on your assignment. This video shows a basic essay. More advanced papers, such as research papers, that will be many pages would use a similar format but have additional requirements (like a cover page, citations, sources page, etc).