IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Maps
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6:15 Structure
6:41 Introduction
8:29 Example Overview
11:44 Examiner tips
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I don´t understand what "key features" in this specific task actually means. To my way of thinking, key features are a few important aspects of the task itself, but not EVERYTHING I see. What I do not want is to achieve less score because I" have not summarized the information correctly"... Oh man, how I hate this test..
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The two maps show the outlook of the town center of Islip in its current state and what it would look like after redevelopment.
Overall, the developers have decided to expand the town center in order to accommodate more settlers. The significant changes are the dual carriageway introduced that goes round the center, using up the countryside space up north and the two new housing schemes.
Currently, Islip town center only consist of a main-road in between two lines of shop, a park, a school, housing areas on the south and middle as well as the earlier mentioned countryside far north.
According to the proposal, only one line of shops, the school and housing area to the south will be preserved. The main road will be remodeled to a pedestrian way leading to the entrance of a new housing area now occupying the space of the demolished line of shops. Also situated in this area will be a new car park, a bus station and a shopping center. To the south, an additional housing scheme will be introduced which will absorb part of the park space.
Regardless of the new carriageway built, entry and exit to the town remain at the eastern and western ends, although, there will be a slight shift downwards towards the south. This is to enable usage of a small entry from the eastern part of the carriageway to the new housing scheme northward.
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12000 or 12,000 which one is correct???
Is car park or
car-park which is correct?
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Overall, it is shown a significant change in the central area like the main road being transformed into an area for pedestrians only. The dual carriage way will serve as a mean of transportation for the drivers. Interestingly, the shopping area will expand and will have a new shopping center, bus station and new housings.
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Overall, it is clear that the town will be restructured as new services will be added to replace some, except for some shops and housing area. Also, there will be a road extension in the town centre.
great bro
Thank you for this I now have all the confidence in maps than before.
it is my version for introduction and overview. can you check and give your feedbacks?
The diagrams demonstrate the current aspects of Southside as well as plans for its modernization.
Overall, it is clear that, as planned, current buildings will be demolished in order to make way for new amenities and stores at the nearby car park and green space, or some of them will be extended or redeveloped.
The two maps depicts the current Islip town center and the proposed development.
Currently, Islip town center consist of shops which can be located at the south of country side, where the main road is located inbetween. The housing is found at the middle of school and park.
It is clear that the proposed plan is the construction of a dual carriageway that encirles the town center. Shops that are located at the North side will make way for bus station, shopping centers, car park and the allocation of new housing. Meanwhile, the main road will be for pedestrians only in the plan. Park will be reconstructed where new housing will be located east of old houses.
Thanks for the lesson Alex. Here is my overview please do have a look.
Overall, it is clear that the centre of the town of Islip will be expanded northward towards the countryside to give way to a bus station,a car park,a larger shopping center and a new residential area.A dual Carriageway will go round the town and the main road running through the town will become the only pedestrian.
Hi alex,
Overview:
Overall, there will be huge changes in the layout of the town centre involving mainly the connection of the roads and the expansion of the shops up to the countryside. They will also make more housing projects in the vicinity while they keep the school and the park in the same location.
is this good enough?
Overview:
Overall, the plan is to enhance the road network while adding transport facilities and new housing into nearby green space to raise residential area. The greater focus is to shift north shops into a shopping mall to save more land.
Two maps demonstrate the current state and future development plans for town centre of Islip.
Overall, these changes have added areas and more housing and some expansion of the roads with more features for pedestrians.
Currently the town centre has a main road (which is accompanied with two large stores), two housing area, a school and an area for a medium sized park.
As for the final state of Islip town that have been shown on the second map there are some clear visuals that describes the extended sections as well as demolished ones. The most noticeable change is the road splitting into two separate ways that covers the centre town from west to east. The previous location of the main road would be taken by an area for pedestrian's only. The north shopping place would be replaced by 4 different sections: a bus station, one shopping centre, parking space and the remaining would be used for new housing. Also there would be another new housing in the south which is in cornered by the new carriageway. With the new dual carriageway the park would reduce it's size due to lack of space.
The two maps depict the current state and the proposed rebuilding plan of Islip city centre.
Overall, it is obvious that the main emphasis of the exercise is to extend the town into the nearby countryside, to modernise it into an estate, and to expand its road into a dual carriage that will surround the city for easy movement.
Currently, the town comprises a main road running east to west, branching off at both ends towards the south. A row of shops is seen clustering on each side of the road. Towards the north, is a village whereas in the southern part, is a school, a park, and a pair of housing units.
In the future, the main road will be reduced to a walkway while a double carriage way will be constructed at the periphery of the city with the exits maintained at the east and west directions. The northern shop cluster row will be demolished to give way for the construction of a bus station, a shopping centre, and a car park. More houses will be built on each of the city to compliment the existing ones. The school and the park will maintain their original position although the size of the later will be reduced.
Awesome write-up
wow... amazingly articulated.
You are using super vocabulary , you will get good score bro , all the best bro
But can we mention that it will be a city center? As its no where mention in the topic or maps
Nice but it's the plan of a shopping mall not the whole town.
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The two maps represent the current and proposed structure for development in the centre of a small town named Islip.
Overall, the proposed plan shows a slight expansion of the town towards the nearby countryside in the north as transport necessities, a shopping centre and new housing plans will be added which will be surrounded, along with most of the existing establishments, by an expanded road.
Islip in the present time consists of a main road from the east to the west in between shops. Towards the south are two dedicated housing lands parallel to each other with a school to the left and a park to the right.
According to the plan, the school and the park were the only ones that will remain at their locations. The most significant development will be a construction of a dual carriageway that will allow cars pass in opposite directions with an expense of a massive reduction of space occupied by the park. This road will envelope more than eighty percent of the town's structures. A dedicated walk way will be placed in between less than half of the shops that will remain and the probable added establishments namely the bus station, the shopping centre, the car park and a land for future home constructions. One of the existing area for housing will be moved to the east of the school and the other to the southwest adjacent to another additional housing.
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The 2 maps represent and delineate key features of the ISLIP area(center of a town) both in the present structure and proposed develop.
Overall, it's obvious that the proposed development contains more blocked areas and shops instead of the 2 shops across the roads in the present structure. In the new map, furthermore, there are additional roadways and dualisation of the previous carriage ways which encircle the center and the structure therein.
Clearly in the present structure, there are two opposite shops across a main road which runs from west to eastern axis, behind these two shops lying the countryside and housing at their north and south pole respectively. Importantly, however, at the end of the west and east carriage ways sitting a school and a park in that order.
In contrast, the new plan highlight more congested center area with many shops, additional carpark, new housing just lying across the previously known main road which is being replaced as a bridge in the new plan for people walking.
Additionally, theres a circumferential dualisation of the carriage ways, which is occupying the country side space at the north pole and linking the school, park and housing together.
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The two maps illustrate the town of Islip in its current form and the expected expansion.
Overall it is clear that the plan is to create extra space for more housing units with the idea to turn the center into a residential villa with easy access to the station and supermarket.
The current plan shows a road running across the town center flanked by shops on either side. To the south side of the shops are housing units with a school to the left of the units and a car park to its right
Regarding the future plan, it is expected that the housing units, school, and car park from the original site will remain. The most significant development is a dual carriage road which will run around the town center including the addition of a bus station, shopping center, car park, and new housing units which will take up the area previously occupied by shops. The park will be resized to allow for more housing units.
How can Map task be done within 20-30mins😮 it has so many information to include😢
Can we write overview at the end of the chart or graph after body paragraphs????
Kindly guide me
The two illustrations show the before and after changes, planned for the Islip town centre.
Overall, the redevelopment focused on transforming the current main road to a dual carriage way to make the highway accessible to all and enclose the shopping establishments within. Highlights also include the new shopping centre, bus station and a car park.
At the moment, the Islip town centre consists of only several shops on both sides of the main road and some housing on the central area. To the southeast location, a path from the main road leads to a school. In the east, you can also find a park that is connected from the main highway to the south.
Based from the plan, a dual carriageway will be created to ensure a continuous road around the town centre. A proposed shopping centre will also rise together with a bus station on its right and a carpark on the left. The main road will be replaced by a pedestrian only and just below it, the shops will be concentrated at the center. Some new housing will be added while the park will be reduced in size. The housing at the very edge of the centre remains the same while the school will have a little to no changes.
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My overview:
Overall, it is clear that the plan is to extend the town centre to nearby countryside to allow for a dual carriageway and new housing with a car park the expense of shops to the north of the town centre.
Great! Just change ‘in’ to ‘into’ and at ‘at’ before ‘the expense’ 👍
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Overall, it is clear that the plan is to modernise the town centre by providing it with better connectivity to remote areas and greater focus on providing new residential areas at the expense of countryside.
Beautiful! Just add ‘the’ countryside. 👍
Thank you Ma’am
Overall, the Southside will be expanding. There will be a new shops that will be added, some will remain the same and others will be change by other types of store. Also some store will be bigger.
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Overall, the expansion focuses on creating a nodal town consisting of a dual carriage road and increased housing. It also creates an access for pedestrians or passers-by, a bus station, a larger shopping centre and a new parking area.
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The two maps illustrate the current situation as well as the redevelopment schemes of a town named Islip.
Overall, it is clear that the plan is to enlarge the town area and introduce several features, including a dual carriageway while demolishing certain existing ones.
At present, the town center consists of a school, park, and shops on either side of the main road. Countryside extends towards the north while there are facilities for housing with school and park on either side in south direction.
According to the redevelopment plans, only the school, housing, reduced park, and shops in the southern part of the main road which will be recognized as a pedestrian-only route will remain from the existing place. The most significant development will be the introduction of a dual carriageway around the town which encircles the northern countryside along with the housing and park in the southern territory. However, the school and a housing service will exist outside the road. Spaces available from the countryside and nearby shops in the northern part will be utilized by a Bus station, Shopping center, Car park, and new housing with clear access. Further, the park will be diminished in size along with the establishment of new housing.
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Thanks for the lesson Alex. Here is my write-up, please do have a look.
The maps illustrates Islip town centre at the moment and its planned redevelopment.
Overall, the town centre is going to be bigger with more varieties of buildings such as new housings, car park, shopping centre at the expense of its countryside and its shops located on the north of the current main road. There is a new dual carriageway circular road encircling the town centre while the current main road is becoming a pedestrian-only road.
Currently, the town centre has one main road with shops on the north and south sides. To the north side there is also a countryside area. On the south side of the main road, in addition to shops, there are two housing areas, a park and a school.
According to the proposed plan, the south side shops to the main road, a school, and two housing areas remain. The main road remains but its function is changed to a pedestrian-only road. To the north of this road, the current shops and countryside are making way to a new housing area, a carpark, a shopping centre and a bus station. In southern side of the town centre, there are a new housing area and a smaller park. The north and south sides of the town centre are now encircled by a dual-carriageway circular road.
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hello miss, thank you so much for this effective lesson.
i have a query to ask.
will it be good idea to use 3 detail paragraphs instead of 2? for example
one for new additions
another for the structures which were relocated
and the final one to mention the unchanged ones.
how will it affect my band score?
I would like to contribute my answer. Feel free to scrutinize.
The illustration drawing represents a map of the current status and plan for renovation of Southside Shopping Mall.
Overall, major changes in plan development are the expansion of supermarkets and the addition of several personal care shops. Additionally, the center of the mall will extend and exclude food stalls and nature areas to make way for the building of a department store and additional shops.
In the present day, on the northside of the shopping mall, you can locate the play area, noodle shop, and cinema. And then, in the southeast part, which is the entrance, next are the supermarket and the comfort area, which are mainly on the south side, while the café is on the west side of the entrance. The department store is located to the east of the center mall, while the golf course with green space is further out on the east side of the mall.
On the other hand, the renovation plan of the shopping mall will retain the entrance, the supermarket, and the comfort room from their current designation. Car park extension that will accommodate the whole south area and eliminate the fitness center. Building a huge department store with a separate entrance at the expense of nature space on the far east side of the mall. Addition of the shoe store and the fashion store. Replacing the play area, cafe, noodle shop, and cinema into a beauty salon, cosmetics store, and gift shop.
My version:
Introduction: The provided maps illustrate the current layout of the Southside shopping mall and its projected expansion.
Overview: Overall, the mall is set to undergo significant changes, with a focus on expanding the shopping area at the expense of green spaces. Additionally, the transformation of restaurants and recreational facilities into fashion stores will require an expansion of the car park.
Key features: At present, the interior of the mall features a cinema, noodle shop, play area, café, supermarket, department store, and sanitary facilities. Surrounding the mall, there is a car park, fitness center, and various green spaces. Notably, the main modifications will involve the expansion of the mall, the enlargement of the car park, and the removal of the fitness center. It is worth mentioning that the golf course and park will be replaced by a new department store, which will have its own entrance. Furthermore, the play area, noodle shop, and cinemas will be transformed into a beauty salon, cosmetics store, gift shop, and two shoe stores. The café located near the play area will be replaced by an Information center. The space previously occupied by the department store will be utilized for the construction of three fashion stores. Lastly, certain sections such as the supermarket, toilets, and the entrance near the car park will remain unaffected.
The provided two maps delineate the present position and planning for future development of Islip town center.
Overall, the main goal is to expand the town towards country side, for ease transport facility by developing planed expanded roadways, and modernising the overall look of the town for the convenience of people.
Overal, it can be seen that the plan is to extend the area into the country side and thanks to simultaneous urbanising dwellers will benefit from new housing, public tansportation and road extention.
In the present, the mall consists of only a supermarket, department store, cinema, noodle shop and cafe with a children’s play area and toilet facilities. In the east part of the centre we can spot a Golf course right next to a park, while to the south of the there is a car park and fitness centre.
The two maps shows the current status and proposed development of Islip Town centre.
Overall, it is clear that the plan is to expand the centre as well as modify the design to create more space for commercial purposes. Moreover, the countryside area is accupied and dual carriageway is introduced for convenient traffic flow around.
Currently, the centre has the main road expanding from west to east and shops are available on both sides of the road. The main road also leads to the parking area and to the housing and school area. To the north, countryside area is present and to the south alongside the park, housing as well as school facilities are available.
In the proposed development plan, the main road would become pedestrians way and dual carriageway will be introduced. Shops on one side of the main road would be converted into bus station, shopping centre , car park and new housing. The old parking area gets less space and new housing is made along the old parking. The housing as well as school facilities will be at the same place as before.
The two maps illustrate the center of a small city with the name isllp. One shows the current status and another the future plan.
Overall, Isllp will face a major change in the future with a new dual carriageway surrounding the city, the creation of a new bloc for shopping, new residential houses and car park. Some places will remain same such as school and shops.
The actual city contains less building. In the southern-east, there is a big park. The center of the city contains residential housing. Next to the house at the southern-west, there is a school. Looking at the countryside of the town, there are two shops divided by a main road.
In the future the city will be bigger than the actual one. Major extension will be apply on the north side of the city, which will have new bus station ,a very big shopping center with a car park next to it. A new housing will be also build there. The old main road will be transform for pedestrians only. In south, bellow the shops section, the park will be reduce in order to build a new housing for citizens. All the city will be surrounded by a dual carriageway, except in the south with school and housing which are outside.
The illustrations provides the present structure of the Southside and it's future plan for development.
The above two images show the town centre of Islip in its current form and its renovation plan.
Overall, Islip's town centre is going to be reconstructed with an eye on the future with a brand new
dual carriageway, a bus station, a shopping centre, and a car park.
Currently, the town centre has the road main road, whose sides are surrounded by a series of shops,
cutting right through it. On the northern side, there is farmland and on the southern part, a school and a residential
complex are present. In the middle, there's a park adjacent to another residential complex which is connected by
a small road leading to the main road.
The plan for the reconstruction will completely change the outlook of the town centre. Firstly, a new double carriageway
will surround the bus terminal, shopping complex, car park, and new housing complex. This housing complex is to be connected to the new dual carriageway in order to make the commute easy for its residents. In the middle area, there will be a pedestrian way which is to be followed by a shopping lane. In addition to the existing housing complex in the southern part of the map, new housing buildings to be built. Unfortunately, the park's size is going to decrease significantly. And the countryside is nowhere to be seen.
Can anyone give bands?
The map illustrates the currently developed centre of a small town which is called Islip, and demonstrate its future restructuring.
Overall, the Islip town centre has less variety of activities at the moment, with an old one-way roads and a country side. Whereas in the future there will be added advanced infrastructure for roads and more industrial ideas for an increase in buildings and shops.
At present, Islip town centre is based on a countryside in the North with a main road between two areas of several shops. The main road has two pathways to the west and to the east. In the east, one is going towards a park in the south and the other one is going straight. On the west, one road goes straight and the other connection of road is leaning towards two housing locations facing each other. This road is passing by a school in west of Housing.
In the future development plan, a circular dual carriageway will be built by adding the area of countryside into it. This road will have the similar, straight pathway of west and east but the main road will be converted to the walking place for pedestrians only. Although the shops near countryside will be changed into bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing sequentially, but the opposite shops will remain the same. In the southern part of the map, one fourth of housing area will be renewed into new housing. In the western part, the size of the park will be reduced, however, the school will not be reformed.
Overall, it is clear that the structure of the town will be replaced by other new services, with the exception of some shops and housing area.
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You win - first overview! Good effort. I would include the road extension in the overview as it’s a pretty radical change. 👍
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Describe all changes:
1. Stay the same
2. Bigger/smaller
3. Change(from X to Y)
4. Add/remove
The given maps illustrate the structure of how a center, in a small town called Islip, is presently and the plans for its development in the future. It is evident that the plan is to greatly expanse this area, with major changes in its accessibility and shopping attractions.
Currently, the plan shows one main road that travels from west to east through the small center. On the northern and southern side of the main road sits several shops. More southerly, there are housing structures as well as a school and a park at the eastern side of the center. In addition, two side roads branch off from the main road. One on the western side that passes in front of the school and the other on the east heading towards the park
According to the proposal, only the shops on the southern side of the main road, the school and housing structures and the park remain unchanged. The most significant development is the addition of a dual carriageway that will surround the entire center and the before main road will only be used by pedestrians. In the north of the map, the erections of a bus station, a shopping center, a car park as well as a new housing area will be all new future developments.
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Generally, planned to surround the centre is a dual carriageway which is expected to facilitate traffic when new residential infrastructures are in operation at the expense of a row of shops and nearby rural area.
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The given maps compare the current and future rebuilding plan of the Islip town centre.
Overall, major changes are planned to transform town center from main road to a car-free pedestrian street, while adding new shopping centre, car parking, and housing options at the various points.
Firstly, at the north-west end of the center, the new bus station is considered to be installed, which will offer citizens easy access to the shopping centre. However, the car parking, which is located next to the mall and new residential area, will serve the residents, for those who prefer to come with private vehicle.
Furthermore, the new housing options will be also available at the south side of the centre, which will have easy access to the park, even though, its area is expected to be smaller compare to current state. Additionally, dual carriageway is designed to be going around the centre with expanding to the north countryside and the south. Lastly, obvious development is not forecasted for the school area, except, it will largen a little bit.
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The two maps shows islip town centre, in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Overall, it is clear that the plan is to extend islip town centre at the expense of the countryside to allow the dual carriageway.
Currently, islip town centre consist of only shops separate by the main road, two housing, a park, and a school. To the north of the town centre, there is a countryside. While to the east, there is a park.
According to the proposal, only school will be remain from the original site, as well as park, however the park decrease in size. Housing increase more than double, there are four housing. The countryside will be demolished to make way for the dual carriageway. While the main road among the shops will be demolished, change to pedestrians only. The shop to the north develop in size and get a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park and a new housing to the east.
The two maps illustrate Southside shopping mall, in its present form and its future development. Comparing the two maps, we can see that the developer is planning to expand the center of the mall and replacing some of their current stores. There are some areas that will be removed to allow more space for the expansion.
Currently, there are a supermarket, department store, cafe, noodle shop, and cinemas in the mall. There are also a toilet right beside the supermarket and a play area for children to the left of the noodle shop. To the east of the mall, there is a golf course and a park while to the south, there is a car park and a fitness center.
There are some significant changes in the planned development. The overall size of the mall will increase while the golf course and park will be demolished. The car park will be expanded to double its current size and the department store will increase in size and will have its own entrance. Supermarket, toilet, and entrance will remain unchanged. There will also be a number of replacement and addition to the stores. Beauty salon, shoe store, cosmetic store, gift shop, and shoe store will be added while play area, noodle shop, and cinemas will be removed. Cafe will be replaced with info center.
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ma'am I was suggested to keep the 'task 1' words less than 200 inorder to avoid the misconception that we are unable to achieve the task ,just above 150 words , anways i wanted to know whether the mark would be deducted if we cross more than ,say 230 words. could you reply ASAP , cause i have to appear for the exam in 16 days
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The two maps illustrate the center of a small town, slip, in its present-day form and its plan for future formation.
Generally, there will be a repositioning of the housings, a resizing of the park and a restructuring around the countryside which will affect the shops.
The development will take place from the West-North area to East- South with a construction of a dual carriageway. As a result of this, the housing on the south-central will be moved further to the East.
Moreso, the shops in the North by the countryside will be re-built and will have a bus station, shopping center, car park and at North-East there will be a new housing area with a path that leads to the carriageway. At the North-central where we had the main road, this we will re-built to a pedestrian walkway which will also lead to the new housing area.
Furthermore, there will be a redevelopment of the housing by the North-South central to the West and a new housing area will cover the far East end where the former car park was and will be resized to a smaller park size.
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Overall, it is clear the plan is to expand the Infrastructures of Slip town to include new housing, bus station, shopping centre, car park as well as dual carriageways around the town for easy assess across the new structures.
hi, could u check please my description, I found it too tough for me: topic is "The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site." Sample answer: The plans demonstrate Norbiton Industrial area now and coming year, after development.
Overall, industrial site will be expanded to provide more roads, and the addition of other new facilities will offer more convenience for citizens. The updates will include building of houses taking the place of some factories.
The new circle road will be created in the south area in future, while the center circle will be added 2 ways for north and north-west directions to new living spaces which will be replaced by factories. The factory which is places in the west side of middle circle way, it will be given way to shops, where in opposite side of this there will be build medical center. The school will be taken the place of manufactory in the east part of industrial area.
The farmland which was located in the north of site, it will be given place to housing and road where road will cut off the river. In return, agriculture land will be moved to the north-east side of area. In the south-east site of river will be introduced playground with new residential apartments which would be built in the south of it.
Isn’t it more accurate to say that the golf course is NORTH EAST of the centre? My exam is near so I would highly appreciate any response….
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The maps illustrate the future re-design of Islip's town centre.
Overall, the town centre is to expreience mass construction of accomodative infrastruction, including, a bus station, a shopping centre, car park and new housing projects. Alongside, the shifting of the two orginal housing areas and a dual carriage way that will encircle the town centre, leading to the consquent chopping down of the countryside.
In detail, a new dual carriageway will be built around the town centre. The main road and nothern shops will be cleared up in order to build a bus station, a shopping centre and a ar park. There will also be replaced with a pedestrian footpath. On the south and north, new housing estates will be developed. The planned development changes also include the shifting of the original housing. One of which will be moved to the left, and the other, a bit right.
Also, the park will downsized and brought closer to the shops. However, despite all the massive alteration, the school will be left untouched and so will the shops to the south of the main road. The shops will be preserved so settlers can have a place to purchase their day-to-day goods.
Hello mam, I have a doubt
Is it ok if we write a word or a sentence and find it wrong so can we strike it on main exam paper. Is it allowed
That’s fine. Happens all the time! 👍
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hello e2 thank you so much for the help you are providing my IELTS exam is in 5 days and your videos were very very helpful
I have a question regarding the listening part of the IELTS
do they decrease a mark for every spelling mistake you do especially in complete the sentence and short answer questions
because I find that the majority of the mistakes that I do in the listening part of IELTS is because of misspelling a word or forgetting an article such as ( the ) or ( a ) do they mark questions wrong for these two reasons
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Hi Ara, unfortunately yes, if you spell an answer wrong or if it’s grammatically incorrect because you miss an article, you don’t get that point. There’s no negative marking so you won’t lose a point, you just don’t get a point. Regarding fill-the-gaps, in listening the words are usually nouns and you rarely need to include an article (because it’s already in the question or not required). Good luck with your preparation! Come see us at E2Language.com of you need more help 💪👍
How about.
The maps illustrate the comparison of the shopping mall and the future plan intended for the development .
(Is this right... or wrong?)
Overall, the shopping mall is due to undergo significant redevelopments, notably the addition of new stores, also the removal of the café and the playground. Furthermore, so me spaces will be expanded at the expense of greenish surfaces.
The two maps illustrate us the centre of Islip which is a small town as nowadays, and the development plan which will realized in the future.
Overall, the main aim is to expand the town by constructing a new dual carriageway which enables the vehicles to move around of the centre and adding new facilities.
Currently, there are a series of shops the northside of town which are divided by a main road. Furthermore, there is a road of the west side of the main road heading a school located of the south-west of the town and the other road provides the cars to the park situated of the east side of the town. Besides, homes are located between the school and the park.
The proposed plan is to transfer the main road to the pedestrian way not all main road but the only part located between facilities. Even though the shops situated the north side of the main road will be staying, the ones located the south side of the road will be demolished in order to build different kind of facilities such as bus station, shopping centre, car park, and new housing. Also, new homes are going to plant the south side of the town by the decreasing the size of the park which ensures more space.
I really appreciate your efforts, many thanks. For the second paragraph, doesn't the sentence "........., a noodle shop and café with a children's play area and toilet facilities." mean that the children's play area and toilet facilities are related to the cafe? Isn't it better to remove "with" to convey the meaning that they are separate facilities from the cafe?
Is it okay mam.
The overall scenerio of the map quite vividly exhibits that the shopping mall has been expanded covering the green area(golf club and park) into its and various other developments are planned including fashion stores and replacements in the northern area.
The two maps illustrate the proposed changes of Southside, shopping mall, both in its current and future state.
Overall, the clearance of the park and golf course are the major change of the mall. These area will be replaced with a bigger department store allocated in north east.
In the present day, Golf course and the park fills the east side of the map. Furthermore, the Southside mall consists of the play area, noodle shop, and cinema, and a cafe. Facing the entrance, is the car park and fitness centre right next to it.
In the future, the mall centre will be expanded and department store will take majority of the old golf and park areas. The old north side areas of the mall centre will be replaced with a beauty salon and various shops. Bigger building allows fashion store to be built and the cafe is going to be converted to an info centre. Moreover, demolition of the fitness centre allows the car park to double the size. There will also be a second entrance from the department store
So if you do not have much time for that longer answer to describe ALL the trends that you suggest, but you covered the main trends in the overview, describe some trends in the 2 paragraphs(almost all the trends), would that be alright? Because realistically, you usually cannot easily write that long in the actual time-constrainted exam. What is your take on this?
I know, it seems like a lot to write - a careful analysis first is crucial so you can notice all the changes and organise them. For graphs and charts, it’s fine to do as you said - describe the main features etc. For maps and processes, I would really advise including all changes - otherwise you risk losing points in task achievement as I pointed out. You can also group changes together (e.g. ‘x new shops’ or ‘a lot of new houses’). Hope that helps!
The two maps describe Islip town Centre in its present form and it’s proposed renovation.
Overall, the plan will focus more on renovating the countryside into a city, by demolishing the shops to building infrastructures like bus station, shopping centre, and car parks and new residential areas. However, for easier accessibility to these amenities, a dual carriageway will be constructed extending round the center of the town.
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Are there any explanation about bar , table, pie chart? I didn’t find them except line graph.
I think in the second paragraph it should be "which will *be* more than double in size. Except a be verb it’s not making sense to me. Can someone explain?
Is it okay mam
The depicted maps delineates on how Southside shopping mall looks currently and ideas for its expansion.
I wrote: The two diagrams illustrate the shopping mall called 'Southside', the way it looks like at present and how it is going to be improved. Overall, it is clear that the golf course and the park will be knocked down to make way for the extension of the shopping mall and department store.
Is it a good introduction and overview?
Beside the knocked down rest of it looks fine. Don’t use informal language
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@@muzaffarjonumidjonov1438 i think coz u haven't separate the paragraph for overview and intro..and u may have many more informal language for instance looks like and knocked down..those word really bring down ur score...I'm not good although I know some basics as far as IELTS is concerned.
The maps illustrate the transformatuon in Islip town centre.
Overall, it is clear that there are significant changes with noticeble being the addition of amenities surrouded by road system expanded at the expense of countryside
In current, two shops are opposite through a main road prolonging from the west to the east. This road leads to a school to the west and a park to the east. Housing area is located to the south of town
The road system will be expanded into dual carriageway at the central of the town while main road is planned to be demolished to make way for road for pedetrians. Inside centre, bus stop, car park and shopping centre will be built next to a new housing to the northern side which connects to dual carriageway. To the opposite side of passer-by road, shops remain and there are more housing constructed. Although the park remains, the size of this is reduced
The map here demonstrates, a center of a small town current state and, it proposed plan for its redevelopment.
Overall, it’s clear that the roads and the some other space will be expanded , that’s some essentials will be added in the community.
Currently, looking at the town center,the south part, they have only housing,schools and a park with no clear directions.
According to the propose expansion for the lslip town center, thus it’s planned development, north side on the map shows an inclusion of bus station, car park, and new housings added to the schools and the housing that was already there. Also the main road of lslip town center has been changed to pedestrian only, where the main road is also a dual carriage way road.
Below the carriage way, the school and the housing will be maintained.
Mam please tell me that the length of both paragraphs should be same or not?? In task 1 and 2
which will more than double in size or which will be more than double in size. Which one is more appropriate?
The maps illustrate the excisting appearance of Southside,a shopping mall and how it will look in the future
The maps show the center of a small town called Islip in its present form and proposed changes for its redevelopment
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Overall, The proposed plan will add more establishment in the North part of the town center and in the East part there will be a new housing and making a dual carriageway around the town.
Currently, Islip Town center only have shops after the countryside, main road in between the shops, housing, school and a park.
According to the development plan, only the school, shops after the main road and the park will remain from the original place.
The most significant development will be the adding of additional three different establishment in the shopping area before the main road the bus station, car park and new housing where it will overtake most of the space for the shops making shop size smaller. The Main Road will be converted to pedestrians too and a dual carriageway around the town will be added. There will also be a new housing project next to the park in south part of the town.
The Figure shows an Islip Town Centre and the future development to increase
shopping areas.
Clearly is planning to increase the shopping area over the countryside, and help the transport with a dual carriageway al around the Islip centre and convert the main street into a pedestrian street.
The shops will be more prominent on the left hang of the future pedestrian street, and the news park area and a Bus station will be constructed. Also, on this hand, will develop one of the new housings areas, with their private car entrance, directly when came from the east. The shopping center will be developed between the car park and the bus station.
On the other side of the pedestrian road, the park will be smaller to give space to another new housing area just next to the older one. Outside the dual carriageway, the school and the housing will be in the same place on the south, but the school will be modified a lite to have better access by car on the new dual carriageway.
hey i have question it is good to explain each section of map current and then after renovation with 3rd paragraph of major changes and comparison. or it should be each section\structure with comparison to the new one
Car park which will be more than double in size?? 🧐 Isn't it the 4 times bigger?
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"The maps illustrate two sides which are shows present day of southside shopping mall and upcoming day will be changed by development."
why ''are shows'' i dont rlly get it
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got it use "showing"
Islip town center's proposed plan has a couple of changes, including the dual carriageway car park and a new housing society
The town of Islip is potentially undergoing redevelopment. These two maps illustrate the proposed plan. Overall, the town centre shops are separated by the main road. It is surrounded by the countryside and housing. Presently, the town centre has two shops, which are divided by a main road. One is facing the countryside, whereas the other is facing the town. South of the second shops are the residence's house's, a school and a park. In the new plan, a dual carriageway will surround the town centre, engulfing new houses and services. These include, a bus station, shopping centre and a car park. Although, a road will still demarcate the centre it will be designated for pedestrians only. External to the dual carriage way will be the school and housing.
My take
Intro - The two maps show Southside on its present-day layout and the future expansion plan for the mall.
overview -
Overall, the Southside will expand its spaces, thereby occupying more sales areas for the department store and shops replacing the exterior parks and golf course.
The current Southside includes a golf course and park on the right side of the mall. The mall itself has prominent cinemas, a noodle shop, a play area, a cafe shop, department store, restrooms, supermarket, and one entrance-exit door. In front of the mall lies a fitness center and a small car park.
The new plan of the Southside mall will overtake the spaces occupied by the golf course and park. Inside, beauty salon, shoe store, cosmetics store, gift shop, and shoe store will be replaced by the play area, noodle shop, and cinemas. The department store will be expanded twice the original size with its own entrance-exit door. The former cafe shop will be replaced by the information center. However, the supermarket will remain along with the toilets for men and women. Next to it will open three fashion stores. The car park will occupy the entire storefront, replacing the fitness center.
The two maps depict the current layout of Islip town center and its proposed new development.
Overall, it is evident that the plan is to revitalize the entire town center by introducing bus stations, car parking, and a new housing scheme into the vacant countryside space. This will also involve the construction of a dual carriageway and a shopping center.
Currently, the town center comprises only shops, a housing scheme, a school, and a main road. To the north of the center lies the countryside, while the main road leads to the school on the south side. On the east side of the center, there is a park situated at the edge of the main road.
According to the new development plan, a line of shops, the school, and the existing housing scheme will remain unchanged. However, a new housing scheme will be added to the southeast side of the center. Moving from the new housing scheme towards the north, a new dual-carriageway will guide us. At the northern end, we will encounter more changes, including the expansion of the bus station, the shopping center, the car park, and the introduction of another new housing scheme. Between the shops and the newly constructed buildings, a pathway will be created for pedestrians.
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Thank you very much. The link for vocabulary dose not work.
I thought you had to mention exactly where everything is and will be
you are the best teacher ever Alex
My problem is time in reading. What can I do?
Hi, I also suffer some problems so what the way you choose to remove this plz reply as you can