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- Опубликовано: 3 окт 2022
- Essay is a revolutionary writing platform inspired by Dr. Peterson’s influential writing guide. Essay provides a structured writing environment designed to help writers specify their aims, organize their thoughts, improve their ideas and communicate more effectively.
Mark your path forward with your thoughts. Create your character with your words. Make every word matter.
Try and try again.
Essay.
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Does it work for creative writing 2 I think it would I've applied it to creative writing anyway I'm not going to use that same s*** on RUclips as I find that antithetical to the chaotic nature of RUclips but you are a great man the most influential intellectual of our time don't forget that
Could this be used in business to communicate ideas and write for instance proposals. God I've done hundreds of them and always wondered if they were good.
I tried the free version. Exceptionally good
i totally see myself supporting this project because i love people who think big ,but when you think big but also traying to help humanity man ,that something else ,that s something i would like to be part of👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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LOVE FROM SWEDEN STOCKHOLM JORDAN PETERSON!!!!!!!!
First i cleaned my room, now I'm going to do my homework. Jordan Peterson is slowly becoming my mom
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🤣you too?
Your dad*
Dad for me.
@donald weisenheim 😭😭 broo
When he's talking about how writing your problems on paper can help you to visualise them and sort through them, it's so true, I never realised it until recently. Think of it like having a room in your house that you've used as a dumping ground for years, anything you don't want, anything thats problematic, and anything you don't know what to do with, you just open the door and fling it in. You know you need to sort through it all and tidy it but you avoid even thinking about the task because you know it will be hard work, so instead you just don't open the door and look inside. Writing your thoughts down and being able to see them in front of you is like opening the door and being able to see exactly what is in there, and what needs to be done, and then you can start working out how to achieve it.
Yes. Precisely. Good work.
@Vandalle that reply probably made your day!
Lately I’ve been flinging my whole life into that room
@@thucydides7849 I have as well. Currently trying to work through it, and ironically, top of the list is to literally get my room in order. After listening to Jordan talk about the importance of having a tidy room and creative/work space, and the negative effect that living in a mess can have on your emotional and mental health, I realised how bad it was impacting me.
@@Vandalle. Hi, would you mind showing me the title of video where Dr. Peterson talks about this subject? I would love to listen to it as well. Thank you.
It honestly has been a dream come true to work with you both on this project for me and the Votary crew. It was awesome to meet you and talk on and off camera and to be a part of promoting the app and your message. We've utilized the tool in our own writing now as well, and it's definitely helpful. Thank you again!
❤
How many times did you check this to make sure it was grammatically sound? If there were mistakes, it wouldn’t play well 😂
@@jacobparker1105 Haha good point, but Jordan tends to be pretty eloquent in his answers. It was more difficult to cut down 3 hours of interview footage of him and Julian's profound thoughts into a few minutes of content.
I’ve used the essay app for a while and was watching this more out of interest. I found myself exclaiming out loud that this is such a well made video. Really great work!
@@BleuNoirProductions Thank you :)
As an essay user, the ability to move sentences around by itself is priceless.
Yes. I really want an iPad version.
I wish I could share this with my students without risking my job for simply sharing some JP content. Phenomenal, and exactly what young people need.
When you share Essay it doesn't specifically say it's JBP content. You won't have ot mention the creator behind it.
Just say you saw this at Reddit
Do it anyway 😎
You will feel icky if you're not truthful. What else is your purpose if not to give wisdom to youth?
Live your purpose
Be Hu-man
In what kind of fucked up censoring third world dictatorship do you live, that you can not share a helpful tool for writing better of a former harvard professor?
Damn, your job might be at risk? I wish freedom of speech actually existed
I was a complete failure in English and writing. I understood non of it until I took a writing 101 class in college. I had a great teacher that simply gave structure to writing essays. It all clicked and opened up a new world of writing and putting my way of thinking into words. The best part of this was at the end of Writing 102, my instructor AND another English teacher both asked for a copy of my final exam essay on the Dust Bowl. Knowing how to put thoughts to words gave us our Declaration of Independence, Bill of Rights and United States Constitution...
My question: Where are the men of those times, today? Where? Jordan Peterson reminds me the men of those times. Learned and engaged in the challenges of the times.
Men have failed in general but the worst are American men, they have been absent for a few decades now. That is why other countries are over-taking the USA
it's also cool that you have such a close relationship with your kids, doc. thanks for being an example
Dr. Peterson, you have no idea about the extent to which your work, words, and wisdom are transforming people’s lives in all sorts of ways possible. May God grant you a very long and extremely healthy and productive life, so that we all can continue to benefit from your blessings. Amem.
Give your video editor a hefty raise
Agreed
It’s such a well put together production
You don't even know what they're paid lol what if it was a ridiculously large sum of money
@@snoozyq9576 I still stand by my point, mainly cause I am not paying that money myself
As someone who is passionate about writing, it's interesting to see some of my own thoughts on the subject reflected in Jordan's analysis of the writing process.
Same! It makes me super happy!
@@michaelrads1365 Wut? Lol
The truth is an old thing. I've sometimes later found that people hundreds of years ago came to the same conclusions as me about various things, and you realize there's nothing new under the sun, just new ways of communicating those ideas, and new angles.
@@EmilynWood lol unironically, I feel the exact same way
The editing for this video is so charming and slick
There are times I bleed with you over how the world twists the truth of who you are, but there are times I marvel at the beautiful life you have. What an achievement not only to have a great relationship with your children but to build your careers and carve a future out side by side. It's not just a family business, it's work that betters humanity. Is there a greater dream than to venture about the world with your kids at your left and right? Today, I don't feel sad for you. I admire, envy and know that you've done things right. The world would do well to humble itself and listen to what you have to say.
A very beautiful person he is, him and his family! He says what he has to say and says it in all honesty. Who doesn't deserve that? It's the ones that are extremely smart that tell you things in a manner like a sales pitch with a graft on the wall that get me and gets everyone nowhere. JP puts his soul into his knowledge that he delivers the message in a humble and fatherly way like speaking to his own child or close friend. He gives that connection that we all have
I can certainly testify to the POWER of WRITING, even at mid-life. I went back for my MBA at the age of 40, and wrote a lot of papers/essays. All that thinking and putting thoughts on paper crystallized my thoughts and supercharged my brain. I have felt unstoppable every since!
I just want to commend Jordan Peterson’s video production team. They’ve been remarkably well done lately
This is actually produced by a separate company called Votary Films!
Votary films is gased
Thank you for all you do for humanity Dr. Peterson and you're a top-notch parent too. So very thankful for your courage to speak up!
Mr Dr. Peterson has changed my life. And I'm very grateful for it
The high production, orchestral score and epic narration just makes me really want a _Jordan Peterson Origins_ movie.
Just signed up for trial and spent 2 hrs immediately- great! I’ve been professional writer/editor in past and this is a great tool to focus and dig deeper! Highly recommend!
Excellent job to the Votary Film team for all your hard work on this video! Much love! 🙏🏼
Thank you so much Dr Peterson! I am an English major (yes the humanities aren’t what they used to be) and my university fails to teach the writing skills I’d like to possess in my career. I have always been gifted at writing, but have always had trouble organizing my thoughts in the most coherent way to communicate effectively in my thesis papers. When I’ve gone to my writing tutors in community college they would be blown away at my thesis and capacity to think but would mention my lack of organization and attention to detail. Organizing my thoughts has been no easy task for me my whole life (diagnosed adhd since 3rd grade). Thank you for your light in the world. :)
I have to say, no one in my life, in school and outside of school has ever showed me the importance of writing. I had writing classes in school and hated them as i never saw the point of them. JP was the first to explain how important writing is, and I’m actively seeking his writing program. So thank you for that!
Omg! This is great! I am working on some really important papers right now and I have been soo scattered. Notes in hundred different places and even if they are on one app, different sections in different notes. It’s becomes a mess. I am so glad you are creating things based on what people really want and are improving it! You are giving people the tools to change their life! Thank you!! I am such a fan of your work!
It was so warming to watch Mr. Peterson and his working together. Can't help but look up to Mr. JP as a fatherly figure. May God bless him with good health 🙏❤️
Thank you Julian, Jordan and anyone else who helped bring this into existence.
i’m a film major at penn state and seeing this gorgeous video is an inspiration. having jordan in this light is especially exciting to see. the video is a cinematic masterpiece
I truly enjoy watching father & son communicating so beautifully.
I have been using essay for around three months. It has taken my focus away from spell checking when writing to focusing on messaging and getting the right message to your audience. The ability to go back to your intial wording a though is so brilliant and helps capture my thoughts as I focus on messages. Love it!
“Geez Man!” Thank you 😊
It’s not about how hard you get hit!
Doctor J just keeps on getting straight to his feet and delivering another knockout blow, to all that fail to fault him! I can’t thank you enough! ❤
The sadness you hold inside you is overwhelming. To be so intelligent, aware and guided yet so bound... burdened with such deep sadness. Your an amazing gift.. hold the light Jordan
Excellent. I love seeing you and your son. We never see enough of him. All the best.
This family man brings tears to my face from deep inside my heart. Who else cares so much about human success for others? Thank you
Essay's been a lifesaver for me pursuing an associates. I'm not exactly someone that needs help with my English or putting down words, but what I found is that unlike when I was in school, all of my productivity gets absorbed by my full time job and my head is full of extra stuff. Essay allows me to just put down what needs to be tackled, and then the words just start flowing. Then it has excellent tools for editing and reorganizing when my thoughts got ahead of themselves.
As somebody that writes for a living, this seems to perfectly accommodate my process. I always find my best work is organised and written in my head in full before I commit a single word to paper, and it's horribly inefficient. Software like this would seriously help to outsource a lot of that brainspace.
Well done! So happy to see father and son working together on an outstanding project! So proud of them both!
Jordan Peterson pays a heavy toll for speaking up for young men and I hope he knows we all appreciate him. He will never be forgotten 🙂
And old men born during the last ice age 🙏👍
Perfect timing! I’ve been working on a letter to Dr Peterson for almost a year and can never seem to express myself precisely. I just ordered the self authoring program and now with Essay, I believe I’ll be able to craft the letter I’ve imagined. Can’t wait to hand it to him in person at the meet & greet in February ❤️
not in Seattle by any chance? I am also going. I sooo cant wait! 😊
Write to him a salute from me. Me from India. Me Muslim. Me not only respect but also love J.P.
@@natasharostova5186 I wish I was going to seattle!! I have a ticket for his Tulsa, ok appearance. It was supposed to happen in May but he had to reschedule.
Jordan Peterson is running a relay. Intellectual, moral and Spiritual. He is handing the baton to us. Let us not drop it.
As a junior in high school, you get me excited about writing whenever you speak about it!
Sort yourself out :)
3:36 this is so damn accurate. I just started writing any and everything lately in a little journal and it has helped me get myself together slowly but surely.
There is something radically inspiring about Jordan's take on the need to write.
Hi Sir, I've been watching your video's for about a month now, and I just wanted to say, thank you for being the amazing person that you are, inspite of the many tribulations that you and your family has been through, thank you for changing so many lives, but in a positive way. And for trying to make this forsaken world a better place.
The project itself is just the half of it. Father and son working together is equally valuable.
The way this video was made is phenomenal. I believe the music made the message impact me on a deeper level. Great job 👏🏽
This is really a gift to all students and humanity. Dr. Peterson I appreciate your constant concern for people and despite the amount of pain and targeted attacks that brings upon you and your family, you continue to push forward. I find it so heartwarming that your son was able to collaborate and work with you on this project, plus he gets to work in the same field as his uncle which is extra cool.
Love his hand gestures and the text added to it
I love the idea of what you have created. You have identified a weakness that I have, and hopefully a means of addressing it. I look forward to the journey!
Jordan please keep doing live events if you can, I am in the UK and want see you in person, it would mean the world - currently I'm poor, but going to do everything I can to see and watch you live. Thank you for everything that you have done and continue to do.
I read Dr. Peterson's essay on writing essays. To say it improved my writing is an understatement. Usually, I dread turning in my writings because they were the same last minute flakely introspective stuff my classmates seem to get away with. I'm a junior in college and for the first time in life, I was happy with what I turned in. I can't imagine how helpful the new word possessor will be.
PS. I know you're typically not one for the spot light Julian, but it great to see you getting out there!
Those were my exact thoughts on Julian. I love your write-up by the way. Thoroughly descriptive and articulate.
This man has changed me for the better, at every turn of his story he has put it forward and passed it on. I’ve said before, I’ll say again, thank you Dr Peterson.
I have been writing every night for about a year now and it has drastically improved my thoughts into actual substance.
I absolutely love Essay! I've started using it to help formulate my papers for college. Also, the staff behind Essay is super helpful. The other day I had a glitch, messaged Essay, and they got the problem fixed right away! I highly recommend Essay!! Not only does it help me write well-thought-out arguments, but it also saves me tons of time and energy.
Incredible, even in this short video he verbalized how I feel about writing in a way I could not have visualized before. Ahh writing is so magical
Dr. Peterson (and many other folks) fueled me to write every day for the past two years and I'm looking forward to using this to further explore the complex world of ideas. Thank you Julian and Dr. Peterson!
I’ve been using the beta for some months now and it’s absolutely wonderful. I’m just at the beginning of being a published author and let me tell you, it’s saving my editor some work. 😊 Thank you Dr. Peterson and thank you Julian!
This video just on a production level is incredible, please do more like this.
@@anonymousinternetuser6870 You caught the idea... Stereotyped propaganda... Sponsors? Maybe fifty fifty between Apple and Starbucks... 😁😁😁
@@anonymousinternetuser6870 yeah but he should colab with votary films and make a documentary about his life that would be crazy
@@anonymousinternetuser6870 ? I’m not dumb, I didn’t even buy into essay. Ads can be art. It’s a video format that’s written in a way to invoke a feeling. Even normal art can make us go out and essentially buy things or do things much like more obvious ads do.
Anything can be art. The production is immaculate and well throughout. Regardless of it’s an ad or not it’s great and well done. Get over it.
@@anonymousinternetuser6870 stay mad
Really cool stuff. I've also always found that writing helped me clarify my thoughts, straighten out my thinking, finding my weak arguments, exploring my beliefs and even working through my emotions. Best of luck with Essay!
This is cool! Imagine how many people that could have been taken seriously on a matter just because they didn't know how form their essay in a proper manner. Can you imagine all the lives this can change?
I love how Dr. Peterson speaks and writes. I would love to reach that same level of mastery one day. I am definitely trying the app. Thank you Julian. Thank you, Professor. It will be so helpful to me. I'm certain I am not the only one.
This is what I love about Jordan Peterson, organizing thoughts through the practice of meaningful writing.
On the days that I really don't want to do something I need to do. During those dark times when I question why I even bother. When others try to diminish me and bring me down. I remember. I remember just how much one person. One voice. One idea. Can change the world. I never knew it was possible until Jordan Peterson showed me. He's the first genuinely positive and authentic public example of what we're capable of that I've ever witnessed. Thanks for being who you are, and for sharing all that you do. You've definitely changed my life, and as far as I'm concerned, are the closest thing to a Hero we have today.
I love that his son has taken his dad’s life lessons and built this tool!!
The more the video goes on, the more I can see the family resemblance. It sounds like a great project. My favorite word processing program was a speech to text format that sadly was made unusable at the beginning of this year. I'll certainly have to try out this one.
I completely agree. I love the art of writing. I journal every morning by handwriting and I write long form articles online. I can't wait until I have the time to write my book. This sounds like a great tool.
I can only imagine how happy Jordan must be after starting a business like this with his son.
I think history will look back at Jordan as one of Canada’s greatest contributions to the world.
Wow! My son and I just watched this video together. He saw the word ‘essay’ toward the beginning and groaned (I’m his homeschool instructor, so I’m well acquainted with his dislike toward the writing process… he’s an engineering/mechanically minded 14 year old). At the conclusion of this video he said, “cool. I like that ‘try’. I can ‘try’. We have an essay assignment in tomorrow’s lesson. I’m looking forward to it & I hope to utilize this Essay program in the near future. Thank you Mr. Petersons, both.
Man, Jordan is blessed with good children. First time I see his son!
Astounded and very excited about what this family is doing. I'm grateful to know Julian and Mikhaila are carrying on their father's path and will continue his legacy, making the world a better place once he's gone. Hopefully that's not anytime soon 🙏✨
I did a free trial of this app over the summer, it was incredibly useful, and this is coming from someone that has done really well in their writing asignemnents. Now that university has started again, I could see the value in this. I understand that you want to run each buisiness on a for profit basis, but some time of free account with limited features would be great... not that you probably havent thought about that already. Keep up the great innovation, though!
So so so lovely to meet your son here ... what a light!
I saw a drag and drop feature at a glance
I have been waiting for that feature for years!
I just finished writing a paper for a Seminary class, and the short bit in the middle of this video of the guy smashing his keyboard really spoke to me. Really helped me connect with the video. Thank you for that. Lol.
This was exactly what I needed! I remember finding Dr. Peterson's writing rubric online 'after' I graduated from university and I wished that I found that document earlier because four years of university, not one professor talked about how to write an essay. This is a great next step to the rubric because it's so hard to edit directly on the document from Microsoft Word or Apple Pages. I'm doing the 14-day trial and loved the sentence-variance section and how you thought of this part as a 'Darwinian process' of natural selection. My days at university are long gone but I'm definitely going to use this to write articles on my website blog. And it's very minimal and not intimidating like Microsoft Word.
Have never seen dr. Jordan Peterson' s son. It looks too good to see a father and his son working together on something. I am sure it they will gave us something big and useful
"Aim up, man, aim up. And put everything you have behind it."
So simple, but so good!
I used to claim myself to be a high intelectual introvert and … every time I hear/listen to Dr. Peterson I am so … humbled ( the more I learn, the less I know ) , that app sure looks fantastic, I’m going to download it now , thank you
This is what I wish for art that someone would develop a process artist could follow to create more effective art. Absolutely nothing is taught in schools. Writing is expressing as creating art. This app is pure gold.
You finally introduced us to your speech writer. Bravo young man. Politicians should do the same.
Literally love the hell outta this man! This is the best program for modern day students in a world that strives to dumb down the individual to boost up the average bottom line. Love this!
wow very captivating film making to accommodate Jordan's thoughts. its more than an ad and Its a great pleasure to behold
A+ for having a lifetime plan! More companies should apply this to their subscription options.
I can go on and on for hours writing/typing. I find editing pretty satisfying too.
Dude. When Julian says “okay! That’s an interesting piece of information!” That was so much like Jordan that it was uncanny.
Best 5.5 minute ad I've ever watched, makes me want to become a better person
The way this was presented, I thought it was on Master Class. Perfection
I think the most striking in this video is their father-son relationship. Lovely.
Great idea BTW.
I'm French but I'll try it.
I would have loved to have this software when I was in university. I was struggling so much with my essays.
I have bought 12Rules of life book of Dr. JP. I ❤ it! Went and got his Self Authoring program, was helpful.
Listened to his dozen of lectures and podcast, almost every day I listen to him. Always, write comments down his videos, telling what a big fan I am of his work since long time.
Now, I wish to invest in his personality program and this essay.
Always great. Thank you Dr. JP🙏
What a great video! It brings a sense of urgency in me
Facebook and the bible, including my willingness to become better no matter the situation I find myself helped me a lot an still does . It drove me to write and think constructively. I buy books and would not read it till some mayhem pushes me to look at book. In summary, i found out, by experiencing suffering, I found something kindness and patience, yet, I was hungry to know more. Your work, Mr Jordan, is a life changer.
My father, on advising me said this to me as a reminder to only think of what is good as it leads to life and virtue, if you steal I will surely hand you to the authorities when they come looking for you. But, if II were to steal with a pen he would do anything to save me from the hands of my captors/authorities, including going as far as fighting and landing myself in a hot mess. I absolutely agree with you, Dr JORDAN PETERSON.
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@@JordanBPeterson it's always wonderful to witness you crafting a specific and measured answer to a proposition but sometimes a wordless gesture carries a much greater depth and breadth of meaning. Bravo.
I love everything from your channel, you need to be cloned and spread one of you for each country, everyone needs to learn more from you master.
I love that Dr Peterson is bringing this kind of attention to such a fundamentally essential - and oftentimes fundamentally overlooked - element of academia. The number of times that I've had to draft and re-draft essay proposals, let alone the essays themselves, is very nearly farcical. Whereas the vast majority of my classmates, by comparison, rush through an essay by pulling an all-nighter at the library. Sometimes the ideas are there, they're strong in fact, but the execution is flawed; I sincerely hope that people pay attention to this. Whether you agree or disagree with Dr Peterson on any number of issues, his intelligence and understanding of the necessities of academic rigor cannot be questioned.
Please continue to explore, to develop, and to better this world with your sage advice and compassionate nature, Professor.
Best advertising ever!
Seems like making a good ad is easier when the product is actually worth investing in!
The last document I wrote was via Essay. I had already a page when I started and then a few related ideas I wanted to develop in the text. On Essay I sat a goal that I thought was a bit challenging (timid) 1000 words for the kind of document I had in mind at the beginning. Soon that number was changing until I was satisfied with the result in quality because I discovered I was upgrading, refining and polishing my writing in a way that was new for me (At the end I wrote a 1757 words document). I really experienced how my ideas were improving. Deepening the concepts became easier, as well as realising there was need to go deep, to make clear, to relate, to conect, and so on. I’m not a student, I am however used to write and I’ve found on Essay a tool that also speeds up the entire writing process. Never before I wrote such a document in quality and length entirely in English.
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@@JordanBPeterson I am screenshotting this, THE Jordan peterson posted a smiley face! this is too precious, I hope you live a long life Mr peterson. your idea of 'clean your room' helped me become a better person. I hope to meet you someday..... don't know if it will happen though.... do visit Banglore india in your tours!!
@@lord23_80 LOL that's exactly what I thought when I saw it, I AM screenshotting this!
i am looking foward to seeing this grow as you all mightily do. vthanks
man, I never thought that writing could be this cool and this important. Thanks!
This trailer for Essay is so well done. So engaging and interesting. I hope this takes off!!
I've used Essay and it's a really interesting tool. it's both a tool and a teacher at the same time. It tells you right up front what it's doing to your writing and how it's helping you to organise yourself, and use it enough and you can take those principles and just do it yourself. it's very much worth anyone's time the next time you're preparing an essay.
Foe someone that writes often this was great! Although it all starts with "thinking" and good precise word "choice" I have to thank you for that too having watched many of your videos over the years now!!! God Bless:)
I was just thinking about how I was going to use this to write an essay for school!