How I write D&D Homebrew
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- Опубликовано: 20 авг 2024
- Here's what I've learned from writing homebrew.
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Remember! If you're gonna homebrew, make sure you don't get your level 9 fireballs turned against you by a NO U spell you created before you were you!
No U, BigDickWizard6969! Lightning Bolt is SUPERIOR to your wimpy fireball!
@@Ben-jl2rh I usually prefer Lighting Bolt to Fireball usually xD. So I second this.
I love this.
@@christofferhougaard Thank you! Now then lets show this wizard the superiority of lightning bolts!
BigDickWizard6969 mnyes mr wizard.the most powerful being in the world
Voodoo Druid.....
“Drudoo”
vooduid?
Whoodoo?
Whoodoo the Drudoo
@@iPhoneeditor Youdoo.
@@calebchristensen900 :D
"Friends on the other side"
You definitely had Dr. Facilier in mind when making that druid homebrew.
He is my favorite Disney villain ever. Seeing this class made me so giddy and ready to run an edgy deal-making campaign.
You beat me too it! Also I love the song!
ARE YOU READY?!?
ARE YOU REAAAAADY?!?
Can you.... FEEEL IT
Sit down at my table....
Leave your mind at ease...
If you relax it will enable me, to do,
Anything I please.
Druid: has an ability named “friends on the other side”
Me: *begins bopping to some sweet menacing brass*
Are you ready?
@@detectivelizard9532 You're in my world now, not your world
"You, young man, are from across the seaaaa.."
Funny thing about voodoo Larry,
I can’t conjure thing for myself.
I really like that idea for the 14th level ability. Wish is such an odd spell, almost everyone takes it, but I think emphasizing that it's wish with more strings attached can make that fun, coupled with the long cooldown.
It winds up making it almost like a ridiculously powerful ribbon ability, which seems like an oxymoron.
I once saw a homebrew spell someone made and it starts as a second level and it let's you cast any first level spell with a chance to instantly drop to 0 health and fail 2 death saves if you roll a 1 this spell levels up and can do any second level but how a 1 and a 2 can drop you, the high level the spell is cast the more dangerous it becomes but the more options you get as you always get new spell options. I'm pretty sure it was meant for warlocks as well so a spell that will always be at the highest level cast and let's a warlock do any spell with a catch is pretty cool to me.
It’s alright. It will basically always end in one of two ways. Either the dm won’t remember the flavor of it and the Druid gets wish once every 30 days, or the dm does remember and the Druid will get massively fucked over by the trick spirits every single time. I don’t think there would be much in between.
Looks like Wish with LESS strings attached to me, since the druid isn't casting it himself and so will not suffer from the usual strain that cripples your spellcasting for the rest of the day and might potentially prevent you from ever casting Wish again.
Honestly the only legitimate way to cast Wish yourself IMO is to replicate a spell of level 8 or lower, since the strain of using it for anything more impressive is just not worth it.
Anyway, with a good DM, you can get some actual _wishes_ done with this feature.
“Wish with a buncha strings attached” seems like a hell of a warlock boon for EVERYONE at the table
No matter what kind of home brew you make, your players (or at least one of them) will find an exploitable loophole that can be abused
-Some random DM probably
A class I made for a specific campaign had a thing that basically let them Crit and not take that much fall damage when they drop on top of an enemy from a height
It was really a niche, cool little side thing until the spell caster learned to cast fly
Thats part of the process really so its fine if they do cuz it gives you another opprotunity to fix. its basically like unearthed arcana
not gonna lie, in my group im the designated "find out how this is broken" guy since i spend way too much time making pointless min/maxed level 20 builds for really stupid things, like highest possible persuasion bonus, highest flight speed, or most attacks in a round
@@piemaniac9410 I got a player like that, whole buncha fun!
I've noticed the more freedom players have in a system the easier time they'll break it.
Take tensers floating disk, for example, the one zee bashew made a video on. It is very rigid in what you can do with it by RAW. You can only break it by asking the GM questions about things not stated in the description.
The Epic Spell system from 3.5e, on the other hand is what's called a complete nightmare, at least if the GM isn't up to it. It gives players an incredible amount of freedom. You can even make a spell to make making spells easier.
The Advantage modification system from GURPS(I know, not a magic system, don't @me.) has a similar problem once you get to higher point values.
"And they'll have a moral quandary about what to do to save a little girl..."
me, thinking of my players: "Will they, though?"
Mine would go try to save the girl, just to have a new pet.
@@bitingapotato3277 i think thats called slavery /s
@@bitingapotato3277 I laughed
too hard
A friend of mine, while we were in a similar situation, decided to shoot the girl while standing in between the two very lawfully good party members. PvP was banned in our group after that
@@relic5752
Oh, I see what happened the one with a gun died
i can tell the quarantine is affecting him based on his hair
Just a bit more of this quarantine, and I shall have escaped into the real life! Hoho!
help
@@XPtoLevel3 i am really impressed that the colour hasn't faded away. that is some strong dye
Its us all
One of my players uses hex on his monk warlock multiclass. Last session he dealt an extra 12 d6 with it.
how did he get 12 attacks?
@@brightside2718 playing a monk over a few turns.
@@brightside2718 he used the common exploit known as *existing over a period of time*
Why Multiclass? Just take Magic Initiate and infuriate your DM no matter what?
Multiclass isnt even homebrew
Hex is made to go with eldritch blast or extra attack characters; 1d6 extra necrotic damage on *each* attack. With EB (and Agonizing Blast of course) each beam will be doing 1d10 + Cha force damage + 1d6 necrotic damage, so about 11 damage with a Charisma of 16.
But it's a concentration spell
@@randomunfunnyname8834 Designed for Warlocks, who have a rather small spell slot pool and are more based around big explodey spells while keeping their concentration on hex (which at 5th level lasts a 24 hour period!)
It can also be used out of combat. it has 2 effects: in combat, and out of combat.
Combat: extra 1d6 dmg to all attacks
OOC: disadvantage on an ability check (if you want to get some mileage out of this in combat, pick wisdom. -5 to passive perception might help the rouge)
you're not aware that you've been hexed btw. thats important
@@Thunder-bw9xm im a fan of the transfer a hex to an insect and crush it when you start talking to Douchebag, transferring the dexterity hex to them sot hey have disadvantage on initiative
@@Thunder-bw9xm Was going to like your comment, until I saw 'rouge'
Look, it's Cool Kid Jacob!
Cool Kid Jacob approaches you, roll initiative
Oh crap can I chose to join initiative
Yeah that Jacob Kids Cool
@@maculagravy Best roll real good, Cool Kid has advantage on initiative
thank you, mr@@BigDickWizard6969
“‘Most difficult thing about writing home brew is...” convincing your players of the new rules and telling them the old way wasn’t as good! Lol 😂😢😭
Me, about to run two games a week: Look, you wanted a Supernatural campaign, so I'm giving you exactly what you asked for. Now take your reduced spell list and new magic rules, and be grateful I let you have casters at all.
I have the benefit of stir crazy players suffering from COVID cloister syndrome.
Erica Raab aren’t all campaign with magic supernatural? Why change the rules when they are already what is being asked for?
Logan Sanders Supernatural the CW show! We’re starting a campaign set in the show setting, but magic is far more limited in that series, and we are trying to emulate the feel of the show as much as possible. Everyone has been down for it and a few players have suggested further restrictions so I’m not worried at all.
Erica Raab that makes more sense. I was really confused because you didn’t explain what you meant by supernatural.
Carry on, my dungeon master.
There'll be tales of your homebrew caster.
Lay your weary notes to rest.
Don't you cry no more.
Imagine you have a wild magic sorcerer and warlock with hex.
Sorcerer: Okay time to roll for my wild magic to go off
Warlock who used hex on the sorcerer : No need it’s a mat one
In Rules as Written I don’t think you can use Hex on Wild magic as it’s not an Attack roll, ability check or saving throw. BUT you can murder your fellow players by making their death SAVING THROWS a 1.
@@fancyb.p.6122 rules as written maybe not, but different house rules and rule of cool and such also come into play
The penalty in checks from hex isn’t really meant for combat, imo, it’s a multi-use spell, one of my personal favourite things I ever did as a warlock is hexed the opposing party and penalised charisma shortly before a trial, he had disadvantage on charisma checks for 24 hours, and we got the bad guy imprisoned.
Situations like this, imo, are where hex really shines, the damage is an extra effect for me
I recently made a hexblade oathbreaker paladin and used hex as a precursor to his wombo combo. War cast feat. Hex on WIS, curse target, get right up in enemy's face, dreadful aspect, booming blade when they run, dump divine smites.
@@ilonaPOW Hex doesn't apply to Savings Throws, only Skill Checks.
Hex on a swashbuckling rouge, expertise in deception and disadvatage on insight check, instant charm person or enthrall
TheRealWilliamWhite that’s a good one
@@Ajmes Nooooooooooooo T-T ty ty lol
You can just see Jacob's eyes just die when he had to think up of a homebrew race as "Kitsune" left his lips he was just cringing.
www.dndbeyond.com/races/2542-kitsune
This is actually a thing I was using for one of my homebrew campaigns.. Surprised to even hear the word being mentioned by someone else.
@@MrTailson1 I remember it was a Pathfinder race when I played that.
@@nessesaryschoolthing Yeah, borrowed that for homebrewing mix with the D&D Beyond version.
@@MrTailson1 i always thought that the Kitsune's shapeshift from Pathfinder would make an interesting ability for a cursed race, like a fox based lycanthrope, or for a race of people twisted into monstrous form by a angered nature God or Archfey
@@piemaniac9410 Ooh, those sound like interesting takes on their lore.
Jacob: if i'm gonna cast this spell in a game, how can I use it to break the game. that's wat balancing is
Jeremy Crawford: fireball is a level 3 spell because I said so
Jeremy Crawford has no power here.
New Player Here, i really REALLY wanna make a "Mercenary" Class that is all about fighting dirty and their main concept is "Debuffing/Cheating" against the enemy as much as possible, taking one of the principles of battle to heart "Seek Victory, not Fairness" and these are great advice!
Warlock has two invocations that work amazingly well with hex. Maddening Hex lets you spend a bonus action to inflict automatic psychic damage on the target of your hex and any creature of your choice within 5ft of the hexed creature. There's another one I can't remember the name of that lets you teleport as a bonus action to the target of your hex.
This is just him plugging this homebrew and I very approve.
"I've come to bargin!"
roll for deception
"20!"
Not good enough.
"What do you mean not good... WAAAHH!H!!"
That's how i picture the 14 level Druid Wish going.
One of my Homebrew spells is a revised True Strike cantrip, basically I changed it's duration from up to 1 min with concentration, to a single turn spell making the next attack that targets the thing effected By True Strike gains advantage to that attack until the end of your next turn. With the number of attacks that gain advantage increasing as you level up, starting from 1 attack at lv 1, to 2 attacks gaining adv. at lv 6, then 3 attacks at lv 11, and finally 4 attacks at lv 17.
It's to actually make it useful for the caster, but it can also be used as a support spell for allies who are having trouble hitting that big bad when you're out of spell slots.
Thank you kinda strangers for the likes, this same adjustment could also be applied to Blade Ward, with the slight change of it being a reaction, but still scales similar to True Strike with it giving damage resistance starting at 1 attack then 2 then 3 and so on.
They still need to add Kua Toa as a playable Race..."Ye."
I swear on my life as a DM that I shall craft a race for you. I'll reply to this once I've finished.
nvm i found this: travelogue.fandom.com/wiki/Kuo-toa
@@dungeon_memelord623 Well, were waiting
Hey cool kid Jacob, i would love to see a revised version of your artificer class. I loved the flavour and I would love to bring it to my table without feeling that I'm being unfair
@@GoblinUrNuts I'll definitely check that out. Thank you very much kind sir
That Druid subclass is exactly what I’ve been looking for and sounds incredibly fun
Just read through your home brew, bro it’s epic. I was easily able to see the encounters in me head and was able to “play out” how they would all react.
This druid class is everything I've ever wanted. Im Puerto Rican and my family is very Taino/African in our heritage despite my Spaniard appearance lol, and it's clear you didn't just throw this together without any research. Thank you!!
Could really use a class feature called “Born with a Caul” tho
"If you play League of Legends, shut up."
lol
02:00 I didn't know I was missing a Kitsune race in D&D. Thanks, buddy...
www.dndbeyond.com/races/2542-kitsune
I actually used to while making homebrew campaigns. Surprised to know that even Jacob either knows about it, or at least thought of it.
@@MrTailson1 oh great. Now I'm going to play Senko
@@zenketski Haha, Lol.
For some reason this video wasn't in my notifications or my subscription feed. I saw the post on discord and had to go to your channel to find it. Thanks RUclips...
He tricked us into watching a 14 minute ad lol. Good job Jacob
I actually really liked the improved artifacer class, i put all my points into a upgraded car with a trunk and my gnome sorcerer lived in the trunk
This video should be retitled to "how to make the druid even more of an underrated badass"
This is helpful... I'm trying to run d and d online with some friends(first time any of us are playing) ... I'm from trinidad and Tobago so there isn't anything hardcopy available so I won't be able to get much if any official material so I'm basically going off a dice rolling app some printed character sheets and thoughts and prayers... Basically homebrewing a adventure and learning to dm as I go
Good luck! I hope your sessions go well.
Use 5etools.com
Dont tell anyone but theres a site called thetrove.net where you can look up any of the dnd books as PDFs if you prefer that
Me and my mom are having destiny themed warlocks for our camping
"Art-if-icer" is a pronunciations that bugs me far more than it should
It bugs me too. what bugs me even more is that its technically correct
@@Thunder-bw9xm Is it? I've always assumed it would sound like *artificial*.
Both are fine, the Art-if-icer is the british pronunciation
I think "Kit-soon" hurts quite a bit
@@halocrap It isn't correct. Look up the word 'Artifice' and how that's pronounced. Accents don't count as the actual pronunciation for a word, phonetics do.
Jacob:. There is no shaman in Dnd.
2e: *Am I a joke to you?*
Love how over a year and a half later WotC basically took the jinx spell and said “lol what if it were a first level spell and also gave one of your allies advantage on their next roll wouldn’t that be funny”
In all seriousness though, silvery barbs isn’t broken. It actually never outperforms shield in the overall chance to turn a hit into a miss, is less predictable in that regard but can still be nice for denying crits. It’s main use is actually probably being an indirect buff for save or sucks, since it basically recasts spells such as hold person, hypnotic pattern, or dominate monster with a first level slot instead of a much higher level slot
Hex should give disadvantage on a saving throw of the casters choice
The main use of Hex is to juice up Eldritch Blast, which now can do up to 4d10+4d6 magical damage (add up to 20 more damage if you took the no brains invocation). Double that if you crit.
Secondary uses involve Hexing the spellcasting trait of a caster to make it ridiculously more difficult to counter or dispel magic that isn't third level or lower - and if you're using dynamic initiative (the one which is rolled every round) Hexing the Dexterity of the most dangerous foe almost guarantees they'll forever go last.
The problems starts when making homebrew so wildly different from what exists that you cannot possibly compare it, like an spellcaster who can Only copy the spells of others and never truly knows any spells or an at will battle master
I love that you made use of the DoS2 soundtrack!
Hey I appreciate the free stuff even if im not a 5e nerd. The ideas are always nice
I am currently working on a 20+ page homebrew. And the kicker? It’s a subclass. A fighter subclass.
I dig this druid. I'd like to see a rogue with this flavor instead of the arcane trickster setup. Awesome video
Literally just started to make my homebrew stuff. This is almost cryptic that you upload right as I started. Thank you, Jacob
I really wanted to make a homebrew Druid subclass called the "Circle of the Cosmos". Basically they're an astrologian that uses star charts to decipher the very nature of the multiverse and gain foresight from it.
Divination abilities, special astral beast shape...i see some great potential there
thats pretty close to the UA circle of stars
@@mauro_carvajal yeah, your right, still a cool concept, I'm the sort of dm who doesn't really care about your stats, whatever flavour you want to through onto your class you can. So circle of cosmos, stars whatever as long as its relatively balanced, I'm happy
If Jinx affected saving throws, you could also have multiple users of it chain it. Make them succeed a Wisdom save or else get a 1 on their Wisdom save against your friend's Jinx. Basically, your ally could cast a second one and effectively give the target disadvantage. That could continue on to double and triple advantage for as many spellcasters as you have with Jinx. Not really OP, since that's multiple characters all using reactions and spell slots to accomplish a single effect, but it just seems like bad practice to allow chaining. "I counterspell your counterspell" is a slippery slope.
I overhauled Eldritch Blast. I have it so every subclass gets a different version of the spell. My mindset was: Force Damage, an Attack Roll, and a D10 together are uncontested in value, thus if you change away from those you affecf the value of the spell. If you add an effect it increased the value. If you add a saving throw or reduce the die size from 8 you reduce the value.
The reason why I did this was because Eldritch Blast is bland and really powerful. Everyone feels like you have to take EB just to be viable. Frankly it should just be a Warlock classs feature. Instead it's a cantrip, but why would every single patron give the same "spooky beam of energy". The Great Old One would but I didn't want that one to be distinctively better, so I changed it to Psychic damage and made the attack itself invisible to make up for that and make it more thematic. Which is almost better than the vanilla version, but the other versions are also almost better in their Own ways.
So for some of them I reduce the die size and made the damage type uncommon, which is Worse, and in exchange I offered a 1 off debuff per target/hit, which is Better, thus balancing it relatively. Effects like blindness until your turn or someone deals damage to it are better than just grappling or reducing the target's speed, so I accounted for that as well.
For example: The Fiend fires a beam of hellfire that does 2d6 Fire damage on a hit. On a critical hit the beam does an additional 1d6 Fire damage.
So the thought process is that a die 8 is the average die and something like radiant or psychic is an uncommon damage type worth investing in. Fire is one of the most heavily resisted damage types in the game, and I didn't want to use the d10. So I used 2d6 because 2d6 has a minimum of 2 instead of 1 and a maximum of 12 instead of 10. The critcal extra die part is because the Fiend is the "I will watch you burn and enjoy it" style of Warlock so I might as well make it count. It's only an extra d6 on a crit [5% chance of occurance] but I know that will feel good for the Warlock who's trying to sling devil powers around.
More examples:
The Celestial fires a beam of radiant light that attempts to blind the target. On a hit the target takes 1d6 [less value] Radiant damage [uncommon type, nuetral value]. The target then has to make a Constitution Saving Throw or be Blinded [Blinded inhibits opportunity attacks, offers disadvantage on making attack rolls, and advantage on attacks against the blinded target, so that's a lot of value] until the begining of your turn or they take damage. While Blinded is good, this will only let you get one attack in at advantage unless someone's aoe messes it up. You can abuse this yourself, really punishing them with d6s, but they are not likely to continue to fail svaing throws agaisnt your spell over time and other people have more potent attacks.
The Noble Genie fire two gold coins conjured from their treasury. On a hit the coins deal 2d4 Force Damage. If the coins are not used to deal damage to a creature they are returned to the treasury. On a critical hit the coins that remain after the attack are also doubled. The Genie is rich and literally throws money at their problems. I also couldn't restrict the elemental patron to an elemental damage type, so nuetral magicall force makes sense here, though that meant reducing the die size seemed necessary. Then I had the idea that the spell is like payday from pokémon and using it literally meant you could spend time after battle picking up money.
I went through this process for each of the patrons and made sure none of then were too similar, and I hope eventually I will be able to dm and someone will take the spell.
The best and easiest homebrew is reflavoring the existing tech instead of changing it. A blood ball spell is still creepy cool even if for game mechanics, it's a fireball.
re: feats are really strong: I somehow managed to convince my DM to treat any Perception roll of 16 or lower as a 16, because that's my passive perception because I took Observant
The Homebrew 101 on reddit was one of my favorite posts i use regularly to make homebrew classes fir my Gw2 based campaign.
Oooh. Love GW2. Tell me more about your campaign. I'm intrigued. (Also still crafting a legendary and have been slacking... need to get back on that)
@@cassandramuller7337 Well its a pet project of mine and i just started.
Mainly i plan on doing all classes and races first with appropriate spell lists.
Afterwards i mainly wanna add a beastiarium with stat blocks.
I also thought about example encounters based on fractals but I dont wanna overdo myself.
One step at the time.
Oh dont worry, i got an actual precursor drop a year ago (my first since release) but i havent finished it either.
@@Answerisequal42 That sounds so awesome :D
If you ever finish it and feel like sharing you should put it on DM's guild. Oh and let me know how it progresses, I'm really curious as GW2 is probably my favourite game. I always come back to it even if I tire of it for a while.
I'm only missing mystic coins and funerary incenses (like 85 of them) and then I'll finish Exordium. So close I can almost feel it, taste it. I'm so excited to get it for my beautiful Chrono main. Love greatsword on mesmer.
I actually Homebrewed a Shaman class that was sort of like a druidic version of the old artificer. They crafted fetishes (not that kind!) which are small objects that could hold onto spells. This allowed them to pass them along to other people as one time use things and it has 3 subclasses called shamanic paths which are the witch, the oracle, and the spirit walker. The witch gets a few more arcane spells on their list, gets find familiar, and gets special curses/hexes. The spirit walker is empowered by certain nature spirits and they get to pick different ones as they level up like totem warrior barbarian which give them different abilities, they also get an animal companion spirit that if it dies can be resummoned the following day. The oracle gets spells such as scry that let them perceive the world and they do some dice manipulation like the diviner wizard. They see the strands of fate and learn to read and manipulate them in subtle ways to change outcomes. That's by no means a complete description but they are interesting.
I made a homebrew race, fairly simple. Then a player found a loophole to get Shocking Grasp that scales off of Strength, for lightning punches.
10/10, not even mad.
because it's a reaction and it only works if they fail a wisdom save the idea of it affecting saving throws works pretty well, you're basically spending a reaction and a second level spell slot to change the saving throw to a wisdom save
This was very insightful and comparing it to your own class was eye-opening. Keep up the great work!
I am working on a race of homebrew monsters called "Dust Giants."
Jacob: “you must balance your homebrew!”
Also Jacob: “I made a home brew that lets a level 14 PC cast wish!”
God I love the music in the background
Especially the Skyrim one
Ima take a look at that homebrew too coz it looks awesome
Musket:
10 damage + 1d10 + Dex Modifiers.
Attack Roll -4 + Dex Modifiers.
Special Action: Take Aim
Allows you to use one Action, to take aim, adding +12 to your attack roll next turn.
Loading: It takes 2 turns to reload this weapon.
High early damage, very bad DPR, can be very accurate, can remove one threat early in game. But will be less usefull mid to late game (Once the 30+ hp mobs comes out to play).
It may seem very unbalanced, but the Reload time, is the biggest issue, as they can't attack every turn, unless they have another weapon, but then it doesn't count towards the loading.
Then you also need to consider they can use an action to Aim, which takes pretty much the whole turn, as it only applies the +12 to attack roll the next turn.
During that time, they can be overrun by even gobbos.
I homebrewed a hybrid race/class for vampires. Basically you're a variant human eldritch knight, but instead of certain upgrades you'd usually get with that class you'd get vampiric powers. You do start off nerfed so you're balanced with the party, and by the time you get to 20 you're just as crazy as everybody else is in terms of power
Oh man did I need this video... I am currently writing my own campaign from scratch with no DMing experience... it's really hard
My tip? Head over to dm's guild and see if you can find some stuff (like encounters and items) that you can either use directly, repurpose or just generally use as inspiration. It really helps when you get blocked. Also remember not to be a perfectionist (I no it's hard but the players won't care). If you're a perfectionist while worldbuilding you'll play in ten years at the soonest and everyone will be asking why you're still playing 5th edition. I'm newish myself and those two things have helped me a lot. Gaps'll get filled in during play and inspiration is always welcome, especially when you get writer's block. Good luck to ya. And havd fun :D
Is nobody gonna talk about the swagger souls helmet in the background
Hex is great for the free debuff. You use it to help your fellow PARTY members.
Giving the invisible man disadvantage on stealth is great.
the first homebrew i made was a fighter subclass, i Called the Arcane Pugilist(its actually on the DandDwiki site). Basically its whole schpiel was using its bonus action to infuse spells into unarmed strikes, and basically acted as a 1/3 caster. Only I have used it so far, only in 1 campaign, and i went through it with like, 3 DM friends of mine before it got its final approval.
I homebrewed a human fighter that was pretty cool. His main class skills and feats included Big Sword, which was an op version of Eldritch Blast, but you can only use it within 5 feet of the target, the damage is slashing instead of force, and it gets a d12. He also has an ability at level 5 called timber where he wacks his weapon around like a drunk lumberjack. At level 20 he gets to wack 4 times. He can't use any magic at all so he's balanced.
For spells specifically I feel like alongside damage (which is a conversation between player and DM) the most important part is how to flavor the spell or tie it into the setting/character. Like a super-chill Life Cleric being able to call down a meteor that does 12 D20 damage would feel a bit weird, even if the idea of dropping a meteor is cool.
For a personal example before the game got cancelled I had this idea for my DM where instead of Countercharm at 6th level my bard could get a custom spell, with said spell tying into other aspects of her character. Essentially it would be a way for my character to have access to a decently-damaging lightning spell (working like Fireball albeit for less damage) since she can't naturally use Lightning Bolt, but alongside that as part of my character's desire to strike terror into one of the villain factions the spell could inflict fear on whoever it actually hits. I even had a decent idea for how in-universe the spell could be made and tailored to that bard without it coming off as absurd.
WFTC: "Following that feedback, we’ve decided to say
farewell to the mystic and explore other ways of
giving players psi-themed powers, as we did
with the features of the Great Old One warlock in
the Player’s Handbook.
Jacob: ¡NOO MOREEE MYYSSSTIICCSSS!
Balance is an illusion. That mythical shang gri la that we strive for but will never reach. TTRPGs are more about making rulings than actual rules.
This is so cool! One of my players wanted to be a Shaman (he was thinking of 3.5) but we are playing 5e in Eberron so he is playing a Kalashtar druid. This 'circle of the occult' would be perfect with the spirits being his quori. He had this idea that instead of having one quori, he would have multiple and that they all influence his personality in a different way (so one day he might get angry really fast and the other day being really arrogant or loving). The rite of the dark spirits would be a great addition.
Please give us a saving throw for using the level 2 feature on an unwilling target. I absolutely love the idea of this witch being able to turn people into frogs. Might make it too strong though.
If I was writing Jinx from the inspiration of shuffling an L into a characters deck or loading their dice with a 1, I wouldn't go down the reaction route. I'd keep it structured like Hex but make it a bad luck curse rather than a debuff.
Jinx
Lvl 1 enchantment (warlock)
Casting time: Bonus action
Range: 30 feet
Components: V, S, M (a gold coin)
Duration: Concentration, up to 1 hour
You place a curse of bad luck on a creature you can see within range. The target must succeed on a Charisma saving throw or be cursed for the duration. When a creature cursed in this way rolls a natural 20 on an attack roll, saving throw or ability check, the roll is treated as a natural 1 and the spell ends.
When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 2nd level or higher, you can target one additional creature for each slot above 1st.
You shuffle a second natural 1 into their dice and guarantee that it negates a success. I was contemplating making it 19 instead of 20 but I'm considering this from a dms perspective and that would pick on champions and artifact wielders and is easier to forget when you're rolling eight+ attacks a round.
There are a few points to this you could monkey with; increase the number of enemies to make it more like bane which is a stronger spell but costs an action. Increase the range to make it more like hex however that stretches the aesthetic of flipping a coin in front of someone if they're 90 feet away.
Seems pretty strong, especially for full casters (hence warlock only) but it's balanced by the fact it is protective not active. There's a chance no 20s are rolled and a good chance a monster rolls more than one crit in an encounter. Also not sure how to break the game with this provided only warlocks use it or a cheeky bard.
Also it's more vibes than a halfling second chance, chaos sorcerer bend luck, rogue stroke of luck style reaction that lets you juuuust survive something. This has more of a night hag flipping a coin in the air, it vanishing, then spectral coins falling from the canopy, phasing through the party as they are all cursed and filled with a deep subconscious awareness that their luck has run out or a black-clad witch entering through the door of the manor. The air is sucked out the doorway behind her slamming the doors and the rogue crouched all too visible on the landing with his pick in the lock of the bedroom door feels his connection to Tymora be severed violently.
Hang on lemme copy paste this into a document...
Bard: Hippity Hoppity your homebrew spell is now my property.
I’m planning on making some scp themed monsters as a homebrew and I’ll take the advice
I’m a beginner dm and bought curse of strahd
Does anyone have any tips on running it
Thanks
i can tell you what not to do dont give your party a bunch of hombre-wed magic items that are to powerful for your party but thats sorta a no brainer but look up xp to level 3,s series on it for actual advice.
Jacob made a series about running curse of strahd and other people have to, I recommend starting there
😊 thanks
The rule of vampires not being able to enter someone’s home without consent doesn’t apply to Strahd, because he’s the lord of all Barovia, and the whole country is actually his home.
If the players enter a house to evade Strahd with the mindset of "vampires can't enter a house uninvited", just remember that Strahd can still light that house on fire lol
I have made two homebrew things I am proud of. Other than the gryth-hound a mirror dragon, a creature from the mirror plane. And a pact of the dragon.
To anyone coming across after me, it's worth remembering that formatting is important. If you want to share or sell your homebrew online, you'll be best served by being consistent with the official formatting of the game you're tinkering with.
With respect to Jinx, there's a nice illustrative example of why formatting matters. In 5e, every spell with a casting time of 1 Reaction has a triggering condition which must be met in order for you to cast said spell. This condition is always included in the text of the casting time using the form "Casting Time: 1 reaction, which you take when..." The only exception in the core rules is Hellish Rebuke, which uses the slightly different "1 reaction, which you take in reaction to..."
Anyway, as written, Jinx has no triggering condition, so it can never be cast. The body of a spell entry is for describing what that spell does, so you should not be including anything else (like triggering conditions) in that text
One thing that makes that Dark Arcanum feat oh so slightly better is the spells aren't restricted to a specific spellcasting modifier like with Magic Initiate where you need to pick spells from a class's list and use that class's spellcasting modifier when casting them.
Giving a listen to this and other videos cuz I’m working to Homebrew a Blood Magic Ranger Conclave. This will be fun
unless you make the jinx spell silent, it's pretty bad to cast in response to an insight check
NPC: "it does seem kinda suspicius."
Warlock: *flails arms around* "YOU HAVE BEEN JINXED TO NOT SEE THROUGH OUR LIES!"
NPC: "now your previous statement seems plausible, but can we talk about the spell that dude just cast?"
One spell I made was a icy spear spell that was a modified scorching ray which did 1d6 cold damage per shot, but shoot 4 spears rather than 3 rays I primarily made it as cold damage doesn't have any second level options and lets be honest playing a draconic sorcerer that doesn't use the fire option for their draconic ancestor would be a nice change of pace
now we just need a reliable cold damage cantrip
Yasssssssssssssssssss. Best. timing. ever. Diving into HB for the first time (less than year exp as dm) and it can be overwhelming.
I really wanna make a warlock Subclass that takes the idea of wild shape but adjusts it for them, Like being able to turn into different fiendish/demonic creatures as part of their pact
I am actually tinkering with a new magic class myself. The basic premise is basically. Only cantrips, maybe no level spells (except for maybe two or three that you can cast once per long rest.) and you have spell slots like a warlock that you could use to power up the Cantrips.
But I’m trying to figure out how to make the three sub classes unique.
Mage
Sub classes:
Magi
Adventurer
Puzzle master
This particular class of magic user normally does not cast normal spells.
Instead they specialize in activating magical items that allowed them to potentially wield all Cantrips. Much like in the Artificer.
They do however gain spell slots, but this is in the same vein as the warlock,
These spell slots can be used to increase the power of their cantrip adding their power by the level of the spell slot used.
(Ex: 2D6 + 4th lvl slot = 6D6)
There spell slots are also recovered after a short or long rest.
Looking sharp, great content keep being you bro :)
Wow. The circle of the occult is *really cool* 😮
I think that jinx as you described it should be an enchantment spell. It's not really affecting luck or fate so much as making the opponent screw up.
After watching Onward I can't help but notice how eerily similar you and Barely Lightfoot are XDDDDD!! Keep up the good work!!
Kitsune Race: +1 Dex, +1 Wis. Subraces: Red Fox: additional +1 Wis
Snow Fox:+1 to Con.
Traits: Superior Darkvision (due to mix of hearing and night vision), Foxfire (Up to N-2 times per long rest, minimum 3 times, you may cast firebolt for free using Wisdom as your spellcasting modifier)
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oh damn that occult druid is actually really cool
Personally, the way I "balance" homebrew is if it is a(n)...
- race, comparing it to the human variant. Just give it a (PHB) feat that would be comparable to the skills of the other class (ex: If it has magic: magic initiate; if it is combat based: charger; if it flies or swims: athlete; if it has proficiency on a specific type of ability-skill or saving throw-: resilient...)
- caster class, comparing it to the cleric (for subclass: knowledge domain).
- half caster class, comparing it to the paladin (for subclass: oath of the ancients).
- combat class, comparing it to the fighter (for subclass: champion).
- one-third caster, comparing it to the eldritch knight specifically.
- point-based class (no spell slots), comparing it to the monk (for subclass: way of the shadow).
- monster, there are no limitations.
- feat, comparing it to magic initiate (for magic related), prodigy (if it skill based), heavy armor master or alert (if it has +1 in one skill), or great weapon master (for weapon related).
- spell, comparing it to the spell of its level from: Firebolt, dancing lights, absorb elements, witch bolt, blindness/deafness, crown of madness, flame arrows, haste, greater invisibility, conjure woodland beings, bigby's hand, dawn, chain lightning, heal, forcecage, or fire storm. If it is an 8th or 9th level, go crazy.
- item, just give it to your party when you could potentially throw at them monsters that have a chance of killing them if they have the item; there should be no overpowered item, just items in the wrong level party.
- subclass comparing to that of its respective class from the alchemist specialty, path of the ancestral guardians, college of lore, war domain, circle of dreams, battle master archetype, way of the shadow, oath of vengeance, horizon walker, thief, wild magic sorcerer, pact of the archfey, or the school of abjuration.
So basically now you can be that Disney villain voodoo guy
As someone who is making his own version of the Ranger and the Beastmaster (working on it for one year or so) This is great advice!
My favorite homebrew I've ever written was a unicorn druid. Player said "I want to play a unicorn who's also an elf, that's it" so I built out a whole druid variant based on the monster manual unicorn.
I homebrewed a Kitsune race for one of my players, eventually expanding into Unicorn (based on The Last Unicorn), a Kitsune, and a Phoenix PRC's for my friends
And I kinda have an Eevee PRC (each Eeveelution has a path) in the works
All based in 3.5
Unicorn was based on the Swanmay (druid-based), kitsune was for a human becoming kitsune-like (similar to dragon PRCs), Phoenix was just fighter-based blacksmith
Maybe Hex as you designed it, and then Greater Hex at 6th (replace dispell and greater dispell?)
Gotta really love how Jacob is careful and caring with his homebrew wile WOTC are saying fuck it and putting all kinds of power creep spells and habilitys
Here's my idea for The Healing Cantrip™:
"Mend Flesh and Bone"
1 action, touch, [why are heals not necromancy again?]
Restores 3 HP and grants 2 temporary hit points; this spell fails on a target that has temporary hit points.
5 HP cures are about average for a basic Healing Word, which this cantrip is essentially taking the function of: getting someone up off the ground; but with the limit of needing to be within 5ft of someone (thereby not making Healing Word worthless).
The temp HP it grants is to limit its use to essentially 1x/person... But also not enough to work as a large buff to a low level player/group (hence why it's +3/2t instead of something like +1/4t). It also had to be more than 1 so as to discourage abuse from something like a single caltrop... A +2/3t could also work, though I think would be very powerful at Lv1 and maybe Lv2 too.
I think 5 is a good HP gain, as that's enough to get someone up and moving, but not necessarily keep them in the fight frontline. (If you wanted to do that, you'd upcast a Cure Wounds.)
I suppose you could do something like heal everyone for 3 and overwrite their 2 tHP with some other more potent tHP spell or ability to keep everyone topped off if their short rest didn't put them to full....
But that's like out of combat Healing Spirits shenanigans... But nowhere near as strong.
The jinx spell could be used in correlation with Mathew Mercer’s Dunamancy spell type pretty well.
My ideal for homebrew is to make it lean towards being super good so my players will actually try it and hopefully break it, so I can dial it back.
With cursing spells, i love making them Charisma saving throws. Like bane, there are not enough spells with Cha saving throws.
I love the art style and I see that it's the same artist that drew your characters in the CoS campaign. I like that you have chosen a Bulgarian artist which may be just a coincides and a game of faith but each time I see a person from my country doing great stuff for great people I feel amazing.