Re-Writing Yu-Gi-Oh! - A Duel Between Dragons (Part 3)

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  • Опубликовано: 24 дек 2024

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  • @Bralore125
    @Bralore125 11 месяцев назад +19

    Suggestion for Yugi and Joey's friendship (the Yu-Jo friendship): Yugi should gift Joey a copy of the summoned skull, after seeing what Joey can do with Black Skull Dragon, Yugi would feel as if Joey deserves a Summoned skull for himself.

    • @ukaszmozejko9984
      @ukaszmozejko9984 11 месяцев назад +5

      I was about to suggest to give Joey Meteor Dragon- this way Joey would have it's own heavy hitter in form of Meteor B. Dragon. But Yugi giving him Summoned Skull is more natural way to do it.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +4

      It's definitely a good idea, I even considered it myself! I was just personally torn as I've always seen Summoned Skull as an iconic Yugi monster, but Joey could definitely do with some deck improvement. The comment below mentioned Meteor Black Dragon which is the other card I was think about giving to Joey, haven't decided yet but I'm sure I'll figure it out soon lmao, thanks for the comment!

    • @Bralore125
      @Bralore125 11 месяцев назад +3

      ​@@tay-yugiohyour welcome

    • @Bralore125
      @Bralore125 11 месяцев назад +2

      ​@@ukaszmozejko9984I like that idea too. I forgot about meteor. I only know about it because of forbidden memories lol.

  • @tenma8797
    @tenma8797 11 месяцев назад +8

    I like the classic random “obstacle” that confronts the protagonist. Not out of malicious intent but for the hopes of bettering someone else. While simultaneously making it relevant to the plot.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +2

      Yeah, I really wanted to add the character as they'll have minor plot relevance down the line as well. Thank you!

    • @tenma8797
      @tenma8797 11 месяцев назад +1

      @@tay-yugioh Oooh I can’t wait! 😝

  • @royalknightcommander1097
    @royalknightcommander1097 11 месяцев назад +6

    I really like what you're doing with Joey so far, and I imagine that promise Yugi made is going to be a point of contention between them if Joey learns of it.
    Looking forward to more!

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      That’s definitely the plan! Thank you so much?

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      **!

  • @ThePhantom555
    @ThePhantom555 11 месяцев назад +1

    As someone who has never really cared for the duelist kingdom arc I can’t get enough of this. You’re doing everything right. Keep it coming!

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Thank you so much!

  • @Bralore125
    @Bralore125 11 месяцев назад +5

    I appreciate that the duel with the paradox bros was a normal duel. It feels so much constant, and not a dnd reference. I love that Allisa (hopefully that is how you spell it) was added, because it adds more important characters to the overall plot of duelist kingdom, aside from the basic Yugi, Joey, Pegasus, Mai, and Keith. Great idea to have more conflict with Yugi and him getting his grandpa back. Great character development too.
    Simply amazing.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +2

      Yeah definitely wanted to make it a less silly duel even if I liked the Paradox Brothers duel in the original. I was writing it as Alisa but honestly there's like 5 different ways of spelling it so thank god I'm speaking instead of typing lol. Thank you!

    • @Bralore125
      @Bralore125 11 месяцев назад +1

      Your so welcome

  • @amongustoelover47
    @amongustoelover47 11 месяцев назад +6

    i woke up, saw the video, AND IM SO EXCITED YAYAYAYA

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      Glad to have you back!

  • @Yousef77077
    @Yousef77077 11 месяцев назад +9

    “I promise one episode a week”
    *cue that one joke from the abridged series*
    In all seriousness, good luck!

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      One video a week! I don't think I could upload this every week, there's only so much time in the week lmao! Thanks for keeping up with the series!

    • @ClericOfPholtus
      @ClericOfPholtus 10 месяцев назад

      "Ahahahahahahaaa!"
      - Melvin Ishtar

  • @edwin9066
    @edwin9066 11 месяцев назад +3

    Omg yaaas new character!! Loved this!

  • @tenma8797
    @tenma8797 11 месяцев назад +2

    Yay! Another banger of a re-write!

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you so much!

  • @darksoul1004
    @darksoul1004 10 месяцев назад +1

    You know, I just remembered in this episode that Duelist Kingdom used duels that started with 2000 LP!

    • @ClericOfPholtus
      @ClericOfPholtus 10 месяцев назад

      Back in the baby days when the game (as we understand it) wasn't even officially designed

  • @Prunk09
    @Prunk09 Месяц назад

    Pegasus: kaiba will never leave his blue eyes deck behind
    Evil corp: err what about his brother
    Pegasus: oh I guess that too... I'm not as sure

  • @Rebelghast
    @Rebelghast 11 месяцев назад +2

    9:03 you missed out on making a third rate duelist with a fourth rate deck joke

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Fuck you're so right

  • @DracoFoxy_G
    @DracoFoxy_G 11 месяцев назад +2

    I find it interesting that you added that character i'm curious how her part in the story will go. Also instead of having bakura be taken to the hospital in battle city i have a sort of incomplete idea of something else you could do

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Always welcome to new ideas! And the new character (so far in my plans) isn't going to play a huge part but will definitely have some other sporadic appearances and impact on the story.

    • @DracoFoxy_G
      @DracoFoxy_G 11 месяцев назад

      @tay-yugioh instead of having bakura go with the hospital with grandpa you can make yami bakura make or pretend to make bakura extremely sick this can do 2 things 1 it can give him time to look for more millenium items and 2 gives him time to get the locator cards. Also I think it'll better in his duel with yugi

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      @@DracoFoxy_G I like the idea! I have more in store for Bakura so I'm not sure how much I'll take from this but it's a nice direction if I plan to go that way!

  • @KINGD353
    @KINGD353 11 месяцев назад +2

    Personally I would've had joey duel Panik since you're clearly having him bond more with mai. it also seems weird randomly giving yugi an extra duel especially since his prize money in cannon is what cures serenity's vision but I guess I'll see what you're planning soon enough.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      The prize money aspect is definitely a different plot point that will be a recurring theme over the next few parts so sadly will just have to wait a little bit for those.
      As for the PaniK duel I did actually consider having it be Joey but I felt like that duel was the catalyst for Mai and Yugis build up towards the final so long term it was more beneficial for it to be him. Thanks for the comment!

  • @mujiescomedy279
    @mujiescomedy279 11 месяцев назад +2

    I love the series so far. This is just a suggestion, and not needed, but I think it would be cool if you told us whenever the story was the same. Like, with the bakura yugi duel where it was quite similar to the original I couldn’t figure out which parts were different and which were the same. The only differences I could figure out were bakura having star chips and Tristan sacrificing himself

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Those were the only differences from that duel really, so you didn't miss much! I understand what you're saying but I feel like it wouldn't flow very well as a story if I was constantly saying what was new and what wasn't. Thank you for the comment, though!

  • @1streetmagic
    @1streetmagic 11 месяцев назад +1

    Very cool

  • @henri6207
    @henri6207 10 месяцев назад

    One thing I miss from the original manga is that Yami Bakura slowly gains the trust of Bakura. And that Yami Bakura can mimic the real Bakura with a decent amount of accuracy. These things the original series never really takes advantage of. I think itd be cool if during the Oricalchos arc Bakura is left all alone while the rest of the gang go to America, while Bakura can only rely on the evil spirit to keep him alive.
    2 more things, first Id have the Noah arc take place BEFORE the battle city quarter finals, that way it could be a little more relevant to the story as a whole since youd have Mai, Bakura, and Marik (still known as Namu) to add some more depth.
    Another alternate for the Orichalcos arc is that maybe Bakura lost his soul to the Orichalcos and Yami Bakura needs it back for his plans to work. So hed actually have to work with the Pharoah.
    All in all Im most curious about your takes on the filler arcs as they could use the most improvement.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  10 месяцев назад

      Definitely have some ideas for the filler arcs in the future but I love that Yami Bakura/Pharoh working together idea!

  • @ukaszmozejko9984
    @ukaszmozejko9984 11 месяцев назад +1

    If you could find a way for Kaiba and Joey to have tag team duel it would have been neat.
    You coul also throw some bone for Rex Raptor - outside of beign arrogant he did nothing wrong, yet in your rewrite he got it even worse

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Definitely more to come from Kaiba and Joey's relationship, using Duelist Kingdom mainly to sow the seeds for it. Rex only lost the one proper duel here and it was a tag duel but yeah he hasn't done great, I have a plan to do a little bit more for him but I don't see him or Weevil as major threats, honestly. Thanks for the comment!

  • @KirbeyAlt
    @KirbeyAlt 11 месяцев назад

    you know me tay I love yu gi oh

  • @AurasFeel
    @AurasFeel 11 месяцев назад

    The introduction to the new character was interesting. I was figuring it'd be an early introduction to Rebecca but I'm interested to see where Elisa's story goes.
    Going forward, I think the idea of Bakura being horrified by Yami Bakura trying as hard as he can to push away and suppress him going forward would be great. Having his own fear and terror at being taken and possessed in comparison to Yami Yugi supporting his reincarnation/son/little brother figure would be a good link to eachother. Bakura consistently felt like a fifth wheel to the team whenever he wasn't being taken over in the original series, so giving him some more fleshing out would be a good change imo.
    EDIT: By the way, I'm on hand and knee begging you if you can only adapt one of the other, PLEASE adapt Yugioh R over Orichalcos or Grand Championship. It's my favorite arc in DM.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      The character of Alisa isn't going to be a major playing but will definitely have an impact on the story going forward, will be interesting to see what I do but there's always a chance I change my plans with her as she's got a lot of good reactions so far!
      As someone from England I've always had a soft spot for Bakura and I definitely liked the idea of him trying to fight off Yami Bakura, didn't consider the contrast to Yugi/The Pharoh though so that's a great idea!
      I hate to sound ignorant but I looked up Yu-Gi-Oh R and are you referencing the manga? I plan on doing re-writes for both the Orichalcos and Grand Championship but I'm always happy to add more content, or even a custom arc taking inspiration from Yu-Gi-Oh R, I would have to read it first though! Thanks for the comment!

    • @trishaishot462
      @trishaishot462 11 месяцев назад

      @@tay-yugiohto summarize yugioh r it’s basically a continuation of what two people who were basically trying to get revenge on yugi for blaming him for killing pagesus since he is killed by bakura in the manga. The plot twist is there is three unique cards that are the anti god cards so it could fit around battle city. And also brings back bandit Keith since in the manga he dies. And Joey gets a kick ass duel disk. And yugi duels as well using toy centered deck. It had a lot of potential but it feels like it could’ve fit between battle city but yeah they want to sacrifice tea to reviving pagasus but also the anti god cards have similarities towards the god cards like one has the same attack points as obelisk but has ability to half all monsters except for him,another one shares the attack increase like Osiris(slifer) but blows the field when it leaves the field , and last one the wicked avatar looks like ra sphere mode but has the ability to negate spell and trap cards from being used for a few turns but also has the ability to always have the highest attack. Keith uses one of them, the two people seeking revenge use the other two. And when they are told to go to certain place to retrieve tea they are faced against duel hunters based on ranks on how good they are dueling level wise and yeah it’s also gave Joey more screen time to shine also he gets another shot at Keith using his antigod card.(maybe a rewrite of Joey getting ra from Marik(just a idea) but also kaiba shows up too I think they have him blackmailed as well, then one of the the dudes that wants revenge learns what really happened and changes sides and then leads to yugi fighting as well as that guy dueling for yugi instead so basically becomes a temporary ally but yeah it’s what happened and it has potential to flesh out other characters too but yeah it ends with them(I won’t spoil the end) but this also where the chess cards were introduced and Joey helped this girl duel since she was very beginner like and was pretty wholesome and yeah over all just a fun side story of the aftermath of pagesus dieing

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      @@trishaishot462 Sounds really interesting actually, would have to give it a read to get more of a grasp on it but sounds like I could definitely incorporate some aspects into Battle City instead of making it stand alone. Thanks for letting me know!

    • @trishaishot462
      @trishaishot462 11 месяцев назад

      @@tay-yugioh your welcome I love yugioh r its pretty underrated it would’ve been so cool if they added that to the anime but alas that never happened

  • @primusvsunicron1
    @primusvsunicron1 11 месяцев назад

    for Battle City will you give Odion a bigger role before the finals?

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +2

      Thanks for the comment! In terms of battle city, I still have a lot of different potential directions and ideas floating around so I couldn’t say for certain as some have Odion in a much bigger role yet some less so, so you’ll have to just wait and see I suppose, sorry for such a vague answer!

  • @WildDancer101
    @WildDancer101 11 месяцев назад

    Re-writing the anime series to make sense is interesting to see.
    Here's some advice: Write your script and read it out your way while recording. If you mess up one part, do it again and edit out that mistake later. It'll make your lines flow more better without any hiccups.
    And if you can afford them, buy a high quality microphone and a pop filter so that your voice doesn't sound scratchy and low. If not, ask a friend with those devices to help you with this project of yours.
    I even have some suggestions for the re-writing of the anime if you're interested, but I'll wait 'till you get to the later arcs.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      I do actually write the script and read it, I just realised whilst making this content that I am bad at reading. I have re-done a few bits but sometimes you just give up after having to read 5000+ words lmfao, I also have a Blue Yeti but it's quite old now, looking to buy a new one soon.
      Always welcome to new ideas, thanks for the comment!

  • @majorblackrose7905
    @majorblackrose7905 11 месяцев назад +1

    Interesting a new character, interested in seeing how you will address some failed plotholes that the creators left in the show for instance how Joey could have beat Yugi in DK finals based off the cards he had, he could have used Kunai Chain with his Garozis before attacking with his BSD meaning spellbinding would have procked on his other monster and leaving him open to go for game with like 100 LPs left. Also will be interesting if you Joey in general is given a better hand in general in your overall re-write I like many others believe him to be one of the greatest and that he could go toe to toe and beat both the Pharoah and Kiba himself if he hadn't been made a comic relief character. Plus never made sense why he wouldn't bank on his Red Eyes more instead of going with the majorly luck based deck

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Joey is my favourite Yu-Gi-Oh! Character ever, so I plan on keeping him as comic relief but no where near the level of the original, hopefully these past couple episodes have really helped solidify him as a good if not great duelist in my re-write, thanks for the comment!

    • @majorblackrose7905
      @majorblackrose7905 11 месяцев назад

      @@tay-yugioh i dont mind comic relief he is my favourite as well but i just hate how it was used to his detriment in the show to make him seem a worse duelist than he was

  • @Bubbajr_
    @Bubbajr_ 11 месяцев назад +1

    Wow it’s been 2 days since an upload. Series must be dead

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      Dead and buried, I give up

  • @Devitron87
    @Devitron87 11 месяцев назад

    If you keep going id change Marik having a alter ego by the puzzle. You could however have bakura influence him. He already wants the god cards and to beat the Pharaoh. But is influenced to rule the world and such.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Marik already has an alter ego, doesn't he? Thanks for the comment!

    • @Devitron87
      @Devitron87 11 месяцев назад

      @@tay-yugioh he does I meant that part is odd like Marik was the bad guy now his alter ego is. Just having Marik be the bad guy not the spirit of the Rod or whatever it was.

    • @primusvsunicron1
      @primusvsunicron1 11 месяцев назад

      @@Devitron87Yami Marik was the evil in Marik’s heart

  • @ZeroOmega-vg8nq
    @ZeroOmega-vg8nq 11 месяцев назад

    I can see someone mustave been inspired by daigoknight.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Absolutely! Whilst I’m not up to date with his Re-Writing Naruto series, I definitely enjoyed the episodes I watched! The Amagi is also a big inspiration!

    • @ZeroOmega-vg8nq
      @ZeroOmega-vg8nq 11 месяцев назад

      @@tay-yugioh amagi does rewrites? Or you mean their general story summary of videos

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      @@ZeroOmega-vg8nqNot the re-writes but the style of storytelling and what if’s, I have a what if coming out next week and that style of content is inspired by them also.

  • @CatolynThomas
    @CatolynThomas 11 месяцев назад

    Tay, I'm already rewriting Yu-Gi-Oh. In fact I'm already working on Yu-Gi-Oh season 6

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      That’s awesome!

    • @CatolynThomas
      @CatolynThomas 11 месяцев назад

      @@tay-yugioh yes. Especially since I know how I want it to be

    • @ClericOfPholtus
      @ClericOfPholtus 10 месяцев назад

      I'm confused
      Aren't there are only 5 seasons?
      Duelist Kingdom
      Battle City Pt1
      Virtual World/Battle City Pt2
      Waking the Dragons
      Grand Prix/Ancient Egypt
      I mean the filler arcs really mess up the pacing of the story but it is what it is

  • @Bralore125
    @Bralore125 11 месяцев назад +1

    Disclaimer: this is nott really a suggestion, but just an opinion. For Yugi vs Kaiba round 2, I think the whole duel was stupid. I definitely prefer your version of the prototype duel disks. I think that the living arrow + mammoth graveyard fusion was stupid. I think Yugi could have won, mabey with dragon capture jar or something. If Kaiba were to win, i think he should win fairly, instead of threatening to jump. I love little Yugi's kindness, but he shouldn't have had to surrender. Sorry for the long commet. Thanks for this series, it has been such a great ride so far, definitely watching it all.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад +1

      I personally disagree because I think it's a great display of Kaiba's desperation/what he'd do for his brother but I do agree that the living arrow thing was awful and I hated it. It'll definitely be an altered match though!

    • @Bralore125
      @Bralore125 11 месяцев назад +1

      I know it was to represent how far Kaiba would go for Mokuba, but he could have said that he would jump himself, instead of making Yugi responsible for his death. Quick question, will the shadow realm replace death in your series.

    • @azuresaiyan9005
      @azuresaiyan9005 5 месяцев назад

      @Bralore125 well he was trying to win at all cost. Just saying he will jump isn’t enough to convince Yugi of his conviction to the ultimatum.

  • @daraghokane4236
    @daraghokane4236 11 месяцев назад

    Yu-Gi-Oh but they play Pokémon instead Mewtwo is Pegasus I'm not just the strongest Pokémon trainer I'm the strongest Pokémon.

  • @daraghokane4236
    @daraghokane4236 11 месяцев назад

    Mai is just a terrible dullest, she never won a game without cheating. She beat rek because of the perfume, and panic said she's the weakest dulests he ever faced. It's canon shes bad at the game

    • @attackonyugioh92
      @attackonyugioh92 11 месяцев назад

      *mai

    • @daraghokane4236
      @daraghokane4236 11 месяцев назад

      @@attackonyugioh92 that could be a good rewrite for her, Mia has to learn to win without cheating.

    • @tay-yugioh
      @tay-yugioh  11 месяцев назад

      Good idea! I definitely have plans to make Mai a better duelist in my re-write as I loved her growing up and she always deserved better, thanks for the comment!

    • @pn2294
      @pn2294 11 месяцев назад

      That’s a hilariously bad take. That’s like saying Kevin Nee is a weakling.

    • @daraghokane4236
      @daraghokane4236 11 месяцев назад

      @@pn2294 she was a professional dulest kept winning but always cheated that's cannon. after losing to Joey she stopped cheating and keep loosing