Forgive Me │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • Опубликовано: 9 сен 2024
  • I'm sorry doesn't seem like enough sometimes after we've hurt someone and denied that we were in the wrong. I wrote this about one of my closest friends and dedicate this poem to him, but to others I have hurt too.
    Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
    Background music from freesound.org by the user cheesepuff
    Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx

Комментарии • 257

  • @emogirl58180
    @emogirl58180 6 лет назад +75

    Your spoken words relate to my life so much. I love your videos, I listen to them all the time.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад +4

      katie silva Aww thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that you can relate to them and enjoy them! It means a lot!

    • @emogirl58180
      @emogirl58180 6 лет назад +2

      Mel's Thoughts and whoever made u feel like this. I promise this feeling will pass it always does.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад +2

      katie silva Thank you for the words of encouragement! 😊 I appreciate it so much! ❤

    • @Virtuosont
      @Virtuosont 4 года назад +1

      Cheers for the Video! Apologies for the intrusion, I am interested in your opinion. Have you researched - Reyvery Monrayden Release (search on google)? It is a smashing one off guide for using the secrets of ho oponopono to master gratitude and forgivness without the headache. Ive heard some great things about it and my m8 at last got great success with it.

    • @sierrapadilla808
      @sierrapadilla808 4 года назад

      Kudos for the video content! Sorry for chiming in, I am interested in your thoughts. Have you heard about - Reyvery Monrayden Release (do a google search)? It is an awesome exclusive product for using the secrets of ho oponopono to master gratitude and forgivness without the normal expense. Ive heard some super things about it and my m8 finally got cool success with it.

  • @wendymarin3429
    @wendymarin3429 2 года назад +8

    Forgiveness is a beautifull word in itself.no matter how hard is is forgive, forgive from your heart.

  • @jimmylyons6643
    @jimmylyons6643 4 года назад +9

    I have tears in my eyes with your touching poems Mel i love it it just like of taste of spiritual tea

  • @piecesbymihlalisongcaka
    @piecesbymihlalisongcaka 4 года назад +6

    today i wronged a friend and the bond we had went up in flames, i relate to your poem so much

  • @VinoVenitas
    @VinoVenitas 6 лет назад +15

    "Squeeze out all of the love I could get." I loved that line. This was a really nice piece and the way you performed it was on point. I loved the energy and passion you put into this. Well done

  • @blackcrown6273
    @blackcrown6273 3 года назад +5

    So sad but so real. I like the music. It fits to what you wrote. Thank you for sharing this writing. It gave me inspiration for my next writing.

  • @bhaweshsarwa3042
    @bhaweshsarwa3042 2 года назад +3

    So related to my life, I lost my love and best friend.. I miss her.. I wish, I got a chance to asked for forgiveness.. 🙂
    Sometimes life hits you hard💔
    Thanks for this heart touching lines.

  • @tylerfulwood7317
    @tylerfulwood7317 6 лет назад +11

    im sure the one you speak of has been waiting for you to return and everything go back to how it was. friends are friends cant push them away no matter what! stay strong melissa

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад

      Tyler Fulwood Thank you for your words. I'll try and keep them in mind

    • @tylerfulwood7317
      @tylerfulwood7317 6 лет назад

      Mel's Thoughts said my whole name lol just be alright. Giving advice to people is who I am and what I enjoy about me

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад

      Yeah the reply automatically puts the name unless I erase it. But I understand, I've been in a weird place mentally. Just trying to figure stuff out

    • @tylerfulwood7317
      @tylerfulwood7317 6 лет назад

      Mel's Thoughts well do you thats all you could be and all you ever will be. Yourself

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад +1

      Yeah and that's the tough part. I'll see what happens

  • @abbeymckenzie6344
    @abbeymckenzie6344 3 года назад +4

    I feel like no matter how much forgiveness someone gives you, you still truly feel lost. I hurt the one I love and I want to make it up to him so badly, but the fact that I hurt him echoes in my brain like a bell that has been rung and is still ringing out despite the blow already been taken to it. I feel like it is eating me up like a buffet of guilt and I don't know why I did it or why I didn't stop myself, but seeing him cry those tears made me hate myself. I don't know what possessed me or what he done to deserve it, god knows that I'm not worth it. I don't deserve his smiles or his tears, he gave me one more chance but it is that I fear. I love him so much but what if that isn't enough, I feel like I've lost him, even though he's tough. I don't want to keep him and be selfish and needy, because he has a heart of gold that should be let go of freely, I don't deserve his touch or his voice or his kindness, how could I be so horrible, turned to the dark side with my blindness.

    • @bairon014
      @bairon014 3 года назад

      i feel the same way 😪, do you want to talk about it?, i'm going through the same, if you want to, here is my instagram: cbarn_14

  • @lorityndall5783
    @lorityndall5783 2 года назад +4

    I have a feeling this message was from my husband he passed away in November we were not on good times when he passed away and I feel this message is coming through thank you for posting this I really needed to hear these words

    • @213segura8
      @213segura8 Год назад

      I'm sorry to hear that I'm trying to win my wife's love back from all the things I have done in the past I really hope I can get everything done before I pass.

  • @antdoepico13
    @antdoepico13 11 месяцев назад +1

    I have forgiveness in my heart...I feel that my love for this person was used for a punch line in a joke with her friends at social gatherings...authentic love is sometimes not cherished as it should 😢

  • @sharoniquesara6782
    @sharoniquesara6782 2 года назад +1

    This makes me cry it touches my heart because am feeling the same way

  • @Animalplanetkennels_
    @Animalplanetkennels_ 4 месяца назад

    We’re good ( growth is the best part of this journey )

  • @Isyaankhan
    @Isyaankhan 5 лет назад +12

    You won everything .
    I have lost battle in love .

  • @chrismorara9073
    @chrismorara9073 6 лет назад +6

    Great Mel....I just stumbled on this awesome video as i was researching on the topic "Forgiveness". What happened in a moment of weakness cant translate that you are wicked. I hope you get your NEWSTART real fast.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад

      Thank you for checking out my poem video :) It means a lot! I hope so too! Thank you very much!

    • @terrypigg9977
      @terrypigg9977 3 года назад

      I'd love to make amends.but you'll have to show me you 2ant 5hat..just that.its up to you completely.

  • @boballison6258
    @boballison6258 9 месяцев назад

    Grateful for friendships that get better with time. Somebody has forgiven you. God bless you.

  • @diamdiamjela3081
    @diamdiamjela3081 4 года назад +3

    Really touch my heart.

  • @devadp702
    @devadp702 2 года назад +1

    You poetry is like
    So warm,real and magical.
    Just beautiful crafted.
    Love from India.

  • @bob9025
    @bob9025 4 года назад +6

    I shared this with my friend rn we are arguing and this is my apologies to her

  •  3 года назад +2

    Absolutely beautiful❤️

  • @sherry1802
    @sherry1802 3 года назад +1

    Just a journey! And I am not alone!

  • @diyasharma3848
    @diyasharma3848 3 года назад +3

    These are all things dt I want to express to someone who luved me so deeply whom I luved & than bcz of my foolishness did wrong n caused him so much pain.m sorry m sorry m sorry..u were the best thing happened in my life u were u r so precious.i was a stupid.i didn't recognise your pure luv towards me in that time.plz pardon me.u r the only true luv in my life.god bless u jas.hope will be together again in this life time n than I will not let u go.❤️my hrt is aching..missing u evryday n praying for u everyday

  • @3jess
    @3jess 4 года назад +2

    she sent me this when we got in a fight in march, and since then i listen to this thinking she sent it to me again

  • @mellisakirabo3547
    @mellisakirabo3547 2 года назад

    Melissa am so grateful to have a name sake like u and am healing from depression coz of u

  • @user-ox6qs7gz1p
    @user-ox6qs7gz1p 3 месяца назад

    ♥️ Beautiful words✨

  • @AndrewGarrison-cu7os
    @AndrewGarrison-cu7os 9 месяцев назад +1

    I forgive you and I apologize for my mistakes 💯

  • @youandmepriya143
    @youandmepriya143 Год назад

    thank you so much for this wornderfull words from the❤❤❤

  • @hello.-.5509
    @hello.-.5509 3 года назад +2

    WHY CAN’T HE FORGIVE ME AM SORRY THAT I BROKE YOUR HEART 𝕒𝕞 𝕤𝕠𝕣𝕣𝕪

  • @sanjivbanerjea3725
    @sanjivbanerjea3725 4 года назад +1

    I am unable to ease your pain but I still stand strongly beside you whether you sense me or not, not physically but mentally I propose to be your support now and always

  • @mikebaldwin686
    @mikebaldwin686 4 года назад +1

    It takes so much inner courage to ask for unconditional forgiveness to admit well maybe in my case who I truly love just wasn't ready for the unconditional love I will always have for her. Yes she and I have had quite a journey and yes no one has hurt me more caused tears of sadness of confusion. Maybe just for the sake of having a new beginning I accept the life lessons I learned in the hardest ways. Yes I sometimes do feel that I be happier struck me again with his arrow of bliss be with someone I have never met but that not my truth and the fact is I love you so much that my only issue is all the time maybe both of us have wasted.

  • @menlajamir
    @menlajamir 4 года назад

    @0:26 hit me so hard. I lost the love battle but my ego doesn't allow me to speak!

  • @user-xn3fc2nt3f
    @user-xn3fc2nt3f 6 месяцев назад

    Nice poem ❤😢

  • @infoandmotivationaltv5636
    @infoandmotivationaltv5636 4 года назад +5

    I love you too my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘 ❤️......
    I have already forgiven you bbcz you are my love😢
    Bt You will have to apologise on the place you have given me so much dying pain and many hardships to my heart and soul💘💘💘💘💘💞💞💞💔💔💔

  • @amberquinn8460
    @amberquinn8460 9 месяцев назад

    Good work

  • @Binknew
    @Binknew 10 месяцев назад

    Forgiveness is give and take..not a game..🐎

  • @marija2781
    @marija2781 10 месяцев назад

    I Don't think that you need to ask for forgiving.I know exactly who is respomsible for all my trouble.They are guilty and they Will see,one day,how big mistakes they have done.Many around us has made plan to do that what they have done.You and I are victim of their evil and our love was damaged.God can rebuild everything what is destroyed.God is with us and love Will winn❤❤❤❤You are my hero❤

  • @ellenkukuha2281
    @ellenkukuha2281 2 года назад +1

    Love it❤💯

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    and you don't want any treatment, it is good

  • @erinoliver5277
    @erinoliver5277 Год назад

    I like this

  • @lakeshagadson357
    @lakeshagadson357 2 года назад

    those are very caring words

  • @faizaasif4957
    @faizaasif4957 3 года назад

    Amazing, this was up to mark poem

  • @dynamicakislovebyjesusdyna6866
    @dynamicakislovebyjesusdyna6866 3 года назад +1

    I know she has forgiven you 😮

  • @cnxindustries3276
    @cnxindustries3276 2 месяца назад

    Never say forgive me
    Just love ❤️

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад

    It's only a disease, and I don't blame anybody, but the doctor taken me alive, and I am thankful to him

  • @youremysunshine1790
    @youremysunshine1790 2 года назад

    A promise...
    If you (actually) love him then you will and would or it's manipulation and if that's ficked up...
    More than words
    It's time to love or pay karma‼️🌻🌙🌻😻

  • @kushoautar353
    @kushoautar353 4 года назад +1

    Wonderful

    • @firstinpoetry
      @firstinpoetry 4 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/byzeda5_cY4/видео.html

  • @happylilly789
    @happylilly789 11 месяцев назад

    I hate my self for not fixing my bad traits sooner

  • @victoriaasantewaa950
    @victoriaasantewaa950 2 года назад

    Wonderful words

  • @nomakhulunare9173
    @nomakhulunare9173 3 года назад +1

    Damn💐

  • @oceanaire1296
    @oceanaire1296 4 месяца назад

    I Hope so !!!

  • @aenaldevs
    @aenaldevs 7 месяцев назад

    I hold no grudges and have already forgiven, 🙏 may peace be with you.. 🙏
    I was, am and will be a well wisher 🙏.
    Equally I am sorry: if knowingly or unknowingly I have hurt anyone.. 🙏

  • @tithihossain8602
    @tithihossain8602 3 года назад

    i wanna hug you sis 🥺

  • @thelifeofvoodoo840
    @thelifeofvoodoo840 4 года назад +2

    Hi. My names Han and I’m 14. My parents split when I was really young. I lived with my dad until I was about 11, and I lived with my mom for a year. I was so focused on not living with my dad I didn’t realize how happy I was. My mom got me medicated, helped me get a service dog, got me into an amazing school where I met my best friends and.., I moved away. I moved an hour away to live with my dad and I realized, I’m not happy here. Now, while I was at my moms I always told her how I was so unhappy. She doesn’t make a lot of money and we juuust get by. My dad makes way more money than she does, and my dad talked it into me that she wasn’t trying hard enough. That she could try harder and achieve more. So I screamed at her for it. I told her how I hated it there and I wanted to move back with my dad because that was my home, but now I realize. I realize that I was happy with how everything was. I learned that my mom was my best friend, she wouldn’t try to change my opinion on anything. She wouldn’t call my other parent horrible and a bad parent, she’d always be there for me and support me every step of the way, but, my dad is different. I messed up, I messed up really bad. My dad was able to talk it into me that my mom wasn’t doing the right thing but it was him who wasn’t doing the right thing. My dad wanted me to believe what he did. He didn’t want me to be happy, he just wanted things to go his way. I’ve realized within the month or so that I’ve lived here that my heart belongs back in Belcamp, in a little condo on the top floor with downstairs neighbors that hate us, a little family, our dogs, and my best friends. Our always messy house, and tired family, is what I love. We may not be rich, and we may not be the best of people, but we’re just what I need. Most people think we’re weird, gross, and unkempt but I think we’re pretty cool. Sure, I’m crying as I wright this but there’s a smile on my face. I miss it. I miss our little home. I miss you, momma. My best memories are with my momma, that condo, my school, and my friends there. Man, I messed up moving away, I really did.

  • @margaretbrazill5816
    @margaretbrazill5816 4 года назад +6

    I dont know how to react to this message. The pain is still fesh. I still love you, but am afraid to show it any more for fear of being shot down again. I would hope we could try again, but that will be up to you. Dont send me messages saying you want me with you or things like that, when you dont really mean them. I was ready to give up my whole world for you. If that isnt love, what is!! Search yourself, find out your true feelings and what you really want. Let me know and we can see about trying again. You know how i feel about you, but it may be a while before i can tell you

    • @mikebaldwin686
      @mikebaldwin686 4 года назад

      I actually understand this for the fear of rejection is a very real one in my life too so much that this fear has held me back from accomplishing so much. Yeah it is also very difficult to say you are in love with someone directly to them especially after so much and so long. Now for myself let me ask you this please? What if you don't have to say anything? Just let yourself be in a position to see me let me hug you whisper what you really need to hear from me as a person so that way if you choose to hug me back or dare I say kiss me that means much more than words just some friendly advice.

    • @jesseijvj5891
      @jesseijvj5891 3 года назад

      If it's real it's worth a try..

  • @abdulhaqabdulkader8038
    @abdulhaqabdulkader8038 3 года назад

    Happiness and sorrow

  • @MarcusTalbert
    @MarcusTalbert 2 года назад

    🙏

  • @staceypowell6668
    @staceypowell6668 Год назад

    Did, Do and Done👍

  • @doriss.j8481
    @doriss.j8481 3 года назад

    Yes we will move on as friends

  • @user-uw8zw2fl6h
    @user-uw8zw2fl6h 4 месяца назад

    No matter but am not sure how to restart it

  • @tejaslambade8080
    @tejaslambade8080 2 месяца назад

    ♥️🙃 no problem.. atleast and atlast you realise

  • @rutonguyen3778
    @rutonguyen3778 3 месяца назад

    😢💜💜

  • @sarahvickysarahvicky3284
    @sarahvickysarahvicky3284 3 года назад

    The thief will run after seeing us.

  • @sheetalsharma9503
    @sheetalsharma9503 6 месяцев назад

    Well, apology accepted ❤🌹😌

  • @Rene-ky2gs
    @Rene-ky2gs Год назад

    God bless you I hope you find love somewhere else 💗

  • @chithranaresh5114
    @chithranaresh5114 3 года назад

    Thank u thank u

  • @georgeionut2568
    @georgeionut2568 3 года назад

    Stop worries about it. Is ok! Love 💕 u!

  • @ep28061984
    @ep28061984 2 года назад

    Baby, I'm here. Just do the step so we can be together.

  • @c1re
    @c1re 2 года назад

    Iam sorry... 🥺

  • @fazirualhassan5922
    @fazirualhassan5922 3 года назад +1

    I still love you we mean for each other🤗💕💖💓

  • @heshithsachintha6032
    @heshithsachintha6032 4 года назад

    I forgive you. Don't kill your sleep. Good morning.

  • @Hayet-jb2sd
    @Hayet-jb2sd 6 месяцев назад

    INCHALLAH

  • @sayaligawande2208
    @sayaligawande2208 3 года назад

    I would like to dedicate this to my mother

  • @MariannVela99
    @MariannVela99 4 года назад +1

    I wish my friend just forgived me what i have done to her i didn’t mean to hurt her 🥺🥺😔😔😢😢.

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад

    my childees habits went out of me

  • @Will-tf9hb
    @Will-tf9hb 2 года назад +1

    I do share with you for the reason I'm alive I'm with you in spirit in your mind forever

  • @sheetal9661
    @sheetal9661 4 месяца назад

    I forgive you. I have no complaints.

  • @cyberrockie8556
    @cyberrockie8556 11 месяцев назад

    She maybe anrgy at my entire being. But maybe i still hope.. that we'll find each other right? No... forgiveness is hard and not a eazy thing to do.. it takes time... only leaving a scar that may bleed from time to time.. and people move on.. they leave u behind picking ur pieces up tryna fix urself 💯 they forgive you when it beneficial.. human are cruel creatures... like that star in the sky.. she faded into the night without looking back. Breaking my whole being
    Leaving me questioning my action.
    Questioning love and decent connection.. people are not looking for love these days.. they are looking for help.. because the cost of living is hard. But i finally do forgive her for leaving without reason or telling me why she left..
    Idk anymore.. love is hard to find

  • @laurieestep2675
    @laurieestep2675 6 лет назад +1

    I forgive you and I love you

  • @showkatyakub9627
    @showkatyakub9627 3 года назад

    There is nothing for sorrow forgiveness . where stay love sorrow forgiveness can not enter there . my all love and wishes for you . don't think about the past . Enjoy yourself .

  • @AJk-ig9eo
    @AJk-ig9eo 3 года назад

    I sent this as an apology and I hope he forgives me

  • @carmenmariecuevas3142
    @carmenmariecuevas3142 3 года назад +1

    😭

  • @user-db1wf4qo6q
    @user-db1wf4qo6q 2 года назад

    4give me ..I m sorry..i dk what I hv done but sorry ..

  • @wendyyoung9842
    @wendyyoung9842 3 года назад

    When people breakdown.. forgiveness I give .. I give it to me tooo. Mercy is we are human and cannot do what we wanted.. in sadness we deepen true honesty from the heart.. facts don’t make honesty.. knowledge of the human heart ❤️ it has more truer than..and or/ speaks loudest truth to us more than facts .. in needing forgiveness you give it better bcuz you yourself are in need of that... Matthew I love you too much .. though I’m hurting... can’t dwell .. you run... I don’t know how you can help it.. yes.. you went with my sisters house and then you told me that you didn’t know them. Break my heart WITH MY SISTER? I’ve had my fill.. killing me.. 🤧.. love no melancholy.. same human mercy grace frees you from the ONLY PERFECT LOVER WHO CAN .. JESUS and each other meekness not weakness.. let’s accept without condemning.. the foe condemning the brethren.. let’s not help that bastard. nasty pain he harbors . God... is careful to guide teach to show goodness too everyone... He loves humanity as family.. we decreases HE MUST INCREASE..& to love us gently as His children.. the way to go .. no fishing it’s done ✅ sea of forgetfulness... protect your heart the wellspring of life... give loving other people. Yourself first.. As you are too in Need. Share well..Truth not factual .. but your deeper.. understanding . Don’t pick apart or clobber/ judgement.. you have no idea what someone is going through.. they’re possibly in greater pain! / possibly within this ...hurting others being in pain.. ily Matthew.. I hope it makes you happy not sad .. and grateful moreover.. I hope to see you soon enough.. I’m tiredness a lot pray .. thanks hugs kindness Kim

  • @rishusingh935
    @rishusingh935 2 года назад

    I hurt her. And now I am realising this but now it's too late.

  • @jesseijvj5891
    @jesseijvj5891 3 года назад

    😓it was not you.. I'll never leave

  • @ramdasmarie436
    @ramdasmarie436 Год назад

    Wht ever u say I know everthing

  • @bas2823
    @bas2823 2 месяца назад

    SAD😢 N BAD!😭!"

  • @faicalkosri6457
    @faicalkosri6457 2 года назад

    if that is you thanks for all but , no never again we are not right together as much I was trying to enforfetenly didn't work now that you are free for whenever that suits you .

  • @annetan1231
    @annetan1231 3 года назад

    Now you pay the price.

  • @infoandmotivationaltv5636
    @infoandmotivationaltv5636 4 года назад +1

    It's okay 😊😘💘
    Thank you so much my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘
    I.love.......you
    Me also really very sorry for make you jealous in unintentionally

  • @Keirfey
    @Keirfey 5 месяцев назад

    My babies..Babies...

  • @mansakhungyo4496
    @mansakhungyo4496 3 года назад

    Before you even apologize i already forgive you because i no you knew am nothing with you in this life so, don't worry darling am with you always until the end that much i vow on you for now in front of all this strange people. . .

  • @poonamwahane288
    @poonamwahane288 11 месяцев назад

    Ok.. I forgive u..

  • @ushasharma6373
    @ushasharma6373 3 года назад

    This is me I'm sorry

  • @airessander8098
    @airessander8098 2 года назад

    fr people who love to harrase insult liar defense mechanism

  • @abdulhaqabdulkader8038
    @abdulhaqabdulkader8038 3 года назад

    In life everything is mixed up.

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    remember, I am at a lost

  • @git_noob3688
    @git_noob3688 2 года назад

    My bff sent this to me after our biggest fight , i started crying.

  • @HarshJain-rp7bk
    @HarshJain-rp7bk 4 года назад

    ❤❤

  • @infoandmotivationaltv5636
    @infoandmotivationaltv5636 4 года назад

    I will never leave you you know me better now ...I love you my sweetheart Angel KD 😘