I thought the ghost lady and baby were people he hit with his car or something. Also the 3 year old fetus wasn't Coles, he said they had been together two years. Unless they meant 3 months.
wait, a 3-year-old fetus in her womb??? That has to be a type or misread, it's supposed to be "3-month-old", right? Unless this is like one of those weird calcified fetuses from a cryptic pregnancy.
Tragic story! Unfortunately if a person doesn't seek professional help if they know, "thoughts " or visions are false illusions, these stories can become life realities. 😢
Omg Brett! "I guess you need ahhh 'Daddy' to scratch that "itch" of yours, huh, don'cha babe?" lmao omg I friggin ❤ you're too much homie....TOO dayumm much! 😂 💙❤💜
Hello i wrote this story the comments have informed me of some oversights in the story this wa sthe first time ive attempted to write one and hoping my skills will improve over time and fyi for those of you wondering it is actually 3 week old not 3 years and ik it wouldn't be a fetus it would be an embryo yeah i missed a few things and i apologize if it took you out of your immersion but despite that i am glad it got traction hope you guys enjoyed despite the few hick ups
The actual story says 3 weeks old. I checked my google doc. narrator messed up, and I simply confused biopsy with autopsy. I should have looked it up, but I was confident I was using it correctly. As for the ending at the time, I thought it was good while writing ig to some of you it came off cheesy, hopefully my next story will be better on that please leave me any criticism on the story so I can improve in the future! That's always appreciated
Great narration, story was a little meh tho... unfortunately predictable and it felt like the ending was trying too hard, but up til then it had been pretty good. Thanks as always!
Well holy bejizzlewiggums Creepy 😱🤯😱. Do I need to get Mrs. Creepy some kind of protection???😂😂😂 wait I know what I'll do, I'll just send you back to Kansas on the next tornado 🌪 😂. Jk great story for real & hop that you have a wonderful weekend.
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@rtempest12 😂😂😂 it's like omg or scary as he k something along those lines. I made it up myself 😂🤣😂 anyway thank you & hop that you have a fantastic weekend too😇😇😇.
What's up with the 3 yo fetus? What's that suppose the mean? That would mean she was pregnant from another guy, why bring it up?? Why is this in the damn story. Was it actually the mimic he killed? Was there a mimic or was he truly an undiagnosed schizophrenic? I liked the story and I get having an ambiguous ending but I feel often theres so much thats unresolved in these stories that it leaves me confused on what the writer was going for
Another exceptional story for bedtime, brilliant narration as usual CGS, Thankyou for preparing me for some fantastical spine crawling nightmares. Peace x
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Or you could just ask Matthew what a mimic is and how to deal with it...
3 year old fetus? 😅
That's what I thought too
That hurts just thinking about it. I could be imagine when it's done being a fetus, whenever that might be, that's gonna sting like hell 😂😂😂😅
That’s what I call developmental delays.
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Ty I came here to say the same! Total predictable ending but the 3yr old fetus!!! Wtf??
I thought the ghost lady and baby were people he hit with his car or something. Also the 3 year old fetus wasn't Coles, he said they had been together two years. Unless they meant 3 months.
Holy jebus! A 3 year old fetus?!
Also, a biopsy? Biopsy / autopsy... two totally different things.
Autobiopsy
I mean, it seemed quite obvious where it was going, but the style still allows one to be pulled in
Dafuq is an 3 Year Old Fetus!? Are you telling us she had a _Stone Baby?!_
The mockery tone of his friend... Ahhhhhh Emily 😂😂😂😂😂😂
...A 3-year-old fetus was found in her womb? God honestly...
Autopsy not biopsy
What a disappointing Ending, so freaking typical... 😐
wait, a 3-year-old fetus in her womb??? That has to be a type or misread, it's supposed to be "3-month-old", right? Unless this is like one of those weird calcified fetuses from a cryptic pregnancy.
One woman had a fetus inside her over 50 years..
Tragic story!
Unfortunately if a person doesn't seek professional help if they know, "thoughts " or visions are false illusions, these stories can become life realities. 😢
That one was hard to listen to. Almost turned it off a couple times.
“*Manly musk*” 💀🤢
Omg Brett! "I guess you need ahhh 'Daddy' to scratch that "itch" of yours, huh, don'cha babe?" lmao omg I friggin ❤ you're too much homie....TOO dayumm much! 😂
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Hello i wrote this story the comments have informed me of some oversights in the story this wa sthe first time ive attempted to write one and hoping my skills will improve over time and fyi for those of you wondering it is actually 3 week old not 3 years and ik it wouldn't be a fetus it would be an embryo yeah i missed a few things and i apologize if it took you out of your immersion but despite that i am glad it got traction hope you guys enjoyed despite the few hick ups
The actual story says 3 weeks old. I checked my google doc. narrator messed up, and I simply confused biopsy with autopsy. I should have looked it up, but I was confident I was using it correctly. As for the ending at the time, I thought it was good while writing ig to some of you it came off cheesy, hopefully my next story will be better on that please leave me any criticism on the story so I can improve in the future! That's always appreciated
A 3 year old fetus 😮that’s a toddler and that’s just crazy. No woman can carry a baby that long it’s a monster.
3 year old fetus?
My dude. Just in time to make dinner, as always. Thanks bro.
How can you mess up a lasagna
😂
Fantastic story. That one will stick with me for sure.
Great narration, story was a little meh tho... unfortunately predictable and it felt like the ending was trying too hard, but up til then it had been pretty good. Thanks as always!
Well holy bejizzlewiggums Creepy 😱🤯😱. Do I need to get Mrs. Creepy some kind of protection???😂😂😂 wait I know what I'll do, I'll just send you back to Kansas on the next tornado 🌪 😂. Jk great story for real & hop that you have a wonderful weekend.
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* What the Heck is
Bejizzlewiggum ?? 😅😅
@rtempest12 😂😂😂 it's like omg or scary as he k something along those lines. I made it up myself 😂🤣😂 anyway thank you & hop that you have a fantastic weekend too😇😇😇.
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That was a gruesome,Wicked wonderful story.Graphic,Warped and Twisted Stay Dark.....Bravo
Interesting, kept my attention the whole time.
Cool Gary the snail got a new part.
Talk about a "looong" delivery' 😅
This was one crazy ass ghost story.
Very good story great ending
What's up with the 3 yo fetus? What's that suppose the mean? That would mean she was pregnant from another guy, why bring it up?? Why is this in the damn story.
Was it actually the mimic he killed? Was there a mimic or was he truly an undiagnosed schizophrenic?
I liked the story and I get having an ambiguous ending but I feel often theres so much thats unresolved in these stories that it leaves me confused on what the writer was going for
BIOPSY? Think you mean Autopsy.
Awesome 😅😊
Don't listen to your coworkers.
Got it, lesson learned 😅
Another outstanding video many thanks
Dude-no thanks ☹️
DUUUUUUUUUUUDE THAT ENDING!!!!
Not just for RPGs
Ready for bed and a good night story
Hi Fellow 👾👻 Listener.BedTime?
Been 3:15 in Afternöön Here.. 🌤️.. Where R Ü..?? Fröm 👾 in Önt 🇨🇦
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Well that one was about as creepy as they get right there.
Beware the Downbad Hotel
Downbad Hostel or Motel would make more sense lol.
Make sure to keep your eyes peeled next week for "I Thought I'd Found The Perfect Hotel, Now I'm Haunted By Bedbugs"
37:30 - Probably with help of the GLASS you gave to a mental patient, my dear Doctor 🙈
"Greeted by the scent of manly musk"? Ewwwwww!!!
Silent buzz of the tv 😂 when did this story take place
This one bothered me , I think it's because of my own issues and other life situations.
3 year old fetus lol?
Whomever wrote this needed to go over it again. A three year old fetus? A biopsy to determine cause of death?
So...did he get in any trouble for the mom and baby? Were they real? And I swear, fetuses are getting bigger and bigger every year.
Yuppers🎉🎉🎉
Another exceptional story for bedtime, brilliant narration as usual CGS, Thankyou for preparing me for some fantastical spine crawling nightmares. Peace x
i can promise you that you cant smell nicotine, i can also promise nicotine won't set off a smoke detector. lol
They probably mean the smell of cig smoke. And it takes a hell of a lot of cig smoke (think 5 or 6 people chain smoking) to set off a smoke detector.
random soul found to late its next 'host'' and moved in exactly the second the 'host'' was aborted
Done
Totally Predictable but gotta cross it out of the list
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What it did to my GF! U killed HER!!
U killed that mom n the kid also.
U monster
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