IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task1-Academic-part-4

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  • Опубликовано: 16 ноя 2024

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  • @kyrielin9721
    @kyrielin9721 Год назад +30

    The pie charts compare five categories of household expenditure in the UK and New Zealand in the years 1980 and 2008.
    It is noticeable that the proportion of spending on food and drink fell in both countries over the 28-year period, while spending on utility bills rose. Also, UK residents spent a significantly larger percentage of their household budgets on leisure than their New Zealand counterparts.
    In 1980, 29% of an average New Zealand household budget went on food and drink, while the equivalent figure for a UK home was 23%. By 2008, expenditure on food and drink had fallen by 4% in New Zealand, and by a full 10% in the UK. By contrast, both countries saw an increase in expenditure on utility bills for the average home, from 27% to 31% in New Zealand and from 26% to 28% in the UK.
    Leisure activities accounted for the highest proportion of UK household spending in both years, but only the third highest proportion in New Zealand. In fact, in 2008, New Zealanders spent only half as much in relative terms on recreation (17%) as UK residents (34%). In both countries, transport costs and other costs took roughly 15% and 10% of household budgets respectively.

  • @its_medavid6328
    @its_medavid6328 2 месяца назад +10

    tomorrow is my exam and i am here ..........

  • @akuk2592
    @akuk2592 7 месяцев назад +1

    The best comparison i have learn from you ❤❤❤❤ i was trying it from 4 days but when i saw your post my mind is relax now my doubts are cleared now☺️

  • @bonjoetomisaiah2462
    @bonjoetomisaiah2462 Год назад +2

    thanks for this amazing playlists which curates the whole of an ielts exam, thank you

  • @roaayass8968
    @roaayass8968 2 года назад +2

    Underestimated channel

  • @ShahribonuYitmasova
    @ShahribonuYitmasova 10 дней назад +1

    Thank a ton ❤

  • @Volleyy
    @Volleyy 2 года назад +15

    Thank you Simon for this lesson, you taught it in the simplest of terms.

    • @IeltsSimon9
      @IeltsSimon9  2 года назад +17

      Of course, if you guys keep supporting me I'll post more and more videos hopefully:)

    • @Volleyy
      @Volleyy 2 года назад +1

      Please have you posted any video on process diagrams?

    • @JasurbekAbdualimov-bt2ck
      @JasurbekAbdualimov-bt2ck 7 месяцев назад +2

      ​@@IeltsSimon9 please give me advice for IELTS writing task 2

  • @gurleenvlogs6731
    @gurleenvlogs6731 8 месяцев назад

    Thanks for sharing wonderful content

  • @mahikan1991
    @mahikan1991 2 дня назад

    Thank you for the video, it's very informative and educational. I've noticed you made one mistake that might not be crucial for IELTS, but that is very important to avoid in general. It's incorrect to say that the expenditure on food and drinks in the UK had fallen by 10% because the decrease from 23 to 13 is almost 50%. The correct way would be to say that it had fallen by 10 percent points.

  • @zafarbekimmatov4694
    @zafarbekimmatov4694 Месяц назад +1

    Thank you too much and may we write the overview at the end of the chart😊😊😊

  • @chsam4119
    @chsam4119 2 года назад +2

    thanks for sharing in such a wonderful way I loved it.

  • @AbduganiBozorov-c8v
    @AbduganiBozorov-c8v Год назад +2

    Thanks teacher

  • @dilkikulasinghe5815
    @dilkikulasinghe5815 Месяц назад

    Great

  • @cosmicbladee
    @cosmicbladee 3 месяца назад

    Great method of teaching!!! I totally enjoyed learning in fact i subscribed the channel. The only thing it was not convenient for me that the chart wasn't anywhere on writing page so i had to go back to relate writing with the chart everytime. Hopeful he'll fix it.

  • @ENTERANAME16
    @ENTERANAME16 Год назад

    Thank you love from 🇵🇭. I love your content.

  • @mexrinsogofforova6040
    @mexrinsogofforova6040 2 года назад

    Thank you teacher for you lesson 😙😙😙. It is very useful👍👍👍

  • @sahelmiah184
    @sahelmiah184 Год назад

    Thank you teacher for u lessons

  • @ravindergill2180
    @ravindergill2180 2 года назад +2

    Excellent teacher❤

  • @bhagatpreetsingh8299
    @bhagatpreetsingh8299 2 года назад +1

    It's very helpful ,please, make more videos.

    • @IeltsSimon9
      @IeltsSimon9  2 года назад +5

      I'll. Keep supporting and contribute for this channel:)

    • @oxygenxhunter
      @oxygenxhunter Год назад

      @@IeltsSimon9 please one video in hindi language

  • @kimtuyen9
    @kimtuyen9 4 месяца назад

    Much obliged ❤💪😘

  • @arezoumalek
    @arezoumalek Год назад

    Great job😊

  • @dostonraxmonov8134
    @dostonraxmonov8134 2 года назад

    Thank you a lot you are amazing Ielts teacher

  • @azamatmurodov921
    @azamatmurodov921 Год назад

    thank you for a great comprehensive lesson.

  • @talanttuychiyev8231
    @talanttuychiyev8231 Год назад

    JUST PERFECT

  • @florencenkechi4157
    @florencenkechi4157 Год назад

    Thank you for this in depth explanation Sir

  • @zahidhasankhoka1649
    @zahidhasankhoka1649 Год назад

    Amazing class, sir 🖤🖤🖤....

  • @AzizLaliev
    @AzizLaliev Месяц назад

    thank u

  • @sonhungnguyen7939
    @sonhungnguyen7939 2 года назад +1

    always helpful, thanks sir

  • @nigoraraimova5010
    @nigoraraimova5010 2 года назад

    Thanks for amazing lesson 👍👍👍👍👍

  • @amanaulakhaulakh8007
    @amanaulakhaulakh8007 Год назад

    Sir pls posted video on diagram as soon as possible

  • @VyTuong-xg7oy
    @VyTuong-xg7oy 5 месяцев назад

    thank you

  • @triviet1099
    @triviet1099 9 месяцев назад

    can you please explain why should we use the word 'by'? For example, you use 'by 2008' in this pie chart example. Thank you!

  • @张晓蕾-w3r
    @张晓蕾-w3r 7 месяцев назад +2

    Where is a worksheet

  • @gulasalabdumajitova
    @gulasalabdumajitova Год назад

    thanks

  • @Saudi_reel
    @Saudi_reel Месяц назад

    Thnk you for your videos! However, the pie charts are for the years 1980 & 2008 - so it is not a "over period of 28 years" because they for only 2 sapret years and not during them. There may be a rise in 1982 in the category of "food and drink"!
    Am I right?

  • @tulipkhan7730
    @tulipkhan7730 2 года назад

    Thank u so much....

  • @MDRABBI-tm6ce
    @MDRABBI-tm6ce 2 года назад

    make video about table and bar chart how to divide grouply body paragraphs please make writing task 1

    • @IeltsSimon9
      @IeltsSimon9  2 года назад +1

      I did check out the latest video:)

  • @mavlonodev
    @mavlonodev 8 месяцев назад +1

    Where's the worksheet?

  • @Moonlight-tf3we
    @Moonlight-tf3we Год назад

    Thank you simon for the lesson.
    I wrote this sentence for my introduction. Is it correct?
    The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of five categories on which families spent annually in the UK and New Zealand in the years of 1980 and 2008.

  • @azamatmurodov921
    @azamatmurodov921 Год назад

    👍👍👍

  • @khaledr5449
    @khaledr5449 8 месяцев назад

    Where can i find the worksheet that you mention in the last part of the lesson.?

  • @shohjahonsayfullaev8926
    @shohjahonsayfullaev8926 2 года назад

    Thank you sir, we appreciate your hard work and ready to support for more content

  • @YiLiu-j9y
    @YiLiu-j9y Год назад

    Can anyone tell me where to find the worksheet? Thanks a lot!

  • @user-mp2ih4bv8e
    @user-mp2ih4bv8e 2 года назад

    Why we shouldn't have a separate Paragraph for each country

    • @raiyanrahman7201
      @raiyanrahman7201 Год назад

      Cause we want to compare both countries and categories at the same time

  • @mohammadmotawaqueel1000
    @mohammadmotawaqueel1000 2 года назад +1

    Please upload the remaining 2. I have the exam in 2 days.

  • @malikajal6163
    @malikajal6163 Год назад

    sir can i use showed instead of saw??

  • @aystudiobt214ever
    @aystudiobt214ever 2 года назад +1

    Where can I download the worksheet?

  • @ngochieu_nguyen
    @ngochieu_nguyen 2 года назад

    Hi, I also intend to write 2 paragraphs. However, instead of comparing category by category, I decided to compare 2 charts from different years, but from the same country for each paragraph. My friend, on the other hand, compares two charts from the two countries in the same year.
    It is advisable to do it differently? Or will I be deducted some points relating to task achievement?

    • @bin5phut334
      @bin5phut334 Год назад

      Both ways are fine, however since the purpose of pie charts with fewer than 2 time stamps is more towards contrast and comparisons, your friend's way may be more suited to common logic. The only reason why figures are represented as a pie chart is that people would like to compare/ contrast the figures rather than see the changes, as a table/ line chart is more suited to that task.