An interesting story of combat of AI controled warship in conjunction with an old human soldier vs. the new alien order, and the complexities of human/machine existence in a hostile universe. Well done and the graphics were interesting.
14% operational capacity after the battle and fully operational before battle. Even if not engaging in combat with the alien fleet, or just firing single shot to breaching machines that were effective, there would have not been any problem just firing the engines and leaving. Even after the fleet arrived, there was no actual treat to the ship, if Carter had not fucked around and simply zipped around and disabled the alien fleets engines and weapon systems, instead of sitting still and tanking it with out any actual reason to do so, specially when the end result was still essentially full blown war. The aliens getting beaten, seems like they would definitely not broadcast their defeat since warrior type culture, unless warriors honor was strong in their culture or information network essentially spy everyone. Also the ship even after disabling the fleet, could have used its drones, just collect spare parts or least materials from the literal scrapyard it was sitting, or destroyed ships floating from the battle to do emergency repairs, if its condition was supposedly so grave. Story concept is decent, but ffs let people proof read your stories before posting them. Also fuck off with the AI crap... or very least if creating visuals keep it consistent. Dont become yet another pumping AI garbage channel if this is not part of corporation or production group...
If they had security drones, why didn't they use them earlier? I don't understand why Elias is trying to hold the spaceship back. It sounds dumb. Just let the Vanguard AI handle business.
❤ A fantastic story, loved it . Thankyou.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
An interesting story of combat of AI controled warship in conjunction with an old human soldier vs. the new alien order, and the complexities of human/machine existence in a hostile universe.
Well done and the graphics were interesting.
Really frustration story. What was Elias doing on the ship, nothing at all but restricting the ship.
Getting in the way apparently
Eel e ass
Listen to the beginning of the story again
14% operational capacity after the battle and fully operational before battle. Even if not engaging in combat with the alien fleet, or just firing single shot to breaching machines that were effective, there would have not been any problem just firing the engines and leaving. Even after the fleet arrived, there was no actual treat to the ship, if Carter had not fucked around and simply zipped around and disabled the alien fleets engines and weapon systems, instead of sitting still and tanking it with out any actual reason to do so, specially when the end result was still essentially full blown war. The aliens getting beaten, seems like they would definitely not broadcast their defeat since warrior type culture, unless warriors honor was strong in their culture or information network essentially spy everyone. Also the ship even after disabling the fleet, could have used its drones, just collect spare parts or least materials from the literal scrapyard it was sitting, or destroyed ships floating from the battle to do emergency repairs, if its condition was supposedly so grave.
Story concept is decent, but ffs let people proof read your stories before posting them. Also fuck off with the AI crap... or very least if creating visuals keep it consistent. Dont become yet another pumping AI garbage channel if this is not part of corporation or production group...
If they had security drones, why didn't they use them earlier? I don't understand why Elias is trying to hold the spaceship back. It sounds dumb. Just let the Vanguard AI handle business.
everyone would have died
Why didn't they just leave to begin with? It was fully functional just dormant.
this needs a chapter 2
yeah we do want a chapter two and three and maybe even four
Your AI voice needs re-programming when it comes to the pronunciation of names. E-lias. Not El-ias.
can`t listen to the useless robot sprouting the incomprehensible bull .
You mean like pronouncing the same words three different ways?
a.i. narrator sucks ! Hire a human !
Oh, crap! If none of the scavengers' tools could cut into the hull, how did the boarding parties get it so easily? This story sucks.
The door was unlocked.
Why did the ship just leave. Dumb
You enjoy stealing others content?
Good god AI sux.
Spelling and pronunciation is terrible, someone needs to go back to school
agreed