That's a nice map you have there, and you've elaborated quite well. I'm quite with all the other comments here though - try to be more enthusiastic because you're being rather formal talking about your life. It's alright, there's still a long way to go, all the best!
When speaking , turn away from the audience just to glance at the whitenboard, but turn towards the audience again whenever you want to speak. You can elaborate about your sisters, i.e. the exact name of the IPG , and school. Similarly with why you don't wear specs.
Why do you speed when introducing your sisters? Just speak with the same speed, otherwise you appear to be swallowing up your words. The specs fun fact is cute! Maybe you can elaborate why you are tall.
Talk with confidence. You don't need to rush.
Noted, thank you Arfah. :)
Now I seem to know more about you. Good to know you. Thank you for sharing!
You're welcome. ^^
The white board is a good touch, overall great video
Great video speech. There are the use of visual aids with white boards. There is prior rehearsal and knowledge with topic. Good job👍
Thank you. :)
Nice introduction of yourself 👌🏻
Thank you Zatie. :)
By the way, we all eventually start wearing specs :D
Yeahh
That's a nice map you have there, and you've elaborated quite well. I'm quite with all the other comments here though - try to be more enthusiastic because you're being rather formal talking about your life. It's alright, there's still a long way to go, all the best!
Thank youuuuu uwu
Be more natural and don't rush too much. Great presentation, hope this helps you more in the future! :3
Thank you unknown person. Would you have anymore advise to spare for me? :') I would greatly appreciate it.
Sure! You can make your presentation more interesting by using different angles and new different techniques on presenting.
@@Night_Owl_0v0 I see. Noted. Thank you again. I really, really appreciate it. :')
You could have explained more about your family tree as well, in a more in-depth manner.
Noted, thank you Evenne.
That is an interesting background you have there, anyway, you should try to be more enthusiastic because you are talking about your life.
but but im sad san :0
When speaking , turn away from the audience just to glance at the whitenboard, but turn towards the audience again whenever you want to speak. You can elaborate about your sisters, i.e. the exact name of the IPG , and school. Similarly with why you don't wear specs.
Thanks Ma. But I forgot the long name for IPG at that moment for some reason. Noted.
Why do you speed when introducing your sisters? Just speak with the same speed, otherwise you appear to be swallowing up your words. The specs fun fact is cute! Maybe you can elaborate why you are tall.
Noted, thanks Papa. I thought it wasn't important, and I'm not sure why I am tall to be honest.
may be some more drawings will be more attractive since your good at drawing?
Noted, thanks Jia uwuw
Lol I know a lot of your relatives hah
is this a statement or a threat ._.
Pronounce the names slowly and improve your intonation.
Noted, thank you Youkes.
You ARE half chinese and half khadazan, you said earlier you are not chinese you are khadazan..
Biologically speaking: half half. In my birth cert: Kadazan
Very interesting sand! Maybe your tone could be more enthusiastic and be more clear on pronouncing your family members' names, great content!!
Noted. Thanks Marmamoo