Avatar: The Last Airbender is the BEST!
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- Опубликовано: 18 окт 2024
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BIK1083 - Public Speaking Assignment 2: Persuasive speech-type, Semester 4 of the Diploma in English, Group B, batch 2018/19.
In this speech, I give you all the details on why you should watch ATLA.
I love this cartoon!!!! I agreee!!!!!
YASSS!!!! uwu
My fav element is Air~!
YAs
I like how your speech is not monotonous and difference are clearly stated. Thank you for sharing
"i'm gonna prove you wrong and you're gonna watch it" i feel like this is a direct attack
YeS
Avoid using informal words like 'gonna' and the camera angle could be changed because the backdrop cannot be seen fully.
Alright. Noted. Thank you Youkes.
You could have elaborated more on what you meant on the 'fillers'. Overall, I agree! ATLA forever!!
Noted, and thank you. ATLA forever!!!
Great topic, overall great video
You sounds natural. That's great.
Thank you Arfah. :)
i like your fluency
Okay, this actually interests me. You are really good at making me watch the show again. You seemed really confident in this video compared to others but like the other people said in the comment, try avoiding the usage of informal words.
Yeah. Thanks. Noted as well.
A:TLA, is very good. The speech you presented felt natural and you seem interested with the topic. Only gripe is the you could add a little more visual aids. Good vid overall.
Noted. Thank you. :)
Your voice projection wasn't that clear... But the video quality is good 👌🏻
Noted. Will take into consideration. Thank you Zatie!
The topic is what interests you, therefore your speech expression is more natural. Elaborate on strong and weak. In terms of physical, emotional or mental strength? I'm also wondering what you mean by fillers, which you perhaps need to elaborate further.
Yeah. Noted. Thanks ma. But I was talking over my time, that's why I didn't get to elaborate much.
You sound natural, good! Gonna again? Going to. Graphic or graphics? What kind of Chinese martial arts? Maybe can specify. Anyway, you have some ideas, good!
Noted. Thanks Papa. But I went over my talking time, which was 4 minutes.
I haven't watch Avatar - The last Airbender and this series really sound Naruto-like..... unfortunately, I am an adult who will soon be in late 20s and got really busy with the life....believe me, that's not an excuse, I am ready to wait till my retirement xD
I understand, yes I might've not put that into consideration. This is a valid reason. 👌😌
@@sandyichigo me saying that I would wait till retirement was on a lighter note though :).....I am sure I would be able to find some time if not sooner than later. I would take this recommendation of yours :)
Do try to avoid using informal words like gonna and a better camera angle would make this video better :) overall, good content sand
Thank you Mariam, notedd :D
I thought you were going to talk about Avatar the blue people at first, but nevertheless, when you are talking about something you are passionate about, you seem natural, after all, it is in your alley. You might want to change the camera position to somewhere more suitable, and try to be more persuasive.
Yeah. Alright. Thank you. I will.
Is this a persuasive speech? It sure sounded like one. If this is an assignment though, you should use more formal language - while avoiding the tendency to be too stiff, of course. Well done though, it's a good speech.
Yeah it is. Yeah I should've. I'll take that into consideration. Thanks.