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Why is it that in the introduction he hasn't stated "and requires shelter ", right after he has stated she is a victim of domestic abuse. That's the complete purpose. Not simply stating victim of domestic abuse.
Yes sir, you got a point here. But he has mentioned that she is a "Korean woman", who is living in Australia according to her present address. It is the contracted gist of that particular case note. But no worries, you can obviously put that in your letter.
Great job, thanks! However : 1)why the nationality is relevant in this letter? 2)isn't it more polite, thus formal = more appropriate to use Ms Kim instead of Ashley? (I was taught on e2 language OET course to use names just for children's and titles + surnames for > 16-year-old.) 3) isn't there a comma missing in the sentence " She was working as........ (missing comma?) and Brad has been unemployed.....- since there are 2 independent clauses which should be separated? could You share Your thoughts about that?
Hi steve, could I ask you for clarification? Why in the letter you wrote ( she was working not she works ), ( had been employed not has been employed). Please, if you have time, leave a comment. Thanks in advance 🌹
Thank you for this nice lecture. I just have an enquiry abouth the purpose in the introduction. It's not mentioned. Am I right? And if so, does it matter?
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Thank you so much sir for this wonderful letter....and have a humble request sir,please put more videos in RUclips.so that everyone can access it easily...at least one more letter...also tips for part b reading
Why is it important to write the patients date of birth in a referral letter as opposed to just stating the patient's age? Is that not supposed to be confidential?
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Why is it that in the introduction he hasn't stated "and requires shelter ", right after he has stated she is a victim of domestic abuse. That's the complete purpose. Not simply stating victim of domestic abuse.
I agree with you, the introduction is hanging not complete
The best explanation ever, thank you sir.
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Shouldnt there be mention about Ashley's parents that they are in Korea. This is also a reason for the referral as she has no social/family support.
Yes sir, you got a point here. But he has mentioned that she is a "Korean woman", who is living in Australia according to her present address. It is the contracted gist of that particular case note. But no worries, you can obviously put that in your letter.
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Sir please upload more videos we would looking forward to learn more from you.. you explaind so good . It would be appreciated..
Sir what if we use has been presented instead of has presented
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it's a very comprehensive letter.
how would it be,if you are writting to a Medical Officer or Community nurse the same patient. ?
It’s very effective for beginner ! Thank you so much ,Sir
Sir.should we add purpose in introduction?
Korean woman or korean women(plural)????
Great job, thanks!
However :
1)why the nationality is relevant in this letter?
2)isn't it more polite, thus formal = more appropriate to use Ms Kim instead of Ashley? (I was taught on e2 language OET course to use names just for children's and titles + surnames for > 16-year-old.)
3) isn't there a comma missing in the sentence " She was working as........ (missing comma?) and Brad has been unemployed.....- since there are 2 independent clauses which should be separated?
could You share Your thoughts about that?
1) its not
2) You don't have to use titles unless they are professional
3) no
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Thanks a million. Please continue your teachings.
i feel sad for ashley.
Why did you assume she is Korean? there was no mentioning of what ethnicity she is. I'm confused.
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I am a first time learner of OET , I must confess that you are a good teacher.
Very good tutor
Hi steve, could I ask you for clarification?
Why in the letter you wrote ( she was working not she works ), ( had been employed not has been employed). Please, if you have time, leave a comment. Thanks in advance 🌹
Sorry, has been unemployed
Hello. Does word count matters? Is it strict to 200 approx?
Sir could you please mention can we use" patient"in oet letters
Thank you Sir Steve,the technique you shared is really helpful.
Why do doctors use very pleasant to describe the patient
Thank you, sir.. That was very well explained indeed!
Doesn’t her son also need mention in first paragraph
Sir u were amazing...I passed oet..
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Congratulations!
Very useful explanation... thankyou 😀
Informative video,excellent explanation,hoping to pass my exam soon,thank you sir.
perfect. u are amazing sir! this is so helpful
thank you steve this was very useful
a 25 year old korean woman and not women (as its single woman).Am I correct
Correct and well spotted. Just a typo.
@@OETOnline yes Sir.Obviously Typo only.We learn a lot from you Mr. Steve. Thank you for your Teachings.
thank you so much Teacher Steve
Sir... just a brief question pls... when is it best to take OET? is it before or after the UPDATES... thank you
Oh! what a beautiful lecture. Shukran
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In the Re: line, do we need to put a comma after Name of patient ?
a 25-year-old Korean women or woman. Which one is correct ?
Yes, that was a typo, should be woman, and an amendment is at the end of the video. A space between patient name and DOB is all that is required.
Thanku Sir... it's very very helpful
Please make some more
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Sir...Korean woman
very pleased with this letter, speaker's words are cleared that you have nothing to worry about. Thank so mmuch
Magnificent, Best analysis for letter writing. Thank you so much.
Sir, in the introductory sentence, shouldn't there be "a 25 year old Korean womAn" instead of "a 25 year old Korean women?"
I think it is a bad letter
regarding oet@home can I highlight or underline case notes ?I mean like in this video to select the relevant and non relevant notes??
korean woman or women?
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Thank you for this nice lecture. I just have an enquiry abouth the purpose in the introduction. It's not mentioned. Am I right? And if so, does it matter?
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Thank u Steve, Gratitude! Your lessons were very helpful.
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Thank you so much for this letter, well explained
I really appreciate you
Thank you sir
I have one confusion , do we have to refer only Ms Ashley or both Ms Ashley and her son
Wow.. that was really well done, sir. 👍🏽
Thank you so much sir for this wonderful letter....and have a humble request sir,please put more videos in RUclips.so that everyone can access it easily...at least one more letter...also tips for part b reading
Why is it important to write the patients date of birth in a referral letter as opposed to just stating the patient's age? Is that not supposed to be confidential?
Thank you sir, very effective class.
Thank you sir...A GOOD STARTING GUIDE FOR PREP🎉
Informative and helpful video. Thank you for sharing.
From my experience, most women of GBV still go back to their husbands, here it's assumption in use, am not sure which one is correct
Really helpfull Mr Steve, Thankyou so much. Lets go to practice a lot.
Great teacher
Thank you kindly, very helpful, keep up the good work.
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Thank you so much sir, please upload more videos
Sir instead of writing their full name shall we write their second name
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Learned a lot from this video. Thank you sir!
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Is it okay to have a separate paragraph for the intro and the background details like where the pt lives, his job, etc.?
Is the conclusion counted or not ( the last sentence) ? Thanks in advance
really nice
thank you ,sir
Thank you sir
Please update new writing version
*Many thanks its very useful*
hi how i can contact you for online course
please make some more !
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Why it’s in the first paragraph? Brad had been unemployed for 18 month.
It is part of the social background of Ashley which is prior but relevant to the current situation.
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God bless you, Sir.Very nice class
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It was very helpful, thanks a lot
Great analysis . Thanks.
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