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Is it still necessary to include that the patient's wife died in december 2017 in the introduction? Since it was already stated that he is a widower. And, the phrase "who will cook for his meal" on the last paragraph is out of place?
Good question Mel. I would consider that useful contextual detail for the reader to get the background situation. The daughter's involvement is mentioned as she will be involved and may need support with a diabetic diet. Hope that helps.
A huge thank to Mr Steve, very useful and practical
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The first sentence in the introduction says he is widower then why again they mentioned his wife is died?
you are totally right.
It is written to explain when she died n what was the situation when she died
Is to true that oet asses only the first 25 lines?
Is it still necessary to include that the patient's wife died in december 2017 in the introduction? Since it was already stated that he is a widower.
And, the phrase "who will cook for his meal" on the last paragraph is out of place?
Good question Mel. I would consider that useful contextual detail for the reader to get the background situation. The daughter's involvement is mentioned as she will be involved and may need support with a diabetic diet. Hope that helps.
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