It is so refreshing to listen to a story and not hear whole sections repeat multiple times. I am not sure if the narrator was an AI or Human which is a compliment. Also you didn't use the repeated characters names (Sarah Chen, Raj Patel, etc). So refreshing.
Thanks, Paul! 🚀 We’ll admit, in the beginning, we made some of those rookie mistakes-repetition, familiar names-but we’ve worked hard to grow and improve, and it’s awesome to see that our subscribers are noticing! As for the narrator, let’s just say we’ve got the best voice in the galaxy working for us 😉. Glad you enjoyed it, best bro! 👊
Agreed, but there were a few sections that were needlessly over descriptive. This is AI. Even though it got pronunciation and spacing good, it was almost monotone and there were areas where the speech was to fast with not quite enough spacing between words.
Wow, NuTex, an A+++? You just made our day! 🚀 We’re thrilled you enjoyed it-it’s feedback like this that fuels our engines to keep the quality soaring above the stars. Best bro! 👊
Awesome, having to sort through all the AI trash to find something good is tedious. However some times you find a hidden gem and it makes going through all that trash worthwhile. This has to be written and voiced by humans, the voice acting is some of the best I’ve heard on RUclips well done. Good job 👍 👏
Ron, not only are you spot on about this being an instant classic, but you’ve also made history as the FIRST to comment! 🏆🎉 Thanks for leading the Space Humans charge-your support is stellar, as always. Best bro! 👊
Ruthless precision-just like your comment game! 🚀 So glad you loved the story and had a laugh with 'The Exalted One' (we had fun with that too 😄). Thanks for the amazing energy, best sis! 👊"
Thanks, Steven! 🚀 Glad you liked the myth! We sure showed how humans aren't as 'primitive' as some think 😉-turns out, we’re the ones who shape the galaxy. Stay tuned for more epic stories! Best bro! 👊"
Well well well i never thought that i would ever see the day when i hear a perfect story and the narration of a solid and entertaining characters, no reaping of the same thing over and over Nice one 👍you should be really proud, your the first channel iv come across thats so well done , great narration great story you definitely have my subscription keep it going 😂😂😂😂👏👏👏👏👏
Wow, thank you so much for the incredible feedback! 🚀 Knowing we’ve set the bar high for you is truly an honor. We’re thrilled you enjoyed the story and characters-it’s what we strive for with every upload! Your subscription means the galaxy to us. Stick around, because we’re just getting started! Best bro! 👊
Thanks so much, ChavezPete! 🚀 We’re thrilled you think our story holds its own against movies! Your support means the world to us-more epic tales coming your way! Best bro! 👊
Thanks, Caleb! 🚀 We love flipping the script and diving into the alien mind-it’s a galaxy of possibilities out there! Glad you found it refreshing. Stay tuned for more unique perspectives, best bro! 👊
The story has no concept of the distances and travel times involved in this kind of space combat. You could add "6 months later" just after every paragraph. This is probably the reason why the aliens need to "Mobilize the fleet" so many times.
Haha, Antti, you’re totally right! 🚀 We might have bent the laws of space a little to keep the action moving, but hey, who needs accurate travel times when the story’s this epic? 😏 Thanks for the feedback, and stay tuned-we’re working on some faster-than-light adventures! Best bro! 👊
Thanks, Edwards! 🚀 We’re definitely dreaming of seeing this on the big screen someday! Who knows, maybe one day our stories will be out there for all to see. Best bro! 👊
Thanks for the feedback, Shadowkey! 🚀 We might have taken some creative liberties with the scale to keep the action exciting! Sometimes, we bend the rules for the sake of a good story. Glad you still enjoyed it, and we appreciate you pointing that out! Best bro! 👊
Years ago, Airlines initiated a crew interactive concept termed Crew Resource Management. The basics tenant being, the Captain listens to the crew,,, The assumption being that a Qualified Crewmember might have useful input... Apparently, in the HFY, "The Empire" directive takes precedence at all times... Thx for the Story.
Haha, love the comparison, Tenright! 🚀 Maybe our space crews could use a bit more CRM in their lives! But hey, when you’ve got an Empire in charge, sometimes orders come down fast and strong. Appreciate the feedback, and glad you enjoyed the story! Best bro! 👊
Ah, John, you caught us! 🚀 Maybe it’s a trend in the galaxy, but not all aliens are insect-inspired, promise! We’ve got plenty more variety in store. Who knows, next time you might see aliens with eyes you’ve never imagined. Stay tuned, best bro! 👊
Oh, Mark, 'Payback Time' has such a ring to it! 🚀 If we ever unleash Part 2, we might just take that title into consideration-it’s got that perfect mix of vengeance and sci-fi flair! Best bro! 👊
I hate to be the bad guy here but I have issues with the story as its is currently written. This Draven fleet of 1500 ships is part of an empire that supposedly has been the ruin of many civilizations, yet they make decisions like 6 years olds playing red light green light. They show no tactical or strategic know how. It just is typical of this type of story making out humans to be so superior to whatever alien enemy of the moment is facing them. I doubt very seriously any one as ignorant and inept would be put in charge of a fleet of this magnitude. He ignores the constant warnings of the tactical officer. It is an unfortunate trend in these type of stories and forgive me but I see it as lazy writing.
Haha, we totally hear you, MusicAndMovieFan! 🚀 But the captain was meant to be a bit too confident-think of it as ‘hubris on a galactic scale!’ 😏 Sometimes, even the biggest empires fall victim to their own arrogance. Appreciate the feedback, though, and glad you still enjoyed the rest of the story! Best bro! 👊
It is not a bad HFY story but I have a very difficult time listening to the utter disregard for the distances involved, the fact that the title does not match the story, that asteroid fields aren't like depicted in Star Wars.....I mean, just make the battlefield smaller and it might work. It doesn't have to include Earth out to Saturn's orbit. Are Earth's mass drivers propelling things at several times the speed of light?
For a like the narration needs to be better, too many changes in names, too many mistakes in intonation, emphasis. And the story felt bloated, drawn out.
Even at light speed weapons fire from mars and Saturn's rings would take over a minute to reach their targets if the aliens fleet was inside the earth's moon orbit. Kinetic weapons would take weeks. Still, sadly this is one of the better SciFi short stories.
Haha, TioRay, love the precision! 🚀 You’re definitely thinking in light years, but hey, sometimes we’ve gotta bend the rules for a good story! Glad you still enjoyed it though! Best bro! 👊
What if the kinetic weapons were multiple warheads mounted on a missile that could skip in and out of hyperspace? Pick a target, kick the missile into hyperspace, pop out near the target, verify it's the correct target, smack it with a bunch of fast-moving slugs. The missile could possibly even skip back into hyperspace to go home and re-arm.
@ralphm6901 Then that's a AI/manually operated drone capable of hyperspace travel and delivering simultaneously multiple AI smart missiles. I am not sure you would want to launch the drone kinetically because it's already capable of FTL and the stresses on the drones components at firing G's would be enormous. Likewise firing the smart missiles kinetically via a rail or mass driver system would put massive G force stress on the missiles and that's why they normally talk in terms of slugs with kinetics but yeah ok let's do it your way, sounds like fun 👍
It is so refreshing to listen to a story and not hear whole sections repeat multiple times. I am not sure if the narrator was an AI or Human which is a compliment. Also you didn't use the repeated characters names (Sarah Chen, Raj Patel, etc). So refreshing.
Thanks, Paul! 🚀 We’ll admit, in the beginning, we made some of those rookie mistakes-repetition, familiar names-but we’ve worked hard to grow and improve, and it’s awesome to see that our subscribers are noticing! As for the narrator, let’s just say we’ve got the best voice in the galaxy working for us 😉. Glad you enjoyed it, best bro! 👊
I have heard defiantly agree, i have heard of a ship named thunderchild 7 times
But they do use the old and tired “bristling with weapons”.
Agreed, but there were a few sections that were needlessly over descriptive. This is AI. Even though it got pronunciation and spacing good, it was almost monotone and there were areas where the speech was to fast with not quite enough spacing between words.
Way i see it if you want perfect
Read a book.😊
This is about the first story in months that was about perfect! So far above so many amateur attempts and very refreshing! A+++ 😁
Wow, NuTex, an A+++? You just made our day! 🚀 We’re thrilled you enjoyed it-it’s feedback like this that fuels our engines to keep the quality soaring above the stars. Best bro! 👊
Good story. Well told, better than many others
Thank you, Dana! 🚀 We aim to keep the bar high and deliver stories that stand out-your support means the galaxy to us! Best bro! 👊
Awesome, having to sort through all the AI trash to find something good is tedious. However some times you find a hidden gem and it makes going through all that trash worthwhile. This has to be written and voiced by humans, the voice acting is some of the best I’ve heard on RUclips well done. Good job 👍 👏
Great story , no complaints thanks
Thanks so much! 🚀 We’re glad you enjoyed the story! Your support means a lot to us. Best bro! 👊
This is another Space Humans instant classic 🎉.
Ron, not only are you spot on about this being an instant classic, but you’ve also made history as the FIRST to comment! 🏆🎉 Thanks for leading the Space Humans charge-your support is stellar, as always. Best bro! 👊
Ruthless precision... Love this story!! WELL DONE!! The "Exulted-One"... heee heeee!! ... then
Ruthless precision-just like your comment game! 🚀 So glad you loved the story and had a laugh with 'The Exalted One' (we had fun with that too 😄). Thanks for the amazing energy, best sis! 👊"
@@SpaceHumansHFYSciFi
Great one thank you for sharing the myth. 🤔 😉👍
Thanks, Steven! 🚀 Glad you liked the myth! We sure showed how humans aren't as 'primitive' as some think 😉-turns out, we’re the ones who shape the galaxy. Stay tuned for more epic stories! Best bro! 👊"
Well well well i never thought that i would ever see the day when i hear a perfect story and the narration of a solid and entertaining characters, no reaping of the same thing over and over Nice one 👍you should be really proud, your the first channel iv come across thats so well done , great narration great story you definitely have my subscription keep it going 😂😂😂😂👏👏👏👏👏
Wow, thank you so much for the incredible feedback! 🚀 Knowing we’ve set the bar high for you is truly an honor. We’re thrilled you enjoyed the story and characters-it’s what we strive for with every upload! Your subscription means the galaxy to us. Stick around, because we’re just getting started! Best bro! 👊
I love it❤❤❤❤
Thanks so much, Juan! 🚀 We’re thrilled you loved it! Best bro! 👊
Very nice! Movies got nothing on this
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So interesting to hear one these stories written from the Alien perspective. Refreshing
Thanks, Caleb! 🚀 We love flipping the script and diving into the alien mind-it’s a galaxy of possibilities out there! Glad you found it refreshing. Stay tuned for more unique perspectives, best bro! 👊
Great story exaulted ONE !...
Awesome story. It would be great if would be also told from the human side
The story has no concept of the distances and travel times involved in this kind of space combat.
You could add "6 months later" just after every paragraph.
This is probably the reason why the aliens need to "Mobilize the fleet" so many times.
Haha, Antti, you’re totally right! 🚀 We might have bent the laws of space a little to keep the action moving, but hey, who needs accurate travel times when the story’s this epic? 😏 Thanks for the feedback, and stay tuned-we’re working on some faster-than-light adventures! Best bro! 👊
Thumbs up 👍 Thanks for sharing your story
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This would make a great movie.
Thanks, Edwards! 🚀 We’re definitely dreaming of seeing this on the big screen someday! Who knows, maybe one day our stories will be out there for all to see. Best bro! 👊
a very good story.
Glad you enjoyed it
Yes,❤ like very much.
Thank you! 😃
This is good.
Good story. My only problem is with the scale of it. None of the locations are close enough to allow this battle to unfold as described.
Thanks for the feedback, Shadowkey! 🚀 We might have taken some creative liberties with the scale to keep the action exciting! Sometimes, we bend the rules for the sake of a good story. Glad you still enjoyed it, and we appreciate you pointing that out! Best bro! 👊
Mars is five light minutes away shooting back-and-forth would be ridiculous
Heard one story and heard them all
Years ago, Airlines initiated a crew interactive concept termed Crew Resource Management.
The basics tenant being, the Captain listens to the crew,,,
The assumption being that a Qualified Crewmember might have useful input...
Apparently, in the HFY, "The Empire" directive takes precedence at all times... Thx for the Story.
Haha, love the comparison, Tenright! 🚀 Maybe our space crews could use a bit more CRM in their lives! But hey, when you’ve got an Empire in charge, sometimes orders come down fast and strong. Appreciate the feedback, and glad you enjoyed the story! Best bro! 👊
Why do these aliens invariably have multifaceted eyes? Are insects the only species that achieve space flight?
Ah, John, you caught us! 🚀 Maybe it’s a trend in the galaxy, but not all aliens are insect-inspired, promise! We’ve got plenty more variety in store. Who knows, next time you might see aliens with eyes you’ve never imagined. Stay tuned, best bro! 👊
It would take 20mins to 4 hours at light speed
Good catch, CodeBasher! 🚀 Light speed calculations are always a fun debate-just wait until we start throwing wormholes into the mix! Best bro! 👊
Sound and shock waves in vacuum?
Sorry this story is extended for the sake of words.
At 2X speed,,25 minutes
@@SeptemberMeadows My standard replay speed. even then it feels bloated
Part 2 titled payback time
Oh, Mark, 'Payback Time' has such a ring to it! 🚀 If we ever unleash Part 2, we might just take that title into consideration-it’s got that perfect mix of vengeance and sci-fi flair! Best bro! 👊
"remember mars"
So, are there going to be any stories that are not the primitive humans beat the aliens? There are other scenarios you know.
I hate to be the bad guy here but I have issues with the story as its is currently written. This Draven fleet of 1500 ships is part of an empire that supposedly has been the ruin of many civilizations, yet they make decisions like 6 years olds playing red light green light. They show no tactical or strategic know how. It just is typical of this type of story making out humans to be so superior to whatever alien enemy of the moment is facing them. I doubt very seriously any one as ignorant and inept would be put in charge of a fleet of this magnitude. He ignores the constant warnings of the tactical officer. It is an unfortunate trend in these type of stories and forgive me but I see it as lazy writing.
Haha, we totally hear you, MusicAndMovieFan! 🚀 But the captain was meant to be a bit too confident-think of it as ‘hubris on a galactic scale!’ 😏 Sometimes, even the biggest empires fall victim to their own arrogance. Appreciate the feedback, though, and glad you still enjoyed the rest of the story! Best bro! 👊
I wait with great anticipation for your story to appear on here,so we can scrutinize your attempt at SciFi,cant wait,
@@morrisanderson818 gonna be a long wait...better grab a snack
It is not a bad HFY story but I have a very difficult time listening to the utter disregard for the distances involved, the fact that the title does not match the story, that asteroid fields aren't like depicted in Star Wars.....I mean, just make the battlefield smaller and it might work. It doesn't have to include Earth out to Saturn's orbit.
Are Earth's mass drivers propelling things at several times the speed of light?
"Mobilize the fleet"... The fleet IS mobilized, that doesn't make any sense...
Also too often the same repetitive behavior...
For a like the narration needs to be better, too many changes in names, too many mistakes in intonation, emphasis. And the story felt bloated, drawn out.
Unsubscribing from the other the channels you are much better. Also happy we didn't defeat them with memes which seems to be the norm with the others
Even at light speed weapons fire from mars and Saturn's rings would take over a minute to reach their targets if the aliens fleet was inside the earth's moon orbit. Kinetic weapons would take weeks. Still, sadly this is one of the better SciFi short stories.
I guess that's where the fiction of science fiction comes in😂
Even longer, depending on where they are in their orbits.
Haha, TioRay, love the precision! 🚀 You’re definitely thinking in light years, but hey, sometimes we’ve gotta bend the rules for a good story! Glad you still enjoyed it though! Best bro! 👊
What if the kinetic weapons were multiple warheads mounted on a missile that could skip in and out of hyperspace? Pick a target, kick the missile into hyperspace, pop out near the target, verify it's the correct target, smack it with a bunch of fast-moving slugs. The missile could possibly even skip back into hyperspace to go home and re-arm.
@ralphm6901 Then that's a AI/manually operated drone capable of hyperspace travel and delivering simultaneously multiple AI smart missiles. I am not sure you would want to launch the drone kinetically because it's already capable of FTL and the stresses on the drones components at firing G's would be enormous. Likewise firing the smart missiles kinetically via a rail or mass driver system would put massive G force stress on the missiles and that's why they normally talk in terms of slugs with kinetics but yeah ok let's do it your way, sounds like fun 👍