nmesoma coments and I've seen kila mtu anasema iko fiti. na iyo ni ukweli. story nayo nawapea 100%. Here is some positive criticism. 1. Lighting overexposed at around 4:35. then color grading at 6:40 is not consistent with the other part of film. 7:07 180 rule. On to some positive the effect in 3:03 to 3:41 one imeweza. lighting in 8:12 ni fire. the 9:50 climax iyo nayo nawapea 100% kwanzia kwa soundtrack, sound effect, acting, visual effect na cinematography 100%. mmeigonga ndipo.
Good story, amazing cast, near-perfect execution (of the story)....oh and the two main characters have a great chemistry. That 'mouth-to-mouth you give it to him' reaction.... 😂😂😂😂 Keep up, lad!✔✔
The film is great, but there is some part where i had to really struggle to hear what is being said. There is alot of background noise , i think you guys can fix that issue.... otherwise, the film is awesome... looking forward to more🙂
Haha, true. Actually script ilikua na sheng lakini actors walikua international students. So perfomance haikua inkaa natural. But yea next one will definately have more swahili.
Tell me you are a cool kid without telling you are a cool kid😂😂😂😂😂😂...amazing piece
😂nice one, Thank you
Wtf are these girls doing... they should act! Not scream ah shit all the time.
Big respect to Reagan Elly... you are a gem. Hope u go far
Very creative, I've just become a really big fan of your channel.
Welcome aboard!
The shots,the cast were amazing . The main characters had an amazing chemistry. This inspired me to shoot my short film.
Thank you Faith. Glad to hear that u liked it. I hope you can send it to me I watch it after you're done filming. 😊
@@reaganelly9263
I will
L will try waking someone with those slaps😹😹😹😹😹😹
🤣 You should try it it works
cool
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
hizo mabare bruh. ata heri kugongwa na gari anyway great stuff.
hahaha, thanks
Wow it's amazing
Thanks a lot Lizah. I'm glad I could entertain you
big up to this girl.
😂r u referring to the main character ?
good sense of humor ,,, you should be in Hollywood 😅
Yaaaay, will get there eventually. 😂
This is so nice. The story is beautiful and sad at the same time well done
Thank you so much!
This is really niceee! I like it
Thank you
Hamjui kuact💔😂
nmesoma coments and I've seen kila mtu anasema iko fiti. na iyo ni ukweli. story nayo nawapea 100%. Here is some positive criticism. 1. Lighting overexposed at around 4:35. then color grading at 6:40 is not consistent with the other part of film. 7:07 180 rule. On to some positive the effect in 3:03 to 3:41 one imeweza. lighting in 8:12 ni fire. the 9:50 climax iyo nayo nawapea 100% kwanzia kwa soundtrack, sound effect, acting, visual effect na cinematography 100%. mmeigonga ndipo.
😂 I can tell that ur also a filmmaker. Am I right? Anyway thank you so much for your honest opinion, its very helpful. Ill be sure to improve.
such a beautiful story, I really loved the ending especially
I love the story to
It's an acceptable campy
Bro creativity is on 1000 rn 🙌
Thanks so much bro
I love this
thanks a lot, I appreciate it
Nice one... 👏🏽
thanks John
SOOO COOOL!
👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼yay
it wouldn't have been a success without your very talented acting.
Nice the chemistry is good. But the background noises and sounds are abit high🥶🥶
Good job bro.
I'm glad you liked it.
😂😂😂
mnatusoma...
yup
Good story, amazing cast, near-perfect execution (of the story)....oh and the two main characters have a great chemistry.
That 'mouth-to-mouth you give it to him' reaction.... 😂😂😂😂
Keep up, lad!✔✔
Yego you naughty Daawwg
Gorgeous..
Thank u soo much😄
Go Kenya
Yea, 😂thats what I'm talking about
The film is great, but there is some part where i had to really struggle to hear what is being said. There is alot of background noise , i think you guys can fix that issue.... otherwise, the film is awesome... looking forward to more🙂
Thank you, will improve on that
What happened to new films
Nice job
Its all thanks to your DOP skills
I like the film. Nice dialogue. Let's do a collabo
sure thing bruh, Ill be glad to have a collabo.
You study in USIU?
@@GuzmanPicturesAmos yea, i do
OK. We shall plan. I have got many unproduced scripts.
🔥🔥🔥
glad you liked it
PLS, IJBOL
How do i get hold of the producers
Where are you located .... I need some of your cast
Nairobi, Kenya
This is some cool kids kind of script ... movie.So USIU 😂😂😂.In the Next scripts add some kiswahili na sheng atleast .Ikue realistic
Haha, true. Actually script ilikua na sheng lakini actors walikua international students. So perfomance haikua inkaa natural. But yea next one will definately have more swahili.
Actors are good producers can do better than this
Will definitely improve on that
pull that stunt at 2:52 and yo goin back to jail fo sho
haha, for sure