This video has some really great pointers about not being boring, especially in the TikTok era. I like what he says about people are there to laugh, not learn. This reminds me of Rodney Dangerfield jokes. He said he hates some of the long story jokes people went to.
1. Set Up - least amount of context necessary to create enough tension so that when you deliver your punchline there's a laugh. - creates tension 2. Punchline - releases tension Look at jokes to see why they're funny what's the set up eg. Misdirection Remove as many words as possible for minimum context for a punchline to maximise laughs per minute. They want to laugh not learn. Most people add too much context or put the punchline before setup and say you had to be there. Get to the interesting part. Write everything you can possibly write without editing. The editing is where you find the joke. Create a mound of words then carve a sculpture out of it. Don't edit a joke over and over again. Let the audience change and evolve the joke for you Use the entire langauge to convey the same thing. A simple thing. Use synonyms antonyms alliterations rhymes puns homonyms Write 10 lines of material everyday something that you can look back at the end of the edit and put up on stage. 250 words for funny story 3650 jokes a year 365 worth editing 36 good jokes = 30 good minutes a year
This was a great help. I prepared a 5 min material and performed in front of 2000 people and even though I got a huge round of applause still I was slapped by organisers. Sadly i cannot perform the set at an election rally.
I don't know brother, the joke didn't work for me, but then again I suppose that has something to do with my disability. I was born without a sense of humour
Sometimes don't try to pretend it, just be natural the joke and humour will come out of instinct, be with those who have great sense of humour, and the most important thing never repeat the same jokes again and again.
Great vid. Whether one finds the joke funny or not is not the point. Some will find it hysterical, some will indeed groan. Humor is objective, if nothing else. But it IS humor, and it IS a good opener. And the EXPLANATION on structure is terrific
Great advice. I loved the fat joke 😂 Thanks for spreading your knowledge. I'm so inspired and bursting to try my hand at comedy. This is a good start! Thanks again
This was just amazing. Just your gaze alone says "I know my stuff." Awesome video, thank you for taking the time to do this. The light joke was great! :)) So simple, so effective. Respect
I just ran across this video somehow I got the grand idea to try standup 😂 honestly I have been wanting to do it for awhile, but this was great information!!!
Joke wasn't funny but the guy is so incredibly likeable that I laughed. That's why comedy is an art form - So much more than the words being spoken. Takes the whole package, and in his case, it's a very large one. (That's my time thank you so much you guys are great)
i bought a book, how to write funny, it wasn't funny. I came to your channel and you summed up in 14 mins what that book could not in 4 hours thank you. i feel like i have a good understanding of how to write some jokes now. my favorite comedians are jeff ross, seth rogan, jonah hill, katt williams, and i forget the other one but i'm sure he is funny too. kinda sucks to have alztimerz at age 31 must be all those diet cokes i've been snorting.
Just out of curiosity, if I wanted to watch your course on comedy, would I have to cast it onto my widescreen tv, or can you still fit on my phone? No, but thanks for the helpful tips man, much appreciated🙏🏻😋
Well i might need that one on one coaching cause im retarded , which is funny u mentioned genetics cause i blame BOTH my mom and dad ......They were hilbillies .....aunte mom and uncle dad ! Gotta love them mountain folk ....They get busy like the royal family
I’m a 🇯🇲 stand up comedian and everything your saying that’s how I do comedy and I never went to school for it 🤷🏾♂️ guess I’m naturally gifted is that possible👀
YOU HAVE A LOT TO OFFER! May I suggest you edit out looking at your notes and edit IN closeups and multiple distance shots - it will be more "RUclips" like! GOOD LUCK! PS _ try watching Def Noodles - he also does Standup --
I’m trying to write a joke but I don’t think I get it and it’s frustrating me. I end up just having a ton of stream of consciousness thoughts about every possible thing that could go in the joke. Now I just hundreds of long paragraphs that are almost jokes with no real punchline. Help?
6:30 bored... Let me help you out I'm fat ... Oh you noticed... I blame twinkies... Doc says i need to exercise and lose weight... So i have a new doctor now.. Thanks for the info.
I've wrote a joke! Joke: Why can't a t rex🦖,lion🦁,or eagle🦅eat me for breakfast,lunch,or dinner? 'CAUSE I'M THE KING OF WORLD!!!!!!👑🌎 WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!🙌🏾🙌🏾
I'm a fat bastard... I blame my parents, my mother's a tart but my father's famous... Papa Johns. The place I live is rural, it's so far out... I have to drive 45 minutes to get to the nearest abandoned gas station. I knew a man of chagrin, He never committed a sin, Pure as snow, As far as we know, And the girls at the brothel said he was prim.
I'm fat. I blame my father mostly. You might know him. He's really fat. ...so, genetics. Also he force-fed me pizza until I was eighteen... He works at Papa John's. It's a newer job, unrelated to the force-feedings. I mean, I don't know, maybe he has a thing for pizza. I'm not him, so whatever. You go ask him, if you're so damn curious. But you might know him, yeah. ...He's the manager there. -At Papa John's.
I’m glad i found a video that actually gave specifics for how much you should be writing and that you need to edit on stage. Great vid!
Thank you!
This video has some really great pointers about not being boring, especially in the TikTok era. I like what he says about people are there to laugh, not learn. This reminds me of Rodney Dangerfield jokes. He said he hates some of the long story jokes people went to.
Even if the joke didn't hit you can't deny this guy is talking straight facts
1. Set Up - least amount of context necessary to create enough tension so that when you deliver your punchline there's a laugh.
- creates tension
2. Punchline
- releases tension
Look at jokes to see why they're funny what's the set up eg. Misdirection
Remove as many words as possible for minimum context for a punchline to maximise laughs per minute. They want to laugh not learn.
Most people add too much context or put the punchline before setup and say you had to be there. Get to the interesting part.
Write everything you can possibly write without editing. The editing is where you find the joke. Create a mound of words then carve a sculpture out of it. Don't edit a joke over and over again.
Let the audience change and evolve the joke for you
Use the entire langauge to convey the same thing. A simple thing. Use synonyms antonyms alliterations rhymes puns homonyms
Write 10 lines of material everyday something that you can look back at the end of the edit and put up on stage. 250 words for funny story
3650 jokes a year
365 worth editing
36 good jokes
= 30 good minutes a year
Wow this is amazing and thorough I love it!!!
thank you man!
This was a great help. I prepared a 5 min material and performed in front of 2000 people and even though I got a huge round of applause still I was slapped by organisers. Sadly i cannot perform the set at an election rally.
haha good joke
That got an audible laugh from me, great joke!
I don't know brother, the joke didn't work for me, but then again I suppose that has something to do with my disability. I was born without a sense of humour
Sometimes don't try to pretend it, just be natural the joke and humour will come out of instinct, be with those who have great sense of humour, and the most important thing never repeat the same jokes again and again.
What joke. Can we have a look at
Sad life
This had me DY… YING
@@mdzaidshaikh1863that flew over yo head.
Great vid. Whether one finds the joke funny or not is not the point. Some will find it hysterical, some will indeed groan. Humor is objective, if nothing else. But it IS humor, and it IS a good opener. And the EXPLANATION on structure is terrific
Thank you for explaining joke structures.
You gave actual insights on joke writing, like effective ones. Liked and Subscribed.
Thank you!
Great advice. I loved the fat joke 😂 Thanks for spreading your knowledge. I'm so inspired and bursting to try my hand at comedy. This is a good start! Thanks again
This was just amazing. Just your gaze alone says "I know my stuff." Awesome video, thank you for taking the time to do this. The light joke was great! :)) So simple, so effective. Respect
Thanks for the kind comment!!!
Just watched several videos and this was the first that was helpful. Thanks so much!!
Thanks for watching!
I just ran across this video somehow I got the grand idea to try standup 😂 honestly I have been wanting to do it for awhile, but this was great information!!!
I love how this video is about the structure of a joke and not about “trying to be funny”. I feel like people who try to be funny usually aren’t funny
So kind of you to say. Thank you
Great teaching style, dude
Muchas gracias! Very good advice!
Thank you for watching!
Thanks for this I’m just starting out writing and preparing my sets. This helped me majorly
this is really helpful. thank you
I’m laughing watching this this is the best way to learn keep going
Joke wasn't funny but the guy is so incredibly likeable that I laughed. That's why comedy is an art form - So much more than the words being spoken. Takes the whole package, and in his case, it's a very large one. (That's my time thank you so much you guys are great)
Really glad I found this channel and I'm going to check out all your videos. I hope you keep making this incredibly helpful content!
Thank you for the kind comment
Really interesting, that is what i'm looking for, thank you so much
Thank you so much
Thank you for breaking it down! insane wordplay
Great video man. You explained it well IMO. Thank you for helping us comedians and internet memers out. Good luck.
i bought a book, how to write funny, it wasn't funny. I came to your channel and you summed up in 14 mins what that book could not in 4 hours thank you. i feel like i have a good understanding of how to write some jokes now. my favorite comedians are jeff ross, seth rogan, jonah hill, katt williams, and i forget the other one but i'm sure he is funny too. kinda sucks to have alztimerz at age 31 must be all those diet cokes i've been snorting.
Lol
Thank you so much @Casey !! This video is such a help for beginners like me !
i agree a 100%! the material was beneficial and I got started immediately with developing 10 jokes ! Great help
The "Im fat" had me cracking up !!!
Thank you for your content.
I would love some tips this was the most knowledgeable video yet
The light joke totally had me =)
Great video, most of the videos here don't explain the technique, just vague concepts we already know mostly
Best comedy coach ever!!!!
Miss you Sara!
Great content bro
@Casey Casperson I watch this video constantly, thank you
Thanks so much!
I chuckled at the light joke
great advice, thanks for this video...
13:57 joke got me! 🤣 good stuff man. You’re talented keep it goin
Thank you!
I'm dead bro lmao 🤣
Good structure. You kept the good one for last!
So glad to add you to my collection of teachers
Just out of curiosity, if I wanted to watch your course on comedy, would I have to cast it onto my widescreen tv, or can you still fit on my phone?
No, but thanks for the helpful tips man, much appreciated🙏🏻😋
your heart shines through and vibrate throughout your entire being and that alone makes you handsome!
"His name is Papa John"
😐🦗😐🦗😐
Papa John😂 people don’t understand it’s all about the delivery on stage
Very helpful also after the papa John joke i had to leave a like
How kind of you thanks!
A tall man stood up too quickly and hit a light. He must have felt light headed.
Very helpful !!
😂😂😂the papa John joke
thank you so much
I can't find the edit button for this video. I thought you said the audience could edit for you!
Well i might need that one on one coaching cause im retarded , which is funny u mentioned genetics cause i blame BOTH my mom and dad ......They were hilbillies .....aunte mom and uncle dad ! Gotta love them mountain folk ....They get busy like the royal family
Yo I'm socially awkward this is super helpful because I'm not naturally funny
Thank you that was great!
Uncle Jimmy John's and Aunt Wendy's are also the problem. My friends Ben and Jerry Don't help either.
❤❤❤❤❤Whew!!!
THANK YOU!!!!🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
thank you so much
Subscribed, wish I could twice
I’m a 🇯🇲 stand up comedian and everything your saying that’s how I do comedy and I never went to school for it 🤷🏾♂️ guess I’m naturally gifted is that possible👀
Papa John’s was a dime lol
Ha! Thank you!
Do you still offer one on one coaching?
I do. Email me at admin@sickpuppiescomedy.com
YOU HAVE A LOT TO OFFER! May I suggest you edit out looking at your notes and edit IN closeups and multiple distance shots - it will be more "RUclips" like! GOOD LUCK!
PS _ try watching Def Noodles - he also does Standup --
Thanks
I’m trying to write a joke but I don’t think I get it and it’s frustrating me. I end up just having a ton of stream of consciousness thoughts about every possible thing that could go in the joke. Now I just hundreds of long paragraphs that are almost jokes with no real punchline. Help?
Have you tried any of the punchlines on stage? Let an audience help you out
@@caseycasperson853No, will do this and come back with results.
@@tyronecriss233 months later I'm curious what the joke was and how it did!
how much do you guys charge for coaching?
Hi Kristiona! It all depends on what you’re looking to do! Email us at woof@sickpuppiescomedy.com and I’m happy to set up a quick call
I'm not fat I'm husky - it runs in the family - my dad's an alsatian
Teach me how to do a good comedy
954? Yall in broward county?
Palm Beach county! One county north!
@@caseycasperson853 that's so cool, not many spots down this way
Please please!
do you do classes
I do them virtually with private classes or in person in south Florida
Ugh, now I have to order Papa John's.
This is poes funny
6:30 bored...
Let me help you out
I'm fat ...
Oh you noticed...
I blame twinkies...
Doc says i need to exercise and lose weight...
So i have a new doctor now..
Thanks for the info.
First joke... Papa John.... crickets.... where can I order this program?
Sickpuppiescomedy.com
I dont get the I'm fat joke
I got it
Papa johns is a Pizza fastfood chain. So he blames papa johns and not his real father
@@seider780 i get it but its not that funny.
@@sifugurusensei maybe you don't like comedy. Who's your favorite comic?
@@mandm2349 norm macdonald though he's dead. He consistently made me laugh.
My friend send me this 😂😂 and told me that first learn how to give jokes then do it😂😂😂😂 he also said that... Abe har samay lame jokes Marta rehta he 😂
Jim gaffigan tight 5 45 laughs
Dave Chapelle starts with a punchline
When is the next cheeseburger liquor party?
Ngl I was writing a joke before I watched this
Very nice but next time pls tell us how to be funny like Chandler bing
I don't understand why people are commenting here , its not a comedy or joke club. I am very serious person.
😢😅
I've wrote a joke!
Joke: Why can't a t rex🦖,lion🦁,or eagle🦅eat me for breakfast,lunch,or dinner?
'CAUSE I'M THE KING OF WORLD!!!!!!👑🌎 WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!🙌🏾🙌🏾
Who's popping john ??😢
Can i talk about my family of jokes
😂
I'm a fat bastard... I blame my parents, my mother's a tart but my father's famous... Papa Johns.
The place I live is rural, it's so far out... I have to drive 45 minutes to get to the nearest abandoned gas station.
I knew a man of chagrin,
He never committed a sin,
Pure as snow,
As far as we know,
And the girls at the brothel said he was prim.
Papa John Jr.
If he didn’t say that racist shit, they would’ve put you on the box instead of Shaq
:D
I'm skinny. You can blame my father. You've probably heard of him, his name is Slim Jim?
eshh
I'm fat. I blame my father mostly. You might know him. He's really fat. ...so, genetics. Also he force-fed me pizza until I was eighteen...
He works at Papa John's. It's a newer job, unrelated to the force-feedings. I mean, I don't know, maybe he has a thing for pizza. I'm not him, so whatever. You go ask him, if you're so damn curious.
But you might know him, yeah. ...He's the manager there. -At Papa John's.
Hey! I’m pretty damn skinny. I mean real skinny! Someone stopped me last week and I asked, what part of Cambodia are you from?? 🤓
I'm fat
How about: I'm fat, I blame my father. You probably heard of him. We had Chinese for dinner about five times a week. Oh, my father was Jeffrey Dahmer.
Thank you for this. Your dad papa John is a racist.
yeah, it's unfortunate and we are in therapy. He's not getting any better.
Please @1Challino stay out of comedy clubs.
@Casey Casperson Please @1Challino, stay out of comedy clubs.
@Sonny Knight get real I was joking.
It ain't funny
You are not very good
I’ll stop then. This was helpful.
and there is also subtext.
I just wrote a 1 min rant about how they should have let Quinton terrantino direct star wars
That’s fuggin hilarious
May the muthaf*****n force be with you!
@@caseycasperson853 thanks brother.i find my self setting things up well but I have a hard time with the punch line