Try the interactive tutorial, or download the Sheet music here: musescore.com/... This piece is about cockatiels and some of the sounds that they make.
This is pretty good. You have more rhythmic variation and development than some of your other pieces, and that makes it a more engaging listening experience. Consider even more opportunities for variation - development of the left hand, changes in harmony and tempo, and varying dynamics. You made the last bit louder, but you could vary the volume throughout, especially with all the repetitive phrases. A good piece of music should establish its own vocabulary, teach it to the listener, and then use that vocabulary to tell a story, and you did a lot of that. Nice!
This is pretty good. You have more rhythmic variation and development than some of your other pieces, and that makes it a more engaging listening experience. Consider even more opportunities for variation - development of the left hand, changes in harmony and tempo, and varying dynamics. You made the last bit louder, but you could vary the volume throughout, especially with all the repetitive phrases. A good piece of music should establish its own vocabulary, teach it to the listener, and then use that vocabulary to tell a story, and you did a lot of that. Nice!
Thanks you for your feedback! I might do another version of this.
Super cool ideas! But so many repeats