Well done. Just a few minor corrections: Several pieces of literature have proved that taking music classes positively changes math and English results by fifteen percent.
Wonderful start! Try these suggestions: We would use "some research" instead of "a few". Also, you need to tell me WHAT increases by 15 percent. Submit your paraphrase again 😃. Thank you!
Great start! You should use the verb "take" instead of "get". And you may want to use a different word in place of evolve. Feel free to submit the paraphrase again with those 2 suggestions! Thank you 😃
Excellent! Just a couple of changes: Math and English test scores are 15% better when music lessons are also incorporated, as shown by various studies.
Great start! You will want to switch your phrases - "over 15%" and" math and English testing scores" - so it reads: According to several research studies, music lessons increase math and English testing scores by over 15%. Hope this helps!
Well done! Just remember to put a "." at the end of your sentence. Also, there is non need to capitalize the words "test" and "some research". Thank your for learning with us! 😃
Well done! Here are few minor changes: Based on current research, students improve their math and English test scores by 15 percent after participating in music lessons.
@@msohaib_rumi632 *Studies have shown that music classes boost students' scores by more than 15%. In this one - boost is a better word choice than aid because it's a bit "stronger and more visual" :). Hope this helps!
Well done! The only thing I would correct is use of prepositions ~ "... can be improved by more than 15% from having music lessons." Thank you for learning with us 😃.
By taking music classes, a few studies have shown it can advance test scores of english and math to more than 15 percent.
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Thanks for this lecture bc it is going to be very helpful for my exam which is scheduled tomorrow
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Engaging into music lessons has a great contribution of more than 15 percent on your math and English scores as noted by some studies .
Good start. How about this:
Engaging in music lessons increases your math and English scores more than 15 percent.
How abt the "sentence structure" of the paraphrasing ?? Any particular approach??
Music lessons in some studies showed more than a 15 percent improvement in English and math test scores.
Several literatures proved, that doing music classes can change the maths and English results greater than fifteen precents.
Well done. Just a few minor corrections: Several pieces of literature have proved that taking music classes positively changes math and English results by fifteen percent.
A few research says, music lessons supports to get more than 15 percent in English and Math.
Wonderful start! Try these suggestions:
We would use "some research" instead of "a few". Also, you need to tell me WHAT increases by 15 percent.
Submit your paraphrase again 😃.
Thank you!
Some research have shown that you can get high marks in your English and Math test if you are having music classes.
Well done! Just change this: if you are taking music classes.
Based on some studies, over 15 percent of math and English grades can be enhanced by enrolling in music classes.
If you are learning about music, there are studies saying your exam scores will increase higher than 15 percent in English and Math.
Wonderful ~ my only correction is: If you learn music,
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Getting music classes helps evolve math and English test scores by over 15 percent, according to some research studies
Great start! You should use the verb "take" instead of "get". And you may want to use a different word in place of evolve. Feel free to submit the paraphrase again with those 2 suggestions! Thank you 😃
According to some studies, attending music lessons may help increase math and English score over 15 percent.
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Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.
Many studies explain that math and english exams can be improved more than 15 percent by attending musical lessons ❤❤
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Math and English Test Scores is better by over 15% through being taught in Music lessons as shown by some studies.
Excellent! Just a couple of changes: Math and English test scores are 15% better when music lessons are also incorporated, as shown by various studies.
According to several researches, music lessons increase over 15% Math and English testing scores.
Great start! You will want to switch your phrases - "over 15%" and" math and English testing scores" -
so it reads:
According to several research studies, music lessons increase math and English testing scores by over 15%.
Hope this helps!
English and math test score can be improved by 15 percent by taking the music lesson according to several studies
Math and English Test grades can be advanced over 15% when studying music according to Some Research
Well done! Just remember to put a "." at the end of your sentence. Also, there is non need to capitalize the words "test" and "some research". Thank your for learning with us! 😃
@@WorldwideSpeak Thank you for correcting my sentence and sharing your knowledge on this topic.
To increase math and English score in the exam by more ehan15% , learning music is helpful as found by some studies.
Good job! Just make sure "scores" is plural. 😃
Students receive an increase over 15 percent on their math and English test results since they join music lessons based on some researches.
Well done! Here are few minor changes: Based on current research, students improve their math and English test scores by 15 percent after participating in music lessons.
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Participating in music lessons aids to build quiz marks over 15 percent , a research reveals .
Excellent! You would probably need to use "in raising" instead of "to build". But overall, well done. 😃
According to study, over 15 percent of english and math exam grades increase by having music lessons.
According to some studies, people who attend music lessons acquire higher scores by over than 15 percent.
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*According to some studies, people who attend music lessons acquire higher scores by MORE than 15 percent.
studies have shown that music classes aids to the score of students by more than15%.
@@msohaib_rumi632 *Studies have shown that music classes boost students' scores by more than 15%.
In this one - boost is a better word choice than aid because it's a bit "stronger and more visual" :). Hope this helps!
Research reveals math and English test scores can be improved by about 15% with music education. (Jackson aged 16)
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15 percent of the scores increasing by Achieving music lesson and it proven by few articles.
Good start. Let's try this:
You can increase your scores 15 percent by taking music lessons.
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@@WorldwideSpeak Study shows that music can enhance your score
Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.
Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.
Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.
Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.
Well done! The only thing I would correct is use of prepositions ~ "... can be improved by more than 15% from having music lessons."
Thank you for learning with us 😃.