There are so many elements presented without preamble or real explanation in Ring's stories. The Forge, a central plot point, just pops into the story for no reason. What is Akira? We never get a real description of ... her? Him? It? How did the three of them meet? Why is a god travelling with them? Where were they before the "game world"? What is "ascending"? On and on.
*jifagor* If you're talking about Battle Mage Farmer, its not a book. Its an anime in book form. While the story is funnier that the sample of this ..idk if i like it better. Too much angst about the world ending. Not even a hint of sex, but plenty of sexual tension.
later books in series..dragon corrosion should have friend ALF create a counter to it.... audio battle mage series release oct 30 2024 "Separation" tower series forge master next audio nov 12 2024 "challenger"
Yeah that bothered me, then I realised that this is not the author's page, and in fact the back story the MC keeps referencing is several books long in itself.
The only gripe I have, really the ONLY one, is that the writer needs to proofread more. He uses the same words over and over. “The green fire burned his hand. He put the fire out and saw the damage from the fire. Fire was the only thing that could damage him and get past his resistance to elements.” There’s one fight in a previous book where the author doesn’t refer to anyone by pronouns or descriptive words at all. He says the names of “bad guy” every single time that he attacks or comes up. I’m enjoying the world building and the fights but it really takes you out of the story when “hollow”, “body”, “effect”, is used over and over again in the same five minutes. There are a few series I’ve had to put down because the wording is repetitive.
Probably a copy right thing I’ve been listening to audiobooks on RUclips for year and the amount of them that get taken down is crazy but not really I’m mean come on this is stealing but oh well right
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Thanks for this Battle mage farmer is also goood
Thanks To the author for a wonderful story and thanks to the narrator please where is Part 3
That is it for that book
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Great thanks 👍
Awesome adventures ☺️✌️💜👌
I love the series and am hooked. Thanks for providing it on RUclips. I bought REFORGED and ARCANIST on Audible.
Awesome listen seth thanks for posting it up
Dope story! Keep it up!
More please
To avoid music....use captioning while it plays. Not ideal but it works.
Irritating music gone at 4:56:47
the music keeps the video up and ad free
@@William.Shakespeare "You're wrong"??? How odd. How did you manage to have two different names for the same response?
i can vassilate between 3@@scinanisern9845
Thx for the skip button bro.
This is a nonsense game world nothing.. but I love it! I fall,sleep to then nonsense.
Part 3? Keep it coming!!
What a wonderful books
Could you please get the second book reforged?
There are so many elements presented without preamble or real explanation in Ring's stories. The Forge, a central plot point, just pops into the story for no reason. What is Akira? We never get a real description of ... her? Him? It? How did the three of them meet? Why is a god travelling with them? Where were they before the "game world"? What is "ascending"? On and on.
you are missing the bookes before its called nova terra i think
Yea there are 10 books b4 this one that introduce you to Thorn and Co.
For the algorithm 👍
I absolutely love these two stories and I hope their will be a number 3 or even 4!
More please! Thanks!
In my opinion Battle mage is better. not bad though.
*jifagor*
If you're talking about Battle Mage Farmer, its not a book. Its an anime in book form.
While the story is funnier that the sample of this ..idk if i like it better. Too much angst about the world ending. Not even a hint of sex, but plenty of sexual tension.
Excellence
Ding!
What happened to the second miner. He left two at entrance
What is that music 4,54?
later books in series..dragon corrosion should have friend ALF create a counter to it....
audio battle mage series release oct 30 2024 "Separation"
tower series forge master next audio nov 12 2024 "challenger"
Spiritual pressure interruption is annoying . Especially since it’s outta pocket like whole vibe of the listen
What is up with the music starting 4:54?
Thankfully it was only for 3 minutes but dang that sucked
I liked it lol
Keama Ckmcy
Yeah that bothered me, then I realised that this is not the author's page, and in fact the back story the MC keeps referencing is several books long in itself.
@@mikeemmons1079 do you know what books those are? I would like to read them
What the hell happened to the nanits and what are they good for
Fk’n utube stop putting music overlays at end of stories
Where is the rest of this book it's supposed to be 12 hours long
Is the music a copyright thing or just a dick move
The only gripe I have, really the ONLY one, is that the writer needs to proofread more. He uses the same words over and over. “The green fire burned his hand. He put the fire out and saw the damage from the fire. Fire was the only thing that could damage him and get past his resistance to elements.”
There’s one fight in a previous book where the author doesn’t refer to anyone by pronouns or descriptive words at all. He says the names of “bad guy” every single time that he attacks or comes up. I’m enjoying the world building and the fights but it really takes you out of the story when “hollow”, “body”, “effect”, is used over and over again in the same five minutes.
There are a few series I’ve had to put down because the wording is repetitive.
Music ruins the story I wonder who did that ?
Probably a copy right thing I’ve been listening to audiobooks on RUclips for year and the amount of them that get taken down is crazy but not really I’m mean come on this is stealing but oh well right
Y the music though
She could have just not told him about that mine. Major plot hole
SO many plot holes.
2 30
I knew she was traitor , 8th tier and scared of a mine.
That damned music again 4:55:58 Wtf?
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Again??? What's with the damn music?????
Whats with the horrible music sounds like a cheap 80ies skin flick...
What's up with the music 😡 ruined it