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If I smoke this blunt I'm taking flight and only thing that will bring me down is that Kryptonite left hook in ring man say good night it seems like every time you feed a dog it turns around and bite I come around once so if you blink dog you might lose sight
Hard to keep track when life a train wreck, U got dollars but i still ain't seen change yet, Make it rain thats a figure of speech, And ion gotta talk unless i want my figures to speak,
You’re the only person on RUclips that I’ve actually followed and looked forward to you posting a new video. Keep doing what you’re doing rob, feel like I’m getting smarter every day watching your videos ✊🏾
Off of my joint Pitfalls... "Pivot in a pivotal time, it makes a difference. Thinkin' of reciprocal life like it's division. Divison of my kin: fightin', stayin' distant. Distance of a time in a life: short as inches. Part of why I'm grippin' a mic is poor decisions, but I kill it like a Criminal Mind before conviction. Extort the witness!"
@@panicwtm9106 Really you should be reading whatever you can find, read critically, if you read something you like or dislike then make note of it. If you're looking specifically for wordplay, there're plenty of poems to read. Authors like Lewis Carroll, Dylan Thomas and James Joyce are chock-full of wordplay, sometimes to the point where it gets so abstract that most people can't agree on one meaning.
Phrase: Kill two birds with one stone Meaning: Get two things done with a single action (e.g threesome) Word Association: Kill: “killed something” could mean do something really well Birds: Another word for females here in England, Flock of birds could mean group of girls Stone/Stones: Rocks, Diamonds, Jewellery Simple Rap: Ladies flock to me Yeah I got them stones Cats out the bag I kill two birds in one bone
Adapt my style like chameleons I walk alone I'm Bohemian Ten times he raps a day (Rhapsody) When I freestyle, I can rap for days Even when I'm under pressure I rhyme tight you gon' need a stretcher
I love it when bars is heavy/ It shows who's not steady and whose ready/ You shouldn't lift past your weight son/ That will have you flatter than a pancake being done/ Don't try to sprint through life that's a felony/ Let me slow you down to jog your memory
if i put my D, in this industry. will they finally C. i was born to slay like Queen B. i got that lyrical high grade, so only thing im expecting after this essay. is a got damn(A)ey....
"The music is opulent, each rhyme comes from a optimist/ In every line you spit you commit to staying positive/ Over elegant instrumental sounds with confidence/ No stopping it, remain calm and stick to confidence/" -Marked Visions
From my "Let It Fly (Freestyle)" "You gotta see it to believe it; explains why they don't believe in me 'cause even eye-to-eye, these emcees ain't ever seeing me"
Behind bars, I have words with ease Feed on these syllables, call me a Lyrical beast Shawties or cheese, game's on point like derringers Like real G's, I get figures all year like calendars
They say running business is hard , My name noah try running an ark, I noah guy couldn't run from the start, I gave him a push now he rolling thru streets like his car cant park
Literally just started giving song/rap writing a go but, in a song about having an existential crisis, come up with the bar “i just sit here at home becoming a square, i used to love spongebob, i guess im becoming my idol, is that why i love pineapple?” And i feel like it just taps perfectly into the absurdism of letting your mind aimlessly run wild during an existential crisis
Kick rocks/ I'm a strong undertow/ You like a fish out of water, no flow If you a ten then I'm one hundred and one plus eleven / Count on me rockin' out from hip hop to them reggae sessions
I love how you teach with a great sense of humor It’s nearly perfect, I give you a nine My love for what I just watched is big like a tumor Not aggressive, so let me call it benign
from my rap battle vs. 5 Theories " I'm always pushin' my pen you think you gon' win? is that really? Headshot! Matter stretched everywhere The FLASH created the Big Bang THEORY!" Its word play on his name Theory Matter stretched everywhere= Brain Matter/Matter Particles The Flash = Flash of the gun nozzle/The universe exploding Big Bang = The noise the gun would make/The assumed way the universe was created
My head twisted like rastas,too sick for the doctors.. Tryna quit drinking whiskey while I sip on the vodka.. Trippin like Woodstock,bruh,Cruise to Mission Impossibles.. I'll get it poppin like a fckn cruise missiles on top of ya.. Or like I'm cooking tilapia while I'm shaking a bottle.. Just tryna make my kitchen table look like the Day after Tmrw.. I dont play n I ain't sorry,Hit TJ on a safari.. animals took me to a place where cats are barely even charging!!
This so crazy because when I first started rapping I was doing exactly this without seeing your video and I use to brag to my friends I rapped with like check out my wordplay and they was like I was thinking to much now I stopped doing and I was actually getting better at rapping now I hit a brick wall and now my friends tell me I use to be better smh 🤦♂️
I've been practicing and rapping for 2 years and my wordplay was already great but someone was hating and I had to come back to see. And this opened my eyes a bit more. The hater just made me greater 😂.
"no time for bullshit. And i talk to the godess of victory and she tells me 'n***a just do it' " Translated bar by german rapper micel o The track's called "just do it"
Working on new flows Always sound the same though Calling me a square because I don't take the right angle But I'm about as hot as 90 degrees No winter time chillen in this summer breeze I used to smoke a pound down that was louder than surround sound But I realized that had me bound Now I'm just high on life Rolling with the punches like my name is Mike
I've been burying a lot of these rappers/ Now 90 percent of the game dig me/ Tacklin tactics' Step to step like it was spelling bee/ Was just trying to write something but I'm really not in the mood Lmaooo
hahahhaha..."cmon, what is this, 1992!?!?! get outta here wit that". got me bro bro...i can tell, when we meet each other soon we gonna connect right away. we the same, just different. keep swinging my dude! nice job.
Im like superman blood,not even the kryptonite can kill me/ Did you get that/ Im like superman BLOOD ,not even the CRIPS tonight can kill me/ West vs East side wordplay
This is off my new song Vintage Era "This is my vintage era, impode your mind like a caldera. I'm a fire breathing chimera. I'm the G.O.A.T I swear bruh, you a serpent in your lair huh if you hate you'll be like a lion with no zebra(uh)"
The trick to really being a good lyricist is to study other mcs lyrics, from every kind of rap genre, exept mumble cause they aint lyricists, try studying some simple bars at first like tupacs, then listen to something more hardcore like a diss from em, then try studying something more underground like mobb deep or wu tang etc etc. If you read whole songs from different artists and understand them fully you will not only be able to right good lyrics but also write good lyrics on different kind of topics, like you will be able to write decent battle rap lyrics but also something more emotional. Mostcs quit school because its boring studying but if you want to succeed as an mc youll have to study there as well
Arsonist Association: playing with fire, good music, trending, There's no games, you put your heart in this Till you daily play with fire like an arsonist
I'm on top of the tier Write corresponding to Shakespeare What I say ,I say I control everything I'm the puppeteer Don't exaggerate I aint a musketeer I can be a cavalier I decisived buccaneer Ready with my gear Maybe my time is now later I'll disappear And when I'm gone carry on your own You don't need to be sere Untill I'm here keep the party going take to hemisphere
The choppa shred thru your skin Like a helicopta shredding thru the wind I hit up my homeboy, he come running He run shit like it’s a race, and we always win
These are some words I came up with writing down in the Apple Notes app: 1. Yeah, I’m stacking’ the cheese i aint lactose / i shoot his toes through his yeezys now he lack toes. 2. They be hating on me i say “u jus jealous tho” / i be in the pizzeria / i be getting to the dough like Esposito. 3. Yuh, you wont catch me at yo function your hairline says y = mx + b for a reason gang / that’s a linear function. 4. I got my glock, .223 that’s a firearm. Playing in the NFL with them Chief playas / throwin’ bullets, throwin’ mags that’s a fire arm. That’s all I have. I’ve been practicing for like 2 days now so I’m just a beginner. I tried tho
Something I’ve been working on “Was always strap as a kid With branches Those were the sticks Equip with extended clips Punchlines ganna hit Like a uppercut direct hit From a cosmetic surgeon That’s is you facelift” You need to know your gun reference in urban dictionary words to understand the branches and sticks bar
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Pop Smoke was feared woo as a legend
Bad Boy was no joke like a biggie session
-Louisiana P.A.T.
If I smoke this blunt I'm taking flight and only thing that will bring me down is that Kryptonite left hook in ring man say good night it seems like every time you feed a dog it turns around and bite I come around once so if you blink dog you might lose sight
@@patrickwilliams337 I'm the next greatest rapper of all time
I ain’t rusty when I’m robbin’
Ima take ya meal
And I got away clean
That’s a stainless steal
Potential
Ayeee 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Dope
YO THATS ACTUALLY FIRE BRUH
Walfy thanks. You checked out any of my music? Look me up: KillManyWaters
I really appreciate what this man does, because not everybody has people around them to teach these things
Hell yea all the way
Facts
I learn more on his channel than actual school. 💯
On God my guy😂😂
This is school lol and I teach you better life skills too 😂😂😂😂😂😂
Right haha
Smart Rapper Mr. Smart Rapper 🏫✏️📚
That is so true though 😂😂😂😂😂🔥
Hard to keep track when life a train wreck,
U got dollars but i still ain't seen change yet,
Make it rain thats a figure of speech,
And ion gotta talk unless i want my figures to speak,
FIGURES TO SPEAK (FIGURE OF SPEACH) OMGGGG-
THIS WAS HARD ASF 🔥🔥🔥🔥
That was hard asf 🔥🔥🔥
Good one
Thats a bar 🔥
You’re the only person on RUclips that I’ve actually followed and looked forward to you posting a new video. Keep doing what you’re doing rob, feel like I’m getting smarter every day watching your videos ✊🏾
🔥
Off of my joint Pitfalls...
"Pivot in a pivotal time, it makes a difference. Thinkin' of reciprocal life like it's division. Divison of my kin: fightin', stayin' distant. Distance of a time in a life: short as inches. Part of why I'm grippin' a mic is poor decisions, but I kill it like a Criminal Mind before conviction. Extort the witness!"
🔥
Ryan Portwood
OH WOWW
Short answer: read more, listen to and study more challenging hip-hop lyrics.
What should I read
Books, poems, articles, to expand your knowledge of things for lyrical rapping and also better understanding of storytelling aspects of rapping.
@@panicwtm9106 Really you should be reading whatever you can find, read critically, if you read something you like or dislike then make note of it. If you're looking specifically for wordplay, there're plenty of poems to read. Authors like Lewis Carroll, Dylan Thomas and James Joyce are chock-full of wordplay, sometimes to the point where it gets so abstract that most people can't agree on one meaning.
@@panicwtm9106anything that might inspire you
That’s the thing tho, how do I study people’s word play without using it
Phrase: Kill two birds with one stone
Meaning: Get two things done with a single action (e.g threesome)
Word Association:
Kill: “killed something” could mean do something really well
Birds: Another word for females here in England, Flock of birds could mean group of girls
Stone/Stones: Rocks, Diamonds, Jewellery
Simple Rap:
Ladies flock to me
Yeah I got them stones
Cats out the bag
I kill two birds in one bone
Why the two stones and bag lines? Was it just simply filler?
nah this better,
bitches flock to me
i got all the hoes
2 bitches in the trap
kill 2 birds wit one stone
@@herculesmclovincats is synonym for pussy.
So word play is basically metaphors and similies with a bit of spice
Pretty much
Not really
@John Lewis not rap knowledge, but English
@@callumkeeley4317 yea really
@@hexit7777 Their is metaphors and similes, but also have double entendres, triples, and quadruple entendres. So he does have a point
I heard this one somewhere, but it's "Punchlines so hard I crack my wrist"
They say my punchlines don't land, that's just because I'm shadow boxin.
@@mattttttscotttttt me/ my crew always active, I say get ready, set (my crew), go, this ain't the running race.
@@mattttttscotttttt that was lowkey hard
I shine bright no intention of going out yet
I'm the plug in constant search of me an outlet
Nice.
Adapt my style like chameleons
I walk alone I'm Bohemian
Ten times he raps a day (Rhapsody)
When I freestyle, I can rap for days
Even when I'm under pressure
I rhyme tight you gon' need a stretcher
I can never think of stuff to do good word play about. Hoping this will help me think of stuff more easily.
thoughts ain't pretty
i try to make up my mind
Sweet
oooh thats sick
Lines so smooth
Like a well pressed cloth
y'all listen up, he always spitting faxx 💯
"She's on my one eyed snake suckin out the venom cuz you know she wants the carnage
Ya she blowin up and down like a nintendo cartridge"
"You know I'm the plug. And music is my outlet."
I love it when bars is heavy/ It shows who's not steady and whose ready/ You shouldn't lift past your weight son/ That will have you flatter than a pancake being done/
Don't try to sprint through life that's a felony/ Let me slow you down to jog your memory
if i put my D, in this industry.
will they finally C. i was born to slay like Queen B.
i got that lyrical high grade, so only thing im expecting after this essay.
is a got damn(A)ey....
Yooo, that was dope!
He's the realest guy right now,
Salute to his show
To add on nothing more
I'm on the beat without lyrics
Buh I'm flowing critics
"cause' if that's the hot topic you front page top of the agenda
to get aired out quicker than air benders"
Great tip bro💯💯
"The music is opulent, each rhyme comes from a optimist/
In every line you spit you commit to staying positive/
Over elegant instrumental sounds with confidence/
No stopping it, remain calm and stick to confidence/"
-Marked Visions
Gave your soul to the Devil, that’s a sale, that’s a blow out
Yeah I’d ask you if you got the spirit, but you sold out
Nice
gave your soul to the devil, thats a sale call it blow out/got the fire and heat but lacking spirit cause you sold out
"She go behind your back like Magic
Tragic, But no surprise when she catch it"
Masked and dressed all black like Batman when I’m robbin’
From my "Let It Fly (Freestyle)"
"You gotta see it to believe it; explains why they don't believe in me
'cause even eye-to-eye, these emcees ain't ever seeing me"
CRXSS the "ever" feels unneeded
@@fox_2312 Listen to the track on my youtube, it was needed in order for the bar to fit on beat.
💪
Simple but catchy and over used
Decent
Thank you for your content. I’m wanting to learn how to express myself through rap. I’m working on some poetry now
Lol THANKUU I've been thinking bout that Lil Wayne line maa whole life😭😭😭😭
Behind bars, I have words with ease
Feed on these syllables, call me a Lyrical beast
Shawties or cheese, game's on point like derringers
Like real G's, I get figures all year like calendars
Dope
" Ask Beavis, I get nothing ( Nutting) butthead ( but head ) "
- r.i.p BIG L
They say running business is hard ,
My name noah try running an ark,
I noah guy couldn't run from the start, I gave him a push now he rolling thru streets like his car cant park
No.
@@KamakaSpeaks 😂
Literally just started giving song/rap writing a go but, in a song about having an existential crisis, come up with the bar “i just sit here at home becoming a square, i used to love spongebob, i guess im becoming my idol, is that why i love pineapple?” And i feel like it just taps perfectly into the absurdism of letting your mind aimlessly run wild during an existential crisis
My humility overflows
My stride is progressive
My Ability undergoes
My pride that’s obsessive
Kick rocks/ I'm a strong undertow/ You like a fish out of water, no flow
If you a ten then I'm one hundred and one plus eleven / Count on me rockin' out from hip hop to them reggae sessions
I was running so fast I had to catch my breath , forgot I had asthma give me my pump for some fresh air
I love how you teach with a great sense of humor
It’s nearly perfect, I give you a nine
My love for what I just watched is big like a tumor
Not aggressive, so let me call it benign
That’s hard bro
from my rap battle vs. 5 Theories
" I'm always pushin' my pen
you think you gon' win?
is that really?
Headshot! Matter stretched everywhere
The FLASH created the Big Bang THEORY!"
Its word play on his name Theory
Matter stretched everywhere= Brain Matter/Matter Particles
The Flash = Flash of the gun nozzle/The universe exploding
Big Bang = The noise the gun would make/The assumed way the universe was created
I've been down for a longtime/
Folk hate on me/
No support i gotta long line/
If you ain't smellin me yet/
Im dope my flow give you coke high/
-Sylnc
Ohh what I'm only getting this now😂😂 2:33
🔥😂😂😂
Same bruh
Yall slow asf this was obvious😭
the real g's move in silence like lasagna is blew my mind
I’m so worried bout the future/
Certain things might happen,
I just wanna crawl under a rock and live like Patrick
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
🔥🔥
ScRAP's Channel thanks bro check out a lot more where that came from
Patrick Williams thank you bro check out my music if u get a chance 💯
The world has officially changed
Im just tryna maintain the same game
that made lil wayne make it rain
God bless this man slow WHEN I become successful I will shout this man out and thank him when I get my Grammy
My head twisted like rastas,too sick for the doctors..
Tryna quit drinking whiskey while I sip on the vodka..
Trippin like Woodstock,bruh,Cruise to Mission Impossibles..
I'll get it poppin like a fckn cruise missiles on top of ya..
Or like I'm cooking tilapia while I'm shaking a bottle..
Just tryna make my kitchen table look like the Day after Tmrw..
I dont play n I ain't sorry,Hit TJ on a safari..
animals took me to a place where cats are barely even charging!!
I need you to break down the meaning behind the last 3bars
Get rich they reference to Tom cruise movies
Needs more focus....the more you write the better you gonna get tho. Lotta potential
This so crazy because when I first started rapping I was doing exactly this without seeing your video and I use to brag to my friends I rapped with like check out my wordplay and they was like I was thinking to much now I stopped doing and I was actually getting better at rapping now I hit a brick wall and now my friends tell me I use to be better smh 🤦♂️
I've been practicing and rapping for 2 years and my wordplay was already great but someone was hating and I had to come back to see. And this opened my eyes a bit more. The hater just made me greater 😂.
Preciate the tips my skills grew a lot after this vid
That's dope
"no time for bullshit. And i talk to the godess of victory and she tells me 'n***a just do it' "
Translated bar by german rapper micel o
The track's called "just do it"
Smino literally has to be the best wordplayer in rap, period.
Smino?
Working on new flows
Always sound the same though
Calling me a square because I don't take the right angle
But I'm about as hot as 90 degrees
No winter time chillen in this summer breeze
I used to smoke a pound down that was louder than surround sound
But I realized that had me bound
Now I'm just high on life
Rolling with the punches like my name is Mike
Ayyyyyy!
No cap angel is a great word play artist
I didn't even understand the Weezy lasagna punchline until dude broke it down.
This video helped me a ton. I went back over my verses for my mixtape movie soundtrack 📽️ 🔊and my Mixtape. 💿🎧
Ken Lawrence p
This is great man. I got words.
🔥
great ADVICE ROB
Even if you plugged in your flow ain't electrifilying
I'm ac/dc my flow got you thunderstruck it's so surprising
I've been burying a lot of these rappers/
Now 90 percent of the game dig me/
Tacklin tactics' Step to step like it was spelling bee/
Was just trying to write something but I'm really not in the mood Lmaooo
hahahhaha..."cmon, what is this, 1992!?!?! get outta here wit that". got me bro bro...i can tell, when we meet each other soon we gonna connect right away. we the same, just different. keep swinging my dude! nice job.
I run my business like a franchise in my eyes only
Im like superman blood,not even the kryptonite can kill me/
Did you get that/
Im like superman BLOOD ,not even the CRIPS tonight can kill me/
West vs East side wordplay
Maan your content is soo good! Thanks!
dimes a dozen, running like eggs, bring home the bacon mcmufins on deck
" say he want beef, pull up 5 guys "
How the fu-
- Ski Mask the Slump God
feel my energy when im rapping its electric
plugged in and charged up to the hundreth percentage
so wordplay is basically .metaphor s
Blasting lyrical bullets like ammunition out of a glock
Ripping critical fullest strike
In full motion to shock
My nigga rob giving out the secret sauce to rap this year 💯✊🏾
this man is a literal genius
The play dough line earned you the like, I didn't catch it till you explained it 🤣
my word play too heavy, they see me wearing armour, the past is history so yeah ll call it the saga
In one of my songs I once said “I’m bitten by the love bug, you’re pesticide our love is dead”
What's Diarhea.. it's running shit. That one really caught me off guard.🤣🤣🤣😂
May the Lord Jesus bless you bro, and may you come to the realization of the truth
Your biggest fan all the way from Kenya🤗..
I learn alot from you than any other platform
Your the best rob
Shark Tank high key slappin now that ive heard it in your past 4 videos.
🔥 Thx
This is off my new song Vintage Era
"This is my vintage era, impode your mind like a caldera. I'm a fire breathing chimera. I'm the G.O.A.T I swear bruh, you a serpent in your lair huh if you hate you'll be like a lion with no zebra(uh)"
Ayeee this go hard
My homie be selling green just to get that green tho
The trick to really being a good lyricist is to study other mcs lyrics, from every kind of rap genre, exept mumble cause they aint lyricists, try studying some simple bars at first like tupacs, then listen to something more hardcore like a diss from em, then try studying something more underground like mobb deep or wu tang etc etc. If you read whole songs from different artists and understand them fully you will not only be able to right good lyrics but also write good lyrics on different kind of topics, like you will be able to write decent battle rap lyrics but also something more emotional. Mostcs quit school because its boring studying but if you want to succeed as an mc youll have to study there as well
Great video bro! In spaning we call it "barras!"
I always do this in my lines but as always it helps a lot see you analyze in such a methodic way
I got word play like a spelling bee at recess
I swear Rob could sell a pair of pink socks with holes in them with all of these persuasion 😂
🔥😂
Arsonist
Association: playing with fire, good music, trending,
There's no games, you put your heart in this
Till you daily play with fire like an arsonist
“Run fast like forest but you turn gump when you See these sticks.”
🙈🙈
thanks
you unlocked a new perspective in my mind
Dude is breaking down the most basic puns on a dry-erase board like Kanye trynda analyze the fish sticks joke from South Park
im dripping no cap pure life,
slide down youre whole block then flip it over like a wet wipe
I'm on top of the tier
Write corresponding to Shakespeare
What I say ,I say I control everything I'm the puppeteer
Don't exaggerate I aint a musketeer
I can be a cavalier
I decisived buccaneer
Ready with my gear
Maybe my time is now later I'll disappear
And when I'm gone carry on your own
You don't need to be sere
Untill I'm here keep the party going take to hemisphere
I have no heart like cyborg
My brain is Ricky and Morty on the side when
I’m board
and than line is on the mixtape
kingmadic 02.28.2020
??? You turned into an airplane went over my head and crashed... Or Maybe i am slow or something
Emperor Mizizi yeah went over your head lol hey I like it like that
King Jame5
Maneuver through the levels of hell like DMC, still I won’t run
This shit was hard. ✊🏽✊🏽✊🏽🔥🔥🔥
Love me some video game references. That was tight.
Passing the baton
I didn’t get the lasagna line till you explained it that’s so fucking badasss🤣🤣🤣🤣🔥
The choppa shred thru your skin
Like a helicopta shredding thru the wind
I hit up my homeboy, he come running
He run shit like it’s a race, and we always win
These are some words I came up with writing down in the Apple Notes app:
1. Yeah, I’m stacking’ the cheese i aint lactose / i shoot his toes through his yeezys now he lack toes.
2. They be hating on me i say “u jus jealous tho” / i be in the pizzeria / i be getting to the dough like Esposito.
3. Yuh, you wont catch me at yo function your hairline says y = mx + b for a reason gang / that’s a linear function.
4. I got my glock, .223 that’s a firearm. Playing in the NFL with them Chief playas / throwin’ bullets, throwin’ mags that’s a fire arm.
That’s all I have. I’ve been practicing for like 2 days now so I’m just a beginner. I tried tho
Not my lyrics but I like this artist wordplay- "I see both sides like chanel/ C on both sides like Chanel" -by Frank Ocean
love that song
You should do earl sweatshirt wordplay breakdown
They call men stanleyFRENCHY because I'm so FRANK
PERFECT
Something I’ve been working on
“Was always strap as a kid
With branches
Those were the sticks
Equip with extended clips
Punchlines ganna hit
Like a uppercut direct hit
From a cosmetic surgeon
That’s is you facelift”
You need to know your gun reference in urban dictionary words to understand the branches and sticks bar
Could have left out the urban dictionary go to reference...potential tho
Reaching bro