17-year-old Human Girl finds alien armor on a spaceship and becomes invincible with it SCi-Fi Story

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  • Опубликовано: 30 окт 2024

Комментарии • 24

  • @KevinPullins-d5r
    @KevinPullins-d5r 2 дня назад

    Great story ❤

  • @richardrose7382
    @richardrose7382 15 дней назад +11

    “An interesting game; the only way to win is not to play”. Quote from War Games movie

  • @geofthompson3844
    @geofthompson3844 15 дней назад +8

    The ending saved this story. I was starting to get disappointed, but then, you won me back over with an unexpected outcome. Nice 👍 😊

  • @seannash4695
    @seannash4695 12 дней назад +1

    Great story. Very nice.

  • @sandraferguson3287
    @sandraferguson3287 5 дней назад +1

    Change the speed until you get a speed that gives you a more comfortable experience.

  • @TheQuantumOxymoron
    @TheQuantumOxymoron 3 дня назад +1

    I Want My Armor

  • @davidj.leavitt7176
    @davidj.leavitt7176 15 дней назад +3

    Great story. Thank you.

  • @dsloop3907
    @dsloop3907 13 дней назад +1

    AI reader is not getting electrons sent all the way to the processor.

  • @CryptidsRoost
    @CryptidsRoost 15 дней назад +2

    Great story, but who/what were the fleet that were chasing her in the beginning?

    • @FictionalReimagined
      @FictionalReimagined  15 дней назад +2

      Thanks, the story leaves the exact nature and motivations of the fleet somewhat ambiguous and mysterious. But they clearly represent powerful forces deeply concerned about the living armor that now bonds with the unsuspecting human teenager Kaa.

    • @CryptidsRoost
      @CryptidsRoost 15 дней назад +1

      @@FictionalReimagined Yeah this is true. But it does get frustrating when plotholes are left open, especially without more clarifications.

  • @SuperBillyb1
    @SuperBillyb1 15 дней назад +1

    the bird chirping is bugging me in my headphones

  • @soldierscotty1959
    @soldierscotty1959 15 дней назад +1

    Too bad you don't change scenes to match the narrative? And lose the subtitles!

    • @FictionalReimagined
      @FictionalReimagined  15 дней назад +1

      At my production rate there is no way

    • @fredrikabinger4818
      @fredrikabinger4818 15 дней назад +3

      Dude..there are folks with hearing impediments that need the subtitles. Stop nitpicking.

    • @ShawnBeckmann-f4h
      @ShawnBeckmann-f4h 14 дней назад +1

      I hate the subtitles as well so I enlarge the screen and move it down to remove them out of The View

  • @hannahmore9118
    @hannahmore9118 5 дней назад

    The stilted unnatural read is more than I can tolerate. Thumbs down from me.

  • @ocnetster
    @ocnetster 15 дней назад +3

    Good story