Okay… William slays. Such a decent queer coded character. Got the nails, luscious hair, and the subtle storytelling of a closeted person by it being about him “having a secret identity he doesn’t want to reveal to anyone”. Bro is queer coded to the max!
Yeah that particular line struck me too. Definitely made me smile. I would hav solved something like this as a kid. I mean I’m 28 and still love it so 😝
this is ADORABLE, though the writing feels more like a first draft, for a pilot ep just to get the idea out there, it's great! I'd like to learn more about each individual character to really get a feel of who they are, and the blocking needs some work, but the voice acting was GREAT. everyone here did a great job on this!
Anairis! I knew I recognized Valerie's voice! She played Lucinda in Aphmau's stuff! Great choice in VA! Also, Chase's multiple audible reactions to being shoved around, while Callum is just like "oof" is so funny to me.
Definitely not your target demographic, but here's to hoping that you'll be picked up by a streaming service and I'll watch this with my daughter in a year or two. She's gonna eat this up when you guys strike it big.
@@REVAMPEDROSES oh just a channel named "My story animated" its just a channel for teens usually with a ton of cheesy romance, it's basically a guilty pleasure😅
Just found this and I’m kinda obsessed. The style is so clean and the lip-syncing is so good (very specific I know). The character designs are very unique and recognizable, and the voices perfectly suit the characters! I think my only input would be perhaps a little more background music for ambiance and less silence between lines. I love your art style so much and I’m excited for what the future holds for this!
Does Callum know Valerie is a vampire? Rose and Valerie's conversation would suggest so, but if Callum already knows vampires exist then why would he immediately jump to superhero instead? That being said, I'm looking forward to watching more of this. It reminds me of some animations/voice acting my high school friends did in the 2000s and posted on Newgrounds.
@@REVAMPEDROSES Interesting that Valerie would probably be exposing herself in telling him about their existence/William is one then. Thank you for the response.
Its cute, bit rough, but not bad at all. It actually kinda reminded me of an old webcomic I used to read a long LONG time ago. it was called Scarecrow Lullaby and the two main characters (they were both girls) had a near identical dynamic. One tall dark and mysterious witch with special dark inclined powers, and a cute happy little marshmallow that though she was super cool, not all that scary, and still ironically had no idea what she could do. Actually a whole lot of this made me remember my teenage years (Williams sassy emo vibe most of all).
I love the chemistry between Rosie and Valarie! I also really like Calum's design, he looks like scootaloo! Some story boards are a bit rough but I know that once this series hits it's stride it's gonna be amazing!
I swear to God that this might just be as good as Helluva's boss. I can't wait to see how this story will progress.
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I thought William was a goth girl at first. When I heard the voice, i said total vampire. Imagine meeting one in real life. Hopefully they don’t drink all your blood.
Are vampires a common thing in this world, like does the general public know about their existence or are they in secret, btw this is amazing and can’t wait to see what comes next
It’s not widely known to the public. The supernatural world essentially coexists with the mundane world in secret. It’s the only way to achieve true peace.
That sound was originally from that Yoshi flower picking mini game. It was too good not to use.😁💕 ruclips.net/video/N7RaJxbHSqQ/видео.htmlsi=idhuzk15-1tFDg07
Hes like charlie is to vaggie to optimistic while william like vaggie is annoyed but goku is optimistic to the vegeta he ditched him haha as in reject keef was rejected by zim too a loner
I love the dynamic between William and kallam hes so extroverted and straight forward while william is introvered like and tough its so cool to see this and the side relationship of Valerie and rose is sweet can't wait to see more characters apear on later 😊
This is honestly one of the few "Gay vampire love stories" that I don't find cringy! Like, don't get me wrong, I love gay vampire stories but most that I find are either too cliché or cringy. I am honestly looking VERY forward to this, whenever it comes out! I will be here, sipping my warm cup of tea, as patient as ever, waiting for what I can already see being an amazing BL love story. Keep up the good work 💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰
Holy shit the animation on this is as smooth as butter!!! Not to mention that that quality is super consistent, too!! That's really impressive, especially for an indie project like this. Anyways, this pilot is super cute and I'm very excited to see where this will go!
this definitely gives me nostalgia like it reminds me of old animated stuff and new grounds cartoon. Although the art its a lil questionable its all really smooth and the Voice acting is great
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS BRO. I would watch an entire show like this. I squealed like a fangirl over some of the moments lmao. You inspired me to take my art more seriously. Keep rocking!
Total emo and energy ball ship, adorable 🥰. Crazy thing is they balance each other, I am speaking from experience. An emo with an emo will cause a lot of problems.😅
5:31 This reminds me of my sophomore year of high school. There was this one kid named Donovan, who didn’t like me at all but I constantly bothered him to be my friend. Long story short now we’re besties because I never gave up on him. I just look at this child and all I think to myself is “damn, that was me.”
I could watch this, I like the characters and personalities involved, and think that I'd like to see where this is going and future developments. It's DEFINITELY worth checking out and I think most will be able to get themselves into this little series, at least, so far!
THIS IS AMAZING. my only reccomendation is more sound effects! the silence is kinda off putting BUT OTHER THAN THAT THIS IS AMAZINGGGG!!! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
I agree and sometimes there is music but it's so quiet that you can't hear but I'm sure sure that will be improved also make sure to follow the creator on her on social media to learn more about the show
XD This is a guilty pleasure of mine! I don't understand the hate comments- I think the animation is smooth, yes, It does need a few adjustments and improvements but overall, I think the series will do well.
pretty good but the pacing feels more like reading comic manuals than watching a show you should work more on pacing and audio and people there latterly none in the school except like 5 people. even tho your proportions on characters are off they still feel natural and don't distract from the story to much all of this comes with practice and time so hope to see how your art and story evolve over time
Awesome for a pilot! I see so much potential! Its like a little rushed (since its a pilot its obv gonna be rushed to get the main concept out there) but i genuinly like the designs and voices, callum seems a little to babyish atleast in design (but thats definitly only because of my personal preference for character designs) this pilot has gotten me pretty comfortable with his design and voice though and i like it! I genuinly am excited to see more from you.:)
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Callum’s voice makes them sound like a shounen protagonist and I’m living for it
Izuku's hero-fanboy cousin bonds with Shego's son
reminds me a little of ash ketchum's voice
He sounds like a character from the amazing world of gumball
yessssss!
@@Montesama314I knew he reminded me of someone😂
Okay… William slays. Such a decent queer coded character. Got the nails, luscious hair, and the subtle storytelling of a closeted person by it being about him “having a secret identity he doesn’t want to reveal to anyone”.
Bro is queer coded to the max!
Also the earrings on his right ear
Slight correction, William’s earrings are on his left ear. His left, our right.
Yeah that particular line struck me too. Definitely made me smile. I would hav solved something like this as a kid. I mean I’m 28 and still love it so 😝
@@HunterOfTheMoon what does the piercings on his ear have to do with being queer? That is such an old stereotype.
William looks like the kind of guy who would say “peasant.” flip his hair and strut away
lol yes 🙌🏽
Oh my gosh yassss ✨✨
FRR
me: not reading the title
William: speaks
me: ”THATS A MAN???”
I WAS NOT EXPECTING THE VOICE THO- 💀🤚
i think thats an ai voice of Taiji. The VA for Kiibo and Yuma Kokohead
no but actually i clicked cuz i thought it was a sapphic romance 😭✋
@@мёртвая.луна I got here from autoplay 💀
@@microwaved_cereal lmao
William: "I just showed him who's his worst nightmare, that's all"
( Iconic hair flip )
Callum reacted to the idea of an introvert exactly as an extrovert would. Nicely executed.
As an introvert, very much agree. Kinda wonder how many extroverts have thought that abt me lol
I really wanna see this get turned into an actual show! It feels cool and unique, and i really like william he looks pretty cool
It technically is a show. Just an indie show. I’m producing another episode as we speak 😁
@@REVAMPEDROSESI love your videos
@@REVAMPEDROSESwhen you said "indie" i thought you meant India 😂
@REVAMPEDROSES yippee!!
@@REVAMPEDROSES YIPPIIIIII
this is ADORABLE, though the writing feels more like a first draft, for a pilot ep just to get the idea out there, it's great!
I'd like to learn more about each individual character to really get a feel of who they are, and the blocking needs some work, but the voice acting was GREAT. everyone here did a great job on this!
Anairis! I knew I recognized Valerie's voice! She played Lucinda in Aphmau's stuff! Great choice in VA!
Also, Chase's multiple audible reactions to being shoved around, while Callum is just like "oof" is so funny to me.
UR RIGHT OMG LUCINDA
Definitely not your target demographic, but here's to hoping that you'll be picked up by a streaming service and I'll watch this with my daughter in a year or two. She's gonna eat this up when you guys strike it big.
Be mindful what you feed your daughter ❤️
@@censored817 Oh absolutely. She's going through lots of "phases" and latches onto so many things.
@@fnoigy what's that supposed to mean?
@@censored817💀
Dude it's so damn cool I hope so! 😹
This feels so wholesomely gay
¿Porque?
I think this could end up as bromance.
@@vincentvonderlinden6952I agree not anything physical
@vincentvonderlinden6952 in the title it says "BL" which stands for boy's love , nothing happens because this I just the start
@@lumityviktuuristanartist4100 I didn’t saw the BL in the title. Thank you for telling me.
I THOUGHT THEY WERE TWO GIRLS LMFAO
Yes yes me to
SAME 😭
Same ngl
Same I thought those were like two lesbians
Fr me
9:39 William looking like a distressed Disney princess bouta break out into song man is such a mood 😄
FRRR
RUclips please stop recommending me indie animations to become obsessed with, MY PATIENCE IS VERY SMALL
why can’t the comments just be normal and appreciate this amazing animation 😭
Meh, the animation is decent at best.
@@dougymoney379 and so are u
Damn I think the best part about this series is the voice acting, it is really good!
I hired the best of the best 😁✨
@@REVAMPEDROSES No doubt!
This story gives off "2009 generic gay bl with msa" AND I'M HERE FOR IT
What is msa?
@@REVAMPEDROSES oh just a channel named "My story animated" its just a channel for teens usually with a ton of cheesy romance, it's basically a guilty pleasure😅
@@scarylol1447 *exactly*
I like how chill they are about an actual vampire being in their school
One of the girls is a vampire too. That’s why 😉
Just found this and I’m kinda obsessed. The style is so clean and the lip-syncing is so good (very specific I know). The character designs are very unique and recognizable, and the voices perfectly suit the characters! I think my only input would be perhaps a little more background music for ambiance and less silence between lines. I love your art style so much and I’m excited for what the future holds for this!
To follow her on her social medias so you miss anything from her
Typical tsundere on the outside and gentle protector on the inside.
I love how this show has two queer couples in this.
This is something big media would try to sink asap. I love how animation is growing on YT.
Glad William have a normal parents who wants their son to get along with children his age and makes friends instead of having a sad backstory. 🥹👌
“Instead of having a sad backstory”…🫢
There's still time for Mr. "I tried friendship once" to have a sad backstory
They've trying to pick the Story Route
@@REVAMPEDROSESAUR NAUR DOEZ HE HAS TRAUMA😭😭
i love how william is basically the embodiment of that one meme that goes
"you're an idiot"
*watches said idiot be hurt*
"THAT'S MY IDIOT"
Literally 😂
10:56 “angy boyfriend” loooking ahh William AH ITS SO CUTE
highkey obsessed with this project I can’t wait till it’s a full series
Does Callum know Valerie is a vampire? Rose and Valerie's conversation would suggest so, but if Callum already knows vampires exist then why would he immediately jump to superhero instead?
That being said, I'm looking forward to watching more of this. It reminds me of some animations/voice acting my high school friends did in the 2000s and posted on Newgrounds.
I apologize for the confusion. Callum is completely unaware of the existence of vampires. He doesn’t know that Valerie is one of them.
@@REVAMPEDROSES Interesting that Valerie would probably be exposing herself in telling him about their existence/William is one then. Thank you for the response.
16:00
Me: **Sees Willian blush** YEAH, THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT! LET'S GOOOOOOOO!
One of the best scenes in this pilot
This reminds me of animation RUclips from back in the day. But like... super polished up. Honestly in a good way. I hope you continue making these
His eyeliner makes me jealous
REALLL AND THAT HAIR FLIPPP
I WAS FULLY UNDER THE IMPRESSION THESE WERE ALL WEMON 😭
Their beauty is both a blessing and a curse😭
I’ve only known these characters for 16:51 minutes, but I already love them
The VA for william sounds like an anime VA, THE VA IS SO GOOD BTW
He is an anime VA. That’s why he’s the goat 😅
Omg bsd pfp
I feel like I'm 12 again and I'm sitting in my parents' home watching gay drama animations
William.. SLAY THAT VOICE OMG ITS GIVING SCARA
А мне голос Альбедо напомнил
I know right-- 😣@@zhanko3462
I can't unhear it now lol
The fact that it's posted 1 year ago and now it's blowing up.
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I THOUGHT THEY WERE GIRLS OMG I GOT JUMPSCARED WHEN I HEARD THE DEEP VOICE
fr me too
Man jumpscare.
Its cute, bit rough, but not bad at all. It actually kinda reminded me of an old webcomic I used to read a long LONG time ago. it was called Scarecrow Lullaby and the two main characters (they were both girls) had a near identical dynamic. One tall dark and mysterious witch with special dark inclined powers, and a cute happy little marshmallow that though she was super cool, not all that scary, and still ironically had no idea what she could do. Actually a whole lot of this made me remember my teenage years (Williams sassy emo vibe most of all).
When you were expecting yuri but it was actually yaoi
Nah I thought it was BL or straight because yt
real
Looked like yuri, turns out it is bl. Imma sit and watch
@@joshdavis5720 ye
When Callum's getting bullied by Chase.
Callum's mind: "Don't mess with me. I have the power of God and Anime on my side. AHHHHH!!"
Something about this animation style gives major MLP vibe and I'm here for it.
I do love MLP a lot ☺️💕
You know too much
REAAAAAAALLLL
Oh, yes, I was about to comment that too! I can feel the "Equestria Girls" influence
It’s a very cute main couple! Their voices are also quite fitting.
I honest to god thaught they were lesbians until I heard the voices
I got a lil disappointed when I found out it wasn't yuri
@@RibiandKitty 😔😔😔 me too
@-KAI1449- But there are lesbians in the show
@@-KAI1449- Like Rose and Valerie
@-KAI1449- Well, Rose is bisexual but you get what I'm saying
Not people in the comments not realising that guys can have long hair 😭😭
ITS SO HANDSOME
I NEED MORE LONG HAIR GUYS !!!
Real they would start tweaking if they saw tradish native men with their long hair ☠️
FRR
Well obviously 💀 it's not only the hair, I guess it's a mix of the overall features that made me think he's a woman
No duh. We obviously just see his facial features and assumed he was a girl. I didn't read the title thoroughly and thought the same.
I love the chemistry between Rosie and Valarie! I also really like Calum's design, he looks like scootaloo! Some story boards are a bit rough but I know that once this series hits it's stride it's gonna be amazing!
Callum talks like a shy anime protagonist and I am here for it
I swear to God that this might just be as good as Helluva's boss. I can't wait to see how this story will progress.
I thought William was a goth girl at first. When I heard the voice, i said total vampire. Imagine meeting one in real life. Hopefully they don’t drink all your blood.
You never know 😉
Are vampires a common thing in this world, like does the general public know about their existence or are they in secret, btw this is amazing and can’t wait to see what comes next
It’s not widely known to the public. The supernatural world essentially coexists with the mundane world in secret. It’s the only way to achieve true peace.
please keep the sound effect of a sheep and cat meowing when characters go into shock, i am now gonna be a committed fan
That sound was originally from that Yoshi flower picking mini game. It was too good not to use.😁💕
ruclips.net/video/N7RaJxbHSqQ/видео.htmlsi=idhuzk15-1tFDg07
Gay twilight somehow better than original twilight interesting
That's exactly what I was thinking too
I like how William helped callum like a protective boyfriend
Hes like charlie is to vaggie to optimistic while william like vaggie is annoyed but goku is optimistic to the vegeta he ditched him haha as in reject keef was rejected by zim too a loner
@@kriegermaria9923Yup or like me and my Bestie! We’re completely opposites but we were close as ever…even if we are at different Colleges😢😂😢😢😢😂😢😢😢
@@AnneKirk453 ahh ok
@@AnneKirk453 my parents are oppiside aswell my father is calm my mothers temper
@@kriegermaria9923 Thank you 😊
Valerie and Rosie better get a lesbian spinoff
@user-lp2ju9pw1u Well, if the show gets more support, then maybe?
I love this so much 😭
How is this not as popular as helluva boss??
I love the dynamic between William and kallam hes so extroverted and straight forward while william is introvered like and tough its so cool to see this and the side relationship of Valerie and rose is sweet can't wait to see more characters apear on later 😊
Hooded cinnamon roll bonds with Shego's gay son. I'm okay with this.
Shego's gay son I'm dead 😂
Shego ahaha yeah the look a like pfttt kim possible shego drakken son
They need to get Susan Sullivan to voice William's mother, and maybe Takahata as his dad...
The expressions are really good, I hope this works out for you.
I like the animation it gives off old school vibes but, at the same time it is fluid in its movements at the same time.
Godamn william would look so cool w piercings!!
Alsoo callum is such a cutie patootie , i just wanna squish his face and hug him 😻
HOW DID I NOT FIND THIS ANIMATION SOONER?!?!?!
SAME
FOR REALS
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Callum’s voice🥺💗🍡🍬🍭🍼
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William’s voice 🥵🔥🖤🧛❤️✨
If this does become a series, I would so watch every episode
SQUEALING AND KICKING MY FEET RIGHT NOW HOW DARE RUclips HIDE THIS FROM ME FOR A YEAR!😭😭😭
@@Wylo_Brynn REAL
@@Wylo_Brynn REALLY
This is honestly one of the few "Gay vampire love stories" that I don't find cringy! Like, don't get me wrong, I love gay vampire stories but most that I find are either too cliché or cringy. I am honestly looking VERY forward to this, whenever it comes out! I will be here, sipping my warm cup of tea, as patient as ever, waiting for what I can already see being an amazing BL love story. Keep up the good work 💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰
William looks like lif from metal family and sound like dee from metal family 😭😭
I love it that Callum's design is so different from everyone else's XD
Exactly what I'm saying
really nice pilot . nice style you got there. William finally accepted his friendship!
RUclips has decided to send all the pilots to me now. I am happy.
Fr youtube is doing that for me to it’s nice
Its from 2022
I think William has a thing with slamming people against lockers
Literally 😂
Nah, Williams face after she said "its not every day a vampire joins your school." It got me rolling- 😂 2:29
I like Rose and Valerie's relationship, they're nice but aren't afraid to challenge each other.
Holy shit the animation on this is as smooth as butter!!! Not to mention that that quality is super consistent, too!! That's really impressive, especially for an indie project like this.
Anyways, this pilot is super cute and I'm very excited to see where this will go!
I love the potential and idea behind this :) would love to see more
this definitely gives me nostalgia like it reminds me of old animated stuff and new grounds cartoon. Although the art its a lil questionable its all really smooth and the Voice acting is great
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS BRO. I would watch an entire show like this. I squealed like a fangirl over some of the moments lmao.
You inspired me to take my art more seriously. Keep rocking!
love how William looks like both a boy and a girl 🙌
Androgyny ✨
15:15
Total emo and energy ball ship, adorable 🥰. Crazy thing is they balance each other, I am speaking from experience. An emo with an emo will cause a lot of problems.😅
5:31 This reminds me of my sophomore year of high school. There was this one kid named Donovan, who didn’t like me at all but I constantly bothered him to be my friend. Long story short now we’re besties because I never gave up on him. I just look at this child and all I think to myself is “damn, that was me.”
OMG!!! THIS IS GETTING SO MUCH RECOGNITION I'M SO HAPPY!!! LET THE COMMUNITY OF REVAMPED BEGIN!!!
It’s such an honor 😊
@@REVAMPEDROSES I'm so happy for you!!!
William is giving mega sassy gothic Dee from Metal Family vibes and I am living for it... :)
This was just recommended to me!!! Love it! ❤ they’re adorable
william has fallen victim to the sassy male apocalypse
William is such a vibe I love him he is so moody
I could watch this, I like the characters and personalities involved, and think that I'd like to see where this is going and future developments. It's DEFINITELY worth checking out and I think most will be able to get themselves into this little series, at least, so far!
.. anyone else getin the fluffly puff and crysalis vibes?
YESSS
OMG I JUST REALIZED IT😭😭 YOU DIDNT HAVE TO KILL ME WITH NOSTALGIA
When the enthusiastic kid pulls their hood up
Everyone:🖤🖤🖤😭😭😭😭😭☹️☹️☹️🙁🙁🙁😕😕😔😔😔😞😞😒😒😒😒😭😭😭😭😢😢😢😢🥺😖😖😖😖🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
😭
THIS IS AMAZING. my only reccomendation is more sound effects! the silence is kinda off putting BUT OTHER THAN THAT THIS IS AMAZINGGGG!!! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
I agree and sometimes there is music but it's so quiet that you can't hear but I'm sure sure that will be improved also make sure to follow the creator on her on social media to learn more about the show
XD
This is a guilty pleasure of mine! I don't understand the hate comments- I think the animation is smooth, yes, It does need a few adjustments and improvements but overall, I think the series will do well.
Not bad, it does need some sounds like footsteps and furniture moving when they get up and interact with objects. I like it though.
BRO HAD ME JAW GROPPED WHEN I FOUND OUT HE WAS ACTUALLY A GUY
Pls make at least 6 more episodes, cuz this is too good
I LOVE HOW SASSY WILLIAM IS ALSO I MADE FANART OF THEM
Where?
Before watching: A vampire queen and a human golden retriver, sounds cute
After watching: They're both boys!?
I mean it says BL in the title 😭
@@6luefire I do tend to forget the meaning of those two letters a lot
@@Goat81093 yeah that’s fair
It's okay this happened to a lot people who first watched it
12:06 The hair flip is everything I love it😭😭 so much ✨sass✨💅
YASS SLAY KING 💅🏽💅🏽💅🏽
William is too grumpy he already have wrinkles from frowning and sighing; he looks like a 40 yrs old mom who have 6 children. 😂
I had watch this in 2022. and now its 2025 I miss the good old days 😭
pretty good but the pacing feels more like reading comic manuals than watching a show you should work more on pacing and audio and people there latterly none in the school except like 5 people. even tho your proportions on characters are off they still feel natural and don't distract from the story to much all of this comes with practice and time so hope to see how your art and story evolve over time
Yeah the pacing was kinda jarring but hopefully the pacing is only the way it is because its a pilot..
These two feel exactly like ocs I would have had in middle school and would have since outgrown-
Positive I had ocs with these names at one point
Awesome for a pilot! I see so much potential! Its like a little rushed (since its a pilot its obv gonna be rushed to get the main concept out there) but i genuinly like the designs and voices, callum seems a little to babyish atleast in design (but thats definitly only because of my personal preference for character designs) this pilot has gotten me pretty comfortable with his design and voice though and i like it! I genuinly am excited to see more from you.:)
"you dress like a child" BRO LOOK AT YOURSELF
I clearly have a type when it comes yo favorite characters
Rude but good hearted, snarky, emo boys (gay as well, i swear its a coincidence)
dare i say… Keith from Voltron?