Holy fucking shit, throughout the 5-6 years of reading texting stories, your one-shots is on another level. SOMEHOW you got a BETTER story than your previous shadow monarch deku oneshot. Because holy shit brother you are amazing at this.
That was a true spiderman story heck maybe even better then the movies and games them selves. Betrayal is the biggest fear any hero faces. So that was AWSOME
Im just speechless, like wow This Is the BEST story I have ever read in my life, the plot twist was unexpected, there is no word that can describe this masterpiece
Well, with your best friend AND lover stabbed you in the back, cheating on you, and the symbiote influencing your emotions, he won't be able to hold back
Nomus are getting old, let's make his friends his enemies hahaha. And yes, Spidey won't get a happy life but that's what makes him a satisfying character, the fact that even at his lowest, he always comes back, just more aggressive this time due to the symbiote
This is amazing, the effort it must take to make such entertaining and wonderful stories every day is astronomical, yet you do it. Masterfully done, thank you for doing this and may many more come
that was one heck of a one shot, I mean the twists?? especially at the end gave me chills, anyways good video man extremely worth it to watch keep it up❤🎉❤
This story is supposed to be shipless but just think that Izuku and Melissa are in a platonic relationship, more than friends but definitely less than gf/bf
Can you posibbly do a mha x Frieren, I like the idea about it so I wanna see if you can do it. Also this was honestly a master piece of an art keep up the work man
@@Radsss On wattpad? Man I just love your stories I mean I literally feel goosebumps and all while reading Btw can you write a texting story where Izumi is Red haired shanks from one piece ??????
I was confused at first when the flashback happened cause I dozed off a bit so I had to rewind.But damn the twist with Nejire never expected it crazy.Made me hate some characters and the righteous character of nighteye really pissed me off too.I really enjoyed it
@@Radsss yeah night eye was mad ignorant he believed so hard he was still a good person even after killing innocents and putting the blame on Izuku all in the name of his so called “world of peace” and “freedom”.I know you wrote it like that but like scenario wise for nijere she could’ve went against night eye if she truly loved izuku but eh it showed she never did and mirio being a snake wild talking bout “I didn’t want her to be sad” utter bs.Good work man.
I thought it was supposed to be shipless personally but after that plot twist.... Damn that's tough but I really wanted aizawa to be good and stuff and not be one of the bad guys
What he did was sort of understandable on his end because he had been in this industry for quite some time now and he suffered a whole lot, especially when he lost his friends and students. I'm not defending him though, he is human and he makes mistakes, this one, unfortunately, caused him his life
I cant believe what i just watched... dont get me wrong i liked the story but to think that this betrayl made me cry.... anyone would cry in this situation.... getting stabbed by his lover and his best friend including his sensei ... and if allmight would have been alive the situations would be worse he would be disappointed in nighteye
Tbh i would have expected a more gory and more like "you goign to watch how i kill your girl while you cant do shit" kinda thing the death of Mirio and Nejire was in my opinion to soft, i didnt really got any satisfaction from it, as in the story in whole is, making waves sometimes is good and sometimes you just want to throw the controller in the screen for the charachter being unrealistically dumb, but all in all especially that FINALLY someone showed the balls for a revenge AU not so bad.
Holy fucking shit, throughout the 5-6 years of reading texting stories, your one-shots is on another level. SOMEHOW you got a BETTER story than your previous shadow monarch deku oneshot. Because holy shit brother you are amazing at this.
Hahaha thanks!
That was a true spiderman story heck maybe even better then the movies and games them selves. Betrayal is the biggest fear any hero faces. So that was AWSOME
I will hold your word to this
Hahaha prolly not that much but thank you tho!
the plot twist is on another level , i feel the same way when i first know ab yuta taking over gojo body , it's really really good bro .
Hold your spoilers there, bud, we don't tolerate them but thanks anyways! Hahaha
THIS IS AN AMAZING ONE SHOT, Like I’m so happy to see a spider-man where he doesn’t pull his punches and realizes the painful truth.
Thank you!
Im just speechless, like wow This Is the BEST story I have ever read in my life, the plot twist was unexpected, there is no word that can describe this masterpiece
Thank you!
Oh my lord, never has a texting story impressed me this much..... THAT WAS PHENOMENAL
Thank you! I'm glad that even though it's a TS, you liked it
Talk about a self-fulfilling prophecy, that was one hell of a story!
"One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it" - Master Oogway
Cant believe what i just read,I feel satisfied that spiderman is finally able to not hold back.Great chapter
Well, with your best friend AND lover stabbed you in the back, cheating on you, and the symbiote influencing your emotions, he won't be able to hold back
Just wow…. The twist is so unexpected, at first i tought the bad guys were nomus, this is just nuts. And as always Spidey doesnt get a happy life
Nomus are getting old, let's make his friends his enemies hahaha. And yes, Spidey won't get a happy life but that's what makes him a satisfying character, the fact that even at his lowest, he always comes back, just more aggressive this time due to the symbiote
@@Radsss i know spidey is my goat as well, cause i relate to him. In a broke university student
Dont think i ever got out of bed this fast ever before haha, 5 hours and im hyped🔥
This is amazing, the effort it must take to make such entertaining and wonderful stories every day is astronomical, yet you do it.
Masterfully done, thank you for doing this and may many more come
Thanks!
you could say that…. this was spectacular 😼😼😼😼
Well well well this is simply amazing dang reading all of this was just absolutely incredible nice video bro
that was one heck of a one shot, I mean the twists?? especially at the end gave me chills, anyways good video man extremely worth it to watch keep it up❤🎉❤
Thank you! I'm glad it gave you an emotional experience
This story was 🔥🔥🔥 better then the games and movies this shit was awesome keep up the good work
Now that's going too far, it ain't that good, thanks tho hahaha
That was an amazing story I always like your darker stories and this had betrayal so good
Thanks!
What an amazing story and 5 hours nice work also I can probably assume this but do izuku and Melissa get together
This story is supposed to be shipless but just think that Izuku and Melissa are in a platonic relationship, more than friends but definitely less than gf/bf
It’s a good video as always. But can do another with muichiro there not many story’s of him.(But you dont have to)
Where the heck does your idea come from to make this kind of storyh bro it's so good i got goosebumps 😅😅
In the shower, call me crazy but it's true XD. Oh, and also watch a lot of movies and anime, it helps to expand your imagination
“Sleep’s just a suggestion” most Spider-Man thing to say. I suspected multiverse cause of Spider-Man but I guess next time.
yooo it's a good story just WOW can't describe how beautiful it is can I ask a question? is there a possibility that this will have a follow up story?
It will but it'll be the Dekuverse
Can you posibbly do a mha x Frieren, I like the idea about it so I wanna see if you can do it. Also this was honestly a master piece of an art keep up the work man
Not tryna be a cornball but that cheating scene and betrayal hit deep
Yep, what's worse is it came from the people he trusted the most
Thats why he is the GOAT! THE GOAT 🐐
Thank you!
@@Radsss Been here with your journey for almost 3 years... one of best izuku ts creator until now imo
This ABOUT TO BE HYPE, LET'S GOOOO
so b-beautiful❤
This man is the GOAT!!
This shit had me tweaking with how good it is fr
Hahaha thanks
Epilogue? Maybe a second story about the gathering or setup of the spider Society?
The sequel of this oneshot is the Dekuverse, not the spider society :D
@@Radsss 😄
Whoever let you cook, made a good decision
Hahaha glad you liked the meal
My lord "The spider" with the abilitirs of vebom yeah they screwed up
The One-Shot is Here!!!🎉🎉
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Why you gotta make it five hours?😢 still, god damn this was good
Damn this shit was good
Our king is back!!!!👑
*Queen but that's fine, you can call me whatever you want, thank you!
Wow...do u have a profile on ffn or ao3 ?? I would kill to read those
Btw this is fire mannnnn
Nah, I don't have time to create novels, I am fully focused on writing in this platform
@@Radsss On wattpad? Man I just love your stories I mean I literally feel goosebumps and all while reading
Btw can you write a texting story where Izumi is Red haired shanks from one piece ??????
I was confused at first when the flashback happened cause I dozed off a bit so I had to rewind.But damn the twist with Nejire never expected it crazy.Made me hate some characters and the righteous character of nighteye really pissed me off too.I really enjoyed it
I'm glad this story made you hate them, that's the point and it means I did a great job on making them hateable, thank you!
@@Radsss yeah night eye was mad ignorant he believed so hard he was still a good person even after killing innocents and putting the blame on Izuku all in the name of his so called “world of peace” and “freedom”.I know you wrote it like that but like scenario wise for nijere she could’ve went against night eye if she truly loved izuku but eh it showed she never did and mirio being a snake wild talking bout “I didn’t want her to be sad” utter bs.Good work man.
THIS IS FIREEEEEE🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥!!!!!!!!!
This is PEAK
W story
I swear if this doesn't culminate into an Across the Izuku-Verse eventually I'm gonna be upset
Oh it will, it has already been teased at the end scene of my Aizawa Deku
When season 2 of quirkless Deku coming out?
Can't wait for part 2
...it's a oneshot, there are no sequels, the next one will be the Dekuverse as a whole, the sequels to almost every series and oneshots I've done
Thank you bro
GET THIS MAN A WRITING JOB AT MARVEL DUDE WHAT THE FUCKKK
Just when I was about to get bored 🙏😭
Who tf gave you permission to use the oven💀🤨🤨
I thought it was supposed to be shipless personally but after that plot twist.... Damn that's tough but I really wanted aizawa to be good and stuff and not be one of the bad guys
What he did was sort of understandable on his end because he had been in this industry for quite some time now and he suffered a whole lot, especially when he lost his friends and students. I'm not defending him though, he is human and he makes mistakes, this one, unfortunately, caused him his life
1:42:23 I’m sorry what he’s 7’6!!!
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Part 2
I cant believe what i just watched... dont get me wrong i liked the story but to think that this betrayl made me cry.... anyone would cry in this situation.... getting stabbed by his lover and his best friend including his sensei ... and if allmight would have been alive the situations would be worse he would be disappointed in nighteye
Yep, All Might definitely would be disappointed in Nighteye, just like what Izuku said. Glad this oneshot made you emotional! More are coming ^_^
@@Radsss I actually meant all might being alive and allmight be disappointed in nighteye actions and work with izuku
Exactly, just like what Izuku said in the story XD
Tbh i would have expected a more gory and more like "you goign to watch how i kill your girl while you cant do shit" kinda thing the death of Mirio and Nejire was in my opinion to soft, i didnt really got any satisfaction from it, as in the story in whole is, making waves sometimes is good and sometimes you just want to throw the controller in the screen for the charachter being unrealistically dumb, but all in all especially that FINALLY someone showed the balls for a revenge AU not so bad.
Damn
5 fking hours....