New TOEFL Writing Question: Guide to Academic Discussion Questions

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  • Опубликовано: 4 фев 2025

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  • @alinapalkina8744
    @alinapalkina8744 Год назад +72

    Thanks a lot for your video! But I still don`t understand why the "perfect score example" is perfect if it doesn`t match the topic at all. Is this an answer for some another question? If anyone can clarify it, please...

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +53

      I should have been clearer in the video. The sample essay at the 6:00 mark is an example from ETS for a different question. I included it here to show you that you could earn a high score without including any information from the people in the discussion. At this point of the video, I did not want to show a sample question and essay yet. The "watching television" question is a different prompt from ETS that I used to show what the question will look like on test day. Keep watching later on in the video for a sample question and accompanying essay. Sorry for the confusion.

    • @sergiotlx
      @sergiotlx Год назад +8

      @@TSTPrepThanks for the clarification; I had exactly the same concern.

    • @Banana-wk5wf
      @Banana-wk5wf Год назад

      I ask myself this question every day. Nonsense

    • @School-kg1op
      @School-kg1op 10 месяцев назад

      @@Banana-wk5wf he legit clarrified this as soon as the question was asked. The answer is in this feed...

  • @marjanmhd5624
    @marjanmhd5624 Год назад +148

    Thank you Josh. It seems to me that, the new format is much easier than the former version but the main problem is :Time!

    • @royroy-jg9db
      @royroy-jg9db Год назад +5

      Can't agree anymore. Usually, I can't meet the word count requirement in a limited time 🥲

    • @bilalbgt5949
      @bilalbgt5949 Год назад +4

      I recommend you learn fast typing on the keyboard. It will help you save extra time.

    • @fredytinocopalacios252
      @fredytinocopalacios252 Год назад +6

      @@bilalbgt5949 Fast typing is an ability that I got because I spent too much time in front of the computer 😅, I strongly believe is the easiest TOEFL's question to me.

    • @j4azz922
      @j4azz922 2 месяца назад

      @@bilalbgt5949 the time ive been spending on training to be the best keyboard warrior in the world coming in clutch ig

  • @musAKulture
    @musAKulture 4 месяца назад +5

    as a fellow teacher, i think your video is the most truthful out of all the video courses out there. most other teachers just repeat what others have said. you're not afraid to call out on ETS's bs, what's pointless to read, what's a waste of time, etc.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  4 месяца назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment. It means a lot!

  • @siwooleemusic
    @siwooleemusic Год назад +10

    Thank you so much for the advice! I'm 12 years old and I took the TOEFL test for the first time recently to test my English proficiency. I scored 89 in total and got 25 in Writing. I got a raw score of 5 out of 5 in the academic discussion part. I wrote 148 words focused on stating my opinions and counteracted one student from the discussion. I appreciate your effort!

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +3

      Thanks for commenting and congratulations on your score! Great job! I admire your dedication, taking the TOEFL test at such a young age.

    • @elf7197
      @elf7197 Год назад +1

      how did you know you got 5/5

  • @nahidparna5123
    @nahidparna5123 Год назад +20

    I personally agree with the opinion of Bryan and I believe that globalization could has so many benefits for us like interacting with people from different cultures and so you can learn about diverse range of cultures and you can make new friends from different countries, I am living in a multicultural city in which I have made new friends from different countries and I gave me the opportunity to learn from them and sometimes thinking in a different perspective enabled me to come up with different solution for my questions. I think our cultures shape our personality and if you can interact with people from different cultures you can learn how to think in a different way compared the way you have been brought up with. Moreover, globalization makes it easier for us to have access different products from different countries and therefore you can find any specific products based on your need, like as I have access to different cream products for my skin, I can choose a product suitable for my skin.

  • @Vanesotom
    @Vanesotom Год назад +38

    Hi Josh, I think that the new format is less stressful that the old one. My big concern is the time, I have to be faster at thinking and writing. I took the test twice and I need a few points to get the score that I need. Thank you for your videos, they are so helpful to me.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +7

      Thank you for taking the time to comment and good luck on your next test!

  • @ic4101
    @ic4101 Год назад +19

    Thanks! As always, you are the first one in updating us. I have so much faith in this new shorter toefl test that I feel like I will finally pass it with flying colors. Thanks 🙏

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +2

      Thanks for commenting and good luck on your test!

  • @yeyinttun4615
    @yeyinttun4615 Год назад +16

    In my view, it is easier than previous independent writing tasks plus it promotes the very purpose of being a learner/student, to be critical in an academic environment. The new task gives us more freedom over writing. I really like the new update writing task 2.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for your feedback.

  • @ShavkatMirzayev-zi5vz
    @ShavkatMirzayev-zi5vz Год назад +4

    I'm gonna take an exam in 2 months and it will be my first TOEFL exam. I have recently started following your channel in hope that I will get some good things from your instructions. Thank you for your work.

  • @w-e-a.c..2264
    @w-e-a.c..2264 Год назад +8

    It is really a great privilege that we have your channel Mr. MacPherson. Thank you sir.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Hey! Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice comment. Much appreciated :)

  • @cegu5664
    @cegu5664 Год назад +8

    To succeed, the main ingredients is: practice, practice, practice! 💖

  • @Dia27_25
    @Dia27_25 6 месяцев назад +6

    Thank you so very much for all your amazing tips. 114/120 last week. Highly recommend this channel !!!

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  6 месяцев назад

      Thank you so much for your kind words. It would be a HUGE help if you could leave a review on Trust Pilot - es.trustpilot.com.

  • @tovhokage
    @tovhokage Год назад +14

    Thank you so much professor for the most useful content on youtube! This video helped so much. I think that this task is way better that the previous one. I need to write only 120 words instead of 300, less stress for sure.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Thanks for taking the time to comment and good luck on your test!

  • @Nicardepine
    @Nicardepine Год назад +12

    Thank you so much Josh! We, the TOEFL test takers are so grateful for you. I learned a lot from just watching your videos. However, I still haven't passed the exam for the third time. Foreign Pharmacists know the struggle because of high passing scores to take the Equivalency Exam and since there will be major changes, I wonder how will this affect the scoring system by the National Assoc. of Board of Pharmacy. Pretty frustrated right now :(

    • @renatarodrigues4779
      @renatarodrigues4779 Год назад

      Hi @nicaramos5210 I am in the same boat. I am also in this process and need to take toefl. So far, I haven't heard any news from the NABP. If you want to keep in touch, I would be happy to talk to someone that is going through the same struggle. Let me know!

    • @sivakumarpalanisamy8838
      @sivakumarpalanisamy8838 Год назад +1

      Iam also in the same situation

    • @renatarodrigues4779
      @renatarodrigues4779 Год назад

      @@sivakumarpalanisamy8838 Do you know if anything have changed? Regarding the minimum passing scores from NABP?

    • @akshayanagarajan2354
      @akshayanagarajan2354 Год назад +1

      Hey @nicaramos5210! I am also facing the same challenge. Hopefully, the major changes in TOEFL iBT does not impact the scoring system by the NABP.

    • @yangohlee746
      @yangohlee746 Год назад

      Hi, may I ask what score you have set as your goal?

  • @neslihansunmaz8416
    @neslihansunmaz8416 Год назад +3

    Thanks a million! I got 110/120 and 29/30 in writing. Your videos definitely helped a lot with preparation and also helped me feeling more prepared to the new test.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Congratulations and thank you for your kind words. It means A LOT. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you say the same thing at this link - sotellus.com/r/tst-prep/? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep. Thanks again!

  • @marthafabre8020
    @marthafabre8020 Год назад +3

    It looks like much easier, i think the time is really short. Thank so much for keeping us update.

  • @allardkeeley267
    @allardkeeley267 Год назад +3

    Guys, your visual information around 6:10 has a mistake. The student opinions are from another question (effects of television) rather than the one about discoveries. So, clearly the student opions on that question have nothing to do with the sample answer. Otherwise, great video as usual.

  • @barbarejanjalashvili5107
    @barbarejanjalashvili5107 3 месяца назад

    I cannot thank you enough! I retook TOEFL this year and scored 115 - 29 in Reading, Listening, and Writing; 28 in Speaking. This is 9 points higher than last year’s result, both times I used your channel and now I recommend your content to everyone around me who is interested in taking TOEFL. Awesome work! Your channel is a gem for everyone who is confused about the test and wants to prepare in a limited time ❤️

    • @parakhjenny
      @parakhjenny 3 месяца назад

      could you give some tips?

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  2 месяца назад

      Amazing score! Congratulations and thank you for sharing. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you leave your review at this link - trustpilot.com? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep. Thanks again!

  • @jaahnavijaanu8797
    @jaahnavijaanu8797 Год назад +3

    I thought it's easier when I first heard the pattern. But having 2 student opinions actually makes it hard to think differently. They do help when we don't have any idea about the topic. But, when our only idea is already given by a student, it's frustrating! I am finding it helpful to roughly think of an idea or a stance before looking at the opinion part.
    I'm going to give my TOEFL in 3 days. Will share my experience here. Thank you for your videos Josh!

  • @heloisaramires2583
    @heloisaramires2583 Год назад +1

    Hey, Josh! I don't know how to thank you. I had taken the TOEFL once before and, despite knowing English, I was frustrated with my score and didn't understand why. But your videos showed me that understanding what each section requires makes all the difference. Understanding each type of question in Reading and Listening, for example, made a significant impact on my score, and your explanation in this Writing video helped me increase my score by 4 points because it made me understand the session's purpose and what to write.
    So, thank you very much for all the material you provide! It helped me a lot! 🙌🏻

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment. It means a lot! If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you leave your review at this link - sotellus.com/r/tst-prep/? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep.

  • @gnm280
    @gnm280 Год назад +2

    It's incredible how I'm getting score 4.0 on every test of this new question just following your tips! I'm losing fear of the writing section.

    • @RamiroBrandolini
      @RamiroBrandolini Год назад

      How do you know your mark?

    • @idrisbaird365
      @idrisbaird365 Год назад +1

      @@RamiroBrandolini You'll get an AI-generated score after submitting your response for the practice questions on their website.

    • @RamiroBrandolini
      @RamiroBrandolini Год назад

      @@idrisbaird365 Sory to bother, wich website? Thanks

    • @julianfuchs4241
      @julianfuchs4241 Год назад

      I already completed 5 practice tests on the website. While I tried to vary my writing style and implemented some of the suggested tips from TST I always scored a 4.0. Did anyone here get a different result, or is the current system simply not yet sufficient to evaluate the text properly?

  • @MukeshDesiBhae
    @MukeshDesiBhae 12 дней назад

    I am taking test next week and finding this very helpful.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  8 дней назад

      Thanks for watching and good luck with your test!

  • @lilianaamaliapin
    @lilianaamaliapin Год назад +5

    Very clear, Josh. I definitely think this written assignment format is easier than the previous one.

  • @MukeshDesiBhae
    @MukeshDesiBhae 21 день назад

    I am starting to watch this video now, thank you for sharing.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  20 дней назад

      Thanks for watching!

  • @noranmohamad7210
    @noranmohamad7210 Год назад +1

    Definitely much easier and faster than the old one!

  • @Yankalexia
    @Yankalexia 6 месяцев назад

    Great! In fact, I did not know how the "new" writing task was, and this video helped me understand the basic concepts. Thank you!

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  6 месяцев назад

      Thanks for the comment and happy to help :)

  • @piano_boy8981
    @piano_boy8981 Год назад +2

    I'll have TOEFL exam today about an hour and a half on July 26th in Korea... Wish me good luck pls!!!

    • @medsarad
      @medsarad Год назад

      Hi
      How did you get on? 🙂

    • @piano_boy8981
      @piano_boy8981 Год назад +1

      @@medsarad 110!!! got 26 in reading and listening but 30 and 28 in speaking and writing!

    • @te22557
      @te22557 Год назад

      @@piano_boy8981 Hey, that's a great score! May I ask you how you have prepared for the test? Did you learn any templates or specific phrases/formulations and vocabulary?

  • @HosseinAbootalebi
    @HosseinAbootalebi 7 месяцев назад

    Thank u mr,i think this new version is much technically than the previous one,and students get the highest scores who have practiced a lot.

  • @pamela.r
    @pamela.r Год назад +3

    I consider this format more difficult because there is no template. We need to write a lot more, and with just 10 minutes, many errors can be made. I appreciate your explanation; at least, going to the exam knowing what to expect is helpful.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Thank you for your feedback.

  • @MamarTiti-su8fe
    @MamarTiti-su8fe Год назад +3

    That's very helpful Josh, thanks a lot. The new format is much easier but, the problem is about the duration.
    Hope you will continue looking for time management strategies.

  • @yanghuang6157
    @yanghuang6157 26 дней назад

    many thanks Josh for the latest 2025 fresh videos with much more straight, clear and helpful information. Do most highly appreciate. I do believe your professional efforts deserve tons of applaud from all from which who benefit. FYI, i have also bought your Quick Package - here a few questions are highly tricky! Anyway, i hope this will bring benefits for the exam in two weeks time.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  21 день назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment. It means a lot!

  • @dmytrogryzov3371
    @dmytrogryzov3371 Год назад +2

    Thank you for the video!
    I'm definitely going to take test after the update. It looks easier. You shouldn't concentrate on "fake" reading questions, shouldn't keep essay for 300 words...i like it❤

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thank you for your feedback and good luck on your test.

  • @audiobooksandmore-s3y
    @audiobooksandmore-s3y Год назад +6

    My test is tomorrow and I have been practicing and studying with your videos for about a month. You have such a large and great palette of studying material for the TOEFL. If I get the score I need, I'll start a fandom for Josh.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +2

      Haha, thanks for commenting :) How did your test go?

  • @jennylin5929
    @jennylin5929 Год назад +2

    Thank you, Josh. The lecture and structure break down are very helpful! Writing is the most difficult part for me. I completed my first essay, though it takes me over 30 minutes!😂

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for taking teh time to comment. If you ever want some additional help, you can check out our site: www.tstprep.com :)

  • @Durgaempire
    @Durgaempire 6 месяцев назад

    While I appreciate the points mentioned by both Kelly and Paul, I really think that television has created a positive impact in our lives that everyone should consider. Various programs on television definitely encourage people to think in broader ways. Individuals can grab a wide range of information about particular subjects. It is especially beneficial for students, as they can access concise information that can be retained long-term. Moreover, various devotional and motivational programs help viewers develop positivity and think differently, so this approach is probably best for everyone. However, relying solely on television doesn't guarantee that people's lives will change radically. Television is simply a tool developed by humans to facilitate their lives. Therefore, people must discern which programs are beneficial for them and act accordingly. Nowadays, youths are highly engaged in watching television, and their participation in other areas is quite limited. This will surely hamper their academic careers, and may halt their social and psychological development. Thus, it sounds ethical to engage in various sectors rather than relying solely on watching television.

  • @javiernarvaez1849
    @javiernarvaez1849 Год назад

    Josh is the best of the best. You're a life saver. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Happy to help :)

  • @0Luciana0
    @0Luciana0 Год назад

    Thank you, Josh! It's my first time commenting here, thank you for the content! In my opinion, this new type of writing is more difficult because for me it's easier to write from previous discussions than add my opinion. I know the topic in my native language, but when it comes to writing in English I struggle with vocabulary :(

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Thanks for taking the time to comment. It means a lot! If you want to build your vocabulary, the first site we would recommend is LingQ. It is a program designed to give you a ton of reading content, from news articles to short stories at all levels of proficiency. It also has flashcards and other tools to help you remember vocabulary.
      The second site we would recommend for more "TOEFL-like" materials is Scientific American, which is an academic journal with similar types of passages from the test

  • @enesmahmutkulak
    @enesmahmutkulak Год назад +1

    Hi Josh. First of all i want to thank you for this such an amazing video. I wrote my own answer. I would be delighted if you give your own opinions about my answer in your free time.
    Also i am open to other people's opinions.
    Although there are both pros and cons of globalization, I definitely think that the advantages are more dominant. First of all, it gives a great opportunity to earn money. With the help of globalization, even people who have low wages can sell their home-made products to the world. Secondly, it makes discovering cultures and cultural exchange possible. People can travel to their dream country, develop their perspectives about other cultures, and even defy their cultural biases. While I also give rights to Alex's points that state it can cause local people to extinct, It can be prevented by taking action. Governments can ensure that local people will not be a part of globalization, and they can legislate against the harsh conditions of employees.

  • @KetabKhaneRahbareShahid
    @KetabKhaneRahbareShahid 16 дней назад

    Easier
    U R the best teacher
    Afghanis

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  14 дней назад

      Thanks for commenting!

  • @simbiatsalaudeen_ssd
    @simbiatsalaudeen_ssd Год назад

    Thanks for your video, Josh🌸
    In my opinion, the new academic discussion task is easier than the previous independent task.
    I have my test next week on January 17. I hope for the very best.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for commenting and best of luck on your test.

    • @simbiatsalaudeen_ssd
      @simbiatsalaudeen_ssd Год назад +1

      @@TSTPrep Thank you. I got my results today.
      I had a 28 in writing following your templates. Thank you🙏

  • @S_Antosha
    @S_Antosha Год назад +1

    Sounds like this task is much easier!

  • @_shaan_shah
    @_shaan_shah Год назад +1

    Hi could you please score this? It will help me out to gauge my current level.
    This topic puts the light on the crucial topic of globalisation. I firmly believe in the transformative power of globalisation. The tremendous potential that we see in our world today is because of the advent of globalisation. To counter to what Alex believes, I would like to put it in a way that since centuries mankind has been divided and isolated. You can see how the ancient civilisations disappeared just because of the lack of technology transfer. We live in an inter dependent world and to meet the needs of our populations, collaboration is the way to go. There have been scores of instances of nation building and development of the poorest of the regions because of open economies. The concept is of collective advancement and generation of new opportunities. Today we can sit in a part of the world and work in another. This is possible because of the international bonhomie and cultural awareness. The diversity is actually the pillar of a strong nation including the developing ones. They must open up their economies and they themselves will realise it as the best decision in their history.

  • @ighagh
    @ighagh Год назад +1

    Thanks a lot for your work! Subjectively, I think that it depends on person, like many people thought independent essay was the hardest thing in the TOEFL, but actually for me that was Integrated 😅. Last time I could write very long time, and then edit, because I just wrote my essay and that's it. However, now I should read or SCAN the passages and then write my opinion about that topic and all that thing I should do in 10 minutes. That is much more stressful than Independent essay was.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thank you for your feedback. Of course, everyone is different.

  • @banouehsanpour7023
    @banouehsanpour7023 10 месяцев назад

    I think that this is easier than the previous task.😊

  • @moremayureshharidas3500
    @moremayureshharidas3500 Год назад +2

    question- social media influncer can sell any thing they want? your thought?
    I strongly feel that social media influencers with a lot of followers have the power to sell their product. In my opinion, this is not a bad think but many influencers in today’s time sell harmful or addictive products without even caring about the consequences the buyers will face. For example, recently a famous influencer secretly partnered with tobacco company and acted like its cool to use tobacco based products. His followers started using this product without even giving it a thought just to act like a cool guy in front of the society. I understand Emily’s view but she is missing another important point. Influencer after becoming famous know that their fame won’t be for long so they just try to make as much as money they can by selling any products, no matter whether it is good or bad. In the end I would say that we should watch these influencers but we must always know of what’s right and wrong and not fall into their trap.
    plz rate the response

  • @movingenglishlessonswithan2032

    Thanks, Josh! Sharing this on the latest blog post that I'm working on publishing.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Thanks for sharing, Anne! Let me know when you have the link up. Maybe we can squeeze in a link to your blog somewhere in one of our articles.

  • @manuelgomez-ochoa5446
    @manuelgomez-ochoa5446 Год назад

    Excellent tips for the new writing question are provided in this video.

  • @chiomaadegbite4577
    @chiomaadegbite4577 9 месяцев назад

    Thank you so much Josh. This look easier than the previous but I enjoyed both

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  9 месяцев назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

  • @misa4650
    @misa4650 Год назад +1

    I feel this is a LOT easier than the old version, I'm an English major in Asia and I basically do similar tasks like this all day, while for entire article, not so much😅

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

  • @l-106azayyadav9
    @l-106azayyadav9 Год назад

    It is indeed easier than previous independent writing🙌🙌

  • @sergeaido1023
    @sergeaido1023 Год назад

    Amazing, what a video. It definitely helps mitigate my scare or stress when thinking of new format of the test. Thanks a lot

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for the comment and good luck on your test!

  • @wisamey
    @wisamey Год назад

    You and your guides for speaking and writing were the reason that my speaking score went from 22 to 26 and my writing score went from 23 to 28. I got 113 overall score.
    Cant thank you enough 🙏

    • @ruchamehta8600
      @ruchamehta8600 Год назад

      Hey, how long did it take for you to get your TOEFL scores after the test day?

    • @wisamey
      @wisamey Год назад

      @@ruchamehta8600 test was on 24 dec, got the result on 29 dec.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Happy to hear that:) Thank you so much for your kind words. It would be a HUGE help if you could leave a review on Trust Pilot - es.trustpilot.com.

    • @wisamey
      @wisamey Год назад

      Done

  • @rvgba
    @rvgba 7 месяцев назад

    got 103 in my first test, thank you for the helpful content!!

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  7 месяцев назад

      Happy to hear you have earned the score you needed!

  • @kadirimariamdamilola9905
    @kadirimariamdamilola9905 Год назад +1

    Josh please make more videos on this and speaking as well

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Sure, more videos to come soon :)

  • @alenabezouskova1655
    @alenabezouskova1655 Год назад

    Thank you, this helps a lot. My biggest problem is spelling mistakes or even typos. For some reason, it is really hard for me to see them in the English text that I wrote even though I know the correct spelling. If anyone has any tricks for that, I will be glad. Working in progress :)

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      The best way to improve this skill is to practice it. There are many great free typing programs on the internet. Or even using Grammarly will help you improve. The trick is to work on your typing and grammar for between 15-30 minutes every day.

    • @alenabezouskova1655
      @alenabezouskova1655 Год назад

      Thanks a lot for responding :)

  • @alshaima8037
    @alshaima8037 3 месяца назад

    This is much more easier.❤

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  26 дней назад

      Thanks for your feedback.

  • @zainabalwali95
    @zainabalwali95 Год назад

    Thank you Josh! I really appreciate your effort in this video about new question.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice comment. Much appreciated :)

  • @AkiraTsuchiya-h1i
    @AkiraTsuchiya-h1i Год назад

    Hello! I tried writing the answer to the question:
    I believe that globalization contains both positive and negative impacts. However, the positives of globalization overwhelms its negative effects. Even though Alex says that globalization can lead to loss of culture and characteristics of countries, I believe that this will not happen if we are careful enough. For example, I learn at an international school where it represents a form of globalization as people with different cultures gather together and get educated. It is a great platform to share each other’s cultures and compare their differences. Instead of dishonouring the diversity, we respect them. We make sure to value the cultures and include them. Therefore, through globalization, we can also achieve world peace as the community gets closer to each other. We can develop further understanding towards one another and avoid unnecessary conflicts. To conclude, I agree with Bryan that globalization brings advantages and will improve our current lives.
    Are there any improvements I could make?

  • @sehmusakbas
    @sehmusakbas Год назад

    Hey there, first of all thanks a lot for this great video, it shows that you've went through multiple different ETS questions and answers to spot some good ones as examples.
    My question is: are we offered to choose from multiple subjects/questions from a given list or is it a one-shot, single question about a specific subject? The reason why I'm asking this is to see if it's possible to get caught in a subject that we are not very familiar with and have to make up a decent size paragraph with limited knowledge about the subject.
    I appreciate the effort!

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Hi there and good question. Unfortunately, you can't select the topic, and there is no way to know what topic you will get on a test day.

    • @sehmusakbas
      @sehmusakbas Год назад

      @@TSTPrep that hurts… thanks for the answer though!

  • @ObsessedwidSkincare
    @ObsessedwidSkincare Год назад

    Hi Josh,
    Thank you for simplifying Academic writing! I just received my score- 112 with 29 in the Writing section
    This was the only video I referred to while preparing for Academic writing.
    Once again, thank you😊

    • @ruchamehta8600
      @ruchamehta8600 Год назад

      Hey, how long did it take for you to get your TOEFL scores after the test day?

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Congratulations and thank you for sharing. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you leave your review at this link - es.trustpilot.com? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep. Thanks again!

  • @makankananian3838
    @makankananian3838 Год назад

    actually I believe this new academic task is much better compare to the perviouse one, less words and clear direction are notably the biggest advantages of this new updated writing task

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for your feedback and good luck on your test!

  • @hosseinshafie3165
    @hosseinshafie3165 Год назад

    Thanks Josh! It was a very useful video and I took a lot of screenshots.

  • @080lokeshagrawal6
    @080lokeshagrawal6 5 месяцев назад

    Personally I believe, globalization is a positive force as it creates more opportunities not only to the developing countries but also to their people. It creates an opportunity for economic development of their country by providing them a scope for trade by which nations can easily get the resources limited to other regions. People can travel to developed coutries and can explore more ways for various things that may help them for a more sustainable use of resources. I understand alex's concern over cultural homogenization, but i believe that it will bring a sense of belongingness and unity to the people all together. Although in some cases it may lead to a exploitation of resources of developing countries but if i had to choose i would go for the globalization keeping its positive force in mind.
    can you please rate this?

  • @mohammadamanalimyzada1462
    @mohammadamanalimyzada1462 Год назад +1

    Thank you Josh.
    I love the work you do here

  • @saeidjavani-k5p
    @saeidjavani-k5p Год назад

    Perfect points, Thank

  • @omeryagzaluc1548
    @omeryagzaluc1548 Год назад

    I guess it is more relax than the former one.

  • @sameer_sah
    @sameer_sah Год назад

    Thank you Josh for the detailed explaination. Hope your fingers are fine now !😀

  • @ozcanf6680
    @ozcanf6680 Год назад

    Thank you Josh, this is very helpful 👍

  • @simonhurtadosalazar7111
    @simonhurtadosalazar7111 Год назад

    Hey Josh! Thanks for the video. I find more stressful this new format because you always want to have as much time as possible. But, either way with both formats you should prepare very well the templates you are planning to use.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

  • @sivakumarpalanisamy8838
    @sivakumarpalanisamy8838 Год назад

    Thank you very much for the useful video.

  • @banouehsanpour7023
    @banouehsanpour7023 10 месяцев назад

    Thanks a lot for useful video🎉

  • @sarahstriedandtestedenglis5930

    Thanks, Josh, but at 9 minutes - I don't think that sample answer is the answer to the discussion board on the right. I think the sample answer refers to inventions, whereas the discussion board on the right refers to the impact of television. I may be wrong. Your thoughts, please. Btw, thanks for all your great content - much appreciated.

  • @anaserrano2152
    @anaserrano2152 Год назад

    Thanks Josh! I didn’t have idea it had changed 😅

  • @ericaferrideoliveira4610
    @ericaferrideoliveira4610 Год назад

    Thank you so much Josh!

  • @TV-wz8kp
    @TV-wz8kp Год назад

    Thank you so much Josh, but I have one question:)
    Can you tell me where the source for the three questions is?
    Psychology- What are smoe strategies that people can use to manage stress in their daily lives?
    Political Science- What are some ways that individuals and goverments can work to reudcue air pollution?
    History- But what about the impact of ancient civilizations on science and technology? How dis these civilizations contrubute to our modern understanding of science and technology?
    You mentioned that the source of the three questions is from ETS, but I couldn't find them on the ETS website T.T

  • @gabrielalopes284
    @gabrielalopes284 Год назад

    Thanks for your video! Both questions will be like that?

  • @Stitch-1505
    @Stitch-1505 Год назад

    Thank you so much for the structure and the guiding through how to practice for Academic Discussions. It helped me greatly in improving my score. I am definitely recommending everyone I know who are preparing for TOEFL to check out channel and website.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Great! Thank you for sharing! If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you say the same thing at this link - sotellus.com/r/tst-prep/? It will help people on Google learn about my site, TST Prep. Thanks again!

  • @w-e-a.c..2264
    @w-e-a.c..2264 Год назад +1

    That was great!

  • @udayonsen260
    @udayonsen260 Год назад +1

    I think this is more tricky compared to the independent writing scenario.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thank you for your feedback.

  • @ataaeffahsylviaduah2572
    @ataaeffahsylviaduah2572 Год назад +1

    Hy Josh, my question is that should the answer be in a paragraph form? and must we add connectives like firstly, secondly and so on when answering or we should just go straight to the points

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      It should be in paragraph form and also use the transitional phrases you are asking about. Here is a link to an article that has an example of the correct structure. Hope it helps. :)
      tstprep.com/articles/toefl/sample-essays-for-the-writing-section-of-the-toefl-test/

  • @КаналМиланыЖуравлёвой

    Wow! Thanks a lot!🌅

  • @leilysdream5666
    @leilysdream5666 Год назад

    THANKS A LOT :) WELL DEFINIETY IT WILL BE MUCH MORE EASIER. THANKSSSSSS

  • @mosesndebesa450
    @mosesndebesa450 Год назад

    Very hepful Josh

  • @San_Ari
    @San_Ari Год назад

    K fellas my test is tomorrow, wish me luck 😭🖐🏻
    And thanks for the vids my guy, hope theyll help

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      I hope everything went well.

    • @San_Ari
      @San_Ari Год назад

      @@TSTPrep it did, and prereration really helped. Btw, i took home edition and for some reason they didn't give me a break, idk why 💀
      I will share my scores when i get them)

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      @@San_Ari Thanks for comemting. Just to clarify, Staring July 2023, there is no break on the TOEFL iBT test.

  • @joaoafonso9897
    @joaoafonso9897 Год назад

    Thank you soo much for the video, huge help! Just a quick question, do we lose points if we don't mention students' comments?

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Technically, you don't have to mention either speaker as long as whatever you say adds to the topic in a meaningful way. You can choose to mention one or both speakers or don't mention them at all, it's up to you.

  • @yousramaqsoodi100
    @yousramaqsoodi100 10 месяцев назад +1

    Hey Josh
    I have a question
    Can we use an example of our own experience in this question?
    Please please answer this before I take exam
    My exam is on Sunday 😅

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  10 месяцев назад

      Hi there, thank you for asking and yes, you can use your personal example. Hope this helps and best of luck on your test.

  • @pricilareyes4588
    @pricilareyes4588 Год назад +59

    Why would TOEFL guys not give us enough time to read what THEY want us to understand?! Makes no f... sense

    • @glady6584
      @glady6584 Год назад +6

      Thats why u practice reading books alot bruhv.. sounds like a skill issue to me 🤷‍♂️

    • @PamelaHarrison-l8c
      @PamelaHarrison-l8c 11 месяцев назад +5

      Totally agree! They should give more time for reading so we can understand and comprehend. So stupid!

    • @elifunluerler1941
      @elifunluerler1941 8 месяцев назад +5

      You must be kidding with us. How can ı read the questions also two different review AND jot down my personal ideas in 10 munites? You guys do not give us for reading time.

    • @НазваниеКанала-р6э
      @НазваниеКанала-р6э 2 месяца назад

      @@elifunluerler1941you can easily do it in your native language. So the idea is to test your skills to complete the task in English as good as in your native language

    • @TajikSignLanguage
      @TajikSignLanguage 2 месяца назад

      Bruh, just pause the video? You are not like a 70 year old grandma or anything 🤦‍♂️

  • @FrurandyAkum
    @FrurandyAkum Год назад

    Sir thanks very much for these updates
    It's vert easier than the other independent writing task 2
    Sir I still appreciate you for these videos
    They didn't updates us in our school about these .which tomorrow am writing my TOEFL exam
    Thanks very much sir josh

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thank you for commenting. How did your test go?

  • @hediyeh_savari
    @hediyeh_savari Год назад

    Thank you, dear Josh. This was so helpful😍🤩

  • @ErfanKhodabakhsh
    @ErfanKhodabakhsh Год назад

    I think in some ways, they are the same because we are writing about a topic with our own idea. although we can use some idea in our writing, as you said, ETS maybe evaluates our contribution

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

  • @ghadeer97
    @ghadeer97 Год назад

    I will take the test in less a month, you are my hope teacher 😢

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thanks for commenting. If you ever want some additional help, you can check out our site: www.tstprep.com :)

  • @tonybarkham3679
    @tonybarkham3679 Год назад +2

    How can the answer about vaccines and antibiotics be connected or relevant to the professor's question: "What do you think is the most significant effect that watching television has on people? Why do you think television has this effect?" Ok, the phrase, "shown to the world", but no reference is made to television and the text is unrelated to the discussion. I think this must be an error.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Hi there and thank you for your comment. I'm a bit confused because the response is to the question "Is globalization a positive or negative force in the world today?" Could you tell me where you see the question about television? A specific time stamp would be helpful. Thanks.

    • @tonybarkham3679
      @tonybarkham3679 Год назад +1

      @@TSTPrep Yes, its the screen view at 6:00

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +2

      @@tonybarkham3679 I should have been clearer in the video. The sample essay at the 6:00 mark is an example from ETS for a different question. I included it here to show you that you could earn a high score without including any information from the people in the discussion. At this point of the video, I did not want to show a sample question and essay yet. The "watching television" question is a different prompt from ETS that I used to show what the question will look like on test day. Keep watching later on in the video for a sample question and accompanying essay. Sorry for the confusion.

  • @annacuratella6367
    @annacuratella6367 Год назад

    hi Josh! Thank you a lot for the video. I am thinking about subscribing for your Emergency Courses for the TOEFL. Are those updated with these changes around the test? Thank you :)

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thank you for asking and yes, every course video and practice test has been updated to reflect the version of the TOEFL iBT launched on July 26, 2023.

  • @evanmei179
    @evanmei179 Год назад

    Thanks a lot, subscribed you!

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      Thank you for your support. :)

  • @beewel-r8l
    @beewel-r8l Год назад

    Thank you so much.

  • @vanDKnaNL
    @vanDKnaNL Год назад +1

    I feel a little scared about that new format. What if my opinion on that topic is already mentioned of one of the 2 students?

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад

      That's totally fine, but be careful not to spend too much time repeating what they say. Express your opinion in your own words.

    • @vanDKnaNL
      @vanDKnaNL Год назад

      @@TSTPrep thank you, will try my best

  • @djimidjamjam3945
    @djimidjamjam3945 Год назад

    Thank you so much Josh you help me so much keep going U doing amazing 🎉

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Thanks. Much appreciated!

  • @rosmeryquesada7019
    @rosmeryquesada7019 Год назад +2

    Thank you, Josh! I definitely think this question is way easier than current independent writing, and the adjustment time helps to finish the test quickly and be less tired.

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  Год назад +1

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

  • @joylui0527
    @joylui0527 9 месяцев назад

    For anyone who has not taken the test yet: I got 27 in pre-reformed writing and only 24 in this new one (both without preparation). So don’t overlook the hidden challenges here 😅

    • @TSTPrep
      @TSTPrep  9 месяцев назад +1

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

  • @marwaKakar-r3i
    @marwaKakar-r3i Год назад

    I believe globalization makes our world more and more interconnected. I can emply with confidence that one of the differences of our era is about globalization; what I want to make point of it is this that human being has alot more life assets today by trades, travels and other types of communication than other times of human history. Also it is important to say that globalization do makes societies far more foreign from each other in fact very familiar and connected which we can expect with adoration and peace. But I should remark, not all connections are based with good wells and people of different countries makes effort to gain one sided profits and leave considerable harms to others. Because of this, there must be accepted policies that causes equality and balance of economic power not putting pressure nor colonising.

    • @marwaKakar-r3i
      @marwaKakar-r3i Год назад

      If anyone could check my answer it will be a significant help for me!