I Used To Live In A Quiet Small Town, Until The Infection Came
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- Опубликовано: 28 сен 2024
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I....didn't understans what this story was all about, it hopped around from one set of characters to bunch of others and then it suddenly stopped without an explanation.
Up next "follow this specific set of rules before 3am while standing on 1 foot and reciting the pledge of allegiance while tying your left shoe and I own a musket for home defense"
You to? It’s a great weapon
The skinwalkers at three AM are just what the Founding Fathers intended to work at the gas station.
@@N0sf3r4tuR1s3n Tallly ho Lads!!! And fired grape shot.
What the devil?
@@spinachmuncher2566 as I grab my powdered wig and Kentucky rifle
So... When you're writing stories, they should have points where they do this thing called 'an ending.'
He doesn’t write these stories.
Very disappointed with that ending. What happened to the cow or the deputy with the cut on his ear? Was it about the company creating the flood or the fracking and what was in the mud puddle that got him sick in the first place??
Y’all aren’t bright enough to figure this one out i guess you gotta pay attention and have intuition and awareness I’m 35 minutes in with no confusion and I’m a stoner. Don’t blame the write for your lack of understanding.
@@TheLordofBacon wait until you hit 46:55 I'm assuming you'll get a lot more confused, this is 2 entirely different stories mashed together.
I think I got a stroke what did I just listen to it was all over the place
It’s like the stand by Stephen king the whole point is that all the different people and stories all tie into one and overlap
Naw man you hured it right
I don't understand how the prison ties in.
@charmaintrout174 word. If this damn story is a TBC....then maybe they send 300 pound red eye infected dude to or the infected are brought to the jail for quarantine but who knows. All I know for sure is that guy Gus Swanson wanted to be a farmer his whole entire life. 😂😂
@@charmaintrout174it probably doesn’t yet, this is almost certainly intended as a part one of a planned series.
This is the first mr creeps story that I just CANT UNDERSTAND!!!!!
My dog ate a list of park rangers, now i must not know about a small gas station in alabama from hell. Then the phone rang
The writer was drunk or the Mr. Creeps flipped to page 20, saw it was a different story and said "whatevs."
"I started a lawm mowing business, the gas station i use for filling up has strange pavement in the parking lot."
That ending made no sense lol did you just mash up two different stories
tune in next time for: "i used to have kids but the wife took them, now im in kansas asking skinwalkers for legal advice and they gave me a list of rules to follow"
I want to see a skinwalker legal consultant story. Or a skinwalker lawyer story. Shit would be funny as hell.
As an indigenous person, I'm unsure if taking the piss out of them counts as making them stronger or not.
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@@spellcraft7988 did you know it would take you 9 years to walk the distance from earth to the moon?
@@edacheson8540 lol imagine the skinwalker is the defendant "your honor my client said he's sorry with a cherry on top he was just hungry and that's why he ate those hikers"
Is there a part 2? I feel so confused by the jarring swap from the police officer to the prison staff.
The last part makes no fricken sense.
If its a multi-part story, it needs to say so in a pinned comment or the description (I even looked for such a notice: nothing).
I've been sitting here with a headache, trying to distract myself (from said headache), while waiting for my migraine meds to kick in so I can take a nap.
There was a jarring cut between when the mother and daughter got him in the truck and when the police and EMTs arrived on scene.
But I chalked that up to the 3rd person perspective (who in this story is supposed to be telling the story? It starts out in the first person... no explination for that, either).
Then it suddenly jumps to something seemingly unconnected to the first parts of the story (I can understand if it connects later, but it just ends with nothing mentioned about more to come....)
I saw the "support the author" section in the description - though I didn't go to that link.
I can't really imagine many people wanting to support a story as disjointed like this one seems (with no explanation and just stopping dead in its tracks).
I thought my migraine or the migraine meds had me tripping with the whiplash I got from this story.
Then I read the comment section (when I was (overly hopefully) looking for a pinned comment to explain) and saw that most of the other listeners were confused, as well.
Anyway, it feels like a waisted 58+ minutes, because of how completely disjointed it seemed:
The perspectives switching from 1st to 3rd person (with no explination).
The jarring scene transitions between him getting sick and the 1st responders on the crash scene (with no explination).
THEN the more jarring transition to a (seemingly unrelated) prison tyrant story that will likely be connected later on... (with no explination)... Then it just cuts off there?
mix of horror and humor is perfect for a B-movie zombie flick. Would love to see part 2
Need to start going for quality stories. I’ve been a fan for a long long time but the worst stories I’ve ever heard have been read by you as well 😅😇
I am hoping there is more to this :)
Next: I lived in a town with money until Tiffany Henyard showed up!
LOL
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🤣🤣🤣 that's classic AND topical 😁🤣
what? we need the next part.....lol
enjoying the story and narration
only real critique is that it should have been millions of years the virus was in the ground not thousands [well could be a LOT of thousands i guess]
I was thinking that as well. It started with smaller numbers and then got to millenia 😅
What happened to the 6’10 farmer with the case of rabies, it ended with a jail going under.
Caught the Star Trek references! Lol can't wait for part two! Great narration!
Is this story ai generated or was there some editing mistake? The ending sounds like the beginning of a totally different narration that got mixed in. Not sure how that would happen unless he recorded each section of the story separately, which is a really weird way of editing videos.
I honestly came to the same conclusion... truly seemed line AI written. Even if it wasn't, the quality of the story should have never made it into a uploaded video, really disappointing.
What even is this story
I can’t wait to listen to this on the way home tonight!!!
Ok. Farmer gets virus. Man attacks. Cop gets bit. Dr cant figure oyt whats going on. Cow attacks. Then cuts to a jailhouse roll call and a Sgt vs idiot narcissist incident ensues. So.... WHAT HAPPENED TO THE STORY?????? THE VIRUS?? WTF IS THIS CRAP?
Ok good, I thought inward too stupid to understand it for a minute. Maybe a mistake in editing or something like that…
I'm guessing that there's a second part to this story, and the bit with the jailhouse was meant to establish upcoming characters? 😅
There's a 2cd Part..!! @@voidbreather7405
You still actually reading these bud? Or do you have an ai of your voice because how do you read this, record it and edit it without thinking wtf is this ending. If its multi part it should have not included the jail stuff.
What the hell happened... I stayed buffering for twice as allotted to finish. Then you stoll the end... dam you.
Lmao, this has got to be one of the worst creepypastas I've ever listened to. It feels like the author didn't exactly know where they wanted to go in regards to the plot, so they kind of threw in different ideas and hoped one of them would stick, which oftentimes is NOT a good way to go about things. There are definitely some good ideas in here that have potential, but the author needs to choose one and flesh it out more. Even if they intend to somehow tie everything together in the next part (if there is any) - that is still poor writing.
Some potential here and there, but it needs a lot of work, and I mean A LOT.
Ummmm Mr. Creeps what happened to the end of this video? And is there a part 2?
Not me wondering why the Kyles would be mooing at him - before realizing it's actually "cows" 🤣 Like jeez Kyle, stop mooing at random people
First one to a new and exciting journey, HELL YEA
How do you feel now? Lol
I watched part 2 first. Fellas, the story in this video might be a little jumbled at first but trust me when I say it'll all be worth it.
Whats part 2
Anyone notice it starts off, sounding like the crazies and at the end switches to the first part of the Green mile
So how do we go from an outbreak to a jailhouse with zero connections with no ending for either…😂
Did you switch to AI stories or something? This doesnt make sense. Alot of your recent videos dont make sense.
What just happened? We had a video about a virus, with not to much detail. Then it seems like another video wrapped itself into it but we don’t realize it until the end.
I Used To Live In A Quiet Small Town, Until The Fire Nation Attacked
If that's Illinois, someone's already told us..
MR CREEPS FTW!!!
Am I drunk or stupid?? I can't... I
Nah, your are fine. This story is a mess.
Next story: the coffee maker told me to kill myself, i did and now i stand before god. He has a list of rules to follow or i go to hell
Cheers 😊
It reads like AI wrote this and forgot the plot... really disappointing that this is the quality that would be uploaded to this channel. It's not even a matter of taste.
If it somehow all connects, I dont retract my statement... it would still be in Mr. Creeps shoulders to provide the story in full or not at all if the story doesn't lend itself to a natural part 1 of N video.
The ending was pointless. I was waiting on an update with Gus and the virus. 😅
Yeah….I’m completely confused as to how the prison randomly ties into the story with the virus/cow/Gus? This story was all over the place lmao. Sorry, maybe I just missed something but it made absolutely no sense to me 😅💀
Love it 🎉🎉
… Are these two separate stories? Regardless, neither has any form of throughline. If they’re connected, they’re interesting but unsatisfying. If they’re not, wtf was the second one even there for? Bizarro
I feel like this should have started as - prologue, and then chapter 1, on to chapter 2 -- and so on. Would have made things make a whole lot more sense. I hope there will be a part 2 cause where it ended is just meh.
these two story lines left the first hanging....hopefully there is a part 2??? otherwise waste of time listening to it
I'm assuming the ending was a set up to a part 2 Farmer John will be tranferred there, for an epic shitshow
We want mad cow! We want mad cow!!!!! w-t-h
As a beginning of a massive zombie apocalypse stories, it's fairly decent. If it's supposed to be a standalone, it's a terrible mess without a proper ending. For a story of this lenght - and lack of resolution - the long backgrounds for each new character are entirely pointless. The prison part doesn't tie in with anything, as people turning insanely violent wouldn't be sent to prison but to a mental institution, so really, this either needs a continuation, or cease to exist as a waste of time.
The narration is great. ⭐🙂👍
It sounds like back4blood esc story.
I need more!!!!
It sounds like The Stand virus
I really miss 15-20 minute pastas that were actually scary and didn’t have thirty different plot lines ..
This is scary, but have you heard the one where… the meat worm came…
Tune in next week for "The Police In My Town Are Wendigos. Don't Leave Your House At Night."
Hey, it’s Leeroy again
Hello Leeroy
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General Kenobi
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Star Wars reference, I said it for the Memes. Lol
An elegant meme from a more civilised time 🤔
Wth was that...
So this is a bit odd. idk if he uses AI to generate his videos now or something else happened, but around the 46:55 mark it just changes to a whole different story that has nothing to do with the one we all came here for. I'm no video editor but I think it'd be pretty difficult to accidentally (keyword as I don't think this was done purposefully) merge 2 videos and I also think it'd be a lot more difficult to accidentally do so when your literally in the middle of your original video and then ALSO not even notice you did it and just go ahead and upload it.
COOOY is a cow call
I know it sounds silly ,but it's true
Umm......What? Did I miss something? It went from a infection outbreak to a prison story? It seems like 2 stories may have gotten mixed up or something here. It started with one, then half way into it, got mixed up with another one? I know I didn't fall asleep half way in, then woke up in the end of another one. And since I'm pretty sure i'm not time slipping, I'm totally confused.
Is this episode on the podcast?
part 2 coming soon right??
Ai and automatic posting was a mistake. I hope he fixes this so we can get the ends to both these stories lol
I believe based on true story, was in reddit few years ago, covered up & classified
Wait...what happened. Was this two different stories accidentally uploaded? The first story was never finished, and the second just got cut off too. 😂
So, the Crazies?
Homie from that 70s show drops some dark stories now huh?
The title and the first part of this story insinuate that its going to be a typical 1st person narrative about something that happened to the narrator and their town.
Then it suddenly becomes a 3rd person narrative that gives us all this exposition about this guy only for him to get written out of the story.
Then, we suddenly transition to another story about a workplace dispute, and that's where the story ends.
Now i can understand why this story could have been written. Perhaps the author had Alzheimers or at least wanted us to experience what its like losing your goddam mind or something.
But what i cant fathom is why this channel decided to waste our time with this glorified word salad?
Did the granny who wrote this give him a velevet rub? Was there just no other option anywhere on the internet?
Seriously, who would read this story and think "now this is a story my audience needs to hear"??
This made me laugh
Sorry Mr. Creeps … but this one was a fail …
No fear, I still loves ya 🥰😆
Wait, what happened? Why did the story seem to suddenly diverge into a completely different plot?
Why is there a jail now? I'm confusion. Great narration but this story is a bit of a hodge podge.
I love you Mr. Creeps but can we get some quality control in the stories you choose to narrate?
Do you even check the edits before they go up? Smh.
Bro what is this ending man there wasnt even a solid transition to the prison part. And the prison part aint even related to the initial story bro what the heck man.
The individual snippets were good… but it didn’t connect.
People are saying ists confusing but its not just pay attention.
started good and went no where????????
Really disappointing ending, I can live with the jumpy story but what do any of the jail characters have to do with the story?
I do believe that both stories in this video could tie together. However, due to the poor writing and lack of context, there is no way to comprehend the plot.
It seems creepypasta narrators simply look at the title of the story without doing an initial read through to judge if it is content worthy.
Story went drom trucker soing illegal dumping of toxic waste to lonely farmer veing happy to getting sick biting his fanily to death cow dancing in the fiels to bozo the clown in jail because he got fired from a statejob?... meanwhile i am like what happebed to Gus?
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What?????
Reminds me of "ST: MP.
Lots of details, no point.
Still my favorite narrator!
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Well this story sucked. Went from one story to another without finishing the first.
Your voice is different
Long ago in a distant land, I, Aku, the shapeshifting master of darkness, unleashed an unspeakable evil. But, a foolish samurai warrior wielding a magic sword stepped forth to opposed me. Before the final blow was struck, I tore open a portal in time and flung him into the future where my evil is law. Now, the fool seeks to return to the past and undo the future that is Aku..
One of the only mr creeps videso i have ever wanted to dislike only reason i didn't zombie part was really good SMH
Wtf
12th?
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Wth that was a convulted hell. 2 stories 0 plot or ending. Word of advice finish before publishing.
Narration Great. Story not so much
What the hell kind of story was this? What happened with the virus? Even the second story about the jail went unfinished, And added nothing to the story. i’m a huge fan, and you do a great job narrating, but you need to choose better stories than this.
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Author has good ideas. Just not explaining it well. Quit jumping around. Explain a situation first. Before moving on to another.
Bruh lolll you need to proof read these first before you make a video. This shit needs chapters and wayyyy better transitions because tf?? They drive off and then we're at a jail lmao huh??
Do a better stories selection Mr. Creeps. This story was just bad, all over the place (AI generated?), waste of our time, and your great narration.