It seems like there's a lot more mileage in this story, it would be a waste if there wasn't a few more sequels. This is a really good story great job with the narration bro.
I'm confused though. He said he raised his little brother, his little brother who has a wife... but then he says the creature refers to him as little one... and he hides in the basement and cries? Lol. Did the author write that backwards?
Thumbnail Image- Pest Control's Encounter With What Caused the Lockdown. What was the 'sin' the brother and sister in law committed? Story went in several unexpected directions, never expected a time loop(?) to come into play. Ending makes you wonder if angels(?) killed his family or if it was all a long con and the visitor who wants him on their side killed the family in order to sway his opinion.
What I got out of the story.. Earlier in the story it was mentioned God's seat was empty. This means the (arch)angels would fight, including Lucifer, the Morning Star. When the 7 trumpets sound and sinners get taken away, thats biblical for the rapture. So that angels normally take the saints and leave the damned. This was a bit different in this story. So this supports my theory angels are fighting for God's throne. To continue, the black visitor at the end revealed he was Lucifer himself. Which means that everything that happend the first time around (everybody getting "possessed") was Lucifer enlarging his army. Apparently the protagonist is an important figure for Lucifer to rule the heavens, because he always gets steered towards that goal, but refuses to accept his fate. And at the moment he would have stopped Lucifers plans, the actual God intervened (as the protagonist said the voice felt good and natural, as opposed to the angelic voices he heard so far, and angelic voices are portrayed as horrible in the bible aswell) telling him that he has a purpose, and the actual God resetted the timeline in favor of Lucifer. Remember that Lucifer has always been one of his favourite sons. All this is confirmed in the second timeloop where Lucifer talks about the upcoming war. Lucifer never was an actual bad angel in the bible. To summarize, God steered the protagonist on the path to help his favourite son Lucifer gain God's empty intentionally forsaken tronen, so God could go on and do other things, leaving earthly business in his children's hands. Considering old testament lore, this would be my assumption. Sorry for the long text lol.
hi im Crimson I wrote this story! If you want me to continue I will make a sequel. If you want to know the secret of the story ill put it in the reply.
The idea is god left the throne and there is an eternal war for the throne. Alex isn't a saint but in fact a sinner going through layers of hell much like the epic dante's inferno. When It got back to the story resetting was because he is dammed to go through the stages of grieve and pain for eternity. This was his hell something he is doomed to repeat. However he will soon escape and be saved in a sequel.
Another great video from creeps, love your channel so much that it inspired me to start making creepypastas also. I still watch your videos every day, please never stop creeps
This is literally my first time watching such a Video and I never skipped ahead (which I usually do when I get bored mid-video). Story and Narration were both just great.
In the second half the protagonist was saying that he "can't fight this feeling" in regards to the deva vu he was experiencing, meanwhile I was humming Can't fight this feeling by Sophie Ellis-Bextor and Junior Caldera. I can't be the only one, can I?
I absolutely love this, I don't regret randomly clicking on this video, your voice is so soothing in a way that it makes the story better. This guy deserves more subs
I absolutely love your content I also love the way you narrate and explain in detail the many different stories you put out I have also found myself listening to your content at night in order to go to sleep your voice is amazing and keep up the phenomenal work
Hey man I was hoping that you would make a sequel for this story, I don't know if you have been already making it. But I don't know how long it will take for you to finish the sequel, but I am really looking forward to hearing the new one!!! Please don't forget to do it!!!!!
Thank you for your work. It's helped me in many ways. I appreciate your voice and the story selection. I have listened to your channels quite a bit at this point. Keep up with it!
I’m an apocalypse junkie, love mad max, walking dead, matrix, video games, survival stuff. N I use to be a Christian but I can’t stand it anymore, it’s a fucked up cult. N their apocalypse sucks.I use to love left behind n their in the night it got me here but I just really can’t stand biblical shit anymore. I like spiritual n occult stuff. But not mixed with my post apocalyptic fandom. How old r u?
Man it’s been 3 years I’ve been listening to your stories ! I listened to you Mr.creeps through long nights at work,going to sleep or just casually driving! Ur stories have become very important memories for me and I thank you so much bro! I’m so glad to see your channel grow even more!! Been subscribed for so long !
Your stories are awesome. They are the ONLY ones i have found that get my mind off my troubles. Your voice is so soothing i can actually go to sleep. No sleeping pills. Thank-you so much.
Wait as stated he said his brother got bit by a black widow but the hospital was like a hour away? Aren't black widows one of the most dangerous and deadliest spiders on earth? That saying wouldn't his brother arrive dead? Since he would have about a few minutes before the venom kicked in
Love your work, but I have to ask, why is "red" used so often when "blood" would both sound better and make more sense? Looking forward to more great stuff.
@@oledust5735 that figures they are making a lot of changes that really are a pain I have started to listen to most of these stories on Spotify. Much easier with less ads
Started out good, but progressively made less sense as it went on and then there was no explanation or resolution at the end. Shame bc the story had such promise only to end up a confusing mess.
It's an allegory for the stages of grief. He was also stuck in an endless loop of damnation. Doomed to restart his hell over and over. Fair enough though
You can find dollar generals literally anywhere. There could be five of them in a small nowhere town. They pride themselves on being highly accessible to less fortunate people. Within walking distance to your neighborhood. Make things easier on them.
This kinda reminded me of the syfi channel show called "dominion" as well as the movie it was based of of (can't remember the title). This was an amazing story.
What the actual f***! I've been listening to this story for 16 minutes and it has been interrupted six f****** times with commercials!! RUclips what the f*** are you doing??
I really enjoy the way you tell these stories. I have been listening to you for years now, so now it's like I'm visiting with an old friend every time you upload. Thanks, your channel has gotten me thru some tough times.
I really hate these stories that involve the military, they are always written by people who don't know basic things about how the military works and they always muck it up so badly it hurts.
Its not the military at all. The guy is in his own personal hell for committing a sin and not being forgiven. I'm the writer crimson bayonet, this is explained in another story of mine but is heavily hinted throughout the last part.
@@thecomictutor The point I am trying to make is that it's not that hard to Google things to make the story more believable. Being lazy makes a poor story. Why would I read that story if I didn't like this one?
dude im tired my painkillers are making me trip ive been throwing up i did not need this last 20 minutes in my life you basically gave me acid flashbacks
Narrator: "I would do anything to protect my brother."
Also narrator: *locks door*
Wait is this really base on true story?
@@adamwhite202 NO ITS A CREEPY PASTA
@@adamwhite202 yes it is! a story no one ever heard!
Sooooo this is a true stories ?
@@adamwhite202 yes sir
It seems like there's a lot more mileage in this story, it would be a waste if there wasn't a few more sequels. This is a really good story great job with the narration bro.
I'm confused though. He said he raised his little brother, his little brother who has a wife... but then he says the creature refers to him as little one... and he hides in the basement and cries? Lol.
Did the author write that backwards?
I’m convinced there is a sequel to this
type in dark somnium emergecny alert if u want more of it
@@Mygg_Jeager he is going through the levels of hell in punishment
@@lfcelitez3819 is that the sequel?
This story needs a sequel. I NEED MORE.
Im the writter I have a part 6 which is in another story of mine
@@thecomictutor bro this was crazy ride, and I loved it very much
@@eliasmendes2198 thank you! If you look carefully its actually based on the epic Dantes inferno
@@thecomictutor what part is this story?
Stories aren't scary they're just captivating and I love it
Indeed
When suffering(enjoying) insomnia, these are AWESOME!!!
Thumbnail Image- Pest Control's Encounter With What Caused the Lockdown.
What was the 'sin' the brother and sister in law committed?
Story went in several unexpected directions, never expected a time loop(?) to come into play.
Ending makes you wonder if angels(?) killed his family or if it was all a long con and the visitor who wants him on their side killed the family in order to sway his opinion.
What I got out of the story..
Earlier in the story it was mentioned God's seat was empty. This means the (arch)angels would fight, including Lucifer, the Morning Star.
When the 7 trumpets sound and sinners get taken away, thats biblical for the rapture. So that angels normally take the saints and leave the damned. This was a bit different in this story. So this supports my theory angels are fighting for God's throne.
To continue, the black visitor at the end revealed he was Lucifer himself. Which means that everything that happend the first time around (everybody getting "possessed") was Lucifer enlarging his army.
Apparently the protagonist is an important figure for Lucifer to rule the heavens, because he always gets steered towards that goal, but refuses to accept his fate. And at the moment he would have stopped Lucifers plans, the actual God intervened (as the protagonist said the voice felt good and natural, as opposed to the angelic voices he heard so far, and angelic voices are portrayed as horrible in the bible aswell) telling him that he has a purpose, and the actual God resetted the timeline in favor of Lucifer. Remember that Lucifer has always been one of his favourite sons.
All this is confirmed in the second timeloop where Lucifer talks about the upcoming war. Lucifer never was an actual bad angel in the bible.
To summarize, God steered the protagonist on the path to help his favourite son Lucifer gain God's empty intentionally forsaken tronen, so God could go on and do other things, leaving earthly business in his children's hands.
Considering old testament lore, this would be my assumption. Sorry for the long text lol.
@@XsyCon this right here is an amazing theory to explain the story. It seems very plausible. I love it
The unforgivable sin was probably most likely either abortion or child murder.
All sins are forgivable.
Then why did they die
hi im Crimson I wrote this story! If you want me to continue I will make a sequel. If you want to know the secret of the story ill put it in the reply.
The idea is god left the throne and there is an eternal war for the throne. Alex isn't a saint but in fact a sinner going through layers of hell much like the epic dante's inferno. When It got back to the story resetting was because he is dammed to go through the stages of grieve and pain for eternity. This was his hell something he is doomed to repeat. However he will soon escape and be saved in a sequel.
Keep up the good work 😀
A part 2 is a must! Lol this was great!
thats awesome let us know when you make a part 2
Plz for the love of god make a part 2
These stories are super creepy and I love them. It sends chills down my spine. I listen to these when I can't sleep.
Love yer profile pic. Very sexy sith. U cosplay or do fan films? U should. Do u know how to use those blades?
Another great video from creeps, love your channel so much that it inspired me to start making creepypastas also. I still watch your videos every day, please never stop creeps
Ur actually pretty good
Thanks 4 not just commenting about your channel I subbed my guy
@creeping shadows u have a new sub!
Yeah what they said. Subbed.
i subbed, you’re pretty good!
*"I've been on lockdown since 2020, here's why...."*
Seriously though
This is literally my first time watching such a Video and I never skipped ahead (which I usually do when I get bored mid-video). Story and Narration were both just great.
In the second half the protagonist was saying that he "can't fight this feeling" in regards to the deva vu he was experiencing, meanwhile I was humming Can't fight this feeling by Sophie Ellis-Bextor and Junior Caldera.
I can't be the only one, can I?
I've had these weird experiences before, too. Coincidence is so wild.
read it again and youll see what song I have on repeat in the back ground
The amount of ads really made this on enjoyable. Such an amazing story kept getting interrupted every 5 minutes.
If your using Mobil you can skip to the end and restart it, you should get no adds
There are no ads?
theres no ads
I got no ads???
I feel you on this. So many ads.
i agree this definitely needs a sequel big time
yup
I absolutely love this, I don't regret randomly clicking on this video, your voice is so soothing in a way that it makes the story better. This guy deserves more subs
Yea he definitely improved I think he was the one who kept going uh at the end of each sentence
Wow. Another story. This is turning into a great festive period. Gratitude.
I absolutely love your content I also love the way you narrate and explain in detail the many different stories you put out I have also found myself listening to your content at night in order to go to sleep your voice is amazing and keep up the phenomenal work
Your voice is so relaxing and I love listening to these creepypastas.
Same here
@@sgtmjr_avery_johnson7949 Glad I'm not the only one😂
Love your voice
Gayyy
@@mikeamonette6567 I am gay.
NGL, that thumbnail is actually funny. The exterminator dude was like “Oh, you gotta be shitting me!”
Would be such a good movie tbh. 10/10 story would hear again!
Hey man I was hoping that you would make a sequel for this story, I don't know if you have been already making it. But I don't know how long it will take for you to finish the sequel, but I am really looking forward to hearing the new one!!! Please don't forget to do it!!!!!
"For I have seen the throne of God, and it was empty" may be one of the most powerful sentences I have heard on this platform.
Thank you for your work. It's helped me in many ways. I appreciate your voice and the story selection. I have listened to your channels quite a bit at this point. Keep up with it!
Tune in in week for "I'm A Skinwalker Who Attacked Dhar Mann. I Regret It."
This actually needs to be a thing
Imagine an alternate universe where Dhar Mann directed The Godfather… shivers 😟
@@tonym2784
The Dharfather: I made him an offer that he refused. He'll instantly regret it.
I do not regret it
Somebody should make that.
As a Christian who loves the apocalypse story this is absolutely amazing
I’m an apocalypse junkie, love mad max, walking dead, matrix, video games, survival stuff. N I use to be a Christian but I can’t stand it anymore, it’s a fucked up cult. N their apocalypse sucks.I use to love left behind n their in the night it got me here but I just really can’t stand biblical shit anymore. I like spiritual n occult stuff. But not mixed with my post apocalyptic fandom. How old r u?
I don’t think I can even finish this story.
@@glass4breakfast why hate it God loves you Jesus loves you
@@glass4breakfast I feel sorry for you 😞 I hope you find God again.
@@ayobettt3713 Azazel loves you
This was an EPIC ride! Gave me Legion VIBES and I LUV it. Great read and story.
Man it’s been 3 years I’ve been listening to your stories ! I listened to you Mr.creeps through long nights at work,going to sleep or just casually driving! Ur stories have become very important memories for me and I thank you so much bro! I’m so glad to see your channel grow even more!! Been subscribed for so long !
I've listened ot him since I stumbled across "Sirens went off in my neighborhood at 2AM, now eveyone is acting strange"
Heh nice
I've been here since the story "it only takes the good ones"
I've been here for enough years to forget when I got here lol way way way before youtube sold to Google
The fact that the town in this story sounds remarkably similar to the town I grew up in is a bit freaky ngl, in a good way though.
48:52 "He said he was blind but he drove here..."
That was low-key one of the funniest things I've heard.
Really good story. Narration was on point.
I'm ready for this long story! 👍🏽
"there were sounds of horns ringing in my head" yep thats Gabriel telling you to not open that goddamn door mate.
Keep going and please never stop making these stories!
Your stories are awesome. They are the ONLY ones i have found that get my mind off my troubles. Your voice is so soothing i can actually go to sleep. No sleeping pills. Thank-you so much.
Wait as stated he said his brother got bit by a black widow but the hospital was like a hour away? Aren't black widows one of the most dangerous and deadliest spiders on earth? That saying wouldn't his brother arrive dead? Since he would have about a few minutes before the venom kicked in
Actually there has only been one black widow death in human history
@@thecomictutor no? Your wrong
It isn't immediate. It can take several hours/ day before the effects kill, if at all.
Child...you can not ignore me...
(Every child ever born)
YOU UNDERESTIMATE MY POWER!!!
This is Hellbound with more thrill and no bs
What would we do without you Mr Creeps ♥
Live long and prosper
When he was describing the town, I was like "is that our town?!" Lmao gave myself and my sister a jump.
This is reminding me of the "In The Mouth of Madness" film and the weird freaky stuff that happened in it.
a nice hot cup of hot cocoa a warm blanket and some decent headphones and the best part Mr.creeps stories.
Hey, cute oven you got there
@@captainthedragon9555 - w - thanks
Thanks mr creeps. Merry Christmas
All of us Viewers struck gold finding your channel. You inspired me to continue making horror stories channel, Happy New Year!
Hi horror life media
What a crazy story! this channel has inspired to make creepy videos that are from real life stories! Love your work creeps
Let me know when you do.
The fact I go to sleep to stories like this and sleep peacefully
Love your work, but I have to ask, why is "red" used so often when "blood" would both sound better and make more sense? Looking forward to more great stuff.
RUclips would get mad
@@oledust5735 that figures they are making a lot of changes that really are a pain I have started to listen to most of these stories on Spotify. Much easier with less ads
You can't get away from Dollar general they're everywhere!! That's scary
"My town is under government lockdown..."
Australia: "First time?"
That was an unexpected plot twist! Love it!!
Wow MC. This was really, really good. It hits every emotion. ❤️🔥
Nothing better than ads every 5 minutes on an audio only video, 10/10 RUclips 10/10
Started out good, but progressively made less sense as it went on and then there was no explanation or resolution at the end. Shame bc the story had such promise only to end up a confusing mess.
At least you finished it. I called it quits after the fourth ad break by minute 15
@@realism51 yeah the ads are pretty annoying I’m thinking of just skipping to the end. Literally another ad while I’m commenting
It's an allegory for the stages of grief. He was also stuck in an endless loop of damnation. Doomed to restart his hell over and over. Fair enough though
The ads every 5-7 minutes really add to the listening experience.
"My Town Is Under Government Lockdown, Here's Why"
Omincron
-The end
WHERES THE SCP FOUNDATION WHEN YOU NEED THEM
The fucking dragon age reference.. “for I have saw the throne of god and it was empty.”…
Nice
I caught that too. 🤭
Writer here. That line hit so hard I had to use it. I love that game haha
@@thecomictutor oh when I heard it I literally paused the video like where the fuck have I heard that before…?
Is this story tied into the cryptid hunter story? The one where "Lucy" keeps trying to warn him about his "employer"? Or am I buggin?
I didn't write the cryptid hunter story so no. Unless you're talking on my other series.
@@thecomictutor what other series? cuz this story was good!
Damnn that hit hard btw love your videos!
Lockdown you say? That makes it easier for us predators to hunt people 😀
oh my a predator
🤨
Titus. Man the 50.cal!
@@Toxicrabbit141 brother, forget the .50, man the Heavy Bolter!
i dare you to try to fight my 50 cal bolt action rifle roomba army
Banger of a video 👏🏻
Mr Creeps and HorrorBabble are my two favorite horror channels.
You can find dollar generals literally anywhere. There could be five of them in a small nowhere town. They pride themselves on being highly accessible to less fortunate people. Within walking distance to your neighborhood. Make things easier on them.
Another great story from you, Mr.Creeps!
this got my heart racing
This kinda reminded me of the syfi channel show called "dominion" as well as the movie it was based of of (can't remember the title). This was an amazing story.
Legion. That show was great!
Narrator: "A coke?"
Man: "Actually we only have Pepsi"
The true horror story
Yes! New stories!!!!!!!!!
Wonder if there will be sequels to this and cryptid task force.
That potatoe salad better not have raisins in it. Otherwise, the protagonist dodged a bullet.
I'm crimson the author and can confirm it did not have raisins
Mr Creeps thumbnails are one of the coolest but creepiest thumbnails I've ever seen.
Great story. I felt as tho it ended when I felt there should be a part 2 or continued. So what happens at midnight
Why am I not surprised to find a Dollar general even in a fictional setting town.
"God's throne is empty" "against the rulers" "a war against the angels above"
That all kinda sounds like Solo Leveling.
Thank you.
love the long stories :)
What the actual f***! I've been listening to this story for 16 minutes and it has been interrupted six f****** times with commercials!! RUclips what the f*** are you doing??
Love this channel
As soon as he said my name is Lucy already knew it was over.
One minute in and there’s already a commercial wtf
Thanks for puting 0 ads in this video!!
I really enjoy the way you tell these stories. I have been listening to you for years now, so now it's like I'm visiting with an old friend every time you upload. Thanks, your channel has gotten me thru some tough times.
Lol'd at the "some how there's a dollar general too".
There's always a dollar general 🤣
I love that thumbnail, the exterminator person is like "im not paid enough for this sh¡t"
Deff needs to be a series
It is a 5 part series I wrote. I am making a sequel
@@thecomictutor hope I hear it somewhere on RUclips. I love it but I have very poor vision.
This needs a second part
Too much ads, am enjoying the story and bam another ad
Yup. I stopped listening. His long videos are getting too many ads. Every few minutes.
I really hate these stories that involve the military, they are always written by people who don't know basic things about how the military works and they always muck it up so badly it hurts.
Its not the military at all. The guy is in his own personal hell for committing a sin and not being forgiven. I'm the writer crimson bayonet, this is explained in another story of mine but is heavily hinted throughout the last part.
@@thecomictutor The point I am trying to make is that it's not that hard to Google things to make the story more believable. Being lazy makes a poor story.
Why would I read that story if I didn't like this one?
Can you please post some of the longer stories on Spotify please
Definitely can do alot with this story..add more of the SAINTS to find
I am working on a sequel
@@thecomictutor very good Soo much equity in this STORY
Mr Creeps!! Long time no see hope all is well, I enjoy your stories :p
dude im tired my painkillers are making me trip ive been throwing up i did not need this last 20 minutes in my life you basically gave me acid flashbacks
Skinwalkers vs wendigos in death match,mortal combat..That would make a great story!!
totally enjoy listening for an hour for no resolution..
Why am i listening to this at night *BECAUSE I NEED DREAM IDEAS*
“My town is under attack by ducks”
Yes that would be awesome
Is it normal to run into around 6 back to back ads in this? So frustrating since it's so many
If you can’t convince them the first time… try, try, again!!
Beautiful And Accurate
Amazingly good story too bad the commercials seem to ruin it
Commercials suck. but Mr Creeps needs to get paid for his great work. 👍
Skip to the last few seconds of the video, let it finish and restart. Gets rid of that crap... for now at least.
Great story :)
I really like the story, but how didnt he do a sin. Sins are ubiquitous, unless only certain ones count. Still great story.