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Absolutely adore your videos and you have an awesome personality, it just sparkles through all your stuff and it makes the good advice all the more interesting.
Don't know if it's in the works or not, but a video centered around writing a Why Transfer essay for Community College and other transfer students would be super useful. Some things I'd love to have answered would be like, should the why transfer essay be more memoristic, or straightforward with its reasoning? How in detail should the essay be on reasons to tranfer to that school in particular if that the school also has a why us essay?
These are excellent questions! Why transfer essays are quite different from regular common apps -- the main essay should be about what the applicant did in the last 6-12 months, and if possible, feature tangible real-world experience (ie a job, internship, volunteering, etc.). The supplemental essays specific to each college also need to be incredibly well-researched (think at least 20 hours per school) and offer a bulletproof case as to why xyz school is the best possible fit for the applicant to study what they want! In the past, we've definitely helped kids transfer from state schools/community colleges to Ivies, but it is a much harder game.
Thank you so much for this series! I was able to get into Princeton with a full ride under Quest Bridge and I literally can't thank you enough for the awesome advice that you've given in these videos!
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Thanks for the video! A video on CMU would be so helpful next! Also, I've seen some sources online recommend using the same idea / same essay for multiple supplementals that are similar but from different schools . Do you think this is a good idea? I feel like it's not gonna be a good idea because when you use the same idea you basically lose the nuances of the values of each individual school so the essays aren't nearly as effective (even if you save time by doing this)
Hello THAKNK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS YOU GUYS R SO UNDERRATED. Btw, I was wondering if you could make one for UMD in 2024 (University Maryland College Park). I know it's not as prestigious as the ivy leagues, but I also need to maximize my chances for non high-reach schools that I'd be happy to get accepted in tysmm 😭🙏
In total, our team has edited more than 7000+ college essays and helped hundreds of seniors from around the world gain more than 600+ acceptances to top 20 schools. If you’d like your Princeton essays professionally edited, we’d be honored to help!
Visit: www.elevated.school/editmyessay
Where our students got in: www.elevated.school/2024results
Watching this AFTER I got in to see how my essays correlate with advice lol
Quick appreciation: How precise and informatively engaging you make these videos is truly commendable. Thank you. Can you make Harvard next??
Yes!
As a parent who did not go through college application process in the U.S., I have learned a lot from your channel. Much appreciated, Captain Kevin!
So glad to hear it!! Thank you!!
Absolutely adore your videos and you have an awesome personality, it just sparkles through all your stuff and it makes the good advice all the more interesting.
100% agree with you. Kevin is an incredible college counselor 🔥
Don't know if it's in the works or not, but a video centered around writing a Why Transfer essay for Community College and other transfer students would be super useful. Some things I'd love to have answered would be like, should the why transfer essay be more memoristic, or straightforward with its reasoning? How in detail should the essay be on reasons to tranfer to that school in particular if that the school also has a why us essay?
These are excellent questions! Why transfer essays are quite different from regular common apps -- the main essay should be about what the applicant did in the last 6-12 months, and if possible, feature tangible real-world experience (ie a job, internship, volunteering, etc.). The supplemental essays specific to each college also need to be incredibly well-researched (think at least 20 hours per school) and offer a bulletproof case as to why xyz school is the best possible fit for the applicant to study what they want! In the past, we've definitely helped kids transfer from state schools/community colleges to Ivies, but it is a much harder game.
Thank you so much. Was waiting for this since you started the series 😭😭. Can't thank you enough.
Thank you so much for this series! I was able to get into Princeton with a full ride under Quest Bridge and I literally can't thank you enough for the awesome advice that you've given in these videos!
Oh my goodness, that’s amazing John!! Congrats brother! So glad I could play a small role in your journey! 😇
thank youuu again your videos are great and engaging
Glad you like them! We make them for you Abigail!
Could you do a video on the Claremont colleges? 🙏rlly appreciate ur help ur page is so helpful!!
Wish me luck just applied for REA🙏
This video is the best. Thanks so much Mr Kelvin
You're welcome!!
I would love to have the opportunity to have you review my essay later this fall! Keep up the great content!
Please email it to essay.portal@elevated.school ! :)
I’ve been bugging you for so long and it’s finally here yay🤗🤗🥰
You are featured in the first 5 seconds hahaha
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Can you make a video on the Duke essay(s)? Considering there’s not much supplemental writing, I wanna perfect my essays.
Northwestern, Wellesley, & Bowdoin would be so helpful
We'll work on it!
Bowdoin offers first year completely free to international students, right?
Thanks for the video! A video on CMU would be so helpful next!
Also, I've seen some sources online recommend using the same idea / same essay for multiple supplementals that are similar but from different schools . Do you think this is a good idea? I feel like it's not gonna be a good idea because when you use the same idea you basically lose the nuances of the values of each individual school so the essays aren't nearly as effective (even if you save time by doing this)
Tuftsss pleaseeee
Looks like i might need to grind service hours since I literally have no life outside of school except for piano and soccer 😭
I think piano and soccer would blend together beautifully
Can you do Georgia Tech please 🙏🙏
PLEASE RICEEE 🙏🏽🙏🏽
We'll work on it Noah!
YESSSS !!!!
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What do I do if my common app personal essay is exactly centered around service and communication 😭😭😭 do I repeat my story?
Just write about a different service and comms story for Princeton! You probably volunteer with more than one org~
is it more difficult to get into Princeton being an international student??
Yep
AAAHHHHHHH YESSS finally 🎉
NYU plsssss
Too COLD. I'm Absolutely loving these.
Glad you enjoy them!
Hello THAKNK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS YOU GUYS R SO UNDERRATED.
Btw, I was wondering if you could make one for UMD in 2024 (University Maryland College Park). I know it's not as prestigious as the ivy leagues, but I also need to maximize my chances for non high-reach schools that I'd be happy to get accepted in tysmm 😭🙏
yo chico
Vanderbilt maybe???