Shark Tank Pakistan ..for the next season Please work on your editing ..hire better editing team, honestly it become so confusing at time for the us viewers ..i dont think the editing even watches the full pitch themselves ..just edit it down to 12 minutes randomly ..very lazy editing job.
Agreed! They haven't shown the product once after their initial pitch and woh bhi sahi say nazar nahin aya. Atleast show the product properly, pata hee nahin kis cheez main invest karahay hain.
I think India's Shark tank Show is better than Pakistan's Shark Tank Show because whatever product is presented in India's Shark Tank Show, they show it to the public and explain it well, but that's not the case in Pakistan.
oky I'm a student nd i watch sharktank but i don't know reason... but when i see such cmnts of educated (entrepreneur) , I wonder why Pakistan is still developing country😮😊
It’s a very basic device that controls the ignitor based on water temperature. Price is high because of un-necessary add ons like wifi and SNMP application. Any Geyser manufacturer will eat them as Junaid Iqbal said. Also ip rating should be at-least IP65 since is most cases geysers installed in outdoor areas. No product documentation available on the website.
To be honest ye bhut hi outdated product h gas automatic geyser😅...electric ke tarf ja rhi h duniya ...india mein to har jgh electric hi h....dun know abt pakistan
Anyone using solar power, would prefer an electric semi instant geyser with water tank, and a Rs. 3500 smart wifi switch, that does exactly the same job, which they are offering for Rs. 25,000. An electric geyser of 50L will cost no more than Rs. 36k. But yes if anyone needs to convert existing gas geysers to smart ones, they could buy this device, however the cost seems high. I am not impressed with the demo of product, it needs a lot of improvement.
Sara copy hai, ek veeneta ki copy baitaya hai, ek aman ki copy, and dialogue bhi inke normal hai copy wale, businesses ke dialogue ke liye business ki knowledge honi chahie, joki in bhikaristan ke pass hai nhi.
Jo product le kar araha hain uska ad tu banao tah ke uska faida tu ho. Sharks immediately question ask karahe hain aur pitches ko bolne ka moka nhi derahe hain wo apne marketing na karein aur editing main sound effect to daloo basic editing lack hain
shark tank pakistan mei sharks mei competition hona zarori hai ye apas mei hi mil jate hai jis waja se wo connection nai ban pa rha shark tank pakistan improvement kre thoda search kr k aur jo dosra shrk tank hai use dekhe aur sikhe (samjh tu gaye honge kaun sa shark tank) aur editing mei bht missing hai aur kam se kam ek pitch 15 16 mint le jaye ye mere opinion hai mei ne jo dekha hai us hisb se hm bht piche hai sorry
at 10.03 they even forget to remove a blurred rectangle. i am an editor myself and used to do these mistakes at start So I'm pretty sure they have hired a fiverr freelancer or an internee for this work
until 0.25 background music is interrupting the voice of host, low it and use some happy music. 0.27 during water bubble transition there is an uneasy jerk, need to make it smooth 0.54 the focus should be on entrepreneur to increase more focus on pitch, stop showing shark faces at that, use some curiosity like music 1.10 don't show entrepreneur show product demo and give more time to product details or you can request it from the founder. 1.50 bhai entrepreneur pitch dy raha hy usko dikhao kion bar bar shark ki shaklein dikha ra hy agr sharks koi unusual expressions den to phir daalna unko r y music thor sa low rkh dy ya phir voice onchi kr dy
It's sad to see that no actual product display only handful ao far have presented the actual products. It feels like everything is fictitious as there is no physical or virtual display. Moreover, there is a lot of lack of clarity for pitches. Judges lack enthusiasm in their behavior and offers rejection comes with rudesness rather than a motivation for pitchers.
Business Model is not explained properly to the audience n sharks jumping to invest....its important for layman audience that business dynamics explained.
@green entertainment very bad editing . Poor editing is the reason why this show is not getting recognised in Pakistan.please improve the editing for next season.
Electric geyser aur stove hy but un ki cost boht zada hy electric stove 1.5 2 ton jtni bijli consume karta hy agar solar panel install hu phir bhetar rahi ga 2500 watt utilize hy stove ki
Shark Tank Pakistan ..for the next season Please work on your editing ..hire better editing team, honestly it become so confusing at time for the us viewers ..i dont think the editing even watches the full pitch themselves ..just edit it down to 12 minutes randomly ..very lazy editing job.
So true
Background music has no logic
agreed
no story line
no business demo
editing team should watch one shark tank india episode
Absolutely, no demo no costing very bad editing
Agreed! They haven't shown the product once after their initial pitch and woh bhi sahi say nazar nahin aya. Atleast show the product properly, pata hee nahin kis cheez main invest karahay hain.
I think India's Shark tank Show is better than Pakistan's Shark Tank Show because whatever product is presented in India's Shark Tank Show, they show it to the public and explain it well, but that's not the case in Pakistan.
This entrepreneur is smart! And i feel he doesn't get afraid of taking risk. It will be a worth watching journey of this brand
Thankyou for this vote of confidence!
@MrAshrot arayyy buddy! The pitch and your answers were exact to the point. Unicorn ban k business training zroor dena hum ko
It's hard to trust any Pakistani, especially Muslims.
Rabeel Warraich & Aleena are only to say Good Luck.job done
dont promote hate Aleena hn Rabeel bhai ne bhi deals ki hn
dil garden garden hogya. what a beautiful pitch of a promising proudct. good negotiation and a good deal.
Shan was my class fellow in Uni. He is very technically sound and a very genuine person. I wish him success in his journey!
Ma Shaa ALLAH ❤
oky I'm a student nd i watch sharktank but i don't know reason...
but when i see such cmnts of educated (entrepreneur) , I wonder why Pakistan is still developing country😮😊
We don't want Alena
FR
Same
I highly appreciate this kind of show presenting on our TVs BigThanks Green TV wonderful initiative 🙏🙏.
Ms, Aleena On Every Deal. Out Hony Kay Liya Aati Hain Bus 🤭✌🏻
Bruh she is there for nothing...
@IbnKashif ahooo
she doesn't have the money. she is here just to fill the space of an absent investor
We have Namita, you have Aleena for any reason they are out as always 😂
Very nice pitch and negotiation, boys 👏👏👏👏
Thanks man!
Love the negotiation skills of the CEO.
When you order Shark Tank from Daraz. Na product ka demo, na Product ki costing, na expenses.
Iss banday se khud abhi tak proper product ki video nai bani for his social media
@@yassal426 acha?
Script hai be converted 😂
Keep shining Pakistan ❤
I have known Ashar for a while. He is a good bet to take. They hit the founder jackpot.
Thaankyou Amirah! :)
Asher Ka confidence 🙌👍
I know Ashar personally and since long. He is a very intelligent and smart person. Wish them very best of luck!
3:21- He's asking question about Net and Gross Margin but explained about Net Profit 😂😂
I don't know लेकिन ये क्रॉम्पटन जैसा लग रहा , जिसके add आ रहे काफी समय से 😷 हालांकि वो बिजली पर है और ये gas पर
Very Nice Pitch
👍👍👍
Best of luck for the owners !!!
These Pakistani sharks are actually Dolphins.so kind and well mannered than the original sharks elsewhere.❤👍
It’s a very basic device that controls the ignitor based on water temperature. Price is high because of un-necessary add ons like wifi and SNMP application. Any Geyser manufacturer will eat them as Junaid Iqbal said.
Also ip rating should be at-least IP65 since is most cases geysers installed in outdoor areas. No product documentation available on the website.
Geyser is cheap
Nasgas has already launched a smart geyser.
Yes price must not be more than 10k PKR
Thanks green entertainment for means full content ❤❤
Kamal Confidence hai banday me.
Is there someone to pitch his Editing Skills ? Shark Tank Pakistan needs an Editor who must not be deaf
At least it is far better than shark tank BD
Well done Ashar!
Great Show
CEO is having Real Entrepreneurial Skills
Faisal ,usman and Junaid seems legit
Excitement always rises whenever Usman is there
MashaAllah congratulations shan
Great negotiation
To be honest ye bhut hi outdated product h gas automatic geyser😅...electric ke tarf ja rhi h duniya ...india mein to har jgh electric hi h....dun know abt pakistan
❤❤ nice negotiations skills ❤
Very very sweet show
What a SHOW 👏 Everything is getting better and better MashaAllah ❤️
Kya saary episode eik he din record kardiye thy same dresses of sharks as well as the host 😂😂
Very very sweet All jajis 🇵🇰🇵🇰🇦🇪 mashallha gg mashallha
Awesome Ashar!
very good pitch
Koi sacha musalman mere ko batayege, loan lena haram hai ya nahi?
Anyone using solar power, would prefer an electric semi instant geyser with water tank, and a Rs. 3500 smart wifi switch, that does exactly the same job, which they are offering for Rs. 25,000. An electric geyser of 50L will cost no more than Rs. 36k. But yes if anyone needs to convert existing gas geysers to smart ones, they could buy this device, however the cost seems high.
I am not impressed with the demo of product, it needs a lot of improvement.
اوہ بھائی بہت زبردست ایڈیٹنگ ہے. بلکل ٹو دی پوائنٹ. فضول کی چیزیں مت ایڈ کریں ویڈیو لمبی اور بدمزہ ہو جائے گی
Aoa usman bhi good shark
Session 2 bhi chaye green entertainment
i dont think its a good negotiation in that deal but i think it become better with some changes
Kesy yr 20% apni company ka log dy dyty hain wo bhe cheap rates k uper 😅😅😅😅 Pakistan 1 cr sy kuch nh hotaaa aj kall
Sharks want very high return 25 to 30%.
Product se zada pitches per focus hota shark tank per ... If your are not giving them good offers, at least provide them marketing.
Ye kya bekar shark tank h 😂india ka isse bhut acha h ...yaha to scripted lg ra h. ..product ke bare me kuch btaya hi nhi...itni tarti editing😂
Sara copy hai, ek veeneta ki copy baitaya hai, ek aman ki copy, and dialogue bhi inke normal hai copy wale, businesses ke dialogue ke liye business ki knowledge honi chahie, joki in bhikaristan ke pass hai nhi.
have someone ever seen aleena investing?
We want Ms. Aleena out in the next season
Yaar inka kapra he change karwa do 😂
When he says zabrdast Enterpreneur hu ap be ❤ 10:18
By watching this I don't know what the product is and how it works just look at shark tank india or other
True hope next season will improve
royalty kyu badhaya 😮, par fir bhi 20% equity and 10% royalty bhai bhai 😅 ye kya kamayege.
I think they deliberately don't show the demo because they don't want other competitors to ditto the product.
Aleena and rabeel never ever give a deal.Only usman and junaid feel like sharks.
Jo product le kar araha hain uska ad tu banao tah ke uska faida tu ho. Sharks immediately question ask karahe hain aur pitches ko bolne ka moka nhi derahe hain wo apne marketing na karein aur editing main sound effect to daloo basic editing lack hain
shark tank pakistan mei sharks mei competition hona zarori hai ye apas mei hi mil jate hai jis waja se wo connection nai ban pa rha shark tank pakistan improvement kre thoda search kr k aur jo dosra shrk tank hai use dekhe aur sikhe (samjh tu gaye honge kaun sa shark tank) aur editing mei bht missing hai aur kam se kam ek pitch 15 16 mint le jaye ye mere opinion hai mei ne jo dekha hai us hisb se hm bht piche hai sorry
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at 10.03 they even forget to remove a blurred rectangle.
i am an editor myself and used to do these mistakes at start
So I'm pretty sure they have hired a fiverr freelancer or an internee for this work
until 0.25 background music is interrupting the voice of host, low it and use some happy music.
0.27 during water bubble transition there is an uneasy jerk, need to make it smooth
0.54 the focus should be on entrepreneur to increase more focus on pitch, stop showing shark faces at that, use some curiosity like music
1.10 don't show entrepreneur show product demo and give more time to product details or you can request it from the founder.
1.50 bhai entrepreneur pitch dy raha hy usko dikhao kion bar bar shark ki shaklein dikha ra hy
agr sharks koi unusual expressions den to phir daalna unko
r y music thor sa low rkh dy ya phir voice onchi kr dy
Happy to see sir Usman ... it automatically becomes my favorite episode...
Product toh show hi nahi kya
Script hai be 😂
Next season please shuffle sharks and brings some real VCs these don't have any exposure specially female ones see their linkedin accounts.
Yarw 😢mai ny bhi jana hai shark tank Pakistan
Kya product hai apki
Now they are asking for royalty on every pitch almost. Why aren't sharks taking risk
Please also show products in Picthes
Electric geyser ayega toh kon puchega isko? Pakistan me electric heaters nahi?
Consumption cost is higher than gas geyser
can someone tell me the designer Rommana is wearing?
product ka proper demo to detay
shark tank ya jo funds lana a rahai ha aur jo in ki ask ha is ka mutabik valuation banti ha wo bhi bata dya karn shukriya
Sharks are being greedy now don't wanna take some risk by putting royalty on the every deals
Sharam ni ati 20 ya 25% equity mangty howe in logo ko 10% royalty 🤣
Pura ka pura copy kr liya 😂
Abe shark tank American show hai
@U_Y_S music bhi India se chori kar liya 🤣
Very poor, at least sharks should learn how to be a shark by watching shark tank US or India. Its random, no sequence at all.
Pak in crisis in 3years no pak left 75% inflation
they still in hope
Auto geysers tou already hain pakistan mein
Everything always exist at some level. Problem is not already, but present your product and enjoy the profit, that's business......
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wao I think they all dont know the instant geazer tech kind of thing all what kind of
Gas to aati he nahi to start kese hoga.
It's sad to see that no actual product display only handful ao far have presented the actual products. It feels like everything is fictitious as there is no physical or virtual display. Moreover, there is a lot of lack of clarity for pitches. Judges lack enthusiasm in their behavior and offers rejection comes with rudesness rather than a motivation for pitchers.
Please in next season improve your editing
Business Model is not explained properly to the audience n sharks jumping to invest....its important for layman audience that business dynamics explained.
Har episode mai ek hi dress bhae change to krwa leth
Y sharks are wearing same clothes since last 3 episodes?
@green entertainment very bad editing .
Poor editing is the reason why this show is not getting recognised in Pakistan.please improve the editing for next season.
👍🏻
🦈 tanker
Editor please include the product demo
Editor change krlo bhai
I don't know why sharks r not changing their clothes
Product information has been edited. Bad job by the editors of shark tank. Poor production. Third class editors. Employ some educated people to edit.
Pooray shark tank me product pe bat he Nahi Hoti na product pe koi discussion Hoti .
Inn judges KO business k numbers he pata heñ buss .
Product review
Pakistan mein Electric geysers nahi h kya?
He bhi
Consumption cost is higher than gas geyser!
Electric geyser aur stove hy but un ki cost boht zada hy electric stove 1.5 2 ton jtni bijli consume karta hy agar solar panel install hu phir bhetar rahi ga 2500 watt utilize hy stove ki
All companies are making these types of Geysars.. No such new device
Product kidr hai? Product dikhaty nhi ajeeb pagal log ho
Tnx for 13 Subscriber😢
Aleyna Nadeem = Namita Thapar