When I heard the car engine start before the scene even changed, I was like: "RIGHT. Smart! Finally, a horror movie character who has seen a single horror movie before."
I was like this movie needs a reward for finally making someone think like a normal human, ofcourse you leave with the car, not a single human would stay
She should not be rewarded for leaving her brother (whom she "loved" so much) hung out to dry. She's a self serving c-word. The kind who usually gets killed about mid-way through a movie. The kind that closes the door on someone right behind her leaving that person to die needlessly.
@@DNTMEE unfairness what you seriously exspect her to do stay you might be brave and she could contact her brother afterwards I wouldn't blame her for running don't make it out you wouldn't do the same
I'm going to need him to pay his sister a visit so she can meet their new sibling lmao I can't believe she took off without calling him! She could have at least warned him not to go!
Thx u collin she did run off and leave phone..that's why there was the same music playing in the attic when brother got there..even if there was a pay phone it couldn't help because since the cell 📲 came out we don't depend on trying to remember numbers we let the phone do all that....so he's fucked.she came on plane then drove but she showed up to the 🏠 anyway...he had a meeting then drove to where he lives and wanna complain...when he should of went straight to where his sister was...so he really fucked his self......
On the adoption papers... isn't that a screen shot of Samara sitting in the observation room in the hospital during that tape of her interview in The Ring? And... is that a Momo mask?
very nicely done. The only criticisms I could have are down to technical limitations. The script is again spot on, and the dialogue shines. The timing was great, and the shower scene was an almost perfect blend of jump-scare and mounting tension for the protagonist. *Very* nicely edited. I really felt it. Btw..whoever designed that mask did a bloody good job - it's great for long to medium shots - creepy as hell! But the acting from Kylie..? - wow. She's really coming along, and is deffo showing a lot of talent. A *lot* of talent. Your directing of her really played to her strengths, and I envision a good acting future for her if she continues her trend. You two certainly make a good team. If I had anything to suggest re the acting, it would be to propose that she plonks herself down in front of a mirror to build on her natural ability by 'acting to camera' until she feels more sure of herself and her skills,. When you get your hands on some expensive equipment and a decent crew, you'll be unstoppable. Until then pls keep cutting your teeth on all the filming you can do. The progression is unmistakeable, especially re the cinematography.
First horror I’ve actually watched, and instead of hiding under a doona, or somewhere even more ridiculous... she did the bolt, straight out of there, engine on, and pi**ed off. Touché👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Would have been nice to give her brother the heads up though🤷🏻♀️ I just assumed she’d driven to his house, and they’d go back together in the morning. Well?! Wasn’t I way off!! So, will there be a follow up, to see where the sister took off to?🤷🏻♀️and if the brother is still awaiting that door to be reopened? Surely there’d be someway to open it from inside? I am all for seeing people pursue their dream(s). But there’s acting 🎭 and then there is overacting. The latter, had a "don't give up your day job(s)", kinda feel to it.
Not certain you saw that his "sister" decided to hang out with her bro in the attic at the end/last few seconds of the video..😱😱😱 I'm not so sure big bro's waiting for his REAL sis to return & let him out of the attic... However, I will say I loved that the "unadopted/adopted" sister decided to hang out with her bro in the attic. .but I DO feel as tho she SHOULD have intro'd herself properly, 🤷maybe they'd be best buds rn!🤷😁😜😂🤣👏👏👏👏
Why didn’t she call her brother once she took off? Well at least she had the sense to leave, which is more than I can say for most of the characters in horror flicks!,........Not a bad short but if the adoptive daughter was made to look a little more realistic, the movie would have been scarier.
Hunted house owners greatest tricks is try to sell the house at the lowest price after fixed it with very highest price to make it look like a good high level quality materials. It usually have high odor incense that most of if not all woman's and children easily to smell
The fall through adoption sister just wants to belong somewhere and have a family with a brother and a sister where she can call them that. Just recognize her and get her some sun because she is way too pale and needs vitamin D.
Oh, c’mon. A man of an average physique vs a slim girl looking like a little bit decorated strawman. I wonder who would win the battle, if that’s what‘s gonna happen
I'm sorry but why the hell didn't she ring her brother from a cafe/diner/gas station to warn him not to go to the house? The ending was bad, that mask looked terrible. I do like the idea but it's not done very well.
Like she runs off but doesn’t tell him there was someone in the house, but doesn’t call him to say so, and they’ll check it out together in the morning?
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I could barely hear the female actress, plus I noticed that the picture in the adoption picture in 5:15 was a still from "The Ring." It's Samara sitting in the mental institution.
The ending wasn’t even scary like I can see the mask and then why didn’t the sister come back this is just not scary I only jumped when I saw somebody touch her hand
🤔 ummm yeah it was ok. I’m sure with a bigger budget you could make a fantastic horror movie. But it was good, and I love that it was in NY.(upstate I’m guessing)
What shall I say... I know, the budget wasn't the largest. Besides that fact I don't judge that movie. Otherwise I didn't like the ending at all. U should've propably done some sort of plottwist or a better jumpscare. greetings
Who starts the shower, fully dressed? No one. In my house there would be no hot water left or someone who was actually ready to shower would jump in it. Stupid.
You know, these littles stories would be much spookier if people did not use those dum-ass masks. Those things are not scary and make it look like a joke. Otherwise the story is spooky.
I don’t want to be rude but the camera work is just messy like at the beginning the camera looked like somebody was recording with a phone and then it should be some producers working the camera I just don’t like the way it’s being filmed
When I heard the car engine start before the scene even changed, I was like: "RIGHT. Smart! Finally, a horror movie character who has seen a single horror movie before."
lmao true.......
I was like this movie needs a reward for finally making someone think like a normal human, ofcourse you leave with the car, not a single human would stay
She should not be rewarded for leaving her brother (whom she "loved" so much) hung out to dry. She's a self serving c-word. The kind who usually gets killed about mid-way through a movie. The kind that closes the door on someone right behind her leaving that person to die needlessly.
Lmao so true
@@DNTMEE unfairness what you seriously exspect her to do stay you might be brave and she could contact her brother afterwards I wouldn't blame her for running don't make it out you wouldn't do the same
I'm going to need him to pay his sister a visit so she can meet their new sibling lmao I can't believe she took off without calling him! She could have at least warned him not to go!
Right
She lost her phone to the... umm I’m guessing adopted sisters ghost, but I guess she could have used a pay phone or something
@@FadeTheUmbreon payphones don't exist anymore lol
Thx u collin she did run off and leave phone..that's why there was the same music playing in the attic when brother got there..even if there was a pay phone it couldn't help because since the cell 📲 came out we don't depend on trying to remember numbers we let the phone do all that....so he's fucked.she came on plane then drove but she showed up to the 🏠 anyway...he had a meeting then drove to where he lives and wanna complain...when he should of went straight to where his sister was...so he really fucked his self......
Her driving off waa so much more realistic!! Loved it!!!
The claustrophobia and acoustics combined made this! Well done 👍🏻
No, come ON GIRL, you know damn well you saw something looking at you out the window
Plot twist: the dad never came back becasue he went to get milk
I DONT BLAME HIM!!
@@RisingMC hahaha
Lol 😂
@@Crystal-jf4hz yeah
😂
"How does the house look?"
"It looks.....unlocked"
On the adoption papers... isn't that a screen shot of Samara sitting in the observation room in the hospital during that tape of her interview in The Ring? And... is that a Momo mask?
Good observation :)
@@joshuatwagner I spend too much time watching horror movies to not notice that sort of thing anymore. It's a blessing and a curse :P
hahahahahahah
there's always that one person that ruins the whole movie for everyone haha
The camera work in this was crazy good. Good job.
Well I'm officially creeped out. Nicely done.
holy SHIT, that ending scene was amazingly spooky! i really hope to see more horror from you, this was great!
I got shocked when I saw the white eyes from top of the window when the sister came back
Hahaha. Momo crunches on carrot. End scene.
She didn’t call her brother because her phone went missing lol
very nicely done. The only criticisms I could have are down to technical limitations.
The script is again spot on, and the dialogue shines. The timing was great, and the shower scene was an almost perfect blend of jump-scare and mounting tension for the protagonist. *Very* nicely edited. I really felt it. Btw..whoever designed that mask did a bloody good job - it's great for long to medium shots - creepy as hell!
But the acting from Kylie..? - wow. She's really coming along, and is deffo showing a lot of talent. A *lot* of talent.
Your directing of her really played to her strengths, and I envision a good acting future for her if she continues her trend.
You two certainly make a good team.
If I had anything to suggest re the acting, it would be to propose that she plonks herself down in front of a mirror to build on her natural ability by 'acting to camera' until she feels more sure of herself and her skills,.
When you get your hands on some expensive equipment and a decent crew, you'll be unstoppable. Until then pls keep cutting your teeth on all the filming you can do. The progression is unmistakeable, especially re the cinematography.
Thank you for the kind feedback
Rank so much typing but yes they did good
Very good! No heads up call from sister!
Well this is just great. I’m going full screen and it’s storming outside 😁👍
I REALLY wish there were subtitles in English or closed captioning....its tough to hear the young woman's dialogue.
Aww the hidden sister just wanted to take a shower. And the ending, her face was more sad than scary. Mommy's secret daughter. Good film but not scary
Well Done!
hell nah when she bit the carrot i dropped my chicken
My headcanon is that, after the brother gets his heart beating again, he and adopted Sis talk and he winds up welcoming her to the family.
The ghost was so funny😂😂😂
nice story i liked and subscribed keep it up best wishes for you
Why is the camera man shaking
Camera Operator by Shaggy Rogers with best boy Scooby Doo
I can’t believe she didn’t at least wait nearby to warn her brother.
I just love how satisfying the sounds of the walking and the sound of things being movedbut that also scares me .
This is a good one, job well done!
Lol why didn't she inform her bro that she was hightailing out of there 😅
She lost her phone in the bathroom scene
@@joshuatwagner If I encountered something that scary & my brother was going to be there the next day...I'd find SOME WAY to contact him!
Okay but WHY is she in her house in the complete darkness walking around the whole time? Turn on the fucking lights girl
She smart getting in the car and leaving
Great job 👏🏽😍 I loved it 😍👏🏽👏🏽 it should be a length movie 🍿
Glad you liked it!!
damn this one is really good at putting a chill down my spine 😂
story camera work everything was awesome
That looked like a puppet at the end.Immediately getting into her car and leaving was smart.She didn't tell her brother not to go to the house.🤦🤷😂
First horror I’ve actually watched, and instead of hiding under a doona, or somewhere even more ridiculous... she did the bolt, straight out of there, engine on, and pi**ed off.
Touché👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Would have been nice to give her brother the heads up though🤷🏻♀️
I just assumed she’d driven to his house, and they’d go back together in the morning.
Well?! Wasn’t I way off!!
So, will there be a follow up, to see where the sister took off to?🤷🏻♀️and if the brother is still awaiting that door to be reopened?
Surely there’d be someway to open it from inside?
I am all for seeing people pursue their dream(s).
But there’s acting 🎭 and then there is overacting.
The latter, had a "don't give up your day job(s)", kinda feel to it.
Not certain you saw that his "sister" decided to hang out with her bro in the attic at the end/last few seconds of the video..😱😱😱
I'm not so sure big bro's waiting for his REAL sis to return & let him out of the attic...
However, I will say I loved that the "unadopted/adopted" sister decided to hang out with her bro in the attic. .but I DO feel as tho she SHOULD have intro'd herself properly, 🤷maybe they'd be best buds rn!🤷😁😜😂🤣👏👏👏👏
I didn't know Michael Jackson made another horror short besides Thriller?
Now THAT was a damn good scary video😮👍👍
Girl gets TF outa there. First time someine acted logically in a horror film
*hides in comments*
Why didn’t she call her brother once she took off? Well at least she had the sense to leave, which is more than I can say for most of the characters in horror flicks!,........Not a bad short but if the adoptive daughter was made to look a little more realistic, the movie would have been scarier.
I like how the his sister got ghost at the first sign of trouble. 😆🤣
This is scaryyyy!! 😨😰😰
If he teases bc he loves her, my sister loves me WAY too much
Hunted house owners greatest tricks is try to sell the house at the lowest price after fixed it with very highest price to make it look like a good high level quality materials. It usually have high odor incense that most of if not all woman's and children easily to smell
The fall through adoption sister just wants to belong somewhere and have a family with a brother and a sister where she can call them that. Just recognize her and get her some sun because she is way too pale and needs vitamin D.
and her voice was way to deep, lol
Nice work's bro
Who never closes the door when they get in... Really
I don’t ?
Not in the burbs😆
My heart is still pounding. Really creepy film. Greak work you guys.
And yes the audio and camera angles were awesome.
Oh, c’mon. A man of an average physique vs a slim girl looking like a little bit decorated strawman. I wonder who would win the battle, if that’s what‘s gonna happen
good job guys!
Wth that was just a doll 😱😭
I wonder where did the sister go ?
I just want to say this was so amzing and fabolus 💜
I'm sorry but why the hell didn't she ring her brother from a cafe/diner/gas station to warn him not to go to the house? The ending was bad, that mask looked terrible. I do like the idea but it's not done very well.
just a waste of time.seriously
Like she runs off but doesn’t tell him there was someone in the house, but doesn’t call him to say so, and they’ll check it out together in the morning?
Hope oneday sis..❤️❤️🖤
Even after seeing it on the window she still entered
Seriously? That wasn't horror, just weird. I mean, sure, it had the creep factor, but the film was still more on the eerie side.
What did the thing say at the end?
Brother
i think that ghost is similar to momo so i think its momo its similar
hi sisters james charles here
Sister short honor film i like scary movies that's horrible and scary she's alone house by herself.
A weird way the sister didn't look scary at end she looked cute
Did anyone else notice that her strawberry disappeared from the ladder?
Uh, they were carrots!
She got on down🤣🤣
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Lmao the last scene 🤣🤣🤣🤣
What is the point of this?
okay a thing...the title of the movie are so terrifyng but sometimes when you watch its not what it looks like
but this one was scary
Not bad. But is she a killer? I feel like she just wants company.
7:26 "I was in here first!"
ANYWAYS ARE YOU SAVED JOSHUA T. WAGNER? HAVE YOU ACCEPT JESUS AS YOUR LORD AND SAVIOR AND RECEIVE ETERNAL LIFE I COULDN'T IMAGINE HEAVEN WITHOUT YOU YOU HAVE A GOD GIVING TALENT
You can bet there gonna be a bathroom faucet in the making
HEY SISTERS
I’m sorry but who sits their carrots on the attic stairs 😂😂
oh no no no no no not him in front of the window
she kinda look like MOMO 😅
At least the demon eats his veggies
Honestly I can't stop laughing 💀 when I saw that glost coz she lookz like a doll...is it a phantom?I don't think so .lmaoo😂🤣👻
Scary
i wanted to watch it by myself thanks for being there for me very much i do but I just wanted to be alone for little more hour
Well...i am scared
🔥👍🏻👍🏻
i really want to know the music in this video
Umm.. okay..?
Great
I could barely hear the female actress, plus I noticed that the picture in the adoption picture in 5:15 was a still from "The Ring." It's Samara sitting in the mental institution.
The ending wasn’t even scary like I can see the mask and then why didn’t the sister come back this is just not scary I only jumped when I saw somebody touch her hand
Next time adopt a 😺 !!!😊
I just want to find Zombie film, but i can't🤦🏼♀️
Do u know this girl She is the Kidshowing fierce in the film Exorcist
What was that 😳 thing made me jump abit
spooky
🤔 ummm yeah it was ok. I’m sure with a bigger budget you could make a fantastic horror movie. But it was good, and I love that it was in NY.(upstate I’m guessing)
What shall I say...
I know, the budget wasn't the largest.
Besides that fact I don't judge that movie.
Otherwise I didn't like the ending at all.
U should've propably done some sort of plottwist or a better jumpscare.
greetings
I expected a trailer a good one like a scary movie beug
7:40 creepy face
🙀🙀🙀🙀🙈🙈
Who starts the shower, fully dressed? No one. In my house there would be no hot water left or someone who was actually ready to shower would jump in it. Stupid.
Was that the momo face?
Molezu
hahaha yes a momo face with a disgusting plot
goosebumps really?
@James Charles okay then watch.. Siccin part 1&2 with Headphones
You know, these littles stories would be much spookier if people did not use those dum-ass masks. Those things are not scary and make it look like a joke. Otherwise the story is spooky.
No close caption 😱
I don’t want to be rude but the camera work is just messy like at the beginning the camera looked like somebody was recording with a phone and then it should be some producers working the camera I just don’t like the way it’s being filmed
It was shot on a phone. Thanks for the view sugar 😉
I think it’s done well. Many have opinions but couldn’t do it better.