Black and White | The Dreadnoughts (Shortened Cover/Test Run)

I've been wanting to experiment with trying out more proper Dreadnoughts stuff (in the twisted and dysfunctional style I've come to call my own). So, I dove right into the deep end with more from Foreign Skies.
This is an experiment, and I really don't know what I'm doing, so critique is welcome.
Enjoy!

[@sirdash7365]

:> great choice, thanks

[@artempovolnov3130]

whould be happy to hear the full cover