- i really like this video, the editing is nice but i can see you don't really write scripts so you end up stuttering a lot, taking that away its really perfect!
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I have a little personal internal struggle with that :D I write scripts for my tutorials and other videos, but for the showcases i kind of want to keep it more "real" if that makes sense? Like just bring across my emotions i have for this world and how i feel about it, rather than an objective review of it. On the other hand you're totally correct, i just say the same things very often, and also a lot of weird stuttering or something xD I mostly have problems on these "just pretty" worlds. They look good. I like the atmosphere. But I don't really know anything else i could say about it, other than telling a personal experience story about it. I thought that i maybe want to make a section where i group all of these "just pretty" worlds together, where i just note down the details and show a couple of nice shots of the worlds with music and no talking over it... If you have any cool ideas or suggestions, feel free to write! :D
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- i really like this video, the editing is nice but i can see you don't really write scripts so you end up stuttering a lot, taking that away its really perfect!
Thanks for the feedback!
Yeah I have a little personal internal struggle with that :D I write scripts for my tutorials and other videos, but for the showcases i kind of want to keep it more "real" if that makes sense? Like just bring across my emotions i have for this world and how i feel about it, rather than an objective review of it.
On the other hand you're totally correct, i just say the same things very often, and also a lot of weird stuttering or something xD
I mostly have problems on these "just pretty" worlds. They look good. I like the atmosphere. But I don't really know anything else i could say about it, other than telling a personal experience story about it.
I thought that i maybe want to make a section where i group all of these "just pretty" worlds together, where i just note down the details and show a couple of nice shots of the worlds with music and no talking over it...
If you have any cool ideas or suggestions, feel free to write! :D