I Made A Deal With A Demon

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  • Опубликовано: 30 окт 2024

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  • @efrainortiz1584
    @efrainortiz1584 2 года назад +44

    Thank you for reading this!

    • @kateg.1386
      @kateg.1386 2 года назад +4

      Great story!

    • @efrainortiz1584
      @efrainortiz1584 2 года назад +3

      Thank you:))

    • @Viidith22
      @Viidith22  2 года назад +5

      Thank you for allowing me to read it!

    • @MDSBock
      @MDSBock Год назад +2

      @@Viidith22 your one of my favourite narrator's with a great aggressive voice for sick ghost stories...

  • @mammon4694
    @mammon4694 2 года назад +78

    If I do say so myself, that demon is a pretty chill guy for keeping their promises. The MC wasted his opportunity to conceal his pale skin and horns by shapeshifting to his normal form, then he should've offer the souls of the three bullies giving the demon 3 souls instead of the promised 1.

    • @SkarlettRage
      @SkarlettRage Год назад +11

      Right?! This kid was lucky that he asked for *a soul* instead of *his soul*

    • @SlickSilent0987
      @SlickSilent0987 Год назад +9

      Literally this demon was legit asf he didnt even want larsons soul or his moms if u pay attention he was really after the bullies, he even openly expressed hatred for heartless people, honestly it seems more like a dark angel than a demon but when larson broke the deal he caught the backlash of not keeping your promise

    • @GrizzlyAdams024
      @GrizzlyAdams024 Год назад +4

      No matter Larson’s action, it was going to end badly for him. The deal will always end in the “Monkey’s Paw” fashion.
      This would be a great animated type feature,

    • @AGNOSTIC_incomprehensibleXIV
      @AGNOSTIC_incomprehensibleXIV 7 месяцев назад

      ​@@GrizzlyAdams024 How do you know? Has this specific creature appeared in other stories?

    • @AGNOSTIC_incomprehensibleXIV
      @AGNOSTIC_incomprehensibleXIV 7 месяцев назад +1

      I generally don't believe in infinite punishment for finite crimes but Vinny and those other two idiots (who were all too stupid to figure out it wasn't Larson they were dealing with) forced the protagonist into s bit of a self-defense situation and the minute the creature started making threats, just going ahead and honoring the deal (if only for self-preservation) should've been a no-brainer. He was even given a kind of 'demon rage' to assist him in compensating for his lack of sociopathic/psychopathic tendencies. Frankly, a better name for this story would be; 'Never BREAK a Deal with a Demon'. I've *LITERALLY* met police officers and lawyers more dishonest than this demon showed himself to be.

  • @rickmetz769
    @rickmetz769 7 месяцев назад +1

    Yep, glad to have heard this one, note to self, NEVER MAKE ANDEAL WITH A DEMON 😈
    GREAT STORY, quite graphic and frightening 😮

  • @millacentbystander2992
    @millacentbystander2992 2 года назад +18

    Such a ferociously narrated story yet again well done!
    Some find it hard to imagine such pain inflicted on others, understandably so.
    Yet the lifelong pain inflicted by bullies that cause trauma so deep seeded that the people there victims where supposed to be in life, no longer are able to grow into existence.
    Bully eaters walk this earth make no mistake, there evil is necessary to keep the balance.
    Corralled only by the love and compassion they feel for the victims they themselves once where.
    If fear is a bullies bread and butter, why not indulge?
    A misunderstood yet wise man once said; "If you allow someone everything they could ever desire, they'll kill themselves with it".
    There is message to be learned from the desire to feed off others pain.
    It's only a matter of time until you are shown the error of your ways and burst from hedonistic gluttony.!
    Excellent story my friend. Masterfully done!.

    • @sheldonshniklefritz95
      @sheldonshniklefritz95 2 года назад +2

      Bully eater I like that name, your right though they exist I don't think I'm evil though. Just very protective of those that need it. And very competent

    • @millacentbystander2992
      @millacentbystander2992 2 года назад +2

      @@sheldonshniklefritz95 Thank you. It's an adopted philosophy, unfortunately we, well some of us have the Truth laid on us like a collapsed cathedral. For the ones who have managed to live through that and pulled themselves from the carnage that is the human condition. Develop a let's say side affect from said revealed truth.
      It's one of the truths in life that no one wants to even even acknowledge much less believe.
      And that truth is this
      Some men will only respond to great violence.
      Really scary part is imagining the level you have to take it to stop men like that.
      And there the good guys.
      It's unfortunate but trust me it's real.

    • @askiabattle3678
      @askiabattle3678 2 года назад +1

      @@millacentbystander2992 just imagine if the bullies would have just left him alone. This is how it started with Columbine. The angry and rage goes beyond human comprehension. Something that you would never understand unless you were put in that position with bullies attacking you daily. Sweet revenge for some taste so good. It's Very seductive and addictive it overflows like the sweet nectar of honey. Basically feeling pleasure out of the pain that you are afflicting on your enemy. Know one is truly good but GOD. This is simply the human sinful nature that occurs if you hurt me I hurt you worse this is why we need God's nature to overcome. It was wrong for him to kill them but he was giving them back what they created.

    • @askiabattle3678
      @askiabattle3678 2 года назад +1

      @@millacentbystander2992 sad but true it's real

  • @angelaverbowski995
    @angelaverbowski995 2 года назад +15

    #241-✅👍🏻
    This story reminded me of WHY children hate school and knowledge of the way things could be IF bullies weren't an issue, the heights our brains/ souls could reach!

    • @nerdforceone5129
      @nerdforceone5129 2 года назад

      If teachers would teach real things that would help too. Anymore public school is a joke, the spend more time on "feelings" and gender then they do on real things like math, reading, writing, science. Public Schools have the lowest literacy rates ever. Imagine if all kids went to private school.

    • @Arekusandaa13
      @Arekusandaa13 2 года назад

      This is why school shootings happen. If they really want to prevent school shootings, they would crack down on bullying hard like really hard.

    • @Triforcebro
      @Triforcebro Год назад

      They aren't an issue. Only an issue to those that don't want to help themselves

    • @mrdark9916
      @mrdark9916 Год назад

      The issue is weak parents raising weak children and allowing them to be preyed upon, and then acting as if it's not to be expected...
      It is your parents job, specifically your father's job to teach you how to protect yourself, and give you a strong moral and religious set of values....

    • @mewan5360
      @mewan5360 Год назад +3

      ​@@Triforcebro the problem is the school system. I got suspended for hitting the guy that bullied me, sure he never bullied me again but did I deserve the suspension? Fuck no

  • @tomatoknuckles
    @tomatoknuckles 2 года назад +19

    Nothing more i detest in this world than bullies. Quite enjoyed how he handled these haha. Brilliant narration as always man. 👏

    • @stepbackdeuce1062
      @stepbackdeuce1062 Год назад

      and then that long arm of the law wants to prolong the suffering of a severely bullied perpetrator by incarcerating them because “those bullies were young too” “they came from an abusive household” blah blah fuckin blah. no, a bully is old enough to know EXACTLY what they’re doing and no matter what you come from you have the choice to continue or break the cycle. a bully is just as miserable as their pos parents and they should all be put down as such:)

    • @Triforcebro
      @Triforcebro Год назад +1

      @@stepbackdeuce1062 and these kids being bullied know how to help their problems but never do it. They just hide behind whoever will listen instead of helping themselves become stronger and more confident. Not all bullied kids but most.

  • @winstonwins1096
    @winstonwins1096 2 года назад +37

    Thank you for doing what you do. It so nice to bow out of this mundane, miserable, wretched existence from time to time and listen to a good yarn. My thanks to the writer as well.

    • @lukaCOOKIE
      @lukaCOOKIE 2 года назад +6

      Sending Positive vibes

    • @efrainortiz1584
      @efrainortiz1584 2 года назад +4

      Thank you for enjoying

    • @tomatoknuckles
      @tomatoknuckles 2 года назад +5

      Couldn't have said it better. Wishing better times ahead for you man 👊

    • @General_Tso762
      @General_Tso762 2 года назад +6

      Dude wtf? Get a motorcycle no matter what it takes! Then go camping somewhere far away from where you live on your motorcycle. Live dude!

    • @Viidith22
      @Viidith22  2 года назад +6

      Keep your head up, brother. There's good in this world. ❤

  • @AG-en5y
    @AG-en5y 2 года назад +8

    Brah he didn’t make sure the spooky mirror man wasn’t gonna take his soul. This kid is setting himself up for failure

  • @JabarisJourney
    @JabarisJourney 7 месяцев назад +1

    Wow this could’ve been a mini film or even a mini-docu series tbh 👏. As for the demon. The entity seemed to have held their end of the bargain. The main character allowed rage to domineer his sense of morality. Something I learned is , a lot of the times we are not as angry as we think. After things calm down, we are usually able to rationalize what happened and what we could have done differently. Demons seem to operate through their own moral code and abide by a different set of laws. Overall 9/10.

  • @dereks_island
    @dereks_island 2 года назад +11

    So I've been neck deep in creepypasta listening for about 11 years. In that time I've been listening to at least a few hours a day. I say this only to point out the fact I've heard tens of thousands of stories from hundreds of narrators. You're really good. It's always a pleasure to stumble upon hidden gems as your channel. Really appreciate your time and effort. Great job

  • @yurriebraun1398
    @yurriebraun1398 Год назад +2

    This is one of the best stories I've heard and closer to home than people think

  • @kateg.1386
    @kateg.1386 2 года назад +13

    If only he had gotten revenge himself he and his mom would still be alive. Wow... Great story!

  • @monstersaint
    @monstersaint 2 года назад +4

    Excellent! Your story choices are intelligent and insightful. Thank you.

  • @kenithlandis9994
    @kenithlandis9994 2 года назад +2

    Absolutely amazing stories, and by far the best audio! Thank you for your videos!

  • @teresabrewer4052
    @teresabrewer4052 2 года назад +15

    I love this story . I want stories from the demon perspective

  • @taqiyasir8086
    @taqiyasir8086 2 года назад +7

    I always look forward to new videos from you Mr. Viidith22, cheers for another gem

  • @relight6931
    @relight6931 Год назад +1

    I so fucking hate bullies.. But I got no pity for those that let others push them around.. Every man, women and even child is capable of defending himself/herself.. You don't hope for the best, you stay vigilant, and you strike first at first sign of malice.

  • @SultanFriendlyGuest
    @SultanFriendlyGuest 2 года назад +4

    The ending was kinda... Satisfying? I might have gotten sick in the head after years of horror narrations, but... I liked it!

  • @strongperson697
    @strongperson697 Год назад +1

    amazing story Teller

  • @truthbetold3994
    @truthbetold3994 2 года назад +1

    Really amazing story. The writing is top notch. Thank you.

  • @jacobthompson7403
    @jacobthompson7403 3 месяца назад

    I'm fairly new to your channel but bought in to get more from those channel. So well written and acted out. Truly a gem of content. Most of the stories are unique and look forwards to much more. Thank you much! Id love to see you create your own mythos with pantheon and different heroes/ villains in the same universe. You've already created most of the characters needed. Regardless great work.

  • @Red_Lanterns_Rage
    @Red_Lanterns_Rage 2 года назад +2

    can't say I feel sorry for bullies....I woulda just beat the hell out of em with those powers and offered vinnie up as the soul....
    so often people just aren't devious enough....not that I'm for pacts with devils or demons but when given power to right your wrongs I say use it or be used lol

  • @TheWorpler
    @TheWorpler 2 года назад +5

    I love the "deal with the devil" genre.

  • @sheldonshniklefritz95
    @sheldonshniklefritz95 2 года назад +3

    This is fantastic dear future listeners, your in for a real treat!

    • @FlatEarthOracle
      @FlatEarthOracle 2 месяца назад

      *you’re
      If YOU’RE going to use English at least learn the proper grammar. It’s not that hard.

  • @ThunderStruck15
    @ThunderStruck15 Год назад +1

    ...... I would absolutely be tempted to make a deal with the demon to have better sight and not have to use glasses anymore 😅🤓

  • @teddydog6229
    @teddydog6229 2 года назад +5

    Excellent Vidith ! I love these kind of stories especially when the demon is a wise-cracking sassmouth. Or an oozing and septic blob of vileness can be good too. Your narrating gets better with each upload. And funnier. First thing the guy does is get out of his car and use his puffer. You just know this guy is going to need demonic assistance whatever shape it takes. Pity about Vinnie. His personality lurches from friendly and witty repartee to brutal sadism so rapidly that he'd even perplex a demon but we shall see. One thing I'd love to hear is a story about an alpha bully with a lackey with a mind of his own. Just think how that'd upend the social order.
    Cool demon. Or Larsen has multiple personality disorder. Though it's easy for a creature with ram horns and the teeth of a Great White to tell a high school nerd to 'grow a pair'. An excellent twist on a familiar theme. I love the uncontrollable Jekyll and Hyde quality of the demons 'gift'.

    • @teddydog6229
      @teddydog6229 2 года назад +2

      What happens to Vinnie reminds me very much of a videotape a group of Liberian rebels made when the President they were rebelling against rather foolishly wandered into their camp. They scalped him with a broken beer bottle and sliced his ears off after the rebel chief (garlanded in a rather fetching necklace of hand grenades) shouts at him "I am a humanitarian but don't f-ck with me !" Why that line hasn't been appropriated by a writer I can't imagine. Then the sentence and scream that followed it which will haunt me forever - "This man won't talk ! Bring me his ear !" concluding in an act that even this demon didn't contemplate. The rebel leader actually eats the President's ear. Why did I watch this extended snuff film ? Well it was on RUclips so I could and secondly I'm crazy in the head. The only moral if there is one is if you become President don't be a raging d-ck or the day will come when someone eats your ears.

  • @lukaCOOKIE
    @lukaCOOKIE 2 года назад +12

    Bro your subscriber count is flying up. Congrats man you deserve it. ☺️

    • @Viidith22
      @Viidith22  2 года назад +2

      Thank you! I appreciate it fam!

  • @marcusgray2799
    @marcusgray2799 2 года назад +2

    I don't like bullies. I think bullies should have a horrible rest of their life.

  • @KarenJarrett-q1f
    @KarenJarrett-q1f 5 месяцев назад

    Fantastic this was terrific. Narration great and author was on point. Thank you ever so much !!!

  • @Soulsfromthevoid
    @Soulsfromthevoid 2 года назад +3

    Realistically... Vinny and his friends would be be arrested. In real life, three students doing all of that to another would be a big deal and I would bet money that Vinny would likely spend some time at a psyche hospital.

    • @Soulsfromthevoid
      @Soulsfromthevoid 2 года назад

      Star Quarterback or not... There is only so much leeway that kind of position gets you. Severe assault and battery is definitely not going to be in the confines of that leeway. The cops may be apologizing the whole time they are arresting him, but everything described here amounts to serious stalking, harassment, vandalism and destruction of property, they could charge all three of them with a felony for that kind of premeditated assault. And also, holding someone against their will. Yeah... Vinny's life would be over.

    • @SultanFriendlyGuest
      @SultanFriendlyGuest 2 года назад

      You live in a fantasy world then. This happens and it does so often.

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 2 года назад +2

    I'm gunna chill maybe hava puff 😎💨, thanks for keeping up the great work homie ✌🏻🐵

  • @tgames6922
    @tgames6922 2 года назад +1

    Another good reader for my sleep. Thanks you. 😎✌️

  • @oneenigma4u
    @oneenigma4u 2 года назад +3

    You know I've noticed people with no social skills. Tend to claim victimhood. If when the main character met the three football jocks. When the lead jock said hey what do we got here. If he would have replied I'm just the new guy. I'm taking it you guys at the stars of the football team. I would guarantee they would have responded with something like, hell yeah we are. You follow up with, why I can't wait to root for you guys on Friday night. By the way my name is,fill in your name. After they give their names. You you inquisit about which position they play. Egotistical people always love to talk about themselves. This would have made him instant friends. Because they would have viewed him as a new fan. And again egotistical people love fans. It's all about having the right social tools to navigate through a situation like this

    • @jamessmith-gf2vk
      @jamessmith-gf2vk 2 года назад

      Some people don't wanna be friends my response would have simply been "fuck off and die" then kept walking

    • @SultanFriendlyGuest
      @SultanFriendlyGuest 2 года назад

      Guys, we've found the bully!

    • @jamessmith-gf2vk
      @jamessmith-gf2vk 2 года назад

      @@SultanFriendlyGuest Found the weakling....while I don't necessarily agree with this guy's logic he does have a point about people who are socially inept being partly responsible for their own victimization the simple fact of the matter is if you don't stand up for yourself expect people who are predatory by nature to take advantage of you at some point

  • @joshlowe2233
    @joshlowe2233 2 года назад +1

    Getting picked on by bullies doesn't seem like a deal for eternal damnation type situation

  • @darrinbedenfield9626
    @darrinbedenfield9626 2 года назад +10

    It was hard for me to listen to this story because I suffered terribly at the hands of other people in the grade school that I was attending when I was a kid...but that said this was a good story,especially when the bullies were brutally killed!
    My only regret in this story is that Larson didn't take his revenge on the bullies and that he had to suffer an eternity for it,as if he hadn't already suffered enough!

  • @KaiserDragoon77
    @KaiserDragoon77 2 года назад +1

    Another glorious video brother! Gotta say, I felt for the narrator on this one.

  • @derrickbonsell
    @derrickbonsell 2 года назад +1

    Don't be a bully, you never know what you'll drive people to.

  • @kiliumearth4063
    @kiliumearth4063 2 года назад +1

    Subscribed. Badass narration 🤘

  • @ELKE-
    @ELKE- 2 года назад

    You always rocking Viidith22, even in my morning! Thank you for great video

  • @samuelvicinanza604
    @samuelvicinanza604 2 года назад

    Instant subscribe. Great voice for narration dude!

  • @RichardThrobbin
    @RichardThrobbin Год назад

    This is why you learn to defend yourself lol. Stereotype bullies hate that

  • @ChefBarry
    @ChefBarry 2 года назад +14

    Would love more stories with this demon in them

    • @tgames6922
      @tgames6922 2 года назад

      Same and the devil. Makes for food sleep. 😎

  • @wolfgangl8797
    @wolfgangl8797 Год назад

    He was literally stoked to try out his powers but somehow didn't even try to change the bargain or negotiate further because his nails and the start of horns?
    ...
    He also JUST SAID HE COULD SHAPESHIFT!
    smh

  • @mytwinsroc
    @mytwinsroc Год назад

    At this point of the story, the only thing I would feel on the ground is pain and anger, and a sense of revenge

  • @sueannwebster7036
    @sueannwebster7036 2 года назад +1

    You should have taken revenge give the Demon a soul then worry about your appearance later.🤦🏾‍♀️ But great narration.

  • @SilverUnderworld
    @SilverUnderworld 2 года назад +1

    This video! This voice! It’s just awesome!!

  • @JXCKERR
    @JXCKERR 5 месяцев назад

    ngl i laughed when at what the demon said when the boy decided to faint🤣

  • @g1rldraco7
    @g1rldraco7 2 года назад +8

    Is it wrong that I don't feel bad for the bullies?

  • @dougclarke6872
    @dougclarke6872 2 года назад +1

    Well done my brother 👏

  • @johnwesch5926
    @johnwesch5926 2 года назад +1

    Be gone demon, you have no power over me.

  • @krazychick7867
    @krazychick7867 Год назад

    The Moral of the story is "Don't make Deals With Devils Or Demons"!😱😱😱

  • @pixytorres3972
    @pixytorres3972 2 года назад +2

    Dame!! That was crazy

  • @therocket4444
    @therocket4444 2 года назад +1

    I stumbled across you maybe a week ago you are great 👍 👍your current subs don’t reflect your talents I’m excited to watch you grow from here this is coming from a person who watches very little tv 📺 and mostly listens to narrations your work is top tier stuff

  • @nikolapetrovic4814
    @nikolapetrovic4814 Год назад

    I was a loser my entire life, still am.
    No money, social anxiety, severe stuttering problem, orphan.
    Bullied in childhood and ridiculed in adulthood.
    I am 35 now, never had any friends or girlfriends or even sex.
    Wage slaving for 2 euro per hour in a factory, no car, living in an old pre ww2, 30 square meter apartment infested with black mold and roaches.
    If it were actually possible i would definitely make a deal with a demon, i don't give a shit about my "soul".
    I would give everything to experience a normal life, something billions of people take for granted.
    PS. i love your stories man

  • @Kaiju-Driver
    @Kaiju-Driver 2 года назад

    A nice solid story about the hubris of humanity good stuff

  • @ScullyPop
    @ScullyPop 2 года назад +1

    Such great channel art and narration.

  • @missmiagi2147
    @missmiagi2147 2 года назад +1

    Dayumm! lol That shit was bruuuutal as all hell!

  • @maryschiller6805
    @maryschiller6805 2 года назад +1

    WTF! More,more,more!! Great story, love your voice &tempo. But gawddamn to short!

  • @paulheller2636
    @paulheller2636 2 года назад +2

    First time listening. Luxurious voice. I want more. Sadly the modern US centric story with the Irish voice is a bit off, but might mesh with an immigrant.... Anyway, I've subscribed!

  • @Nick-Stewbreeze
    @Nick-Stewbreeze Год назад

    Interesting the demon came through the mirror, as if to imply that deep in all of us, always lies the strength to defend yourself. A deal with demons isn't necessary kids, you already possess the strength, just gotta dig it up.

  • @AGNOSTIC_incomprehensibleXIV
    @AGNOSTIC_incomprehensibleXIV 7 месяцев назад

    New name recommendation;
    *"Never BREAK a Deal with a Daemon"*

  • @bradforester3635
    @bradforester3635 2 года назад

    Whoa. First time listener. Your voice reminds me of how a creepy story should sound.Im digging it. Im going to subscribe and check you out.

  • @demonicaxeman7264
    @demonicaxeman7264 Год назад +1

    Awesome story. The threats from the demon about dragging Larson's soul into Hell to be burned was a terrifying remark. These kind of stories make me think what if the government has knowledge about demons and finds a way to broker a deal with these demons for a supernatural demonic weapon? That sounds like a cool story to write.

  • @mrdark9916
    @mrdark9916 Год назад

    "what happened to you, and where is your car"
    Don't worry about it mom...
    ROFL what a weak and pathetic excuse for a parent. Imagine allowing your child to take so much as a single step without telling you EXACTLY what the hell happened.
    The three boys who attacked my child would be in cuffs and be charged with every single thing I could possibly think of. And then their parents would be getting some nice thick stacks of papers from a lawyer for the massive amount of damage done to my child property (in this case a car, windshield, tires, keying the paint, that's several thousand dollars worth of damage. And they'd be paying me every single cent of it. Not to mention the amount of damage makes the crimes their children committed a FELONY crimes...
    I'd also throw in a little FIB saying they sexually assaulted my kid in the forest as well.
    I wouldn't rest until their lives and the lives of their parents were miserable and full of pain and regret.

  • @SugeDay74
    @SugeDay74 2 года назад

    Ah the good ole make the true good guy out to look the bad guy and make the reader/listener to feel sorry for the bad guy story.

  • @dhejhdjsdhsjhdjs7476
    @dhejhdjsdhsjhdjs7476 2 года назад

    Great video! Love these keep it up
    - UK

  • @neilburns448
    @neilburns448 Год назад

    I would get even and gladly offer the three bullies' souls as payment and a token of gratitude Excellent job

    • @DillSom
      @DillSom 9 месяцев назад

      😢❤

  • @strongperson697
    @strongperson697 Год назад

    somtimes you need demon on your side in this world

  • @rosastretz6545
    @rosastretz6545 2 года назад

    There has to be more to this story , it was really good , but there should be more of it

    • @efrainortiz1584
      @efrainortiz1584 2 года назад +1

      I could try to write a part 2

    • @rosastretz6545
      @rosastretz6545 2 года назад +1

      @@efrainortiz1584 yes please it would be greatly appreciated there is something about your stories , that even while I'm asleep they take me somewhere

  • @antmck316
    @antmck316 9 месяцев назад

    Thanks!

  • @SkarlettRage
    @SkarlettRage Год назад

    Shiiiid. This dude WASTED his opportunity! If I were him, I'd embrace this. Its not like he asked him to sell HIS soul. Or demanded a soul of someone he loved. He asked for A SOUL. And who's to say it was permanent?! A few demonic features popping up as a side effect of DEMONIC POWER was all it took for him to chicken out?! Just some horns? Grey eyes?! Some mood swings?! My guy, you can SHAPESHIFT AND MORE --Where do I sign up?!

  • @Demosthenes84
    @Demosthenes84 Год назад

    This is a world without police or repercussions. Those kids would have been in jail for 8 years because of the car and beating 🤣

    • @Demosthenes84
      @Demosthenes84 Год назад

      And that mom needs dcf called for not calling the cops when she saw her son beaten so bad without his car.

  • @animacustodis7516
    @animacustodis7516 2 года назад

    I would of just shapeshifted to how I like and killed all 3 with telekinesis.
    Edit: I was going to say something after thinking about it but I shouldn't and that's why I never get these offers.

  • @OU8Aspark
    @OU8Aspark 2 года назад

    Wow, that was a horrible demon.

  • @mytwinsroc
    @mytwinsroc Год назад

    You just did a collaboration with the Doctor…. Please do not go all political like he did democrats epublicans both buy shoes. We just want to come here to hear a good story and thank you. I love you for it.please don’t go political!

  • @herreaper09
    @herreaper09 2 года назад

    Love ❤️ ❤️❤️❤️ I did once upon a time. Love u!!!!!

  • @Acetyl53
    @Acetyl53 2 года назад

    The demon didn't torture them enough.

  • @gorchakovvs7750
    @gorchakovvs7750 2 года назад

    Aside from killing the mom, the demon did nothing wrong

  • @poobz3733
    @poobz3733 2 года назад

    Perfect ❣️❣️❣️❣️

  • @sethrowden816
    @sethrowden816 2 месяца назад

    Does anyone else think the demon kind of let them off kind of easy killing them so quickly?
    I mean if I'm a demon I'm going to do it a lot slower... just saying

  • @darthtaylor513
    @darthtaylor513 Год назад

    Was this written by a person in high school? Just asking because demon sounds like a NPC character I’d play in one of my DnD campaigns in high school.

  • @AkashicRecords-y9d
    @AkashicRecords-y9d 9 дней назад

    Is a true story? or entertainment!

  • @AG-en5y
    @AG-en5y 2 года назад +1

    🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

  • @DontrplytoMycomments
    @DontrplytoMycomments 3 месяца назад

    Im convinced that all these authors are weak virgins lol. No one gets these chances and immediately starts crying and bellowing. Not just this story but legit all of these stories

  • @DirtyMac5151
    @DirtyMac5151 2 месяца назад

    Golly, that almost made me regret my high school days all fun times I had inflicting cruelty on fellow classmates and teachers.

  • @Demosthenes84
    @Demosthenes84 Год назад

    The bullying in the beginning was a bit over exaggerated lol. Cool story but it was a bit much

  • @hamaxd3171
    @hamaxd3171 2 года назад

    i need someone to help me i want make a deal with a demon but idk how
    btw sorry for bad eng

  • @AbstractMexo
    @AbstractMexo 2 года назад

    😤

  • @AdrianJackson-n5l
    @AdrianJackson-n5l Год назад

    Fair warning to those who are as dumb as me...if you like the story as much as me.. dont read the comments the have spoilers in them 😢😅😂😂

  • @kathyjomorris9835
    @kathyjomorris9835 5 месяцев назад

    The father of lies

  • @huggiebearocpk
    @huggiebearocpk 9 месяцев назад

    So what happened next

  • @genevamariehallshortywitha5326
    @genevamariehallshortywitha5326 2 года назад

    Friend here

  • @northwestlife2794
    @northwestlife2794 Год назад

    I have a story I wrote I think you’d be great to narrate.

  • @marietepper724
    @marietepper724 2 месяца назад

    💙💚🖤

  • @norielsylvire
    @norielsylvire Год назад

    The way the demon dealt with the bullies is unimaginative, uninspired. I would have played with my food.
    I would have stalked them in the night, in the shape of slender man, and the shape of a bear, and the shape of a walking, grinning dog with human eyes.
    I would have turned off the lights in their shower, and turned into a disembodied, demonic face looking at them from one of the corners of their bathroom while they were nude, wet and cold in the shower. I would have turned the water into boiling steam for just a second, only to then shower them with freezing cold water. I would have just stared at them while they sleep, and recorded them, only to then send the video to their phone, with the message "See you soon, Vinny".
    I would have become invisible to everybody except him, and made it so that he could only see me via reflective surfaces, only to then be visible to him outside the reflective surfacess too. But only he could see me. I would have taken the most unimaginably horrid, gorey and traumatising shape I could. I would have turned into something that would have haunted his nightmares forever.
    I would have extended the psychological torture for years, and then, only after his mind was already a desolate ruin, fragmented and torn to shreds, never to recover again, only after the mind was broken I would have started the physical torture.
    In the end, I would have left him alive, but in a state that made him depend on others (lost a limb or two, maybe blind, maybe both), and I would have made sure some day the s*cker would end his own life, so that his soul would be shipped, nicely packaged, directly to the deepest voids of hell.

  • @johnanon658
    @johnanon658 Год назад

    Not a great story really, tho well performed, for sure

  • @Zamboni89
    @Zamboni89 2 года назад +1

    Bro the bullying needed to build up, no one gets all that bullying in one day. You rushed the story.

  • @kellycrozier246
    @kellycrozier246 Год назад

    Lame ending

  • @ryinewman7265
    @ryinewman7265 2 года назад

    Can't stand spineless cowards...can't finish the story...

  • @darrilmiller8167
    @darrilmiller8167 2 года назад

    Might be a good story but.