His videos are always so on point but this one I’m right there you with you. At 19min the high pitch music had me pause it. Still a good story so far tho!
Normally I have no complaints only praises but I really felt this time the music in the background really overshadowed the story. Was sharp tuned and drowned out the story.
I thought the opposite was the case, I thought it enhanced the story really well 😮 Interesting how much personal tastes affect the reception of such stuff
This is a really good story. The dynamic going on with the grandmother feels authentic and adds a whole layer to the story that most other stories just don't have.
It did seem authentic! Sometimes I feel that some creepypasta stories don't allow enough character development. Or the characters all seem too similar. This story did great and having clearly defined characters, which helped make the dynamic realistic.
@@blackvolumes you’re the only author I’ve ever mentioned as much regarding as well. There’s another dark somnium does too forget the name off hand that does the whole “western crossroads” universe that’s also amazing but you are to Mr Creeps what they are to DS
Awesome story for sure. I see a lot of people complaining about the background music being to loud, idk what other phones or devices have this feature but on my Motorola I can go into the sound settings and change my Dolby atoms settings to have more treble and less bass and it completely fixes that issue. Hope this helps some people!
Thumbnail Image- He played the game and didn't follow the rules. Now the game has become too real. Grandma's situation is sad. Props to MC for realizing there were hidden rules early on.
I'm a sub of Black Volumes ❤. Love that I found it 💯. I actually listened to this story on @ Black Volumes channel but I enjoyed hearing your take on it ❤
The story is truly captivating! Thank you to the author for bringing such a mysterious and thrilling tale. Wishing everyone a good night's sleep after finishing this story! 😃😃😃
Not gonna lie, that analysis of the Grandmother's condition was a good, sharp twist in the ole heartstrings. Worst feeling in the world to watch your loved ones rot/waste away, interaction by interaction, day by day.
I can only imagine what that's like. Thank God dementia doesn't run in my family, and I hope it stays that way. Dementia is probably the hardest thing to witness a loved one go through, maybe second to cancer. I've heard people say that after a while, it's like they're already dead even though they're alive because they're not even that person you used to love anymore.
I saw the ending coming, almost always happens when old people are involved as close relatives in these stories Couldve been worse I suppose - it was an interesting one to say the least, I recall a VHS board game of something similar to this i lsiten too a while back which I think I prefered more but this was still alright
Thank you Mr Creeps for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always, and definitely loved this one. Thank you for making my night. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
Poor grandma... it was an almost impossible decision. I would have done the same though, my little sister is one of the two persons I love the most. I was so fixated in the background, that all the screen seemed like it was moving when the tale was over. It was really creepy, good job.
I love your content i have been an avid listener for YEARS your narrations has never let me down! You have inspired me to start my own channel and i just uploaded my first 5 videos! Thank you for the inspiration and for the HOURS AND HOURS or work you have poured into our entertainment!
Nah, I was watching this video on my fairly new expensive TV, and the music was still piercingly loud, almost drowning out his voice completely around 19:00
Oh yeah because that's a good idea, keeping a mysterious Supernatural game in a dorm room filled with dumbass College students. But they should have done was gone to a construction site and while nobody was looking, just drop it into the drying concrete. If the game doesn't move around by itself then they have a good few decades to several centuries before the game actually resurfaces.
I normally love your content but you need to turn down the ambiance it is almost overwhelming your voice and has sharp peaks. This from a long-time fan edit for: a typo
He didn't have that card earlier in the game when he made the decision to save the lamb and not the fox. The ending was just recapping the decisions they've already made.
@@KachinggaKisses It doesn't matter, the game was criptic. He was put in the scenario of saving the fox or the lamb, and had to go with the lamb. But he *also* had that wild card in his items, that saves you from 1 negative outcome. If I were to make a movie out of this, remembering to use that card would absolutely make sense... (otherwise, why even mention it in the story?)
I enjoy your content, but how do you have 1 million more subscribers than mrcreepypasta. You are awesome for sleep, but mrcreepypasta is a master storyteller.
Well, yeah. Most simple board games dont actually have functional game mechanics if you dont follow the rules. There are exceptions, but such games are either managed by a game master or have a "fuzzy" rule set. 🤔
That is totally the sort of stuff that I'm writing at the moment, free at facee. Same name. 👆😉 Try not to get burnt. Please take it & do what you like with it. the sorts of things you'll all be writing next. Please please please please please take it. It's really really heavy
Your voice is already so low and then when you add sound effects we can no longer hear the story. I can't even finish listening to this shut off at 21 min mark
18:48+ the background sounds got a bit loud and went over the story. Had to take AirPods out because volume down didn’t help. Sorry. I don’t mean to sound like a jerk. Maybe it’s just me and the pitches. Story is good so I’m going to try to push through.
9:22 that was hysterical how Mikayla knew exactly when and where he had last cheated in any way. Just like a younger sister!
Sucks the background music is louder than his voice, makes it harder to understand, makes me focus on his voice, makes it harder to fall asleep
His videos are always so on point but this one I’m right there you with you. At 19min the high pitch music had me pause it. Still a good story so far tho!
Normally I have no complaints only praises but I really felt this time the music in the background really overshadowed the story. Was sharp tuned and drowned out the story.
Hearing issue music be slightly sharp made it scarier in my opinion
@@NunyaPro Agreed!!
@@NunyaPro if you’re saying I have a hearing issue, it’s more likely that I actually just have good ears and so they’re sensitive.
I thought the opposite was the case, I thought it enhanced the story really well 😮 Interesting how much personal tastes affect the reception of such stuff
@@ks58843nah he right I could barley focus on the story cuz the music was to loud
This is a really good story. The dynamic going on with the grandmother feels authentic and adds a whole layer to the story that most other stories just don't have.
It did seem authentic! Sometimes I feel that some creepypasta stories don't allow enough character development. Or the characters all seem too similar. This story did great and having clearly defined characters, which helped make the dynamic realistic.
You should turn up the music more around the 15 min mark I almost hear the story being told lol
Very good story but the background music was up so high around the 18 min mark
Agree
It did and startled me at first hahaa
Would be fine if not for the high pitch ringing. Please Mr creeps don't have the music/background sounds that high.
i didn't even notice until i read this 😭
Thank you so much, as always, Mr Creeps! I really appreciate the shout-outs, and you did a great job with this narration!
Seriously your stories are totally awesome!!! Thanks for written!
@@Sucessful-grownup-imposter Thank you for the lovely comment! Glad you enjoy them!
@@blackvolumes you’re the only author I’ve ever mentioned as much regarding as well. There’s another dark somnium does too forget the name off hand that does the whole “western crossroads” universe that’s also amazing but you are to Mr Creeps what they are to DS
@@Sucessful-grownup-imposter Wow! I’m immensely grateful for those complimentary words! Thank you so much
Awesome story for sure. I see a lot of people complaining about the background music being to loud, idk what other phones or devices have this feature but on my Motorola I can go into the sound settings and change my Dolby atoms settings to have more treble and less bass and it completely fixes that issue. Hope this helps some people!
Ah, the Jumanji creepypasta
ah the good old days of Disney and universal :/ the last real child hood for kids.
I love jumanji rip robin williams
Loved this story! I really didn't have too much of an issue with the background noise but it was a tad loud here and there. Thank you as always! ☺️🖤
man, I love your voice with rule vids, man it's like no other
Agree. One of the best, if not the best, out there.
Thumbnail Image- He played the game and didn't follow the rules. Now the game has become too real.
Grandma's situation is sad.
Props to MC for realizing there were hidden rules early on.
I'm a sub of Black Volumes ❤. Love that I found it 💯. I actually listened to this story on @ Black Volumes channel but I enjoyed hearing your take on it ❤
@@kimberlyshepherd270 Thanks, Kim!
What's up with the background noise? I can barely hear the story
I agree with the other comments, the music and high pitched ringing was distracting.
Great read of the story!
Okay is it just me or would this game be really fun without all the horror elements
Board games?
Creepypata?
RULES?
MRCREEPS?! I'm SO in.
Couldn't hear anything after the shovel bit, the music dialled itself up to 15, and the overly shrill ringing set off my tinnitus 😖😖😖
Usually love your stories but the sounds in the background at a certain point are STRONG and wicked giving headaches.
The story is truly captivating! Thank you to the author for bringing such a mysterious and thrilling tale. Wishing everyone a good night's sleep after finishing this story! 😃😃😃
PEEEETAH
The purple guy as the antagonist figure makes me think of that dude from Five Nights at Freddie's.
Not gonna lie, that analysis of the Grandmother's condition was a good, sharp twist in the ole heartstrings.
Worst feeling in the world to watch your loved ones rot/waste away, interaction by interaction, day by day.
Well said. I totally agree. Terrible feeling. Just went through that not long ago with a close family member.
I can only imagine what that's like. Thank God dementia doesn't run in my family, and I hope it stays that way. Dementia is probably the hardest thing to witness a loved one go through, maybe second to cancer. I've heard people say that after a while, it's like they're already dead even though they're alive because they're not even that person you used to love anymore.
Always sends a shiver down my spine when I see a new upload, good work
24:19 Jumanji entrance Easter egg
Evening Mr. Creeps, hope you’re having a good day!!! Thank you for the new story!!! ♥️♥️♥️😊
All round superb, the story, the narrating and the ambient choice
With other rule stories you have a sense of where it’s going but with this one I was just as unsure and unnerved as the protagonists
Background noise was loud. Mr Creeps was great a usual. 🙏
I saw the ending coming, almost always happens when old people are involved as close relatives in these stories
Couldve been worse I suppose - it was an interesting one to say the least, I recall a VHS board game of something similar to this i lsiten too a while back which I think I prefered more but this was still alright
The background Sounds are way too loud, hard to enjoy when it’s too high pitched
Thank you Mr Creeps for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always, and definitely loved this one. Thank you for making my night. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
I love these stories, ive been listening for an incredible time
The music gets louder at the 18 minute mark. Please lower it :(
Poor grandma... it was an almost impossible decision. I would have done the same though, my little sister is one of the two persons I love the most. I was so fixated in the background, that all the screen seemed like it was moving when the tale was over. It was really creepy, good job.
*Jumanji on steroids!!*
An excellent story narrated by an amazing talent.
The black volumes stories are the best
Of all that was a shiny story hard to sit through the last ten minutes
I love your content i have been an avid listener for YEARS your narrations has never let me down! You have inspired me to start my own channel and i just uploaded my first 5 videos! Thank you for the inspiration and for the HOURS AND HOURS or work you have poured into our entertainment!
This was surprisingly good and,,, gave me the creeps!
Keep up the hard work! I know a lot of us appreciate your videos and hard work!
It's like a Micheal Myers and oennywise had jumanji
LOL. Now that you say it, I see it!
RULES STORY COMEBACK WHOO HOO!!!!!
I like the background music… great job Mr. Creeps!
Tune in next week for "I Convinced A Skinwalker And A Wendigo To Play Twilight Imperium 4th Edition. We Still Have 8 Hours To Go."
lwroy perkins never misses a day
LeerouPorkins how did you come up with that name? Or is it your real name?
@@danthesausage1235
Leeroy Jenkins + Jek Tono Porkins
Nooo Leroy! Don’t break the rules of the board game!
Holy shit twilight imperium goes hard but does take forever fr though XD
glad that you returned old and best video style❤️❤️
For all you people complaining about the background ambience, put headphones in. The mix is fine, your phone speakers are just trash
Nah, I was watching this video on my fairly new expensive TV, and the music was still piercingly loud, almost drowning out his voice completely around 19:00
Yessss ty Ty!
Had no problem with the background music..people check your earphones or something. Had no problem hearing the narrative. Thanks for the good story❤
I never had a problem with the music, and I wear hearing aids
MR CREEPS FTW!!!
AMAZING STORY!
This is one of the best ones
There s a lot of complaints about the music but I think it fits in.
Its a horror story
Just in time for the last cuppa of the night
I ALWAYS listen at night! Best time!
Yay ty for the awesome a storie
Tune in next week for "My wife is a vampire but I'm a Paladin.'
8 years at lest I've been listening to your video without one like or comment ...sorry ...I love your stuff
Grandparent story trigger me I gotta go to the next one
Yes 🎉!!!!!
Great story
Oh yeah because that's a good idea, keeping a mysterious Supernatural game in a dorm room filled with dumbass College students.
But they should have done was gone to a construction site and while nobody was looking, just drop it into the drying concrete. If the game doesn't move around by itself then they have a good few decades to several centuries before the game actually resurfaces.
LOL. Good point! I mean, college students ARE going to make bad decisions!
That background noise is a headache way too loud
Couldn't finish listening as background music got too loud.
If i may, long time listener here, the background noise/music was louder than the narrative at some points making it hard to hear
GRANDMA SAID you f'd around and now you found out
This was a good one
I miss my grandma too 😢
Music too loud at 18:30
"Krasinski smirk" and I'm oot!
New record for bailing on one of these 1:44
I normally love your content but you need to turn down the ambiance it is almost overwhelming your voice and has sharp peaks. This from a long-time fan
edit for: a typo
37:21 He should've used the armor card, that protected against a negative outcome...
He didn't have that card earlier in the game when he made the decision to save the lamb and not the fox. The ending was just recapping the decisions they've already made.
@@KachinggaKisses It doesn't matter, the game was criptic. He was put in the scenario of saving the fox or the lamb, and had to go with the lamb. But he *also* had that wild card in his items, that saves you from 1 negative outcome. If I were to make a movie out of this, remembering to use that card would absolutely make sense... (otherwise, why even mention it in the story?)
I don’t understand I don’t have any problems with the background music being louder then the story
I enjoy your content, but how do you have 1 million more subscribers than mrcreepypasta. You are awesome for sleep, but mrcreepypasta is a master storyteller.
np with the music can hardly hear it
Imagine being so utterly idiotic to think there is such thing as a coincidence in horror.
The music isn’t loud enough I can almost hear the story
Wow this one is great 👍
Well, yeah. Most simple board games dont actually have functional game mechanics if you dont follow the rules.
There are exceptions, but such games are either managed by a game master or have a "fuzzy" rule set. 🤔
Tune in next for "A skinwalker ate my belly button lint, now it wants more"
That is totally the sort of stuff that I'm writing at the moment, free at facee. Same name.
👆😉 Try not to get burnt. Please take it & do what you like with it. the sorts of things you'll all be writing next. Please please please please please take it. It's really really heavy
“Banal” is pronounced “Bah-naal” long second vowel.
Love the story, but the music was maybe a little too loud?
Around 18 minutes in and forward the ambient/music is too loud to the speech
WALES MENTIONED 🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴
Your voice is already so low and then when you add sound effects we can no longer hear the story. I can't even finish listening to this shut off at 21 min mark
Just turn up bass
Still early in anyone else feel the grandma gets got
RULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS
Background music was a little too loud tbh.
Yall complaining about the background music and everything sounds fine to me….
What the fuck kinda game is this Grama. I don't care if grama was gonna die at the end of the night, no way am I playing this game, sorry
Love your videos but can you turn down the background music pretty pleeeaaasssee
18:48+ the background sounds got a bit loud and went over the story. Had to take AirPods out because volume down didn’t help. Sorry. I don’t mean to sound like a jerk. Maybe it’s just me and the pitches. Story is good so I’m going to try to push through.
Okay once it got to 35 though
I didn't have a prob with the background music, don't know why everyone is complaining about that. 🤔
I don't like the music in the background, it's to distracting to the words and makes it hard to hear. Js.... Mo...
Oh wow I didn't read the comments until after I made my comment whoohoooo I wasn't the only one lol!!!!
The background music. awful!
music way too loud
What the hell is that background music, it is way too loud and ruins the story. 😢
Ambiance or soundtrack bro,?
The background music and effects are too loud . Can't hear most of the narrations.😢
music way too loud ://